中考英语作文写作技巧.docx

1、中考英语作文写作技巧2012中考英语作文写作技巧及预测一中考英语作文评分标准第一档（13-15分）信息完整，表达流畅，无语言错误或基本无语言错误。第二档（10-12分）信息基本完整，表达较流畅，有少量语言错误，但不影响意思表达。第三档（7-9分）能传达部分信息，表达不够流畅，语言错误较多，但句子基本可读。 第四档（4-6分）只能传达少量信息，表达不流畅，语言错误多，只有少量句子可读。 第五档（0-3分）只能传达个别信息，表达不清楚，只有个别句子可读。 二短小作文如何能够言辞达意而且有水准（1）注意谋篇布局 ，合理安排内容 开始要写出所要求的要点和核心。 正文要围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。 结尾对全

2、文用一两句话做精要总结和概括。 （2）确定主题句 ，适当做扩展 归纳出要写的文章的基本要点 。 提炼出一句概括性的话。 选择合适的句型和短语。（3）学会运用联词1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, bothand, not onlybut also, neithernor;2.表示选择: or, eitheror;3.表示转折: but, however, although, though, after all, 4.表示因果: because, so, therefore5.表示条件: if , unless6.表示对比: instead, notbut, on the o

3、ne handon the other hand;7.表示解释: for example, for instance, such as, that is to say, in other words;8.表示顺序: to begin with, firstly, first (of all), second(ly), next, later, since then, from then on, finally, in the end;9.表示强调: also, besides, whats more, actually, in fact, 10.表示结论: all in all, altoge

4、ther, in a word, generally speaking, （4）不会表达，另辟蹊径。中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定，不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好，造复合句容易出错，容易被扣分，阅卷场上有句话：“错误面前人人平等，文采好不加分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易，化繁为简。总之，所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。（5）改病句认真检查，改正错误。中考作文时，由于时间紧、内容多，同学们出错在所难免。因此，改错这一环节必不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分，根据错误多少来扣分。因此，中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误

5、显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下几个方面入手：1）格式是否有错。2）拼写有无错误。3）语言是否用错。4）时态、语态错误。5）标点错误。6）人称是否用错。（6）注意卷面干净整洁一定要打草稿，不要贸然下笔，然后在卷面上直接修改，这样会影响你的作文成绩。流畅工整干净的卷面始终会给人以美好的感觉。书面表达要特别注意书写工整，卷面整洁。每年阅卷老师在十来天的时间里要看十几万考生的作文，工作量之大，时间之紧，可想而知。书写是否工整，卷面是否整洁与得分高低直接有关。记住：句子开头要大写，每句之后有标点；前句句末用逗号，后句开头用小写；前句句末用句号，后句开头要大写；记住书写须清楚，因为里面有分数；先草稿，后定

6、稿，书写歌谣记牢靠。三近年河南中考写作的特色：描述+看法/感想写这类作文要求同学们先审题，弄清图示情境中的故事梗概。审题的内涵较广，不仅只对作文题的审视，也包括审视写作提示词、主题句、图以及对作文字数的要求。审题一旦出现偏误，就会“差之毫厘，谬以千里”。大部分同学不会写作，主要原因是不会审题, 通过审题， 抓取有效信息。考题在描述上是有限定的， 发表看法及感想是自由发挥的（1）考前准备1.分析类型 纵观近年中考写作题，题材一般是写人、写事、写景，日记，书信，通知，广告，便条等文体。题型基本是：命题作文，应用文写作，看图写话。 2.积累素材 平时注意日常生活观察，关注社会热点，关心周围的人和事。

7、 3.及时记录 如果平时能有心及时写下所见所闻，或有写日记的习惯，写作水平会提高更快。（2）动笔过程1.细心审题，细读题目中每一项提示，或观察每一幅画，弄清题意，明确中心，确定体裁。特别是对于我们看来非常熟悉的内容，更要仔细推敲，有自己独特的立意。 2.根据所给的提示，按照一定的规律，如事件的先后顺序，地点的更换等内在的联系排序，分出层次。如果是看图说话，注意文在图中，意在图外，抓住每一要点，使表达的内容有条理性。 3.理清篇章结构，构成短文的整体框架。 文章要素起它是文章的主旨，或提出主题句，列出事情的要点 对主题开展叙述，讨论收是对全文的总结和概括4.有了框架，就可以收集积累的材料，用最恰

8、当的短语、句型把你要表达的意思逐句表达出来，多用简单句和有把握的复合句。 5.为了使短文有浑然一体的感觉，优秀作文少不了的是恰当采用递进、让步、转折、因果等连词。6.学生最容易忽视的是检查。时态的前后呼应，人称与动词的变化，单词拼写，标点符号，规定字数等，所有这些都可以通过仔细检查，避免低级错误出现。英语短文的提高，需要组词、造句语言基本能力的提高，多读文章，多加思考，就能在中考中写作取得理想的成绩。四如何训练1.写一篇是一篇， 写文章的过程是不断修改提高的过程， 学生写好后，先相互修改，然后再交给老师修改。在批改作文时，教师把学生的作文共性的问题做笔录，为全班讲评。2. 请三位好中差典型的同

9、学利用课间把作文抄写在黑板上，进行集体讲评，这样达成双向交流评语，避免有些同学看不懂老师的评语。3. 考前强化训练是非常必要的，平时没有这么多的精力练写作，借助考试这股东风，提高写作水平，绝不是搞突击，走形式，玩技巧，拿个高分完事。练习基础的知识，为写作铺路搭桥，如重新组合句子，删除多余的句子，加过渡句，写主题句等等。4. 学生不写作文老师着急，学生写了作文，老师更着急，批改作文的速度远远慢于学生写作的速度。考前老师工作量很大，这时就采用学生限时写作，写完后再听写范文，最后学生对照两篇文章，自我修改，再收上来，我们的工作量大减，同时学生也知道怎样写好作文。五2012河南中考英语作文预测预测一

10、How to get happynessThere is no doubt that happiness is the most precious thing in the world. Without it, life will be empty and meaningless. If you wish to know how to get happiness, you must pay attention to the following two points. First, health is the secret of happiness (the key to happiness).

11、 Only a strong man can enjoy the pleasure of life. Secondly, happiness consists in contentment. A man who is dissatisfied with his present condition is always in distress. 预测二Spring is coming onWinter has gone,and spring is coming on.Watching the ice melting,I know the whole earth is being rejuvenat

12、ed from the winter. A variety of flowers come out to show their beauty and bring us fragrance .It is a feast for our eyes and souls. The yellow grass suddenly turn green.The young leaves grow on the branches.The swallows fly back home with the greeting of spring . Everything is coming to life.Feelin

13、g the warm sunshine,enjoying the beautiful scenery,listening to the wonderful music,drinking the new tea,my mood is perfect and I have nothing else to desire. Spring is the most fantastic season in the year .It means so much to the other three 预测三I Hope.Every time I come home from school, I see seve

14、ral children sitting beside the road and begging. I dont know where their parents are. How coldhearted they are! Every time I will think so. Those children are just of the same age with me. Its the age for school. But they cant. It seems that no one cares for them. How I hope that their parents come

15、 and bring them home. If their parents are really too poor to send them to school, then I hope the whole society will help. They can go to the Hope Project. 预测四 你们班上周进行了一次说出你的烦恼的调查活动，请你根据下面信息用英语写一篇短问。词数80左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）20% 活动少，体质差；50%作业多，学业压力大；30% 父母要求严，相互沟通少；20%-twenty percent of the 活动少-dont oft

16、en do sport；体质差-not health, be weak in health；作业多-have too much homework；学业压力大-feel stressed too much; under too much pressure；父母要求严- be strict with sb.；相互沟通少- dont often talk with sb. ；参考作文：Our class has made a survey-Dont keep your worries. About fifty percent of the students in our class are worr

17、ied about their homework and studies(学业). And they feel stressed too much. About thirty percent of the students think their parents are too strict with them. They dont often talk with their parents. The other twenty percent of them say they are weak in health. They complain that they almost have no

18、time for their hobbies or exercise.So I hope that our teachers will give us less homework. And I advise our parents to allow us to spend some time with our parents doing outdoor activities. I think our teachers should give us less homework to do. And our parents are supposed to talk with us often. I

19、n this way, we will be happier.预测五生活中充满了爱，有父母的爱，有兄弟姐妹的爱，有朋友的爱，有老师的爱.请以“Love”为话题，简要描述一件发生在你身边的事。要求：1、语言规范，书写工整。2、80个词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）3、文中不要出现真实的人名，校名和地名Love means giving. Love means paying attention to others. Love means giving warmth to the one you love .Love also means understanding._参考（1）One day,

20、I played football with my classmates on the playground. I fell down and hurt my legs badly. My classmates took me to the hospital. During my stay in bed, they came to help me with my lessons. They said, “ We are good friends, we should help each other.” I was deeply moved. I couldnt say a word. Than

21、ks to my classmates. I will do my best to give my love to others。参考（2）There is a lot of love around us. One day, when I was playing football with my classmates on the playground, I fell down and hurt my legs badly. My classmates took me to the hospital at once. During my stay in bed, they came to he

22、lp me with my lessons. They said, “ As we are good friends, we should help each other.” I was too moved to say a word. Thanks to my classmates. I will do my best to give my love to others.预测六自行车在北京仍然受欢迎，骑车上学或上班都很方便。如今越来越多的人这使得。骑车既可以，又可以。那么你更喜欢哪种交通工具呢？为什么？Bicycles are still popular on the streets in

23、Beijing. Its easy to go to school or go to work by bike. Now more and more people plan to buy cars instead of bikes. But I think that running cars makes air dirty. It is harmful to our health. Riding bicycles can help people keep healthy, and energy can be saved. Because riding bikes will always make me happy, I prefer to go to school by bike.六最后告诫1.抓住大分，再争取小分 ；锦上添花。2.只抓小分,放弃大分;竹篮打水一场空3.写作难在坚持，成在坚持。