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改错
一.多一词的情况
1.时间名词短语如oneday,lastSunday(month,year,time)等前面无介词。
ThesecretarytoldmethatthemanagerwasbusyandIshouldcomeatsomeothertime.
Someothertime,someday,oneday,theotherday,thatday等直接在句中作状语,前面无介词。
ImetmyuncleonlastSunday.
2..时间名词themoment,theminute,eachtime,thefirsttime等直接充当连词引导状语从句,前面无介词。
IliketheoilpaintingverymuchatthemomentIsawit.
3.句子成分重复照成副词成为累赘。
Whenwegottohishouse,wefoundhiminhome.
1.…oftheyeartovisitBeijing,becauseofthereisonlyalittlerainand..
2.Ihavejustgotsomegoodnewstotelltoyou.
3.MyunclegavetomeaMP4asmybirthdaygift.
4.Hejoinedinthearmy20yearsagoandneverreturned.
5.Hissistermarriedwitharichman.
6.Hemadeabigmistake,andasaresultof,losthisjob.
7.Agreatmanyofchildrencannotgotoschoolinthepoorarea.
8.Mary’sparentscouldhardlyaffordforthemedicalcare.
9.Iwanttoseehimattheminutehearrives.
10.IplanedtovisittheGreatWallinnextmonth.
11.Weneedtodiscussaboutthereporttoday.
12.Isawatallmanenterintoouroffice.
13.Thenumberofpeoplewholosthomesreachedtoasmanyas250000.
14.Theybegantogrowcorn,aplantthatcangrowupwellindryregions.
15.TheChinesedietisalittlebitofdifferentfromtheBritishdiet.
16.PeopleallovertheworldarenowbeginningtolearnaboutEnglish.
17.Thicktreesandgreengrasscouldbeseenineverywhere.
二.多一连词
1并列连词and,but,so,or,for等不能和从属连词如although,though,ifsince,because,aswhen,before,after,unles等用于同一个句子。
表因果关系时,because和so不能同时使用,表让步关系时,although和but不能同时使用,只能用其一。
1.Althoughheisveryyoung,buthecanretellthestoryveryfluently.
2.Myparentssentmeane-mailtoaskwhetherhowIwasgettingalongwithmystudies.
3.Insomepartsoftheforestwhereyoucanfindlargegroupsofmonkeys,whicharejumping.
4.SinceyouhavevisitedGreeceseveraltimes,soIwouldliketoknowwhetheryouhaveseentheoldbuildingsthere/
5.Theydidn’twantbreakfastbecausethattheyweregoingoutearly.
6.Earningtheirownmoneyallowsthemtospendanythingasiftheyplease.
7.Hehurthislegwhileplayingfootball,andsohecouldn’tgotoschool.
8.Nooneknowsthatwhetherhehasdecidedtogoabroad.
9.Standoverthere,andoryou’llbeabletoseeitbetter.
10.Ihavebeensurprisedeachtimewhenmysonhascomehomefromschoolwithamessagesayinghisteacherwantstoseeme.
11.Thecarisveryold,butyetitrunsveryfast.
12.Ihadnoideathatwhohewasorwhathewanted.
13.Watchcarefullyanddoanythingasifyourteacherdoesinthelab.
14.Sincewehavefinishedthework,sowewenthomeearly.
15.Evenifwegotalocalguide,butwestillhadsomedifficultywalkingthroughthebush.
16.Althoughhewasveryyoungthen,buthewasbrave.
17.WhileIacceptthatheisnotperfect,butIactuallyliketheperson..
18.Ifyouworkhardandyouwillmakegreaterprogress.
19.Hewaspunishedbytheteacher.Thereasonisthatbecauseheisalwaysbreakingtherules.
20.Duringthevacation,becausetheweatherwashotandIcouldn’tdomuchwork.
21.Indryregionswhereyoucanfindthiskindofgrass.
三多一代词
关系代词和其他代词同时出现在句中,易引起句式结构重复,语言累赘。
Hewritesaboutbooks,abouthistravelsandaboutthewildandwonderfulanimalshecollectsthem.
It具有广泛用法,在很多情况下因指代不明确,会造成结构重复。
Themovementofthepartsisbeautifultowatchitiftheyareclear.
代词是用来代替名词的词,在结构复杂的句子中,往往会出现多个代词,每一个代词都必修有明确的指代
1.Einsteinwasdevotedhimselftotheresearchofthegreattheory.
2.Asweallknowit,lighttravelsfasterthansound.
3.Thesecondmanwhoadded,“WewilldonatecoinsinsidethecircletoGod.”
4.Youcanbuyallthethingswhatyouneedinthisshop.
5.Butthereisanotherthingyoumustrememberit.
6.Thesesignsarenotverydifficulttoseethem.
7.IwhowasborninChinaandstudiedundertheChineseschoolsystemforeightyears.
8.Theboyrepliedit,“Hewaspracticingsinging.”
9.ThepopulationofChinaisaquarterofthatoneoftheworld.
10.IlovereadingpoemsbyEmersonbetterthanthoseonesbyWhitman.
11.Hehopestohaveascholarship,andIhopeitso.
12.Shelostallthemoney,Ididn’tknowhowshedidso.
13.HewasreadytolendmeanyofthebooksIwantedthem.
14.Mygrandmaisover100yearsold,butshedoesn’tlookitso.
15.Hewouldn’tgotoseeaplaythatnoonelikedit,
16.becauseI’mgrowingoldandknowwhatIwantit.
17.Ireadyoure-mailtomyparentsandshowedthemthephotoyousentittome.
18.Manystudentsfeelitthatapopularteachermustbekind,
多一助动词
1助动词本身没有独立的词义,不能单独作谓语,必须和其他动词结合使用,表示否定.疑问.强调以及动词的时态.语态.语气等功能.在短文改错中,多一助动词的考查主要出现在时态和语态的构成,尤其是在比较复杂的时态和语态中,如过去完成十和各种时态形式的被动语态.1.时间状语从句和条件状语从句中,常用一般现在时表示将来,一般过去时表示过去将来时意义。
Ifyouwillstudyhard,youwillsucceed.
2.时态与时态之间的混用,容易出现多余助动词,尤其是过去完成时,容易和一般过去时混用,极易出错。
ShehadtaughtusEnglishwhenIattendedtrainingcoursestwoyearsago.
3.有时句子的主语与谓语之间不存在被动关系或有些不及物动词如happen,takeplace,belongto,last.breakout等易被误用作及物动词,以被动语态形式出现,致使出现语态混用,出现多余助动词的情况。
Thisexperiencehasbeenshownthattrtavellingbyairactuallyisthesafestwayofmakingjourneys.
Greatchangeshavebeentakenplaceinthepastfewyears.
各种时态都有其构成特点和意义,如现在完成时,其构成为have/has+过去分词,常与表示一段时间的状语(for,since等)连用;过去完成时就必修有与之相对应的过去时间或动作比较使用。
只有及物动词才有被动语态。
只有正确掌握这些时态和语态的构成及其他用法等,才能在改错中明辨是非,正确纠错。
18.Hehadreceivedastrangephonecallwhenhewasreadingabook.
1.Afewyearsago,IwasusedtowatchTVeverynight.
2.AsachildwasborninthesouthIknewalmosteverythingoutsideit.
3.Ifyouwilltakenoticeinsomeplaces,youwillseethefactthatmostsmokersareyoungpeople.
4.Thestudents’UnionhasrecentlybeenagreedtosetupaSwimmingClub.,
5.Thepartywaslastednearlythreehours.]
6.Whatasuccessfulpartywehadthatday.
7.Hefiredattheanimal,butmissedandhislastmomenthasarrived.
8.Thegaskeepingtheballoonupwasbeingrunningaway.
9.Allthemoneyistobecollectedwillbesenttothedisasterareas.
10.Wealsovisitedsomeworkshops,talkedtosomeoftheworkersandhavelearnedalot.
11.‘Whohasleftthewindowopen?
’heaskedinakindvoice.
12.Theteacherwasalwayskeptabigbookonhisdeskthen.
13.Ihavereceivedyourletterjustnow.
14.Whentheaccidentwashappened,Iwitnessedthewholeprocess.
15.Hepermittedmetoretakethetest,andIwaspulledmygradetoanA.
16.Theywereusedtowriteontheblackboardandaskusdifficultquestions.
17.Ithadrainedevenharder,.Wewerewettotheskin.
18.I’mgladtolearnthatyou’vebeensettleddowninBoston.
多一冠词
1.在许多使用零冠词的地方
Wangpingwasbadlyilllastnight.Hewassenttothehospitalatonce.
Itoldtheboynottowritesillythingsinthepublicplaces.
2.物质名词与抽象名词前面通常出现多余的不定冠词。
Musiccanbringpeopleapleasure.
2.零冠词的固定用法
(1)物质名称。
抽象名词前一般不用冠词Helikesscience.、
Wateristransformedintosteambyheat.
(2)表示泛指概念的复数名词前不用冠词
Thoseyoungmanareteachers,notstudents.
(3)表示三餐.季节.学科.疾病的名词前不用冠词.
Havebreakfast/lunch/supperinspring/summer/autumn/winter
(4)表称呼或表示职务.头衔作表语.同位语.补足语的名词前不用冠词.
Mr.Pattis,headofthedepartment,discoveredMrKing’ssecret.
In1864,Lincolnwasmadepresidentforthesecondtime.
(5)表示球类运动.棋类游戏的名词前不用冠词.Let’sgoandwatchthemplayfootball.
(6)与by表示交通工具的名词前不用冠词.Doyouliketoplaybridge?
Bybus.Bytrainbyplanebybike
(7)单数名词对称使用时不用冠词.
Sidebysideyearbyyearhandinhandshouldertoshoulderfacetoface
Heartandsouldayandnightyearafteryear
(8)在某些短语中,有无定冠词意思大不一样.
Attableatthetableinhospitalinthehospitalinclassintheclass
Infrontofinthefrontofinchargeofinthechargeofonearthontheearth
ByseabytheseainplaceintheplaceofinofficeintheofficeTakeplace
taketheplaceinprisonintheprisongotochurchgotothechurch
LiveonfarmliveonthefarmtwoofusthetwoofusinpossessionofInthepossessionofbydaybythedayincaseofinthecaseofonfireonthefire
1.Whatabadweatherwehadtoday.
2.Thepoetandaprofessorhaspromisedtocome.
3.Weallknowthemanisthemostdevelopedanimalintheworld.
4.ManypeoplelosttheirlivesintheWorldWarII
5.MybrotherisastudentoftheGradeTwo.
6.Hepromisedtocomeandseeusafterthesupper.
7.Whatafunitistoskateontheice.
8.SuddenlyIcaughtasightofmyEnglishteacherinthecrowd.
9.I’vegotawonderfulnewstotellyou.
10.Wendywasmadethemonitorforthismonth.
11.Somepeoplethinkacertainnumbersmaybringgoodluck.
12.Maryisillinthehospital.
13.Ihopetobecomeapianist,butIturnedateacher.
14.HewillgotoShanghaitoattendanimportantconferencethenextweek.
15.HehasmadeagreatprogressinhisEnglishstudy.
16.…stillthere,Inthefact,therewerefourticketsontheseat.
17.TheplaytellshumorousstoriesthathappenintheGreen’sfamily.\
18.Itwasindeednoteasytogetinthetouchwitheverybody.
19.Becausetherearemorethehonorsandjoysinmylife.
六多一不定式符号to
1.在使役动词make,let,have及感官动词hear,watch,notice,see,listento,lookat等后跟
不带to的不定式作宾语补语
2.在情态动词后及一些常见句式结构中常省略to的不定式。
如hadbetterdo,wouldratherdo,cannotbutdosth,havenothingtodobutdosth,whynotdosth,whydosth
1.IwillletsomeonetorepairtheTVset.2.Whynottogooutandplay?
Askedhe.
3.Nowletmetointroduceourschooltoyou.4.Thepicturemademetothinkofmychildhood.
5.Lookatmetodrawthepictureandtrytolearn.
6.Theanimalshadnothingtodobuttoliedownandsleep.
7.You’dbettertogotoyourteacherforhelp.8.Weoftenheard