高等教育自学考试全国统一命题考试英语写作基础试题分析及评分标准.docx

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高等教育自学考试全国统一命题考试英语写作基础试题分析及评分标准

高等教育自学考试全国统一命题考试英语写作基础试题分析及评分标准（课程代码　0597）

I.重写句子（15points,1.5pointseach）

Revisethefollowingsentencesaccordingtotherequirement.

Example:

ThehistoryofEnglishwordsisthehistoryofourcivilizationinmanyways.（periodicsentence）

Inmanyways,thehistoryofEnglishwordsisthehistoryofourcivilization.

1.Ilikeroller-skating.Ilikeice-skatingbetter.（compoundsentence）

2.Ifyousitbythewindowfacingthesunonasunnywinterday,youmayfeelniceandwarm.（loosesentence）

3.Maryputthesteakonthegrill.Thecharcoalwasburningevenly.（complexsentence）

4.Hisvaluablepapersweredestroyedinthefire.Tomcalledtheinsurancecompany.（complexsentence）

5.Iaskedmyfriendifweshouldtipthedriverwhenthebustourended.（periodicsentence）

6.Yourunclemarriedmyaunt.Heisrich.Sheispoor.（simplesentence）

7.Jerryissmart.Heshouldbeabletohandleeighteencreditsthissemester.（compoundsentence）

8.Ireturnedtoschoolfollowingalongillness.Themathteachergavememake-upworktodo,butthehistoryteachermademedrophercourse.（compound-complexsentence）

9.Jackappliedforajob.Hewentforaninterview.Hewashired.（parallelstructure）

10.Meetmeinthecourtyardfordessertwhenyoufinishdoingthedishes.（periodicsentence）

II.改写病句（15points,3pointseach）

Correcttheerrorsinthefollowingsentences.

Example:

Afterseeinganoffensivemouthwashadontelevision.Iresolvednevertobuythatbrandagain.

Afterseeinganoffensivemouthwashadontelevision,Iresolvednevertobuythatbrandagain.

11.Therainmightlastforawhile,cloudscoveredtheentiresky.

12.Intheeveningwewouldswiminthelakeanddancingafterward.

13.Thatwomanjustboughtherdogamilkshakeinaredskirt.

14.Topassthecourse,yourtermpapermustbehandedinontime.

15.Harrywouldn’tmakeagoodnegotiatorhedoesn’thavethepatience.

III.标出主题句（15points,5pointseach）

16.Choosethebesttopicsentencefromthegroupbelow.Writethechoiceintheblank.

A.Ieatalotofhomemadeicecream.

B.Homemadeicecreamismyfavorite.

C.Ihaveahomemadeicecreammaker.

D.Imisshomemadeicecreamalot.

Answer:

17.Readthefollowingparagraphandunderlinethetopicsentence.

Tornadosformunderveryspecialweatherconditions,andthesespecialweatherconditionsoccurmostoftenininlandareas,suchasthecentralUnitedStates.Atornadoformswhenalayerofwarm,dryairisontopofalayerofcooler,moistair.Thiscombinationofdry,warmairabovewet,coolaircreatesaconditionthatcausesthelowerlayerofairtoliftup.Asthelowerairrises,bothlayersofairbegintorotate,toturnaroundandaround.Theairbeginstorotatefasterandfasterbecauseofcentrifugal（离心的）force.Thetornadohasacentercalledan“eye”andtheairrotatesquicklyaroundthiseye.

18.Readthefollowingparagraphcarefullyandselectthebesttopicsentencefromthefourpossibleanswersthatfollowtheparagraph.

TopicSentence:

First,Ihavethewholeweekofffromthestationerystorebecauseit’sgoingtobeclosed.Myfriendsareallstayingintown,sotherewillbeplentytodo.We’llgotoCentralParkduringthedayandrentmoviesorgodowntownintheevenings.I’vealsosavedenoughmoneytovisitmycousininBuffaloforacoupleofdays,andwealwayshaveagoodtimetogether.ThiscouldbethebestEasterweekIwouldhavehadinalongtime,especiallybecauseIdon’thavetowork.

A.Iamgoingtohaveaverylongvacation.

B.Easterisaveryimportantholiday.

C.Easterweekisgoingtobeterrific.

D.Ilikewonderfulholidays.

IV.重新组合段落（5points,1pointeach）

Rearrangethefollowingnumberedsentencessothattheywillreadlogically.Putthenumbersinpropersequenceintheboxesprovidedbelow.

19.Winesmustbedrunkquicklyoncetheyareopened,otherwisebacteriawillusetheairtoconvertthealcoholtovinegar.

20.Redwineismadefromdarkgrapes,andwhitewinefromwhitegrapesorfromdarkgrapeswhoseskinshavebeenremovedfromthewinepressatanearlystage.

21.Wineisthefermentedjuiceoffreshgrapes.

22.Thebacteriaarekilledbyahigheralcoholcontentthanisfoundinwineandthatiswhysherryandport,thespecialtiesofSpainandPortugal,arefortifiedbytheadditionofspiritstomakethemlastlonger.

23.WinewasmadeinEnglandintheMiddleAges,buttheclimateisnotreallysuitableforgrapevines.

24.Inwine‐making,thegrapesarecrushedinawinepressandtheyeastconvertsthesugartoalcohol,whenthereisnoairpresent,byaprocesscalledfermentation.

25.Themostfamouswine‐makingcountriesareFrance,GermanyandItaly.

26.Thejuiceofthewinegrapecontainssugar,andgrowthsofyeastformontheoutsideofthegrapeskins.

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V.标出与段落内容无关的句子（10points）

Readthefollowingparagraphandcrossoutirrelevantsentences.

Thechiefreasonspeoplewearmasksarethese:

tohavefun,toprotectthemselves,todisguisethemselves,andtoacquireanewidentity.Masksareveryuseful.AtHalloween,childrenwearmasksforfun;theymay,ofcourse,alsothinktheyaredisguisingthemselves,butchieflytheirmotiveistoexperiencethejoyofsaying“boo”tosomeone.Soldiersworemasksforprotection,inancienttimesagainstswordsandbattle-axes,inmorerecenttimesagainstpoisongas.Bankrobberswearmaskstodisguisethemselves,andthoughofcoursethisdisguiseisasortofprotection,arobber’sreasonforwearingamaskisfairlydistinctfromasoldier’s.Allofthesereasonssofarareeasilyunderstood,butwemayhavemoretroublegraspingthereasonthatprimitivepeopleusemasksinreligiousrituals.Someritualmasksseemmerelytobeattemptstofrightenawayevilspirits,andsomeseemmerelytobedisguisessothattheevilspiritswillnotknowwhotheweareris.Themasksareusuallymadeofpaper.Butmostreligiousmasksarewornwiththeideathattheweareracquires,throughaunionwithsupernaturalpowers,anewidentity,andthusineffectbecomes—reallybecomes,notmerelypretendstobe—anewperson.

Ⅵ.写信（40points）

Writealettertoyourfriendaccordingtothefollowingsituation:

You（Weiping）haven’theardfromyourfriend（Zhijie）sincetheSARSoutbreak.YoutellhimorheraboutyourselfandthegeneralsituationinBeijingduringthatperiod.SinceBeijingwastakenoffthelistofSARS-infectedareas,thingshavegraduallycomebacktonormal.Youworldencouragehimorhertocomeforavisitinautumn,asitisthebestseasonoftheyear.（150-200words）

Ⅰ.重写句子

1.Ilikeroller-skating,butIlikeice-skatingbetter.

2.Youmayfeelniceandwarmifyousitbythewindowfacingthesunonasunnywinterday.

3.Whensheseesthecharcoalburningevenly,Maryputthesteakonthegrill.

4.Afterhisvaluablepapersweredestroyedinthefire,Tomcalledtheinsurancecompany.

5.Whenthebustourended,Iaskedmyfriendifweshouldtipthedriver.

6.Yourrichunclemarriedmypooraunt.

7.Jerryissmart,soheshouldbeabletohandleeighteencreditsthissemester.

8.AfterIreturnedtoschoolfollowingalongillness,themathteachergavememake-upworktodo,butthehistoryteachermademedrophercourse.

9.Jackappliedforajob,wentforaninterview,andwashired.

10.Whenyoufinishdoingthedishes,meetmeinthecourtyardfordessert.

〖评分标准〗

1.符合要求，语句正确，得满分。

2.与标准答案有出入，但语义完整，得1分。

3.不按要求改写，即使句子正确也不得分。

II.改写病句

11.Therainmightlastforawhile,for/ascloudscoveredtheentiresky.

12.Intheeveningwewouldswiminthelakeanddanceafterward.

13.Thatwomaninaredskirtjustboughtherdogamilkshake.

14.Topassthecourse,youmusthandinyourtermpaperontime.

15.Harrywouldn’tmakeagoodnegotiatorbecausehedoesn’thavethepatience./Harrywouldn’tmakeagoodnegotiator,forhedoesn’thavethepatience.

〖评分标准〗

1.与标准答案一致，得满分。

2.与标准答案不一致，但句子结构正确，表意准确，也得满分。

否则，酌情给分不得分。

III.标出主题句

16.Choosethebesttopicsentencefromthegroupbelow.

Topicsentence:

B.Homemadeicecreamismyfavorite.

17.Readthefollowingparagraphandunderlinethetopicsentence.

Tornadosformunderveryspecialweatherconditions,andthesespecialweatherconditionsoccurmostoftenininlandareas,suchasthecentralUnitedStates.Atornadoformswhenalayerofwarm,dryairisontopofalayerofcooler,moistair.Thiscombinationofdry,warmairabovewet,coolaircreatesaconditionthatcausesthelowerlayerofairtoliftup.Asthelowerairrises,bothlayersofairbegintorotate,toturnaroundandaround.Theairbeginstorotatefasterandfasterbecauseofcentrifugal（离心的）force.Thetornadohasacentercalledan“eye”andtheairrotatesquicklyaroundthiseye.

18.Readthefollowingparagraphcarefullyandselectthebesttopicsentencefromthefourpossibleanswersthatfollowtheparagraph.

Topicsentence:

C.Easterweekisgoingtobeterrific.

〖评分标准〗

选项正确得分，否则不得分。

IV．重新组合段落

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〖评分标准〗

排对的得分，排错的不得分。

V．标出与段落内容无关的句子。

Readthefollowingparagraphandcrossouttheirrelevantsentences.

Thechiefreasonspeoplewearmasksarethese:

tohavefun,toprotectthemselves,todisguisethemselves,andtoacquireanewidentity.Masksareveryuseful.AtHalloween,childrenwearmasksforfun;theymay,ofcourse,alsothinktheyaredisguisingthemselves,butchieflytheirmotiveistoexperiencethejoyofsaying“boo”tosomeone.Soldiersworemasksforprotection,inancienttimesagainstswordsandbattle-axes,inmorerecenttimesagainstpoisongas.Bankrobberswearmaskstodisguisethemselves,andthoughofcoursethisdi