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研英写作强化09王江涛面授讲义
考研英语写作分册主讲：
汪江涛
一、
1、Introduction：
1）Generaldescription：
2）Details1,2,3：
3）Caption/Symbolicmeaning：
2、Body：
1）Topicsentence：
Symbolicmeaning
2）Argument：
（1）Causeandeffect
（2）Exemplification：
A.Numerousexamplescanbegiven,butthis/thesewillsuffice.
B.Icanthinkofnobetterillustrationthanthefollowingone（s）.
C.This/Thesecase（s）effectivelyclarifythat…
3）Summary：
3、Conclusion：
1）Concludingsentence：
2）Suggestions1、2：
3）Onlyinthiswaycanwesolvethisproblem.
Itishightimethatwesolvedthisproblem.
二、启承转合：
1、启：
启动观点、开篇点题
2、承：
观点承接、正面论证
First（ly）,Inthefirstplace,Tobeginwith,Firstandforemost,Aboveall,Ontheonehand,Foronething,
Second（ly）,Inthesecondplace,Besides,Inaddition,Whatismore,Furthermore,Moreover,Ontheotherhand,Foranother
Last（ly），（The）Lastbutnot（the）least,Moreimportantly,Evenworse,
3、转：
观点转折、反面论证
Conversely,Nevertheless,Unfortunately,Whereas,Yet,Instead,In/Bycomparison/contrast,Onthecontrary,
4、合：
文章结尾、合并归纳
Asaresult/consequence,Consequently,Accordingly,Thus,Hence,Generally/Brieflyspeaking,
三、词汇攻略
1、5m,30m,12h,1、2、4、7、15d（10天搞定考研词汇）
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四、潜词造句四大要素
1、Accuracy：
extensive（awiderangeof）knowledge,fiercecompetition
2、Variety：
1）认为
（1）Iholdtheopinionthat,AsfarasIamconcerned,
（2）clingtotheidea,inmyopinion/view,pointout,
（3）maintain,reckon,assert,hold,claim,emphasize,insist,suppose,assume
2）重要
（1）Dueattentionhastobepaidto,Importanceshouldbeattachedto,
（2）beofgreatimportance/significance
（3）vital,essential,crucial,significant
3）越来越多的人peopleingrowing/expanding/increasing/mountingnumbers
4）为了forthepurposeof,aimto/at,inabidto
3、Difficulty：
primary/fundamentalfactors/causes.
4、Splendor：
1）Myeyesweresparklingwithdelight.
2）Hefliedintoastormyrage.
3）Ifellintotheabyssofunspeakablepain.
4）Suchishumannature,thatagreatmanypeoplearewillingtosacrificehigherpayfortheprivilegeofbecomingwhite-collarworkers.
五、句子写法
1、五大句型
1）Isucceed.
2）IlikeLdy.
3）LYissmart.
4）WeiXiaobaogaveAkeanEnglishdictionary.
5）Tulongdaomademanypeopleselfish.
2、名词从句
1）Thefactthatagreatmanyseniorcitizensareill-treatedindicates/suggeststhatthisissueisextremelyserious.
2）WhattheyfailtounderstandisthatrespectingtheelderlyisatraditionalvirtueofChineseculture.
3、扩写法We,studentsfromBU,oneofthebestuniversitiesinBeijing,whichisthemostbeautifulcityinChina,thegreatestcountryintheworld,aresingingapopsongnamedXSSsungbyHua’er,whoisthefavoritesingerofOldFish,afterweplayedMJthewholenight.
六、亮点设置
1、活用词汇
1）Naturaldisastersclaimhundredsofliveseveryyear.
2）Idoappreciateyourefforts.
3）Onceinfrontofme,layarealchance.Yet,Ididnotvalueit.NotuntilthemomentIlostit,didIrealizehowregretfulIwas.IfGodgavemeanotheropportunity,Iwouldneverstopmakingprogress.
4）Isatoutsideinthehall.Everythinginsidemehasgoneaway.Ididn’tthink.Icouldnotthink.Iknewshewasleavingme,butIprayedshenot.（ErnestHemingway:
TheSunAlsoRises）
2、平行排比Aculturecanbeaccepted,respected,appreciatedandshared.
3、术语表达environmentalprotection/awareness
4、词组运用withdueconsiderationof,takeintoaccount/consideration
5、句型框架
1）（中文）
（1）只有这样下岗工人才能彻底摆脱贫困并且重新获得他们生命中的尊严。
（2）总而言之，只有长期学习才有助于你掌握大的词汇量。
（3）考虑到上述所有论证，政府早就该实行改革把传统教育模式转变为素质教育。
2）（英译文）
（1）Onlyinthiswaycanlaid-offworkerscompletelyshrugoffpovertyandregaintheirdignityinlife.
（2）Inconclusion,itispersistentworkthatisconducivetoyourgraspingalarge/considerablevocabulary.
（3）Givenalltheabovearguments,itishightimethattheauthoritiesenforcedreformstoconverttraditionaleducationstrategyintoeducationforall-rounddevelopment/quality-orientededucation.
6、名人名言AsJohnF.Kennedyputit,“Asknotwhatyourcountrycandoforyou;askwhatyoucandoforyourcountry.”
7、英语谚语
1）Justasanoldsayinggoes,“AllworkandnoplaymakeJackadullboy.”
2）Justasanoldsayinggoes,“Godonlyhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.”（天助自助者/自助者天助之）
七、书信格式
（一）称呼
1、写给机构：
DearSirorMadam,
2、写给个人：
Dear＋人名,
（二）正文：
3段、7句左右、100－120词、3－5关联词、3－5从句
1、第一段：
1－2句
1）自我介绍
（1）工作人员：
05：
Iamastaffmemberfromyourcompany/corporation.
06：
IamastaffmemberfromMotorola（China）ElectronicsLtd.
（2）学生：
Iamafreshman/sophomore/junior/senior/undergraduate/graduatefromtheDepartmentofChineseLanguageandLiteratureofBeijingUniversity.
2）写作目的：
（1）样题：
Iamwritingtheletterinpurposeoforderingsomebooks.
（2）05：
IamwritingtoinformyouthatIwishtoresignfrommycurrentpost/position.
2、第二段：
3－6句
1）改写提纲一：
1句
2）改写提纲二：
1句
3）改写提纲三：
1句
3、第三段：
1－2句
1）表示感谢（私人建议信除外）
（1）Myappreciationtoyouforyourgeneroushelpisbeyondwords.
（2）WordsfailmewhenIwishtoexpressmysinceregratitudetoyou.
（3）Itakethisopportunitytoshowmyheartfeltappreciationforthekindassistanceyourenderme.
2）期待回信：
（1）Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.
（2）Ilookforwardtoafavorablereplyatyourearliestconvenience.
（3）Yourpromptattentiontomyinquirywouldbehighlyappreciated.
（三）落款
1、结尾客套Yourssincerely,
2、签名：
LiMing
八、高分作文
1、2002
ThepicturevividlydepictsalovelyAmericangirlintraditionalChinesecostumewithasweetsmileonherface.Shewearsribbons,necklacesandotheraccessoriesthatarecharacteristicoftheclothesofacertainChineseminoritygroup.Undoubtedly,thecostumehasaddedorientalcharm/glamourtoherbeautifullook/appearance/features.
Whatthepictureconveysgoesfarbeyondonly/merelyanewfashiontrend.Instead,itcarriesculturalmeanings/implicationsaswell.ThefactthatpeoplefromdifferentcountriesareattractedtomysteriousChinesecultureindicatesthattosomeextentaculturecanbeaccepted,respected,appreciatedandsharedinternationally.Inotherwords,anation’sunique/distinctiveculturecanbecomeinternationalthroughworldwideeconomicandculturalexchanges.Sincethetrendofglobalizationbecomeirresistible,theincreasingculturalexchangescaneffectivelyimprovemutualunderstandingandfriendship.
Itismyviewthatnationalcultureaspricelessspiritualtreasureshouldbepreservedandcherished.Meanwhile,therearegoodreasonstoadvocateinternationalcultureforthoseideasfromtheothercultures,controversialorevenabsurdatfirstsight,canprovideadifferentperspectiveforustoobservetheworldinthelongrun.Nevertheless,whenweareconfrontedwithadifferentculture,weshouldbesensibleenoughtoabsorbitsessenceandtoresistitsdarkside.Onlyinthiswaycanwepromoteculturaldevelopmentpositivelyandmakeourworlddimensional,colorfulandvigorous.
2、2003
Thesetofdrawingsabovevividlydepictsthedestinyofaflowerindifferentcircumstances.Asisshowninthefirstcartoon,theflowerisplacedinacomfortablegreenhousethatsheltersitfromthethreateninglighteningandstorm.Withpropertemperature,moistureandfertilizer,theflowerisgrowinginfullbloom.Onthecontrary,whenremovedfromthegreenhouseandexposedtothedrivingrain,theflowersoonfadesandwithers,withthepetalscastaboutonthegrounds.
Tobeginwith,thepurposeofthedrawingsistoshowusthattheflowergrowinginthegreenhousecannotwithstandthetestofthestorm,yetthesymbolicmeaningssubtlyconveyedshouldbetakenmoreseriously.Thedelicateflowerisnaturallyassociatedwithyoungpeople,tobespecific,theonlychildreninourcurrentsociety;thegreenhouseepitomizesparents’dotingcareandabundantmaterialsuppliesthatcanshieldthechildrenfromthestorms,ortheharshreality.Oncetheyoungpeoplebegintoseekindependenceandacceptchallengesfromtherealworld,theyarefoundtoospoiledtobestrongenoughinthefaceofdifficulties.
Accordingly,itisvitalforustoderivepositiveimplicationsfromthesethought-provokingdrawings.Ontheonehand,wecanfrequentlyusethemtoenlightentheyouthtobemoreindependentinlife.Ontheotherhand,parentsshouldbesensibleenoughtogivetheirchildrenmorefreedomtodealwithtroublesandproblems.Onlybyundergoingmorechallengesandtoilsinadversitycanyoungpeoplecultivatestrongpersonalityandability,andonlyinthiswaycantheybecomewinnersinthiscompetitiveworld.
3、2006
Asisvividlydepictedinthephotosabove,Beckham,thesmartBritishfootballsuperstar,isenjoyingastrikingpopularityamongtheadolescents.Inthefirstpicture,Beckham’snameappearsonayoungman’sface.Thecaptionindicatesthatworshipfortheidoliswrittenontheface.Inthesecondphoto,anotheryoungmanisdoingBeckham’schichairstyleinabarbershop.Weareinform
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