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1、四级作文来自:新东方在线预测十五Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Pet Raising . You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:1 有些人喜欢养动物作为宠物。2 有些人反对圈养动物作为宠物。3 你的观点。参考范文：Pet RaisingNowadays, with the improvement of the peoples

2、 living standard, some people form a habit of raising small or domestic animals as pets. Some raise small dogs or cats as their pets while others raise various birds or fishes as their pets.However, some people object to the idea of raising animals as pets. To them, animals have their own right to l

3、ive a natural life like human beings. On the other hand, the way people raise animals as pets have a negative influence on the surroundings ,for example, dogs chasing people on the street and so on. Whats more, some animals will transmit some diseases.In my opinion, I do not like the idea to raise a

4、nimals at pets. We should not deprive them of their natural right. In this way, we will live in a peaceful world in harmony with the other living creatures.来自:新东方在线预测十三Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic Environmental Protection. You should write

5、 at least 120 words following the outline given below.1. 全球变暖对地球环境造成了很大影响2. 引起全球变暖的原因3. 我们需要采取的措施参考范文：Environmental ProtectionNo one，regardless of race, religion or nationality, can deny that the world we live in is becoming increasingly intolerable because of the effects of global warming. Accordin

6、g to many experts, even greater impacts are still on the way.There are numerous causes for this problem. On one hand, human-related emissions of carbon into the atmosphere is causing, and will in the future cause, significant global warming according to the theory. On the other hand, the lack of kno

7、wledge about the importance of protecting environment hinders the solving of the problem.It is urgent that immediate and effective actions should be taken right away. First, more trees need to be planted to help improve and beautify the environment. Besides, stricter laws concerning global warming a

8、nd irresponsible use of fuel resources have to be put into effect and achieved good results. In a word, there is a long way to go before we can take a comfortable world for granted again .点评：环境问题也是四级作文命题重点话题之一。大学英语(Q吧)四级考试曾经考过Make our Cities Greener.近年来，全球气候异常，造成许多自然灾害的频繁，保护环境刻不容缓，已成为全社会乃至全人类共同关注的热点

9、。Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of traffic jam. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.在现代社会，城市交通问题变得越来越严重城市交通问题的表现以及对人们生活的影响解决的方法与措施参考范文：Traffic JamThere is no doubt that traffic congestion becomes a growing w

10、orry for the residents of most urban areas. Some major roads are regularly choked with traffic in rush hours. The limited transport capacity contributes largely to the vexing problem. How to solve the headache?.The existing solutions to traffic jam mainly aim at creating metro bus systems and broade

11、ning major roads. Widening the existing roads can solve traffic snarls on some level. Soaring car ownership compounds the chronic annoying problem, so we must sharply reduce the heavy reliance on cars and drive a shift to the mass transportation. It is a cheap and good way. We can create a system of

12、 customized bus routes and highlight the development of subways, trolleys and light rail. The effective combination of these solutions will enable the urban areas to possess a smooth traffic.点评：交通话题一直是四级作文命题话题之一。1990年6月考查过How to solve the problem of Heavy Traffic,1994年1月考题 The World Is Getting Small

13、er and Smaller也与交通有关，近年来，随着私家车的日益增多，城市交通拥堵凸显，出行难越来越成为人们关注的焦点。来自:新东方在线预测十四Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic ofCredit Cards. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below in Chinese:1. 越来越多的人使用信用卡， 信用卡有哪些好处2. 信用卡的弊端3. 你自己的

14、观点参考范文：Credit CardsPersonal credit cards are becoming more common in China. Banks and other financial institutions are encouraging their customers to change the way they buy things. Credit cards, otherwise known as “plastic money”, are being offered on very good terms to encourage the change. Consum

15、ers will be able to “buy now, pay later”, and many see this as an advantage.But people need to be careful. There are dangers associated with credit cards. Some people find it very easy to exceed their budget. They are tempted to purchase goods that they do not really need, and can become quickly ove

16、rburdened by debt. The credit cards often charge a high rate of interest, which exacerbates the problems for these people.However, used wisely credit cards can improve the quality of peoples lives. They can give people access to money to meet sudden unplanned expenses. Properly handled, they can let

17、 people control their expenditure and the monthly statements provide a record of where their money has gone.点评：这是一篇议论文， 关于信用卡的利弊。可以分成三部分： 第一部分，信用卡的好处，比如说应急等；第二部分，信用卡的一些弊端，比如说鼓励一些无用的消费；第三部分：你自己的观点，理性使用。二基本写作范例： 第一段： 1What we today call (think/believe) 中心事物A was, indeed,中心事物 A of, by, and for ordinary

18、, everyday “中心事物A” who with increasing prosperity and leisure,（这里可换词）created a market for of all kinds, and especially for中心事物A 引转。2Some believe that 抄题，but others believe that抄题。 3I am of the opinion that 观点is not only the imperative need of mankind but also one of the noblest aspirations we have i

19、n the present-day world, because原因简述。 第二段 The reason is not far to seek. Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly, 第三段 In short, it follows from the foregoing discussion that this issue is to be settled by weighing the pros and cons and not by any arbitrary decision, therefore, we may con conclude that the argume

20、nt （照抄自己的主题）is a viable one, inasmuch as it rests upon a fundamental principle of science and logic, namely, that of cause and effect.三、写作技巧汇总、 1、开首段 （1）谚语法 谚语一般已为大家所接受，由它开头引出下文或提出作者本人的观点，也易为读者所接受，如： a. As the saying goes “Money makes the mare go”, but there are something that cant be bought with mo

21、ney such as time and true love.b. As the saying goes “Time flies”, “Time is money”, how to spend your time properly is becoming increasingly important to everyone. 其中“Time is money”皆是谚语，说明文章内容的范围，从而引出主题，提出自己的观点。 若无谚语，则可用My grandmother told me that （2）定义法 有时对题目中关键词作一些简单或正面解释，限定其范围，也有利于引出主题。如： a.What

22、is decisiveness? It doesnt mean act rashly.（反面定义） b. What is advertisement? It is the words or pictures used on media. TV for example, to propagandize a certain product or give a warning to people（正式定义）。 本方法主要对写作中心事物进行定义或解释。 （3）提问法 提出一个或一连串问题，以激起读者兴趣，从而引出主题。如：Do you have many friends? Are they simil

23、ar to you or different from you? Which kind of friends do you prefer? 本方法较难掌握，一般可以从对举、区别、喜爱、环境上去写。 （4）概括法 先概括总结文章内容涉及的现状，然后引出主题。如： In recent years, while our industries and businesses have developed quickly, the number of trees in many big cities has dramatically reduced. Efforts are being made to p

24、revent from cutting more trees, but to realize the significance of making cities greener is of importance. 本写法还可以从过去/历史上写，然后引伸到现在。 （5）间接开头法 以叙述别人的观点开始，引出自己的真实看法。如： a.People often say that money can buy all things, but I think it is not b. Some persons say that love makes the world go round. Others o

25、f a less romantic and more practical turn of mind say that it isnt love, it is money. But the truth is that it is the energy that makes the world go round 本方法主要为推翻别人，坚立自己。 以上五种写作方法，四、六级常用，且简单易学。2、中间段（例论法） * 作者根据个人经历或所闻所见，列举事实说明或支持文章主题。从而使读者确切地了解其观点的含义或依据。 * 例证的组织可按时间顺序、典型性、重要性等进行排列。一般说来最典型、最重要的例子放在最

26、前面（以引起读者兴趣）或最后面（以加深读者印象）。* 具体写法手段有： 条件法/具体细节法/对比法/科技法/历史法，下面一例就是具体法代表： 主题：北京天气坏 In spring, the weather in Beijing can be very bad. It is often windy and dusty here. In spring, the wind may blow all day long, the air is then filled with fine dust which sometimes shuts out the sun. There is no escape

27、of the fine dust. It gets into, your eyes, yours nostrils, and your hair and penetrates through the closed windows. 3结尾段 结尾是文章的总结和思想的最后升华，它应起到再次肯定和强调主题的效果。 高分作文的结尾段应短小有力，言简意赅，又意味深长。具体说来结尾段主要有以下4种表述方法： （1）重述或总结前面的主题。 将前面各段的内容，换一种方式进行总结、再述。 （2）提出一个与主题相关的问题。 这一问题的答案其实在文中已描述清楚，可以说明知故问，目的是要读者同意作者本人的观点。如“

28、As the reasons listed above, why dont you choose the public school for your child?”（关于公立、私立学校的主题） （3）提出预测或希望 作者对上面的阐述观点作一些补充和例外情况的说明，这样显得文章活泼、生动又不失客观、说明性。如：关于“电视广告”一文结尾“In a word, TV advertisement, I think, are a newborn thing in the development of our economy, of course, there is much room for impr

29、ovement in the TV ads. I believe the TV ads will benefit both the advertisers and comsumers.” 又如关于5天工作制的主题：“I hope someday we will have a four-day work policy”。 （4）提出建议或改进措施。 作者就上面问题进行分析、比较之后，往往提出一些解决方法供读者参考，这种方法同样也具有一定的渲染力。四、写作必背句子汇总 1. Television and radio are almost the most powerful media compar

30、ed with other means of mass communications like newspaper and magazine.2. And media, is I understand, couldnt be implementing the principles of fairness, objectiveness, all-roundedness and above all, the responsibility without any supervision. 3. If a country is democratic, media censorship would be simpler because the government only needs to care for the programs social effect, such as the possible consequence of a movie about drug on teenagers. 4. Where was the censorship which may pre