1、高考英语满分作文解析及写作素材积累话题七日常活动话题 日常活动话题解读日常生活指学生在校内外发生的事情,和我们日常生活密切相关,范围广泛。保护学习的课程,课外活动,也包括体育运动和社交活动;还包括和家人朋友的联系。内容有写人的;有写物的;有写学校生活的;还有写学习情况的。所选题材均贴近学生的日常生活,写的基本都是学生熟悉的事,学生身边的事。由此可见,和学生日常生活相关的内容仍将作为高考写作考查的主要题材。命题者可能会要求考生描述自己日常生活的事件。命题方向大致可以分为两类,一是要求考生从描写生活中的一件事情入手的文章,另外一类则是模拟一个生活中的情景,以此展开描述和分析。这两类题目的共同特点是
2、文章的主题均与生活有着十分紧密的关系,即使是后面一类,题目中模拟的场景都是与考生的日常生活有密切关系的内容。 素材积累一、话题常用单词1. campus 校园 2. canteen 餐厅 3. laboratory/lab 实验室 4. dining hall 食堂 5. dormitory 宿舍 6. club 俱乐部 7. competition 竞赛 8. rewards 奖励 9. achievement/result 成绩 10. marks/grades/scores 分数 11. with the help of sb. 在的帮助下12. hopeful/ hopeless充满希
3、望/ 无望 13. absolutely绝对14. depressed失望15. bad-tempered坏脾气16. kind-hearted好心17. (im)patient (没)有耐性18. encouraged受鼓舞的19 disappointed失望20. easy-going易相处21. optimistic/ passive乐观/ 消极二、话题常用短语1. school dining hall 学生食堂 2. teaching building 教学楼 3. lecture theatre 阶梯教室 4. the Students Union 学生会 5. social pra
4、ctice 社会实践 6. part-time jobs 业余工作 7. vacation jobs 假期工作 8. prepare lessons 备课 9. have lessons 上课 10. miss a lesson 误一节课 11. prepare for lessons 预习功课 12. stay away from school 旷课 13. work out 计算出 14. put ones heart into 专心于 concentrate on 全神贯注;专心于 15. have a good command of 精通于 16. graduation ceremon
5、y 毕业典礼 17. English evening 英语晚会 18. after-school/extracurricular activities 课外活动 19. social investigation 社会调查 20. voluntary labor 义务劳动 21. physical activities 体育活动 22. have an outing at the seashore 在海边郊游 23. have a picnic/barbecue 去野餐/烧烤 24. have a party 举行晚会 25. hold a sports meeting 举行运动会 26. ma
6、ke progress in . 在方面取得进步 27. get full mark for 得满分 28. pass the examination 通过考试 29. cheat in the exam 考试作弊 30. learn. by heart 记住 keep. in mind 记住 31. fail (in). the math test 数学测验不及格 32. win the first ( prize). in maths competition 数学竞赛第一名 33. get /take the first place in the English speech contes
7、t 英语口语竞赛第一名 34. lay a good foundation in 在方面打下良好的基础 35. the beloved所爱的人36. peer pressure同辈之间的压力37. parents pressure父母的压力38. hidden ability/ potential潜力39. complex personal desires复杂的个人欲望40. countless difficulties无尽的困难41. positive/ negative reflection积 极 / 消 极 的 反 思42. It give me the opportunity to d
8、o sth这让我有机会做某事43. have (no) respect for strangers/ their family对陌生人 / 家人(不)尊重44. feel cheerful at work工作上感到快乐45. strengthen your own feelings加强你自己的感受46. get a good understanding of sth. 更理解某事物47. take responsibility for your actions对你的行为负责48. open oneself up to sb. 对某人敞开心扉49. become more confident变得
9、更自信50. achieve ones goal达到目标51. be aware of意识到52. raise the awareness of 提高的意识53. get along well with sb. 与某人相处融洽54. be beneficial to对有益三、参考语句 话题常用句型1. For my part, I agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons:.我同意后者,有如下理由:2. Before giving my opinion, I think it is important to look at
10、the arguments on both sides.在给出我的观点之前,我想看看双方的观点是很重要的。3. Last Sunday, our class organized an activity - going climbing for our spring outing. 我们班上周六组织了春游 -去爬山。4. Last weekend, I paid a visit to the Great Wall with my foreign teacher Mr. Brown .上周末你陪你校的外籍教师Mr. Brown游览了长城。5. We will present them with f
11、lowers and selfmade cards to show our respect.我们将送给他们花和自制卡片以表达我们的尊重。6. On arriving there, we began working. Some were digging, some were planting and others were watering. All of us were going all out to do it.一到达那里,我们就开始劳动。一些人挖坑,一些人植树,另一些人浇水。我们都干得很起劲。典型例题剖析【典例01】2019年浙江卷第一节 应用文写作(满分15分)假定你是李华,经常帮助你
12、学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:1.表示感谢;2.回顾Alex对你的帮助;3.临别祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右;2可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_ 【写作指导】 这是一篇提纲类作文,我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能选漏要点,跑题偏题.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达,写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次.特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化.平时除了加强词汇积累,写作联系以外,还可以适当记忆一
13、些类似的范文,这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果.【范文】 Dear Chris,I am so regretful to know that you are going to return to your home before long. We get along well during your stay in China and you offered me lots of help. I would like to express my gratitude to you for your help with my English. While studying in China, y
14、ou always spent your free time in helping me polish up my oral English. It is you who shared me with rich knowledge of English and English culture. Never will I forget you and your kindness. It is my hope that you can remember me as often as possible. Yours,Li Hua【典例02】(2018年新课标III卷)假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Pet
15、er 来信询问你校学生体育运动情况。请给他回信,内容包括:1. 学校的体育场馆;2. 主要的运动项目;3. 你喜欢的项目。 注意:1. 词数100左右:2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_【思路点拨】本题作文为提纲式作文,形式依然是书信,即给英国朋友Peter介绍学校体育运动情况,属于学校生活话题。这一话题贴合学生生活的实际,学生并不陌生,有话可说。首先可以介绍学校的体育场馆,场馆的位置,大小,开放时间等等。然后简要介绍学校主要开设的体育项目有哪些,可挑选一到两个做详细介绍,如学生的活动时间,活动形式,以及此类活动的好处等。再次简要分析自己喜欢的体育项目是什么,并简单分析喜欢的原因,自己从
16、中得到的益处等。文章可主要采用一般现在时态,第一人称的方式来写。【满分范文】Dear Peter, I am exceedingly delighted to hear from you. You asked me in your last letter about the physical exercise in our school and the following information may give you a rough sketch.To begin with, a fabulous new stadium has been built up, which has becom
17、e the new landmark in our school. Moreover, with the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events are able to be held, of which ping-pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. As for me, Im intoxicated with basketball since it has been giving me strength to confront the
18、challenges in my life.All in all, I sincerely invite you to come to our school and see for yourself.Yours, Li Hua【典例03】(2018浙江卷应用文写作)假定你是李华,你校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘,内容包括:1. 口语能力:2. 相关经验;3. 应聘目的。注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_【思路点拨】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写应聘信。第一步:根据提示可知,学校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生。要求写封应聘信,内
19、容包括:1. 口语能力:2. 相关经验;3. 应聘目的。第二步:根据写作要求确定关键词(组)。第三步:根据提示和关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。【范文】Dear Sir or Madam,My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English
20、 association.I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. Whats more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students.Im particularly interested in this job because I want to furthe
21、r improve my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills.Hopefully I can receive your acceptance.Yours faithfully,Li Hua【典例04】生活中,你自己或他人曾有过物品不慎丢失而又找回的经历,其间有烦恼、有惊喜、有感慨请就此写一篇英语短文。主要内容包括:1. 丢失的物品;2. 物品失而复得的经过;3. 你的感想。_ _ 【写作指导】本篇书面表达属于提纲类短文,要求写一个失去东西又复得的经历。写作时要仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,
22、明确三个要点:1.丢失的物品;2. 物品失而复得的经过;3.你的感想。另外提纲是文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语,按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态;就本文而言应该用一般过去时态。注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。【范文赏析】I have a precious pen, which was given to me as a birthday present by one of my best friends. I like it very much. However, this pen
23、 once has an unusual experience.When I was a student of Grade Two, I lost my precious pen because of carelessness when our school was holding a sports meeting. I almost felt crazy when I realized that it was missing. I searched the playground carefully and even the road leading to my home. I put up
24、several notices with their titlesMy Precious Pen Lost, in which I promised to pay the one who gives the pen back to me 100 yuan. Several days later, I heard my name called by someone. It was a girl with a pen in her hand. I felt excited to see my precious pen back. I thanked this kind girl again and
25、 again, who didnt accept the money I gave her as a reward.From the unusual experience of my precious pen, I learn that we should be thankful to those who always do good deeds and also be ready to do what we can to help others.【典例05】(2015年北京卷)假如你是红星中学高三学生李华,请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封邮件,告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营,希望他一起参加,邮件的内容包括:1.介绍训练营的相关内容(例如;时间、地点、参加者等);2.说明你打算参加的原因;3.询问对方的意向。注意:1.词数不少于50;2.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。提示词:龙舟训练营Dragon Boat Training CampDear Jim,_
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