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写作模块

11．（投诉信）

Directions:

Writealetterofcomplaintaccordingtothefollowingsituation:

YouboughtanairconditionerinSunApplianceandhaditinstalledtheotherday,butyoufoundthatthefanmadetoomuchnoisewhenthemachineoperated.Youdemandthestoretosendarepresentativetocheckitup.

Writeyourletterinnolessthan150words.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter;useLiMinginstead.Youdonotneedtowritetheaddress.

June23,2007

DearSirorMadam,

I’mwritingtolodgethecomplaintaboutthepoorqualityofanairconditionerthatIpurchasedfromSunApplianceCompany.

Franklyspeaking,SunAppliancehasalwaysbeenmyfavorite.OnApril4,2007,Iboughttheairconditioner（serialnumber12345）fromoneofyourchainstorelocatedinLangFang.Themachineoperatedwellatfirst,buttendayslater,therewasafaultthatbotheredme,thatis,thefanmadesomuchnoisethatIcouldnotsleepwellatnight.Worsestill,thecoolingsystemdidn’tworkwellandthemachinebegantoleakrecently.Itspoorqualityruinedalmostallmypreviousimpressiontowardyourproducts.

Istronglysuggestthatarepairmanoraserviceengineershouldbesenttomyhomewithoutdelay.Iwonderifyoucouldpinpointtheexactcauseofthemalfunctionassoonaspossible.Ifyoucan’t,IamafraidthatIwillrequestforfullamountofrefundoranewairconditioner.

Iwouldappreciateallyourassistanceinthismatter.Ifyouhaveanyquestions,pleasedon’thesitatetocontactme.Lookforwardtoyourreply.

YoursSincerely,

LiMing

12．（邀请信）

Directions:

SupposeyouarethedeanoftheHistoryDepartment,PekingUniversity.YouwanttoinviteProfessorHerbJason,awell-knownscholarofChinesehistory,tocometoattendaninternationalconferenceonChinesehistory.You’llcoverthefollowingpoints:

Thepurposeoftheinvitation

Thetimeandplaceoftheconference

Askhimafavorofpresentingalecturetoyourstudentsduringhisstay

Writeyourletterinnolessthan150words.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter;useLiMinginstead.Youdonotneedtowritetheaddress.

June23,2007

DearProfessorHerbJason,

IamLiMing,deanoftheHistoryDepartment,PekingUniversity.IamwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateinaninternationalconventionthatistobeheldinBeijingfrom22thto25th,July,2007.

SinceyourvisitinBeijinglastyear,alltheteachersthatattendedyourlecturehavebeendeeplyimpressedwithyourthoroughknowledgeandprofoundunderstandingofthesubject.Wewouldbepleasedifyoucouldcome,asourguestofhonor,totheInternationalConferenceonChineseHistory,Ifpossible,wouldyoupleasedeliveraspeechonwhateversubjectthatinterestsyou.Enclosedinthisletterisatimeschedulefortheevent.Youwould,ofcourse,receiveourstandardhonorariumtocovertravelingandotherexpenses.WhenyouarriveinBeijing,Iwillcertainlymeetyouattheairport.

Pleaseletmeknowyourdateofarrivalifyoucancomeandtelluswhenyoucanmakethetrip.Ifyouhaveanyquestions,pleasedon’thesitatetocontactme.Lookforwardtoyourreply.

Yourssincerely,

LiMing

题目：

Bicycles――AnImportantMeansofTransportinChina提纲：

（1）为什么自行车在中国这样普及

（2）和汽车的比较（3）自行车在中国的前途

Score:

8

BicycleisanimportantmeansoftransportinChina.TheimportantreasonofitistheeconomyofChinese.TheuseofbicycleinChinaiswidelybecausepeopleinChinahavenothighwage.Theycanonlyaffordabicycle,andtheyhavenomoneytobuyacarwhichistooexpensive.SoChineseusuallybuyabicycle,anduseittogotowork,orgototravelandsoon.TheotherreasonisthelargepopulationofChina.Allthesemadethebicyclebecometheimportantmeansoftransport.

Thebicycle,comparedtothecar,isnottooexpensiveanditiseasytolearnandtouseanditcansavethesurfaceofputtingit.Itdoesn’tasktobuildthegaragelikecar.ThispointisveryimportanttoChina,becauseofthelackofland.Itisn’ttooexpensive,soChinesecanaffordit.Itdoesn’tneedanyoil,anditcan’tcausethepolusion.Allofthesearethegoodneedscomparedtothecar.

Inthefuture,bicyclewillbewidelyused.Anditwillbeingooddemand.Peoplewillproducemuchmoremodernbicycles.

Score:

14

BicyclesareverypopularinChina.Almosteveryfamilyinthecityhastwoorthreebicycles.Duringtherushhour,youcanseethatthousandsofpeople--manandwoman,oldandyoung--ridetheirbicyclestoworkandstudy.ThatiswhyChinaiscalled“thekingdomofbicycles”.

注：

1.第一句总写，第二句和第三句分写，最后总写。

2.Duringtherushhour分词结构开头。

3.破折号内容为同位语,句式多变化。

Comparedwithcars,bicyclesaresuperiorinmanyways.First,theyarecheap,convenientandeasytoride.Second,ridingbicycleisgoodforhealth.Third,theybringnonoisenorairpollution.Thoughcarsarefasterandmorecomfortable,theyaretooexpensive.Theyconsumeplentyofoilandtheypollutetheair.Sometimes,itisdifficultforadrivertoparkhiscar.Moreovertheyoftencausetrafficjamsandaccidents.

注：

1.Comparedwithcars分词结构开头。

2.besuperiorto/beinferiorto优于/低于

3.thirst,second,third英语语言有层次感，信号词

4.cheap便宜，最好用inexpensive

5.begoodforhealth对健康有好处（万能理由）

6.Moreover表示递进

Inmyopinion,thefutureofbicycleisverypromising.SinceChinaisadevelopingcountryandhasalargepopulation,Ithink,ridingbicycleisappropriatetoChinesepresentconditions.Itwillbeanimportantmeansoftransportationforquitealongtime.

注：

promising有前途的apromisingyoungman

Score:

11

Theremillionsofbicyclesintoday’sChina.Bicyclesareveryimportantmeansoftransportinpeople’sdailylives.Becausetorideabicycleisverysimple,tobuyabicyclewillnotcostsomuchmoney,toparkabicycleneedsjustasmallroomandtorideabicycledoesnotneedoilbuttherider’sstrength,bicyclesarepopularallovertheworld,especiallyinChina.

注：

第一句应该用therebe结构

Comparedwithacar,abicycleismuchcheaper.ItismoresuitableforChinaasadevelopingcountry.Andabicyclehasalmostcausednopollutionbutacarhas.Onthecontrary,abicycleistooslow,itcostsmoretimesthanacar.

IthinkthepopulationofChina’sbicyclewillbekeptforthelongrun.Becauseitwillbereplacedbyacar,abusandsooninsomedevelopedareasinChina,anditwillbemadeawideuseinthedevelopingareasinChina,thenumberofbicyclesinChinawillbethesameastodaybutIbelievethatit’squalitywillbeimproved.

I、对比观点选择题：

1.有人认为……；2.另外一些人认为……；3.谈谈你的观点和看法。

（最好写成4段）

13．（感谢信）

Directions:

Writealetterofthanksaccordingtothefollowingsituation.OnceyouwereillandwerehospitalizedforafewweeksintheChaoyangMedicalCenter,Taiyuan,ShanxiProvince.Duringyourstaytheentirestaffwerekindtoyou.Whenyoucamebackhome,youwrotethemaletterofthanks.

Writeyourletterinnolessthan150words.Donotsignyourownnameattheendoftheletter;useLiMinginstead.Youdonotneedtowritetheaddress.

June23,2007

DearSir/Madam,

I’mwritingtoextendmyheartfeltthankstoallthenursesanddoctorsinyourhospital.

Lastmonth,whileIwasonabusinesstripinTaiyuan,Shanxiprovince,Isufferedfromabadcoldandafever,soIwassenttoWardRom201,ChaoyangMedicalCenter.Duringmystayathospital,nursesondutypatientlytookmytemperature,regularlyexaminedmybody,andoftenfedmealstome.Inaddition,doctorsprescribedmethemosteffectivedrugsandgavethebestmedicaladvice.Thankstotheconstantcarefromthehospitalstaff,Irecoveredquickly.NowthatIhavereturnedhome,theexcellentserviceofyourhospitalstillimpressesme.Ibelievethataspatient,Ihavereceivedthemostprofessionaltreatmentandthemostconsideratecare.

Pleaseallowmetoconveymysinceregreetingstowardthedoctorsandnursesthatcontributealltheirefforts,patienceandenergytotheirpatients.Nothingcanexpressmygratitudeexceptmybestwishestothem.Ifyouhaveanythingthatneedsmyhelp,pleasedon’thesitatetocontactme.

Yourssincerely,

（一）原因1.Anumberoffactorsareaccountableforthissituation.

Anumberoffactorsmightcontributeto（leadto）（accountfor）thephenomenon（problem）.

2.Theanswertothisprobleminvolvesmanyfactors.

3.Thephenomenonmainlystemsfromthefactthat...

4.Thefactorsthatcontributetothissituationinclude...

5.Thechangein...largelyresultsfromthefactthat...

6.Wemayblame...,buttherealcausesare...　

7.Partoftheexplanationsforitisthat...

Oneofthemostcommonfactors（causes.isthat...

Anothercontributingfactor（cause.is...

Perhapstheprimaryfactoristhat…

Butthefundamentalcauseisthat

（二）比较

1.Theadvantagefaroutweighthedisadvantages.

2.TheadvantagesofAaremuchgreaterthanthoseofB.

3.AmaybepreferabletoB,butAsuffersfromthedisadvantagesthat...

4.Itisreasonabletomaintainthat...butitwouldbefoolishtoclaimthat...

5.Forallthedisadvantages,ithasitscompensatingadvantages.　　

6.Likeanythingelse,ithasitsfaults.

7.AandBhasseveralpointsincommon.

8.AbearssomeresemblancestoB.

9.However,thesameisnotapplicabletoB.

10.AandBdifferinseveralways.

11.Evidently,ithasbothnegativeandpositiveeffects.

12.Peopleusedtothink...,butthingsaredifferentnow.

13.ThesameistrueofB.

14.WonderingasAis,ithasitsdrawbacks.

15.ItistruethatA...,butthechieffaults（obviousdefects）are...

实例二99年6月真题

ReadingSelectivelyOrExtensively?

Outline:

1.有人认为读书要有选择2.有人认为应