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托福写作辅导：

托福考试满分作文欣赏（１）

Whichonedoyouprefer,tosolveproblemsonyourownexperienceandknowledge,orto

askothersforadvice?

Asknowledgeandexperienceserveastwimtowersinproblem-solving,oneisoften

presentedwithtwomajorpathsthatpavethewayforfinalfulfillment,eithertowrackhisbrain,

justlikewhathappenedtoNeuton,siitingformanyyearsunderanappletreeandeventually

figuringoutondofthegreatestuniversalrulesthatgovernthewholeglobe,ortoseekforothers’

widsomthroughtheiradvice,justasinthecaseofBenjininFranklin,gatheringgreatmindsunder

oneroofandthenestablishingamostworld-renownlibray.Bothwayswork.Whenapractical

goalisinvolved,however,BenjiminFranklinmaybestberegardedasarolemodelinthisrespect

andaskingpeopleforadviceoftenturnouttobetheprimealternative.

Experienceandknowledgeborrowedorlearnedfromothers’advicecontributegreatlyto

effectivenessandefficiencyforagoal-accomplishment.Notallexperienceandknowledgerelated

toproblem-solvingcanbeobtainedbypersonaleffortaloneduetolimitationsofmindand

capabilitiesofeachindividual.Asinglethoughtinsomeone’smindis,moreoftenthannot,farless

shiningcomparedwithgroup’swisdom.Thatexplainsthefamousoldsayingthatoneseesfurther

whenstandingupontheshoulders’ofpastgreatgiants;thatexplainswhyagreatleaderisalways

withgreaterminds;thatalsoexplainswhyteamworkincorperationishighlyemphasizedinthe

21stcentury.Brainstormandexchangeofideasbetweendifferentthoughtsneverfailtoenhance

capabilitiesofeachindividulainvolved,ateam,acompany,aninstitution,acountry,oreventhe

entireglobalvillage.

Askingothers’adviceinsteadofgettingeverythingdoneonone’sownpromotesdemocracy

andcommunicationtoo.Intermsofdemocracy,itisnecessarytogiveothersrightsandchancesto

speaksincetheproblemmayconcernthemindifferentways,andtheirsayinginturnreflectsour

respecttowardfreedomofspeechaswellastheirwisdom.Intermsofcommunication,idea

exchangesometimesfocusesmorethansolutions,andherebybettermutualunderstandingabout

perspectives,principles,praticalitiesandpersonalitiesofeachother.

Admittelyturningtoothersforhelpandsuggestionbynomeansreferstoabsoluteand

irresponsibledependence.Considerationupondifferentthoughtsandideasbroadensourmind,

enlargesourvision,furthersunderstanding,enhancesmoreeffectiveandefficientbrainstorm,and

stressesmutualrespectingroupsandcommunities,whichundoubtedlygivesrisetobetter,ifnot

thebestsolutions.AsisparaphrasedfromJohnFKenedy,brainstormed,thereislittlewecannot

dowhiledivided,thereislittlewecando.

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CaseofBenjininFranklin,gatheringgreatmindsunderoneroofandthenestablishingamost

world-renownlibray.Bothwayswork.Whenapracticalgoalisinvolved,however,Benjimin

Franklinmaybestberegarededasarolemodelinthisrespectandaskingpeopleforadviceoften

turnouttobetheprimealternative.

Experienceandknowledgeborrowedorlearnedfromothers'advicecontributegreatlyto

effectivenessandeffeciencyforagoal-accomplishment.Notallexperienceandknowledgerelated

toproblem-solvingcanbeobtainedbypersonaleffortaloneduetolimitationsofmindand托福满分作文汇总

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capabilitiesofeachindividual.Asinglethoughtinsomeone'smindis,moreoftenthannot,farless

shiningcomparedwithgroup'swisdom.Thatexplainsthefamousoldsayingthatoneseesfurther

whenstandingupontheshoulders'ofpastgreatgiants;thatexplainswhyagreatleaderisalways

withgreaterminds;thatalsoexplainswhyteamworkincorperationishighlyemphasizedinthe

21stcentury.Brainstormandexchangeofideasbetweendifferentthoughtsneverfailtoenhance

capabilitiesofeachindividulainvolved,ateam,acompany,aninstitution,acountry,oreventhe

entireglobalvillage.

Askingothers'adviceinsteadofgettingeverythingdoneonone'sownpromotesdemocracy

andcommunicationtoo.Intermsofdemocracy,itisnecessarytogiveothersrightsandchancesto

speaksincetheproblemmayconcernthemindifferentways,andtheirsayinginturnreflectsour

respecttowardfreedomofspeechaswellastheirwisdom.Intermsofcommunication,idea

exchangesometimesfocusesmorethansolutions,andherebybettermutualunderstandingabout

perspectives,principles,praticalitiesandpersonalitiesofeachother.

Admittelyturningtoothersforhelpandsuggestionbynomeansreferstoabsoluteand

irresponsibledependence.Considerationupondifferentthoughtsandideasbroadensourmind,

enlargesourvision,furthersunderstanding,enhancesmoreeffectiveandefficientbrainstorm,and

stressesmutualrespectingroupsandcommunities,whichundoubtedlygivesrisetobetter,ifnot

thebestsolutions.AsisparaphrasedfromJohnFKenedy,brainstormed,thereislittlewecannot

dowhiledivided,thereislittlewecando.

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托福考试满分作文欣赏（3）

Aftertheycompletetheiruniversitystudies,somestudentsliveintheirhometowns.Others

liveindifferenttownsandcities.Whichdoyouthinkisbeterr?

Givereasonsforyouranswer.

Aftertheycompletetheiruniverrsitystudies,somestudentspreferrtoliveintheirhometowns

whileotherschoosetoliveindifferenttownsorcities.Everybodyhashisownreasonsforhis

preference.Aftermygraduation,Iwillgobackandliveinmyhomecity.Ihavemadethis

decisionbecauseofthefollowingreasons.

Firstly,myhomecityisabigcitythatcanofferalot.Thereareplentyofopportunitiesfor

work,manybiglibrariesforstudies,severaldifferrentmusiumsforvisit,andnumerouscinemas,

theatersandcentersforentertainment.WhenIgobackthere,Iwillhavenodifficultyinfindinga

jobsuitableformeandIcanmakeuseofallthefacilitiesavailablethere.

Secondly,ifIgobacktomyhomecity,Icanlookaftermyparents.Itakethisinto

considerationbecauseIamtheironlychildandtheyarenowweakandgettingoninage.IfIlive

inthesamecitywiththem,Icanvisitthemveryoftenandhelpthemwheneveritisnecessary.

Thirdly,ifIliveinmyhomecity,Iwillhavealotoffriends,schoolmatesandrelativesto

visitandtoturntoforhelpwhenIneed.Ofcourse,Icouldgetacquaintedwithmanypeopleand

makemanyfriendsifIweretogotoliveinastrangeplace,butthattakestime.IfIgobacktomy

homecity,everybodywillbewaitingformeandIwillbeabletosettledowncomfortablywithout

anytroubleandwasteoftime.

Inshort,mychoiseisbasedonacarefulconsiderationofmyhomecityandmyfamily.I

thinkitisabetterorsensiblechoice;inacertainsense,itisamust.

Neighborsarethepeoplewholivenearus.Inyouropinion,whatarethequalitiesofagood

neighbor?

Usespecificdetailsandexamplesinyouranswer.托福满分作文汇总

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Ifyouhaveagoodneighbor,youarealuckyperson.Youhavesomeonewhocaresaboutyour

needsandyourproperty,whoishelpfulinthelittleday-to-daysituationsthatcomeup,andwhois

supportiveintimesofcrisis.

Agoodneighborissomeonewho,forinstance,understandsthatyourchildrenmay

occasionallyrunacrosshislawn,-eventhoughyoutellthemnotto.He'llrealizethatchildrencan

becarelessaboutthingslikethat,andhewon'tmakeabigfussaboutitunlessitbecomesaregular

thing.Inthesamevein,heknowsthatyou'llunderstandifsomeofthetrashfromhistrashcans

blowsacrossintoyouryard.Inotherwords,heissensitivetotheunintentionalthingsthatcan

happen.Hedoesn'tmakeabigdealaboutthem.

Agoodneighborisalsorespectfulofyourproperty.Forexample,sheasksyourpermission

beforedoinganythingthatinterfereswithwhat'syours.Thismeansshewouldn'tplantahugetree

inbetweenyourhouseswithoutaskinghowyoufeltaboutit.Ifshewantedtoputupafence,she

wouldletyouknowfirst.Shemightworkwithyoutodecidewhereitshouldbeplaced.Maybe

thetwoofyouwouldevensplitthecost.

Agoodneighborwouldlendyousomemilkifyouranout.She'dgiveyouaridetoworkif

yourcarwasbroken,andletyourchildrenstayatherhouseintheeveningifyougotstuck

workingovertime.Youwoulddothesameforher.Bothofyouwouldhelpmaketheother'slife

easier.

Whensomethingreallyawfulhappenstoyou,likeadeathinthefamily,agoodneighborwill

volunteertohelpinanywayhecan.Thiscouldmeansomethingsmall,likemakingsome

casserolestoputinyourfreezertofeedvisitingrelatives.Oritcouldmeansomethingbig,like

helpingyougetthroughthesadnessofthefuneral.

Ithinkonlysomeonewhohasexperiencedabadneighborcanreallyappreciateagoodone!

Agoodneighborcanbeagoodfriend.Heorshecanmakeallthedifferenceintheworldtoyour

life.

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托福考试满分作文欣赏（5）

Somepeopleprefertoeatatfoodstandsorrestaurants.Otherpeopleprefertoprepareandeat

foodathome.Whichdoyouprefer?

Usespecificreasonsandesamplestosupportyouranswer.

Somepeopleliketoeatoutatfoodstandsandrestaurants,whileothersliketopreparefoodat

home.Oftenitdependsonthekindoflifestylepeoplehave.Thosewithverybusyjobsoutsidethe

housedon’talwayshavetimetocook.Theyliketheconvenienceofeatingout.Overall,though,it

ischeaperandhealthiertoeatathome.

Whileeatinginrestaurantsisfast,themoneyyous