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1、英语话题作文英语话题作文话题1 ：家庭、朋友和周围的人Part 1: Some Tips概述：人物介绍属于记叙文（narration）的写作范畴，写作时要围绕人物组织材料。所写短文中应包括人物(who)、时间(when)、地点(where)、主要事件(what)等内容。写作时，要做到主题鲜明，内容清楚，并注意结构的完整性。技巧点拨：1. 仔细审题，确定主题。审题四确定：1) 确定类型：人物介绍2) 确定体裁: 记叙文3) 确定主体时态: 一般现在时4) 确定主体人称: 第三人称2合理安排短文的结构层次，组织好所提示内容表达的先后顺序。3句子时态要在上下文中有相关性、连续性，要与表达内容一致。4

2、审题后要先列出简明扼要的提纲，其次写出草稿，经过修改之后，再正式成文。一、人物介绍的写作步骤：1. Age, sex, appearance, character, birthday and birth place2. Family background3. Education background4. Big events in his or her life (in order of time)5. Evaluation二、人物介绍写作常用的词组及句子：1. Age, sex, appearance, character, birthday and birth place 1）Age:I

3、was nine when my mother went back to Wales to visit her parents.Mr Gregory Gale is one of the few people in England who are 100 years old.He entered politics at the age of 25.At age 16, with a year and a half of schooling and $3 in his pocket, he moved to New York City.Ben Franklin died in 1790 at 8

4、4.Like many kids of 16, I wanted my parents time and attention, but it never occurred to me that they might have needs and problems of their own.She was aged six when she first went to school.Ben, aged 21, fond of swimming and driving, has just graduated from a college.Jeff, 30, teaches in both Qing

5、hua High School and Qinghua Junior School.Consider Chlore, a 23-year-old college student.When I was in my early teens, once I stayed with my family in the mountains for summer holiday.He was in his late 30s when he moved to England.2）Birthday and birth place:was/ were born in oneg. She was born in P

6、oland on Nov.7,1867.Born in 1985, he is now an 24-year-old student.3）Sex & Marriageeg. He is a man of forty and have a 9-year-old daughter.He is 35, male and unmarried.4）Appearanceeg: She is a lovely girl, with a round face, big eyes, white teeth and long black hair.He is thin, tall and wearing a pa

7、ir of thick glasses.5）Height:eg. He is 1.76 meters tall.He is 176 centimeters tall.He is really a tall man, about 1.98 meters in height.6）Health:eg. Well looked after, the children look healthy.He is not so strong, but (hes) in good health.2. Family backgroundwas/ were born in/into a poor/ rich fami

8、lyhis/her family was so poor thathis/ her father was very strict with himthe son of a poor familywhen he was a small boy/ youngas a child/ as a boy of 15during his/ her childhoodspend his childhood inlive a happy/ hard lifeeg. Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on Februa

9、ry 12,1809.Born into a poor clerks family, Charles Dickens had little schooling.3. Education backgroundbe admitted to collegegraduate fromdepartment of universitywhen at college, he majored inreceive a doctors degreego abroad for further studieseg. He started school in 1984 and left school 12 years

10、later.He went to study in Beijing University in 1984 and 4 years later he graduated (from that university).We learned many courses, such as English,maths and so on.He got his bachelors (masters, doctors) degree in mathematics in April 1998.4. Big events in ones lifebe interested in /be fond ofwork h

11、ard atserve asdevote his lifetime/himself toconcentrate himself todo research about/ intomake up ones mind to do sth.do sth with great determination and perseverancebe strict in sth.have a way of doing sthtry ones best to do sth.encourage sb to dofight for, give up ones life for sb/sthwin a prize/th

12、e first prize in competitionreceive/obtain/win the Nobel Prize forbe good at do well inbe crazy about enjoy make rapid progress in set a new world record of equal the world recordwin(won) a gold /silver/ bronze medalbe selected to/ become a member ofstudy / train hardgo through hardshipovercome many

13、 difficultieshave a gift/ talent for language, etceg. His favorite sport is swimming and playing table-tennis.In his spare time, he likes reading and enjoying traveling.Hes good at spoken English and even better at using computers.5. Evaluationone of the best/ most important set a good example fora

14、model teacher/workerbe respected by everyonespeak/ think highly ofbe honored as (an excellent athlete)his hard work brought him great successhe is the pride of China.His heroic story spread all over the citymake great contributions toConsistency/Perseverance is the key to success.be famous/known as

15、be regarded asbecome a world champion at Championshipsremember sb forevera new chapter of history has been turnedLei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit.an inspiring leader6. 描写人物外貌和性格特征good-looking funny-looking strong-looking ugly-looking ordinary-looking white-haired blue-eyed warm-hea

16、rted kind-hearted absent-minded bad-tempered near-sightedfar-sighted a strong will tall short beautiful pretty lovely naughty smart wise clever bright diligent intelligent hard working lazy healthy humorous charming attractive talkative confident independentpatient be in condition be out of conditio

17、n fine well 三、语法、句法高分tips1.A. 概况：尽量用分词短语、同位语结构，使文章简洁，通顺译：钟南山年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一1)Born in Guangzhou in 1941, Zhong Nanshan is one of the greatest doctors in China.2)Zhong Nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in China, was born in Guangzhou in 1941.B.外貌,性格：巧用with做定语译：我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着两只大眼睛，留着长发My histo

18、ry teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair.C. 教育经历：注意尽量用非谓语动词, 使文章精炼1）Majoring in Maths, he graduated from Zhongshan University and 4 years later, he went abroad for further studies.2）Graduating from Zhongshan University, she went on further education and received a doctors degr

19、ee.D. 生平: 尽量用倒装,非限定定语从句等，润色文章1）Not only is he interested in science, but also he has a gift for music.2）He set a new world record of swimming, which won a gold medal for China Team.E评估：注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组1）Leifeng set us a good example, so all the people spoke highly of him and all respected him .2）H

20、e is one of the greatest writers in China and many people like his works.四、样本写作姓名：刘翔出生年月：1983年7月13日性别；男出生地：上海身高：1.89米教练：孙海平偶像：Jordon专项：110栏成就：2006年7月12日在瑞士洛桑以12秒88破世界记录爱好：听音乐，打游戏，看书自评：为人诚恳，随和，自信瑞士洛桑: Lausanne, Switzerland写作指导：1. 组织材料，写出句子1) 为人诚恳, 随和, 自信乐观的男孩刘翔, 出生在1983年7月13日上海.Liuxiang, an honest, e

21、asy-going and confident man, was born on July 13th, 1983 in Shanghai.2) 他的偶像是Jordon, 爱好是听音乐, 看打游戏及看书.He has an idol of Jordon and likes listening to music, playing games and reading books.3) 拥有身高1.89米的他擅长110米栏.With the height of 1.89 metres, he is good at 110 Metres hurdles .4) 在他的教练孙海平的帮助下他取得了很多傲人的

22、成绩.Under the training of Sun Haiping, he has gained many wonderful achievements.5) 他年月日他在瑞士洛桑以秒破世界记录He broke the record by 1288 on July 12th, 2006 in Lausanne, Switzerland. 2.扩句成文，构成篇章Liu Xiang, an honest, easy-going and confident man, was born on July 13th, 1983 in Shanghai. He has an idol of Jordo

23、n and likes listening to music, playing games and reading books. With the height of 1.89 meters, he is good at 110 meters hurdles . Under the training of his coach, he has gained many wonderful achievements. He has gained many wonderful achievements and one of achievements is that he broke the recor

24、d by 1288 on July 12th, 2006 in Lausanne, Switzerland. 3. 检查润色1) 时态是否正确2) 人称是否一致3) 是否用5个句子4) 是否漏掉必要信息5) 是否语句连贯Liu Xiang, an honest, easy-going confident and optimistic man, was born on July 13th, 1983 in Shanghai. He has an idol of Jordon and likes listening to music, playing games and reading books

25、. With the height of 1.89 meters, he is good at 110 meters hurdles and under the training of his coach, he has gained many wonderful achievements. For example, he broke the Asian record with the time 1312 in 2002, and two years later, he won the championship again in 1291 in Athen which ties the wor

26、ld record. Most excitingly, he broke the record by 1288 on July 12th, 2006 in Lausanne, Switzerland. Part 2: Have A Try 一 翻译下列句子1. 姚老师是我们的英语老师，他今年41岁，瘦高个，带深度眼镜。 2. 黄老师是我们的英语老师，她1970年来到我们学校，已经当了30多年的英语老师。 3. 达.芬奇(Leonardo da Vinci)是16世纪意大利著名画家，科学家。 4. 他是一位天才， 把科学知识和艺术想象结合起来。 5. 蒙娜丽莎是一幅享有盛誉的肖像画杰作。它是达.

27、芬奇的代表作。 6. 帕瓦罗蒂(Pavarotti)被誉为“高音C(the High Cs)之王”，为古典音乐和歌剧的普及做出了杰出贡献。 7. 赵普从小家境贫寒，初中毕业后入伍。 8. 他24岁下岗，开一家小服装店谋生。 9. 安南（Annan）先生出生于1938年4月8日，加纳（Ghana）。他在加纳、美国和瑞士上顶尖的大学，获得经济学和管理学的硕士学位。 10. 安南（Annan）先生为建立一个更有组织、更和平的世界所做出的工作得到大家的承认。 二 语法填空Yi Jianlian, 2.12m 1 , was born on October 27, 1987 in Guangdong P

28、rovince. In 1999 2 talent was found by a local coach by chance, and then he 3 (begin) his basketball _ 4_ (train). In 2000, 5 he was just thirteen years old, he joined the Chinese Basketball Young Team and began to 6 (know) by more and more people. Four years 7 , he was chosen 8 a member of the Chin

29、ese National Basketball Team and then took part in the Athens Olympic Games.Yi Jianlian has been playing in the NBA 9 June, 2007, and is becoming another Chinese 10 (internation) basketball star in the footsteps of Yao Ming. 三 基础写作1. 【写作内容】 你校文艺协会最近准备出一期影集，纪念已逝的香港艺人沈殿霞（Lydia Shum）。为了让更多的人了解她，拟在扉页编写一则英文基本信息见下表：生平1947年生于上海，60年代初进入演艺圈知名度享誉海内外华人圈40多年形象特点蓬发，黑框眼镜，乐观，幽默表演经历参与拍摄100多部电影及5000多集连续剧代表作欢乐今宵（Enjoy Yourself Tonight）节目【写作要求】1. 只能使用5个句子表达全部内容；2. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3. 参考词汇：蓬松的bouffant黑边的black-rimmed剧集episode；4. 文章的结尾已经给出， 不计入句数。【评分标准】句子结构准确， 信息内容完整， 篇章结构连贯_