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胡小平作文模板
2012考研冲刺班【浙江工业大学之江校区】作文参考范文
Test1
PartA
DearSir:
(也可以DearEditor:
)
Iamwritingthislettertoexpressmyseriousconcernabouttheissueofcohabitationbeforemarriagewhichbecomesincreasinglycommonaroundustoday.
Itishardtosayitisrightorwrong.Foragirl,ifshereallybelievesthatherboyfriendisherMr.Right,Ithinkshecanlivetogetherwithherboyfriendaswifeandhusbandbeforegettingmarried.Ifsheisstillnotsureaboutit,sheshouldwaitforsometime,becausecohabitationbeforemarriagemaycausesomephysicalandemotionalproblemsforher.
SoIstronglysuggestthatbothshouldthinkittwicebeforetheytakeastep.Thankyouverymuchforyourtime.
Sincerely,
LiMing
PartB
Recently,therehasbeenawidespreadconcernovertheissueofcosmeticsurgery,becauseanincreasingnumberofpeople,includingstudentsinmiddleschool,gotohospitaltohavesuchasurgery.Asisshowninthecartoon,ayoungmanasksasurgeon(或doctor)tohaveplasticsurgeryonhisfacebecausehisgirlfriendwantshimtolooklikethemoviestarinthepicture!
Whyaretheresomanypeoplenowadayswanttohavethisplasticsurgery?
Anydiscussionaboutthisissuewouldprobablyinvolvethefollowingfactors.First,themoviestars,especiallythoseinHollywoodmovies,haveadeepinfluenceontheyoungergeneration.Thisfanstakegreatdelight,orevenpride,intakingafter(或resembling或lookinglike)them.Second,thisphenomenonistriggered(或caused)bycosmeticsurgerycommercials(或advertisement)onTV.Inaddition,beautifulorhandsomelooks,inasense,playadecisiveroleingettinganicejob.
Inmyhumbleopinion,cosmeticsurgerywilldogreaterharmtoone'shealth,bothphysicallyandmentally.Mybodyisgivenbymyparents,andIwilldefinitelynotmakeanychangeofit.
(也可以预测:
Inshort,itcanbepredictedthatwiththefurtherdevelopmentofsocietyandtheimprovementofmedicaltechnology,morepeoplewilljointhegrouptotakeplasticsurgery.)
Test2
PartA
DearSir:
Iamwritingthelettertoexpressmyopinionsontheargumentabouthousework—whetheritisforwomenorformen.
Itisalotofworktokeepahomecleanandnice.Traditionally,thewifedoesmostofthehouseworkinmostfamiliesinChina,becausefemaleinthosedaysdidn'tworkoutsidethehome.Buttimeshavechanged,andtheroleplayedinhandlinghouseworkhaschanged,too.Mostfemalealsohaveajoboutside,somalehavetodosomeofit.
Inmyopinion,bothshouldsharehousework,ortheycanhireprofessionalstodoit,ortheonewhohasmoretimeshoulddomore.
Sincerely,
LiMing
PartB
Concernsoncelebritiesadvertisingforproductshavebeenraisedrecentlynotonlyamongthegeneralpublicbutinthemassmediaaswell.Justasthecartoondescribes,afish(astar)ispointingtothebait(fakeandinferiorqualityproducts)onfishinghook,andpersuadingagroupoffish(theaudience)toeatit.Hepromisesthatthebaitisinhighqualityandveryeffective,becauseheateitbefore!
Thiscartoonremindsmeofquiteanumberofstories.ThemostpersuasiveexampleisSanlumilkpowder,whichispromotedbysomefamousCCTVanchor.AnotherexamplethatoccurstomeisthatsomedirectsaleadsonTVbyatalkshowstarwhosenameIshouldnotmentionhere.Obviously,thosecelebrities—moviestarsorfamousathletes—don'tnecessarilyuseorevendon'tliketheproductsthattheyadvertise.Theydoadsjustformoney.Accordingly,theymoreoftenthannotexaggeratetheeffectorqualityofthoseproductsandneglecttheirsocialresponsibilityforconsumers.
Imyselfdon'tliketowatchstaradvertising,andthereforedon'tbuythisproduct.Thereislittledoubtthateffectivemeasuresshouldbetakentostopsuchactivities,becausethepresentsituation,ifpermittedtocontinue,willsurelyleadtoseriousproblems.
Test3
PartA
DearFriends:
I'mwritingtoexpressmyheartfeltthankstoallofyouforthephotosyou'vesentmeandforthewonderfulholidaywithyoulastmonth.Thephotosaresonice,andtheyremindmeofthoseterrificmomentsweweretogetherinyourcountry.
I'mterriblysorrythatIdidn'twriteintimetoyouwhenIcamebacktoChina.HardlyhadIreturnedhomewhenIcaughtaseverefluandwasinhospitalforawholeweek.AlthoughIwaseagertotellyouaboutmyreturnjourney,Ihadtotakemydoctor'sadviceandhadarestinbed.
IshouldbegreatlyobligedifyouwouldcometoChinaandstaywithmenextsummerholiday.Manythanksagainforyourhospitalityandkindness!
Yours,
LiMing
PartB
Fromancienttimetillnow,domesticviolencehasbeenalwaysaglobalphenomenon,whichincludesparentsbeatingtheirchildren,husbandbeatingwifeorviceversa.Asisshowninthecartoon,amanisbeatingaladywhoisobviouslyhiswifeviolently.Strangelyenough,hiswifejustendureitbecauseshe“wantstokeepthefamilyintegral(或asawhole).”
Domesticviolencegreatlythreatensfamilystability,anddoesseriousharmtothevictim'shealthofbodyandmind,andeventuallyitwillthreatensocialstability.Anyway,anydiscussiononthisissuewouldunavoidablyinvolvethefollowingpossiblefactors.First,itresultsfromtoohasteinmarriage,thatis,wifeandhusbanddonotknoweachotherwellbeforemarriage.Second,stressfromworkorlifecanalsoleadtosomepsychologicalproblemswhichwilldefinitelyresultindomesticviolence.(邻居:
…isagoodcaseinpoint,whichcanillustratethiswell.)Andaboveall,alcoholordrugaddictionmaybetheleadingcauseforthisviolence.(李教授:
ArecentsurveybyWorldBankshowsthat25-50%ofwomensufferphysicalassaultsaftertheirhusbands'drinkingtoomuchalcoholordrugabuse.)
Accordingly,immediatemeasuresshouldbefoundtothisproblem,becausethepresentsituation,ifpermittedtocontinue,willcertainlygiverisetomoreserioussocialproblems.
Test4
PartA
DearEditor:
Iamwritingthislettertosayafewwordsaboutbeautycontest,whichisquitepopularintheworld.
AsIknow,manypeopleholdanegativeattitudetowardit.Theythinkthatbeautycontestsarebadbecausetheyaresexist—theylookonlyatawoman'sbody,andnotatimportantthingsaboutawoman.Ibelievetheyarewrong.Awoman'sbodyisonlypartofabeautycontest.Youhavetobebeautifulandintelligentandtalentedtobeinabeautycontest.Itisagoodchanceformanywomentorealizetheirdreams.Towinabeautycontest,youhavetogetwellprepared.Forexample,youshouldstudyamusicalinstrument,say,piano,forseveralyears,andbesides,youhavetostudyhowtospeakinpublic,andsoon.
So,Ihopesomepeoplewillchangetheirmindaboutbeautycontest.Thankyouforyourtime.
Sincerely,
LiMing
PartB
Popularconcernsontheissueofdrunkendrivinghavebeenraisedrecentlynotonlyamongthegeneralpublicbutbythegovernmentaswell,especiallyafterthetragicaccidenthappenedinHangzhoucitylastyear.Justthecartoonshows,adrunkendriverdrivingacarisstoppedbyapoliceman,buttoourgreatsurprise,steppingoutofhiscar,hesaystothepolicemanwithabottleofwineinhishand,“I'mnotintheliquor,ifyoudon'tbelieve,wecancompetedrinkingandtoseewhofirstdrinksunderthetable.”
Drunkendrivingcanleadtotragedies.AccordingtoarecentsurveymadebyBIT,anationalresearchinstituteinTrafficMinistry,about64%ofcaraccidentsarecausedbydrivers'drinkingalcohol.Itresultsingreatdamagestofamiliesaswellasthesociety.Suchaseriousproblemhasbeenberealizedbythedepartmentconcernedaswellasthewholesociety.Andcurrently,strictlawsandregulationsforbanningdrivingafterdrinkinghavebeenenacted.Thosewhoviolatethelawswillbeseverelypunished.
Toconclude,ifdriversfurtherstrengthentheirsenseofsafetyanddon'tdriveafterdrinkingalcohol,therateofaccidentscanbeexpectedtodeclinedramaticallyinfuture.
Test5
PartA
DearSir:
(也可以写DearEditor:
但注意Editor要大写)
Iamwritingthelettertoexpressmyopinionsoncyberlove.Franklyspeaking,ItotallyobjecttoitbecauseIthinkitisawasteoftime.(开门见山点出写信目的,并把提纲的第1点完成).
Unfortunately,wecanseethatnowadaysquiteafewstudentsspendmuchtimemakingfriendsontheInternet.Theyjustindulgethemselvesinthechatrooms,meetingtheirso-calledloversinthisvirtualworld.(充分改造、利用Direction中的句子).Inmyopinion,asstudents,theyshouldconcentrateonstudies.Besides,cyberisnotarealworld,anditiseasierforonetobedeceived,especiallyforthosegirlstudents.Accordingly,makingfriendsonlineisOK,buttalkingaboutloveontheInternet?
No!
Itshouldbeavoided.(完成提纲的第2点).
Thankyouverymuchforyourtime,andIsincerelyhopeyouandourreaderswouldagreewithme.
PartB
Currently,thedoctor-patientrelationshiphasbecomeaprominentprobleminthesociety,whichresultsinmuchdiscussionamongpeoplefromallwalksoflife.Asisshowninthecartoon,anoldaccidentallycutshisfinger,butfunnyenough,thedoctoraskshimtotakeacheck-upofcardiogram,andthegoodexcuseisthat“alltenfingersarelinkedtoheart”!
Therearevariouskindsofreasonsresponsibleforsuchatenserelationshipbetweendoctorsandpatients.First,somehospitals,especiallythoseinruralareas,cannotattractgooddoctorsandnursesbecauseofpoorwelfares.Thelimitedfundsprovidedbythelocalgovernmentfailtoupdatemedicalequipmentintime.Second,asweallknow,somedoctors,inasense,havelittleprofessionalmorality.Theyjusttakeadvantageoftheirpositionstoseekpersonalinterests,suchasprescribingmoreexpensivemedicineforpatients,orimposingontheirpatientsunnecessarycheck-ups,just