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1、英语作文记叙文英语作文记叙文 篇一：英语记叙文的写作方法 记叙文写作方法与技巧 一概念 记叙文也称叙述文，是一种以记叙/叙述的手法来表述人物、事件的文体。常见的属于记叙文文体的作品有：故事、游记、通讯、新闻报道、历史、 人物传记、日记和回忆录等。记叙文大致可以分为两大类：以记人为主的记叙文和以叙事为主的记叙文。前者主要是对人物的经历、活动或者性格特征进行叙述；后者则是对某一事件的发生、发展过程和结果进行叙述。前者重在描述人物的活动，而后者则重在表述事件的发生发展过程。 二六大要素 记叙文的写作要注意交待清楚六大要素，即时间(time)、地点(place)、 人物( character)、事件的

2、原因(cause)、经过(process)和结果( effect)。 由于记叙文中所涉及的要素比其他文体相对要多、要复杂，所以整篇文章的结构安排就显得尤其重要，安排不合理就会使读者产生混乱的感觉。 记叙文的展开一般都是以时间为主线来组织所要叙述的内容，使读者对文章中的人物或事件有一个比较清晰的了解。记叙文的结构安排通常有三种形式:正叙、倒叙和插叙。正叙是英语叙述文中最常用的一种结构，即以人物出现、活动或事件开始发生的时间点作为记叙的起点，然后按照人物活动的展开、事件发生发展的自然顺序进行叙述。倒叙则是在文章的开头就交待人物活动或事件发展的结果。插叙这一结构在我们的英文写作中很少用到。 三时态

3、记叙文讲述的大多是过去已经发生的活动或事件，因此用过去时态(一般过去时、过去进行时、过去将来时、过去完成时)的作品比较多。但有时为了使文章显得更加真实、亲切和生动，也可以使用现在时态(一般现在时、 现在进行时、现在将来时、现在完成时)。 四人称 记叙某个人物的经历、活动或某件事情的经过离不开叙述的主体，即 “人称”。记叙文中的人称大多采用第一人称或第三人称的形式。第一人称的叙述主观色彩较浓，可以增强文章的真实感，有利于表述细腻的情感和细节的过程；第三人称的叙述可以超越时空的限制，更加真实、客观地表述某一人物活动或事件的全过程。 无论采用第一人称，还是采用第二人称，都要保持全文叙述主体的人称的一

4、致性。注意：句式尽量要多变，不要通篇文章的句子都以人称代词开头，否则文章会显得单调沉闷。例如: I loved the book first because of its beautiful heroine. Then I found it a romantic love story which greatly moved me. I now find that it is better taken as the growth story of a naive girl into a strong-willed woman. I realize that it is the essence o

5、f the book that attracts such big number of faithful readers. 这一段描述在用词、内容、逻辑上都不错，但过多地使用了以“I”开头的句子，使文章略显单调乏昧，给读者的印象大打折扣。 五措辞与表达 在全国大学英语四级考试的各种作文体裁中，记叙文需要应试者具有更全面的语言技能与篇章组织能力。四级考试中常见的议论文和说明文分别要求语言的准确性和论证的合理性、可信性；而记叙文的语言则以生动、真实、 贴切为准则。同一个记叙文题目，不同的人会描述不同的人物经历或事件，又很少有固定的表达或句式可供参考，这时作者的综合语言水平就会表现出来，对能否取得高

6、分起到了相当重要的作用。 这就要求考生平时要多注意语言的磨练和积累。 六记叙文写作技巧 1. 仔细审题，明确主题，选准素材，罗列提纲。 2. 写好第一段 最好能采用一个复句并且用上几个四级水平的单词或词组。这样的文章开篇方式会使读者或阅卷人确信接下来的文章也一样精彩。 我们来看这样一段文章的开头: The results of the college entrance examination came. I tore open the envelope. As soon as I saw the score，tears streamed down my face. I fell into my

7、 bed and did not get up the whole day. All was over. What is the meaning to live on earth? For the first time， I thought of death， of being a vagrant and of being single all my life. I was only seventeen. Wasnt it cruel to me? My father was hurt and he could not stand it that his son was a disgrace.

8、 He was angry beyond words. My mother kept silent，and often I saw her in tears. Horror filled the house. 怎么样，你自己是否也被一种失落与绝望的气氛所笼罩，并且期待着看到作者接下来会做些什么呢? 3. 结构要清晰 下笔之前一定要对整篇文章的结构有一个完整的构想，作文的框架、主题和脉络是最 重要的采分点。要清楚每一段要陈述哪些内容，这样不仅可以增强文章的逻辑性和可接受性，还可以使整篇作文的行文水到渠成，不会有凑字数的烦恼。 4. 尽量多使用表示转折、顺接、因果和时间的连接词 如first、se

9、cond、moreover、for one thingfor another、on the one handon the other hand等。这样既可以显示语言功底，又增强了记叙内容的连贯性和生动性。 5. 文章不要写得太长 有的考生遇到触动自己内心情感的记叙文题目时就“一发不可收拾”，但由于时间有限，结果草草收尾，甚至没有结尾。四级作文毕竟是应试作文， 只要充分发挥出自己的英语语言水平，表述出所规定的内容就可以了。 6. 要多用四级词汇，要使句式多样化 没有语言错误并不是高分作文的保障（基本没有语言错误只是8分的基本要求) ；作文想达到11分以上，四级词汇和句型必须达到一定的比例。如，表

10、示“重视”的词汇有stress，emphasize等，但选用短语attach importance to更能吸引阅卷人的注意；disagree和frown on sth. 都表示反对或不赞成，前者就平淡，后者表达意思很生动，更能引起阅卷老师的注意。 简单句和复合句合理搭配，长短句交替使用，会增强文章的节奏感，使描写更生动，给阅卷老师留下深刻印象。如： (1) 名词化手段：用名词或名词词组替换一个句子或句子的主要部分，然后使这个名词或名词短语成为另外一个句子的组成部分，以达到合并句子的目的。如： We were very much surprised Mary refused the invit

11、ation We were very much surprised atby Marys refusal of the invitation (2) 定语化手段：根据语义关系，可以把其中一句转换成形容词或形容词性成分、分词短语、定语从句等，如： The winnerwas in no mood for speeches The winner was hot and tired Thewinner，hot and tired，was in no mood for speeches(转换成形容词短语) 7. 字迹清楚，卷面整洁。尽量不涂抹。 8. 最后的23分钟，进行修改检查。 检查的内容不是“大

12、处着眼”，而是“小处着手”；不是考虑作文的框架结构，而是留心细枝末节。即检查： (1) 动词时态是否正确(还包括主句与从句中的谓语动词时态)； (2) 主谓语是否一致； (3) 代词的指代关系是否清楚； (4) 动宾搭配是否合适； (5) 用词是否错误； (6) 冠词； (7) 大小写、标点符号； (8) 漏写、误写和拼写错误。 七范文分析 Directions: Now you are allowed thirty minutes to write a passage on the title My Best Friend. You should write at least 100-120

13、 words following the outline given below in Chinese: 1.简要介绍你最好的朋友。 2.你们之间的故事。 3.你对朋友的理解。 范文： My Best Friend Upon the words “best friend”, a figure Jumps into my mind (jump这个词使一个人物形象活灵活现地展现在读者眼前) Zhang Yemy schoolmate in senior high school and also my best friend. During the three years in high schoo

14、l, we shared countless moments of laughter and tears, joy and sorrow. (排比句式能使表达更有力度，而且将与朋友的共同经历描绘得丰富多彩) She is of medium height and slim figure. Though not strong, she is really a girl with amazing stamina(毅力). Despite the similarities in our outlook on life and living, it is always she, the physica

15、lly weaker one, who encouraged and urged me to finish some tasks when I attempted to give up. When we were preparing for the National Entrance Exam, she cheered me up emotionally and would give me a hand whenever I was in trouble. But for everything she did for me, I couldnt have had this opportunit

16、y to give a decent job with a decent pay. After the exam, she got eolled by Tsinghua University in Beijing while I went to a college in south China. (对3年中两人共同勉励、共同奋斗经历的叙述为读者展示了一段难忘的人生时光，确实不愧为best friend) For the past several years, we have been in touch and share everything we are experiencing, sad

17、or happy, dull or exciting. True friendship lasts life long. Friendship is a magic. It can melt the ice in ones heart and blow away the mist on ones mind. It can inspire others and outdo the self. (再次应用排比句式表达了对友谊真谛的理解，感人至深) I believe the friendship between Zhang Ye and me will be the life-time beaco

18、n for both of us. 评析： 这是一篇典型的人物记叙文。大多数人物记叙文都遵循一个比较固定的写作套路，即: 第一段叙述文中人物与作者的关系，并对人物进行综合评价; 第二段叙述文中人物其个人或与作者共同的某段经历、活动;第三段进行综合叙述。 本文的第一段总体叙述了两个人相识相知的经历并用一个排比结构总括了两人共同经历的苦与乐、欢笑与泪水( laughter and tears，joy and sorrow)。第二段通过对具体事例的叙述将人物的性格特点表现得淋漓尽致，也丰富了best friend这个称谓的具体内涵。最后一段作者陈述了自己对友谊真谛的感悟，使文章的主题得到升华。而其中

19、所使用的句式和词汇(melt the ice in ones heart; blow away the mist on ones mind; inspire others and outdo the self)也展示了作者深厚的语言功底。 八参考模版 篇二：英文记叙文写作模板 英文记叙文写作模板 第一部分记叙文题型作文 写作步骤 要求考生写一篇记叙文，描述事件发生的时间、地点、原因、人物及结果，最后对事件进行简单分析，如：2021年6月四级作文、2021年9月四级作文、2021年6月六级作文。对这类题型，通常分为三个步骤来写： 第一段、总结描述 交代清楚故事涉及的人物、时间、地点：主题句 第二

20、段、具体描述 具体描述事件发生的原因、经过和结果：起因经过结果 第三段、对事件的分析 分析句1 + 分析句2 + 分析3 第二部分、记叙文题型写作练习 实战演练 directions：for this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic the day my classmate fell ill. 1、简单描述一下这位同学生病的情况； 2、同学、老师和我是如何帮助他的； 3、人和人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是. 写作模板：架构阶段 第一段： 开篇句：about _ oclock on

21、e evening in _, _. 扩展句：_. (展开描述一下事件) 第二段：主题句：without hesitation, _. it wasnt long before _. 扩展句：1、one _. 2、another _. 3、our teacher _. 第三段： 结尾句：is _? who can tell ? but _. 扩展句：1、when _ , people showed _ spirit regardless of _. 2、this kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish an

22、d priceless devotion or sacrifice. 3、and it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world. 写作模板：填充阶段 第一段： 开篇句：about nine oclock one evening in may, my roommate li ming was lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a cough. 扩展句：his head was aching

23、so intensely that he kept groaning. his forehead felt very hot. we took his temperature. it was 38.5. 第二段： 主题句：without hesitation, i dialed 120. it wasnt long before an ambulance arrived. 扩展句：1、one roommate brought a blanket for him. 2、another supported him in the ambulance. 3、our teacher insisted o

24、n giving him some money. 第三段： 结尾句：is he a suspedted sars patient? who can tell ? but we didt retreat. 扩展句：1、when the savage sars was spreading, people showed fearless spirit regardless of dangers to their own health. 2、this kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceles

25、s devotion or sacrifice. 3、and it is just because of this care that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world. 第三部分、范文 about nine oclock one evening in may, my roommate li ming was lying in bed, trembling with cold and having a cough. his head was aching so intensely that he kept

26、 groaning. his forehead felt very hot. we took his temperature. it was 38.5. without hesitation, i dialed 120. it wasnt long before an ambulance arrived. one roommate brought a blanket for him. another supported him in the ambulance. our teacher insisted on giving him some money. is he a suspedted s

27、ars patient? who can tell ? but we didt retreat. when the savage sars was spreading, people showed fearless spirit regardless of dangers to their own health. this kind of care between persons is the very kind giving, unselfish and priceless devotion or sacrifice. and it is just because of this care

28、that we can have warm families, a happy life and a beautiful world. 篇三：高中英语作文记叙文 举例说理 第一段: 先阐述人们对某一热点话题的看法,然后交代自己的观点,可以用一到两句说明. 第二段: 列举具体事例来说明自己的观点.注意所举的事例一定要和自己的观点一致.最好在举例中或举例结束时用一到两句话将自己的观点和事例整体结合在一起. 第三段:总结收尾, 与第一段中自己的观点呼应,可以提炼所举例子中的积极的一面. 常用句型 Take. as an example The experience makes me fully co

29、nvinced that . Through the experience, I am fully aware of the importance of . 有人认为高三学习就是做试卷、对答案，对学生各方面能力的培养几乎没有作用。用具体事例谈谈你对此的看法。你的文章必须包括以下内容： 你的观点 具体事例 Its known to us all that to enter college for further education is most of the childrens dream, and senior three, which is the last period of middl

30、e school, is considered to be the most important time. As far as the study of senior three is concerned, different people have different points of view. Some people think what students of senior three need is more exercises, while their abilities are not important. I hold a different view. I think t

31、hat students should be taught not only knowledge from books but also all kinds of abilities, such as the ability to bear difficulties.To some degree, these abilities are a lot more important than the knowledge from books. Lets take a look at some facts. We have excellent students, who stand out in the College Entrance Examination every year. However, these students dont necessarily behave well in college, or even in their work. That means doing more exercises and gaining high scores is not enough for our students. We need students who can not only do well in their studies but also ha