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P第四部分书面表达考点15提纲类答案
第四部分书面表达
考点15提纲类答案
一、(2018年全国卷Ⅰ)
【写作思路】本文是邮件,与英语书信的格式基本相同。
根据写作提示,考生应用英语给新西兰朋友Terry回复一封邮件,给他介绍到中国朋友家里做客的风俗习惯。
写作内容主要包括三项:
1.告诉对方到达时间;2.建议他该带的合适的礼物;3.简单介绍一下中国的餐桌礼仪。
这封邮件由三段组成:
第一段陈述写信的背景和写信的目的;第二段陈述写作提示中所列的三个要点;最后一段为结束语。
【范文赏读】
DearTerry,
IamdelightedtoknowyouareinvitedtoadinnerpartybyyourChinesefriend.ItisareallygoodopportunitytoexperienceChineseculture.NowI'dliketoofferyousomeadvice.
Firstofall,you'dbetterarriveontimebecauseitispolitetobepunctualinChina.Second,itisagoodideatobringasmallgift,suchasabunchofflowersoraboxofchocolatesiftheyhaveyoungchildren.Mostimportantly,theelderlyareusuallythefirsttotastethefoodservedonthetablebecausetheyarewellrespectedinChina.Don'tforgettopraiseyourfriendforthedeliciousfoodsheoffers.
Ihopeyouwillhaveagreattime.
Yours.
LiHua
二、(2018年全国卷Ⅱ)
【写作思路】题目要求写一则书面通知,给出了三个要点。
要点没有提供具体的信息,留给学生自由发挥的空间很大。
写这类作文时,不但要紧扣三个要点,还要学会写与题目有关的细节。
这样,文章内容才会完整且丰富。
【范文赏读】
Notice
ThereisashortEnglishfilm–GrowingTogetherthisweekend.Thefilmismainlyrelatedtothedevelopmentofourschool,whichwillgreatlyhelpusstudentsknowtheschool'shistorybetterandappealtoustomakecontributionstoourschool'sdevelopment.Anyonewhoshowsinterestinthefilmiswelcometotheschool'slecturehall,locatedonthefirstfloorofthethirdteachingbuilding,toenjoyit.ThefilmwillbeshownthisSundayafternoon,lasting2hours,from4:
00to6:
00.Inordertogetagoodseatforseeing,you'dbetterarriveabitearlier.Ifyouhaveanyopinionaboutthefilm,pleasesendemailstostudentunion@.Lookingforwardtoyourvaluableadvice.
StudentUnion
三、(2018年全国卷Ⅲ)
【写作思路】本篇书面表达为介绍性说明文,围绕学校体育运动开展情况展开,梳理要点时应根据表达需要作适当拓展,如体育馆的地理位置;也可将运动项目和自己喜欢的项目进行整合,使表达连贯自然。
此外,由于是说明文,全文的中心时态应为一般现在时。
最后,注意写作的段落层次和段落间必要的过渡词语的使用。
【范文赏读】
DearPeter.
I'mhappytohearfromyou.Asforthephysicalexerciseinourschool,hereissomethingaboutit.
Ourschoolhasbuiltanewstadiumrecently,whichislocatedbehindthelibrary.Ithaswell-equippedfacilities.Besides,itisbigenoughtoholdalltheteachersandstudentsinourschool.Wecanuseittoorganizesportseventssuchasplayingbasketballandtabletennis.Myfavoritesportisrunning.What'smore,thestadiumopensfrom9amto5pmMondaytoFriday.Onweekends,itopensfrom10amto6pm.
I'mlookingforwardtoyourarrivalandjoiningmeinexperiencingitinthenearfuture.
Yours,
LiHua
四、(2018年北京卷)
【范文赏读】
DearJim,
I'mhappytohearfromyou.WelcometoBeijingforyourstudy!
SinceyouhavelongbeeninterestedinChineseculture,IthinkBeijingLanguageandCultureUniversityisanidealplaceforyou.Theuniversityisknownforitslanguageandculturecoursesintendedforinternationalstudents.Ibelieveyouwillhavearewardingexperiencethere.
Tobefrank,studyingforadegreeinadifferentcultureisnevereasy.You'dbetterlearnsomebasicChinesebeforeyoucome.Thatway,youmayadjustyourselftothelifehereinBeijingsoon.
Ifyouhaveanyotherquestions,doletmeknow.
Yours,
LiHua
五、(2018年天津卷)
【写作思路】
本篇书面表达为应用文,要求写一封电子邮件,邮件的开头和结尾已给出,主要考查考生的英语书面表达能力。
从汉语提示看,我们只需要按提示展开叙述即可,但是在叙述中要注意句式结构的表达无误,然后才是使用较多的复杂句式。
用三段式的篇章结构展开叙述:
第一段介绍比赛的时间和地点;第二段发出邀请并说明邀请的原因,以及自己拟定的训练计划,希望得到他的建议;最后一段表达期待回复的心情。
【范文赏读】
DearChris,
Ihavegoodnewstotellyou.TherewillbeamonthbeforetheendofJuly,whentheWorldAdolescentRoboticsCompetitionisscheduledtobeheldinmycity,Tianjin.Withmygreatenthusiasmaboutroboticsandmyprogress,I'mmadeheadofateamdevotedtothecompetition.
Whenwe'remakingpreparationsfortheevent,itoccurredtomethatyouoncetookaprizeinasimilarcompetition.Therefore,itcan'tbebetterifyoucanjoinmyteamandshowyourtalent.Meanwhile,attachedtothisemailisatrainingplanIhaveworkedoutformyteam,whichIhopeyou'llreadandmakesomesuggestions.Afterall,youhavelotsofpracticaltrickswhichwillbeofgreatusetous.
I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.
Yours,
LiJin
六、(2018年6月浙江卷)应用文写作
【写作思路】本试题是一篇半开放的作文,写作文体是申请信,就接待国外中学生的志愿者岗位进行申请。
话题贴近考生生活,所给要点清晰,且留给考生一定的发挥空间。
但要点提示中只列出了大概内容,细节需要考生自己发挥。
文章开头表明写信目的;文章中间段将所给提示用英文表达出来,在写作时,可适当增加细节;文章结尾段应表达对对方回复的期待。
【范文赏读】
DearSir,
Hearingthatyouarerecruitingsomevolunteerstowelcomethecomingforeignstudents,Iamgladlywritingtoapplyforthisjob.
IdobelievethatIamveryqualifiedforthisvoluntarywork,becauseIhaveagoodcommandofspokenEnglish,sinceIoncewonthefirstprizeinthespokenEnglishcontestinmyschool.What'smore,Ialsohavesomeexperienceinaccompanyingforeignfriends.Throughthisvoluntarywork,itwillenablemetolearnEnglishbetterandmeanwhiletobroadenmyhorizons.
Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply!
Yours,
LiHua
七、(2017年11月浙江卷)应用文写作
【写作思路】本试题是一篇半开放的作文,要求考生写一封信,邀请外教一起过春节。
话题贴近考生生活,所给要点清晰,且留给考生一定的发挥空间。
但要点提示中只列出了大概内容,细节需要考生自己发挥。
文章开头表明写信目的;文章中间段可适当增加细节,如过春节的意义以及春节期间所开展的具体活动;文章结尾表达期望。
【范文赏读】
PossibleVersion1
DearMr.Hall,
I'mwritingtoinviteyoutocometomyhometocelebratetheSpringFestivalonJanuary19.It'straditionallyatimeforfamilyreunion,somyparentsandmybrotherwillallbethere.We'llmakedumplingstogetherandhaveabigdinner.We'llalsoplaycardgamesandwatchtheSpringFestivalGalaonTV.Youmayevengetagiftfrommyparents.Ifyou'reabletocome,I'llgoandpickyouupatyourplace.
Best,
LiHua
PossibleVersion2
DearMr.Hall,
Ihearthatyou'renotgoingtogobacktoyourcountryinthecomingwintervacation,soI'mwritingtoinviteyoutospendtheSpringFestivalwithmyfamilytogether.
Ifyouconsideracceptingmyinvitation,I'llaskmyparentstopickyouupnextMondayanddriveyoustraighttomyhousewheremybrother,sisterandgrandparentswillallbein.TheSpringFestivalplaysasignificantroleineveryChineselife,sovariousactivitiesareindispensableinaddingflavortothefestiva1.We'llhaveabigfeasttogether,gatheringaroundthetableandprayingfornextyear'goodluck.Afterthemeal,aluckycharmandaredpocketwhichcontainsluckymoneywillbegiventoeveryoneandsomeluckywordsaresaidtoeachother.Everythingwilloverflowwithhappinessthen.
Isincerelyhopethatyoucanacceptmyearnestinvitationandcanreplytomeatyourearliestconvenience.
Yours,
LiHua
八、(2017新课标Ⅰ)
DearLeslie,
IamdelightedtoknowyouareinterestedinTangpoems.NowI'mwritingtotellyoutheplanforthenextclass.
ActuallyIamveryfondofTangpoems.IthinkitgreatfuntolearnthepoemswrittenintheTangDynastywithyou.WearetomeetonSundaymorninginthePeople'sPark,wheretheairisfreshandthesceneryisbeautiful.Wewilllearnfrom8:
00amt010:
00am.Besides,IadviseyoutogotothebookstoretoborrowahistorybookandlearnthehistoryoftheTangDynastyinadvance,whichcanhelpyoubetterunderstandthepoemstobelearned.
Ifyouhaveanyquestions,pleaseletmeknow.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.
Yours,
LiHua
九、(2017新课标Ⅱ)
DearHenry,
IamwritingtoinviteyoutoattendtheChinesepaper-cuttingartexhibitiontobeheldintheartgalleryfrom8:
00amto5:
00pmnextSundayinourcitycenter.
Paper-cuttingisatraditionalartforminChina,whichhasahistoryofmorethanl,500years.Peopleoftenbeautifytheirhomewithpaper-cuttingduringfestivalsandweddings.Inthisexhibition,youcanseepaper-cuttingwithallkindsofpatterns.Inaddition,therearefamousartistswhowillperformhowtocutpaperonthespot.IwishthatyoucouldgraspthisopportunitytolearntraditionalChineseculturefurther.
Lookingforwardtoyourreply.
Yourssincerely,
LiHua
十、(2017新课标Ⅲ)
DearEric,
Howiseverythinggoing?
Ihavegoodnewstotellyouthatourschool'stabletennisteamisrecruitingnewmembers.Iknowyouareveryinterestedinping-pong,whichisregardedastheNationalBallSportofChina,soyou'dbettertakethisopportunitytojoinourschoolteam.Somedetailsabouttheteamareasfollows.
Athletesfromourschoolteamhavewonmanygoldmedalsoftabletenniscontestsinrecentyearsandthecoachingteamisalsoveryprofessional.MembersoftheteamhaveregulartrainingoneveryFridayafternoonfrom3:
30pmto5:
00pm.NewmemberswillreceiveextraguidanceonSaturdaymorningsfrom9:
00amto11:
00am.Ifyouwanttoapplyformembership,youarerequiredtofillintheapplicationform,andsendanemailtopingpong@123.com.ThedeadlineisJuly20th.
Iwishyousuccessinyourapplication!
Yours,
LiHua
十一、(2017北京)
DearJim,
I'mhappytoreceiveyourletterandknowyou'recomingtoChina.
OfthetwotripstotheYangtzeRiverandMountTai,botharehighlyrecommended.Personally,IpreferthetouralongtheYangtzeRiver,thelongestriverandoneofthemotherriversofChinesecivilization,YoucanlearnalotaboutthehistoryofChinaandChinesepeople.Moreover,thesceneryalongtheriverisamazing,withmanywell-knownsightseeingspots.That'swhyIthinkthetripalongtheYangtzeRiverisabetterchoice.
Hopeyou'llhaveagoodtimeinChina.
Yours,
LiHua
十二、(2017天津)
DearMrs.Green,
I'msogladtohearfromyou.WhileithasbeenmorethanayearsinceyoutaughtusEnglish,I'vemissedyoualot,thinkingaboutthosehappymomentswhenwestayedwithyou.Actually,I'vebeendoingprettywellinmystudiesaswellasinmylife.Apartfrommyacademicstudies,IalwaysmanagetofindtimeforwhatI'minterestedin.Forexample,Ihavesuccessfullygotadmittedasavolunteerforthe13thNationalGames,whichisscheduledtobeheldattheendofthisAugust.Togetadmitted,Ihavemadegoodpreparationsbeforehand,tryingtoknowasmuchasIcouldaboutmycity,Tianjin.
Bytheway,it'smysincere