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高考英语异构异模复习考案习题专题14短文改错
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IliketravelingandmydreamofpayingavisitforourcapitalcityBeijingcametrueduringtheNationalDayholidaythisyear.IwenttoTian'anmenSquarewithmyparentsonOctober1,whichwewatchedaflag-raisingceremony.WhileIwatchedtheflagrisingslow,Isangthenationalanthemtomusic,feelingextremelyexciting.Thenwegotosomeotherfamoustouristattraction,liketheGreatWall.StandingontheGreatWall,Ifeltveryproud,thoughtoftheoldsayingthat“Hewhodon'tclimbtheGreatWallisnotatrueman.”AlthoughIwastired,butIreallyhadagoodtime.
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IliketravelingandmydreamofpayingavisitourcapitalcityBeijingcametrueduringtheNationalDayholidaythisyear.IwenttoTian'anmenSquarewithmyparentsonOctober1,wewatchedflag-raisingceremony.WhileIwatchedtheflagrising,Isangthenationalanthemtomusic,feelingextremely.Thenwetosomeotherfamoustourist,liketheGreatWall.StandingontheGreatWall,Ifeltveryproud,oftheoldsayingthat“HewhoclimbtheGreatWallisnotatrueman.”AlthoughIwastired,Ireallyhadagoodtime.
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Thereiscommonphenomenonnowadayswhichparentsarrangeeverythingfortheirchildrenandtrytopavethewayfortheirsuccess.Thatisofgreatlyconcern.I'mstronglyopposedofthiskindof“love”.Foronething,childrenbecomeveryreliantontheirparentsthattheyfailtohaveindependentthoughtsorcreativeidea.Foranother,overprotectingthechildrenorgivingouttoomuchcareisextremelybadforourdevelopmentinthefuture.Ithinkonlybyencouragingthechildrentoovercomedifficultiesanddevelopingbythemselvescantheygrowuptobeingindependentandbecometrulysuccessful.
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Thereiscommonphenomenonnowadaysparentsarrangeeverythingfortheirchildrenandtrytopavethewayfortheirsuccess.Thatisofconcern.I'mstronglyopposedthiskindof“love”.Foronething,childrenbecomereliantontheirparentsthattheyfailtohaveindependentthoughtsorcreative.Foranother,overprotectingthechildrenorgivingtoomuchcareisextremelybadfordevelopmentinthefuture.Ithinkonlybyencouragingthechildrentoovercomedifficultiesandbythemselvescantheygrowuptoindependentandbecometrulysuccessful.
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July24th,ThursdaySunny
Onthewaytotheclassroom,beautifulscenerycameintomysight.Bothsideoftheroadwerelinedwithaplentyoftrees,greenandtall.Whenraisemyhead,Igotaviewofmanylovelybirdsflyingfreeinthebluesky.ThenIlostinthought.HowIwishedIwereabird,thatcouldgowhereveritwantedanddidwhateveritliked.Impossiblelikeitwas,Istillfeltveryhappy.HowIwasgratefulthathewasamanwhohadtheabilitytoimagineandenjoythehappinessitbrought!
AsIwalkedonslowly,abrightsmileappearedinmyface.
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July24th,ThursdaySunny
Onthewaytotheclassroom,beautifulscenerycameintomysight.Bothoftheroadwerelinedwithplentyoftrees,greenandtall.Whenmyhead,Igotaviewofmanylovelybirdsflyinginthebluesky.ThenIlostinthought.HowIwishedIwereabird,couldgowhereveritwantedandwhateveritliked.Impossibleitwas,Istillfeltveryhappy.HowIwasgratefulthatwasamanwhohadtheabilitytoimagineandenjoythehappinessitbrought!
AsIwalkedonslowly,abrightsmileappearedmyface.
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Myfatherwasthebiologyprofessor.WhenIwasyounghewasusedtotakemetothebiologylab,thereIsawpigs,catsandotheranimals.Myfatheralsoinfluencedmethroughnaturewalks.Heoftentookmeonawalkinthebackyard.Wewouldcatchfrogs,snakesandfirefly.Heseemedknoweverythingaboutwildlife.Eighteenyearslater,thinkaboutmyfatherandhisinfluenceonmylife,Ifeelveryluckily.IamgratefulthatIgotthechancetolearnfromher.Hehelpsmedevelopmyinterestinallthatwasaliveandsometimesdeadaroundme.
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Myfatherwasbiologyprofessor.WhenIyounghewasusedtotakemetothebiologylab,Isawpigs,catsandotheranimals.Myfatheralsoinfluencedmethroughnaturewalks.Heoftentookmeawalkinthebackyard.Wewouldcatchfrogs,snakesand.Heseemedknoweverythingaboutwildlife.Eighteenyearslater,aboutmyfatherandhisinfluenceonmylife,Ifeelvery.IamgratefulthatIgotthechancetolearnfrom.Hemedevelopmyinterestinallthatwasaliveandsometimesdeadaroundme.
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Deareditor,
IamLiHua,astudentfromXinhuaMiddleSchool.Iamwritingtoexpressmyopiniononifmobilephonesshouldbeallowedinmiddleschools.Nowadaysmobilephoneshavebecomeapopularmeansofcommunication.However,manyaschooldon'tallowstudentstobringmobilephone