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最全的海文才子墨东博的作文模版
万学海文名师墨东博独家作文模板
写实派模板1
Asisillustrated/depicted/conveyed/revealed/betrayed/showninthepicture, (图的内容原则上用一个主从句表达, 功底.两句合一句的途经,1AND连结2WHICH或WHEREAS 连结3 非谓语 )thetwopetneighborsgreeteachotherpolitelyandamicably,whereas (=WHILE/ONTHEOTHERHAND)thetwopets'ownersseemtoignoreeachother. Simpleasitis,thedrawingrendersusponderingawefully.(凑字数,其富余时,可省去)Accordingly,whatthisfar-reaching/thought-provokingpicturedepictsreflectsacommonphenomenonintoday'ssociety:
(反映的现实) pets,ratherthan/insteadofpeoplearoundthem,aresuchanindispensablepartintheirdailylife tothepointwhere (加以讲解) theyareexcessively/inordinately(负面词汇,作者的态度尽在不言中,回避使用 IBELIVE,ITHINK 之类的句式)fondoftheirbelovedanimalswhileneglectingthosewhocarethem, which hasarousedgreatconcernandshouldbegiven enoughconsideration. Itgoeswithoutsaying thatitssymbolicmeaningthat (主题句,尽量避免使用1 主系表 2THEREBE结构主张使用下列句型,1NOTHING+BE+ADJ+THAN+TO+DO2ONNOACCOUNTCANWE3ITISTIME+S+V-ED4IT 无主句) indifferenceshouldbecleared upamongpeople,withtheharmonioussocietyechoedvigorously nowadaysinChina oughttobeweighed/taken/ponderedseriously./earnestly/conscientiously
Whydowelayemphasisonthis(指代词表过渡) severalpoints(名词复数,总分总的标志) analyzedbelowmightequipuswiththedeeperunderstandingofwhatweareheadingfor.Foronething,(分述标志词) sincewehavetoliveonanon-the-movelifestyle,wearedeniedchancestoshareourfeelingswithourfriendsandrelatives. Foranother (分述标志词), withsomanydishonestiesgoingaroundinourlifeandthenindifferenceoccurring,wemighthavenochoicebuttoenjoythecompanyofpets. Andaboveall(分述标志词), toomanytragedies-seeingsomeoneinmortaldangerwithoutliftingafingertosavehim-putonthestageinourdailylifealmosteveryday, Nobetterillustrationofthisideatouchedonabovecanbe maintained/taken/weighedthanthecaseaslistedbelow,( 例证)acrowdofpeopleremainedappallinglynonchalance(=indifference,论据是论点的具体体现,主题核心词汇重复) tothepleaofamother,sinceshefailedtooffertherequiredamountofcashasapricetosaveherdrowningson,thewomanatlastwatchedhersonsinktodeath..Consequently/Accordingly/Onbalance/Therefore/Itfollowsthat,noissueinchinaisasbasicto buildupthesocietyinharmony as ironingoutindifferenceamongpeople.(此句为小节,1 与TS首尾呼应,重复原则growoutof=clearup2 为第三段起势)
Judgingfromwhathasbeenarguedabove,peoplehavecometorealizetheharmsofindifferencehasbeen,likePandora'sbox,thecripplingforceofestablishingtheharmonysociety.Itis,therefore,necessarythatsomeeffectivestepsbemadeto(点主题重复原则)narrowandbridgethegapamongpeople. Tobeginwith,(以法治国) thegovernmentshouldmakelawto establishthesocietyinwhichpeopleliveinharmony. Inaddition,(以德治国)peopleshouldenhancetheawarenessofconcernandcareeachotherespecially. Onlybyundergoingthesemeasures,can wemakeoursociety,wherepeople,evennot knowing eachother,helpamongthem,appealtoeveryone.
写实派模板2
Asisillustrated/depicted/conveyed/revealed/betrayed/showninthepicture, (图的内容原则上用一个主从句表达, 功底.两句合一句的途经,1AND连结2WHICH或WHEREAS 连结3 非谓语 )aladyandagentlemanarewatchinganartificialsceneonthetopofabuildingwithnumeroustowerblockssurroundingthem.(=WHILE/ONTHEOTHERHAND) Simpleasitis,thedrawingsetsusthinkingtoomuch. (凑字数,其富余时,可省去)Accordingly,whatthisfar-reaching/thought-provokingpicturedepictsisacommonphenomenonintoday'ssociety,(反映的现实) toomanyman-madeprojectssuchasskyscrapershaveexcessivelybeenbuilt,whereastoomuchnaturalresourcesincludingafforestedlandhasvanishedappallingly. (加以讲解)(负面词汇,作者的态度尽在不言中,回避使用 IBELIVE,ITHINK 之类的句式). Thereisnodoubtthatitssymbolicmeaningthat (主题句,尽量避免使用1 主系表 2THEREBE结构主张使用下列句型,1NOTHING+BE+ADJ+THAN+TO+DO2ONNOACCOUNTCANWE3ITISTIME+S+V-ED4IT 无主句)itisimperativetochecktheblindactionsandactivitiesofhumanbeingsintheurbandevelopment,withnowadaysvaluesofscientificdevelopmentechoedvigorously.
whydowelayemphasisonthis(指代词表过渡) ?
severalpoints(名词复数,总分总的标志) analyzedbelowmighthelpusgainaninsightintothedramaticchangetowhichwehavebeenqualifiedtobearwitness.Tobeginwith,(分述标志词) overthepastdecades,mucharablelandhasbeendestroyedintherushforrapidurbandevelopment.Suchblinddevelopmenthasdamagedthenaturalbalancetothepointwherepeopleonlyliveinaboxoflifelesscementandsteel. Whatismore,mostpeoplestilllacktheconceptofscientificdevelopment.Someurbanplannersanddesigners focustheirattentionsimplyontheirimmediateinterestsandproblems,whichhas inturndegradedwrethchedlythequalityofourlivingenvironment.Asmanyfamousecologistspointoutthataclusterofhigh-risebuildingsinacityoftenoverburdenlivingcapacities,whichoncecouldaffordtoresidentsenough.( 例证)Consequently/Accordingly/Onbalance/Therefore/Itfollowsthat,noissueinchinaisasbasicto giveanexpressiontoinherentspiritofscientificdevelopment as restraintunbridledurbandevelopment.(此句为小节,1 与TS首尾呼应,重复原则)
Judgingfromwhathavebeenarguedabove,peoplehavecometorealizetheharmsarisingfromindiscriminatedevelopmenthasbeen,likethePandora'sbox,thecripplingforceoffollowingthevaluesofscientificdevelopment.Itis,therefore,necessarythatsomeeffectivestepsbemadeto(点主题重复原则) laymuchemphasisontheharmsfromblinddevelopmentattheexpenseofthebalanceofecosystem. Tobeginwith,(以法治国) thegovernmentshouldmakelawtochannelconstructiontothetrackofvaluesofscientificdevelopment,for,ifnot,ourdescendantswouldbethrownintounexpectedcrises.Inaddition,(以德治国) peopleshouldenhancetheawarenessthatenvironmentalproblemscannotbeseparatedfromthoseofhumanwelfareandfromtheprocessofeconomicdevelopmentingeneral. Onlybyundergoingthesemeasures,can wemakeoursociety,wherebirdsaresingingandflowersaregivingforththeir fragrancehereandthere,appealtoeveryone.
写实类范文
2008年考研英语作文范文如下:
Asisillustrated/depicted/conveyed/revealed/betrayed/showninthepicture,thetwodisabledpersonswhosecrippledlegsareboundtogetherdoalotoftraveling. Simpleasitis,thedrawingsetsusthinkingtoomuch.Accordingly,whatthisfar-reachingpicturedepictsreflectsacommonphenomenonintoday'ssociety:
thepeopleinoursocietywhoareinthedarkwanttoturnthecornerbuttheycannotsucceedbythemselvesrespectivelyandinturntheyhavetochoosetopulltogetherintimesoftroubleItgoeswithoutsayingthatitssymbolicmeaningthat nomatterwhatdifficultieswemayfacewhenweworkorstudyweshouldhelpeachother,withtheharmonioussocietyechoedvigorouslynowadaysinChina.
Whydowelayemphasisonthis?
Severalpointsanalyzedbelowmightequipuswiththedeeperunderstandingofwhatweareheadingfor.Ononehand, sincewehavetoliveonanon-the-movelifestyle,wemayencounterthisorthatplight,wherewewouldbeatalosstodoanythingotherthantoneedothersassistance. Ontheotherhand, ifwedonotofferhelpeachotherwhenweconfrontdilemmawewouldnotrealizeourdream.. Nobetterillustrationofthisideacanbe thoughtthanthecaseaslistedbelow, 69peoplewerecaughtinanunfortunatemineaccidentinHenanprovinceseveralmonthsago,theysurvivedincrediblyowingtotheirmutualhelpatlast.. Consequently,noissueinchinaisasbasicto buildupthesocietyinharmony as coordinationinfaceofdisaster
Judgingfromwhathavebeenarguedabove,peoplehavecometorealizethevaluesofmutualaidhasbeenthedrivingforceofestablishingtheharmonysociety.Itis,therefore,necessarythatsomeeffectivestepsbemadeto advocatespiritofsupportingeachother Tobeginwith, thegovernmentshouldmakelawtoencouragepeopletounitetogethertoovercomedifficulties. Inaddition, peopleshouldenhancetheawarenessofcaringeachotherespeciallywhentheywereyoung. Onlybyundergoingthesemeasures,can we makeoursociety,wherepeople,evennotknowing eachother,helpamongthem,appealtoeveryone.
B抽象派
B1-1主题宽泛型
Asisvividlybetrayedinthepictureinfrontofus,itislikeabridgethatbridgesvariousgapstobearoad.Justlikebeingconveyedinthesetofdrawing,thefactthatthebridgestandsforcommunicationandthegullyformisunderstandingamongpeoplenowadays profoundlyindicatesthatcommunicationplays anincreasinglycrucialrole andbecomes perhapstheonlyeffectiveapproachtodisputes,withtheworldbeingconsiderablydiversified.
Tothepopularmind,nevertheless,itisimmediatelyassumedthatwhencommunicationisargued,itisstillcommunicationamongtheoldandtheyounggeneration.thatismeant.Inordertoaccountforwhathasbeenmentionedbefore,severalcausesshouldbeputforward.Ononehand,alwaysrebellious,youngpeopleareseeminglyturningtoberatheroddwhiletheirparentsarequiteembarrassed,orevenunbearabletoseealltheseoffbeatbehaviors.Ontheotherhand,childrenmaydeemparentstobeconservedwhereasparentsmayassumethattheyoungaregettingwild.Nobetterillustrationofthisideacanbethoughtthantheexamplediscussedbelow, 例证.Consequently,noissueinchinaisbasictoindividualandnationalsurvivalprospectascommunication,thoughpeoplebearcolorfulthoughts,behaviorsandcustoms.
Accordingly,itisvitalforustoderivesomepositivemeaningsfromthisthought-provokingpicture.Itis,therefore,necessarythateffortsbemadetocommunicate.Tobeginwith,actually,giveneffectivecommunication,parentswillunderstandthatyoungpeoplearenotmadbutmerelyseekingforanidentityinthiscolorfulworld