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46级作文1

MyViewonCreditCardforStudents

Followingthecellphoneandlaptop,creditcardhasbecomeincreasinglypopularamongtheyouth,especiallyamongcollegestudents.Andsomeofthemevenhavemorethanonecreditcard.

[第一段以一个总起句指出最近信用卡在学生中日益流行这一现象，并指出其广泛性（becomeincreasinglypopular）。

Laptop“笔记本电脑”]

Isitagoodphenomenon?

Theresponsesarequitediverse.Manypeoplearguethatmoststudentsareeconomicallydependentontheirparents,anddonothaveenoughself-control.Therefore,theyshouldbetternotholdanycreditcard,ormoneywouldbeill-spentandtheircreditmightbedamaged.However,othersholdthatcreditcardwillimposemoresenseofresponsibilityonthestudents,andmoreopportunitiestobeindependent,ortheywouldgetintotherealworldwithoutenoughsocialexperience.

[第二段列举了针对此现象的两种相反的观点，用Manypeoplearguethat…和othersholdthat…阐述了两方面的原因，两种观点用However作分界线。

ill-spent“花钱不当的，花钱浪费的”。

Impose“强加”为亮点词汇]

Isharetheopinionofthefirstgroup.Thecollegestudentsaretooyoungtobeentitledtoanycreditcard,orwouldbequiteeasytobeinhotwater.Butitisacceptablewithgraduatestudents.

[第三段就这一问题提出了自己的看法，可以与前面列举的某种观点相同（Isharetheopinionofthefirstgroup.）。

beentitledto“有资格做某事的资格，有权做某事”，beinhotwater字面的意思是“处于热水之中”引申意思为“处于困境中”表达十分生动。

、MyViewon“Moonlite”,

Moonliteisatermreferringtothosepeoplewhoexhausttheirearningseverymonthwithoutanysavings.Withtheaccelerationofglobalization,itseemsthattheavailabilityofvariouscommoditieshasputmoreandmorepeopleintothecategoryofmoonlite.Andthesepeopleareevenproudofthisuniquelifestyle.

Themoonlitebragtheirbehaviorsasafashionablewaytolivealife.Butwehavetoadmitthatproblemsexistinboththeirbeliefsandbehaviors.Firstly,industriousandeconomicalconcepthasbeenChinesetraditionalmoralexcellence.Andmoonlitehasviolatedthebeliefseriously.Secondly,nosavingswillplacethemselvesinadifficultpositionincaseofpossiblyunexpectedexpenses.Thirdly,thisimmoderateconsumptionhabitmaysubconsciouslyinfecttheirself-controlabilities,whichcanresultinseriousconsequences.

Inmyview,thoughthemoonlitemayacquiretemporarysatisfactionfromimmoderateconsumption,inthelongterm,itwilldeterioratetheirpersonalfinanciallevels.Formajorityofpeople,theirincomeislimitedandunnecessaryexpensesshouldbeavoided.Weshouldalwaysbearthissentenceinmind:

“Livewithinyourmeansandsaveforarainyday”.

CreditCardsinCollegeCampus

Asisknownthat,creditcardsincollegecampusaregainingpopularityamongstudents.In2002,only2%percentofthestudentspossessedacreditcard,whilefouryearslater,thenumberroaredto34%.

Inmyopinion,thechangesaremainlyduetothreefactors.Firstandmostimportant,creditcardsdohavemanyadvantages.Withcreditcard,oneneednotcarrymuchcash.Andit’ssafeandquicktocheckoutbycreditcard.Also,onecanaskforanadvanceoffundsaccordingtoone’screditrecordwhichappealstothosestudentswhoarealwaysshortofmoney.What’smoreimportant,thecollegestudentsstandfortheadvocatesofnewtrend.Thoughcreditcardhasalonghistoryinwesterncountries,itisjustanewcomerinChina.Collegestudentswanttobethefirsttoenjoytheconveniencebroughtbycreditcards.Lastbutnotleast,theuseofcreditcardcanhelpstudentstodeveloptheirfinancingcapacity,andcanalsoarousetheircreditawareness.

Thereisnodenyingthatwearesteppingintoaworldofcredit.Thepopularizationofcreditcardisatrend.Andinthecourseoftime,creditcardsarelikelytobecomeanecessityofeverycollegestudent.

（高分词句：

roar表示“大幅度地增加“；Firstandmostimportant…What’smore…Lastbutnotleast,（过渡词引用使文章连贯性加强）；强调句：

creditcardsdohavemanyadvantages.“信用卡的的确有很多好处。

”

模板句型：

inthecourseoftime/Inalongrun（thelongterm）,…ismorelikely/believed/bound/sureto…“随着时间的推移/从长远来看，某事物更可能/被认为/必定……”；Thereisnodenyingthat…“不可否认……”

OnCollegeStudents’OccupyingSeats

Oncampus,itisacommonphenomenonforstudentstooccupyseats.Inthelibrary,classrooms,andeventhecanteen,youcanfindbooksandpensclaimingthetemporaryusageofthetablesandseats.

首段开门见山，指出占座是大学校园的普遍现象，说明问题的普遍性。

Claim“宣称“temporary”暂时的“为亮点词汇。

Thisissuehasarousedpublicconcern.Somepeopleholdthatitiswrongandimpolitebehaviorwhichshouldbefoughtagainst,whileothersarguethatstudentsshouldnottaketheblamesincecollegesfailtoprovidesufficientstudyfacilities.

第二段承前启下。

结构如下：

Somepeopleholdthat…whileothersarguethat…”表达两种不同观点，其中taketheblame“受到谴责“，failto“未能……”为高分表达

Thereisprobablysometruthinbothsides.Astome,I’minfavoroftheformerargument.Foronething,occupyingseatsinevitablyworsentheproblemofresourceshortage.Theseatsremainemptyuntiltheoccupierscome.Foranother,takingupseatsdoesharmtotheharmoniouscampusatmospherewhenfriendshipandmodestygivewaytoimpropercompetition.Therefore,Istronglyopposethiskindofact.

第三段明确表达个人看法，从两个方面说明理由，其中infavorof“支持”、inevitably“不可避免地”、shortage“不足，缺乏”、harmonious“和谐的”、givewayto“被…..取代”为高分表达

InternetGames:

GoodorEvil

Withtherapiddevelopmentofcomputertechnology,remarkablechangeshavetakenplaceinourwayofspendingleisuretime.Nowadays,it’scommonforustoseepeoplesitinfrontofthecomputersandplayInternetgames.

SomepeoplebelievethatInternetgameshaveprovideduswithagoodwayforentertainment.Theyarguelifeisagame,andInternetgamesprovideavirtualcyberspaceforonetoexperiencelife.OnecanplaydifferentrolesinthisvirtualInternetcommunitywhichisinterestingandexciting.Besides,playingInternetgamescancultivatesomedesirablequalities,suchasteamworkspiritandperseverance.WhileothersthinkthatInternetgamesaredetrimentalinmanyaspects.TheyarguethatplayingInternetgamescandistractpeoplefromtheirworkandstudy.Besides,toomuchindulgencecanleadtodeteriorationofone’sphysicalhealth.TheyalsoholdthatInternetgamesshouldtaketheblameofincreasingteenagermisbehavior.

Alltheaboveopinionsmakesense,andfrommypointofview,Internetgamesareneithergoodnorevil.Astheoldproverbsays,fireisagoodservantbutabadmaster.Internetgamesserveasagoodservant;howtouseitdependsonusthemasters

题目分析：

对比选择型+社会话题+提纲作文

写作思路：

对比选择型作文要求客观分析并阐述某一事物的正反两面，或是提出某一个问题的两种不同看法。

通常要在首段给出此类现象的介绍，接下来分别叙述两种观点，最后归纳出自己的结论。

对于结论来说，一种是考生明确表示支持某种看法，一种是对于争议较大的问题，考生并不一定明确表态，可以权衡利弊，或者提出某种期望和设想，本文属于后者。

高分精点：

切合提纲，观点鲜明，词语，句式富于变化

高分词汇：

virtual“虚拟”；indulgence“放任”;deterioration“变坏、堕落”；misbehavior“品行不端”；makesense“言之有理”；Astheoldproverbsays,fireisagoodservantbutabadmaster.“正如古语所说，火是一把双刃剑”。

ALettertotheManagerofaSupermarket

Dearsir,

Iamwritingtoinformyouofmyunhappyexperiencelatelyinyoursupermarket.OnJune19th,Iwenttobuyadesklampintheelectricappliancesdepartmentofyoursupermarket.Unfortunately,whenIwenthome,Iwasastonishedtofindthatitsimplystoppedworking.

Toresolvetheproblem,Iimmediatelywentbacktothecenterofrefundandexchangeinyourstore.WhenItoldwhathadhappenedtotheyoungladyincharge,andaskedforrefundorexchange,shewentsofaronthatoccasionastointerruptmecontinually.Latersheevensaiditwasmyfaultandrefusedtolistentomeanylonger.

Istronglysuggestthattheladyshouldbeinstructedonthepropermannertowardscustomers.Ihopeyouattachimportancetothismatter,andhelpsettleitassoonaspossible.

Withbestregards.

Yours

LiXiaoming

题目分析：

应用文+社会话题+提纲作文

写作思路：

本文是一篇关于购物出现问题的投诉信。

在写这种信是，虽然购物遇到不愉快的事情，心里不舒服，但是为了能使问题更好地解决，还是要动之以情，晓之以理。

根据提纲，第一段表明写信的目的，即投诉对方的售后服务。

第二段描述自己的不愉快经历，表达要清晰公正。

第三段要求对方妥善解决此事。

范文：

DearGeorge,

IhavelearntwithdelightthatyouwontheFirst-rateScholarshipinyourschool.Itisterrific.

Iwouldliketoextendmyheartycongratulationstoyou.Ithinkyourfamilywilltakeprideinyourachievementatcollege.Asyourhighschoolclassmate,Ialsofeelproudofyou.George,youarereallygreat.AndIknowthatthisachievementsurelyresultsfromyourdiligence.Youhavealreadyreapedwhatyouhavesowed.YourachievementhasdemonstratedyourexcellenceatcollegeandIamsureyouwillbesuccessfulinthefuturesolongasyoukeeppushinghard.

Pleasereplysoonandtellmehowyouaredoingthissemester.Iwouldalsoliketoinviteyoutovisitourcollegeifyouarefree.Congratulationsagain!

Sincerelyyours

Sam

信函的常见句型

申请信/求职信

I’mwritingtoapplyforadmittancetoyouruniversity/collegeasavisitingscholar/researchassistant

I’mwritingtoexplorethepossibilityofspendingoneortwoyearsworking/studyinginyourinstitute/laboratory/company

Iwouldliketoapplyforadmissiontoyourdepartment/universitytostudyin…

Pleasesendmeanapplicationformforadmissiontoyourgraduateprogram.

Accordingtothismorning’sTimes/ChinaDaily/BeijingYouthDaily,youwantanexperiencedefficientsecretary

Youradvertisementinthismorning’sTimes/ChinaDaily/BeijingYouthDaily/…appealstomebecause…Ioffermyqualificationsinthehopethatyouwillconsidermeforthejob.

IunderstandfromMr…thatthereisanopeningforareporteronthestaffoftheNewYorkTimes

Myformerassociate/employerwilltellyouthatIamneat,accurateandpainstakinginmywork,thatIamtactfulandcourteous,andthatIamresourceful,loyaltothejob,andofpleasingpersonality

Thankyouforyourconsideration

Lookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.

Iamlookingforwardtothepleasureofapersonalinterview.

邀请信及答复

ItiswithpleasurethatIwritetoinviteyoutoattendthemeeting

Itgivesmegrea