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1、英语 英语中考英语书面表达20附带答案解析【英语】 英语中考英语书面表达20(附带答案解析)一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1书面表达地球是我们的家园，我们作为地球的主人，就应该好好保护地球。现在正在倡导“低碳”生活，只要我们不污染地球的环境，不浪费地球的能源，就能够让我们的周围变得更绿，生活变得更美好。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？谈谈你的想法。内容应该包括以下几点：1. 节约用水、用电；2. 节约纸张，循环使用旧课本，保护森林；3. 节约粮食，在更多的土地上种树；4. 不乱丢杂物，保护环境；要求：短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；80词左右提示词：the greenhouse gase

2、s lifestyle 低碳生活方式How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. _If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we are living will be better and better.【答案】How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the green

3、house gases lifestyle?I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text b

4、ooks should be recycled. Thus, less trees wont be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Dont throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment.If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.【

5、解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do，live in，around us， such as，as a middle school student，and so on，close down the water，turn off the lights，cut down，make a contribution to our earth，pollute our environment，better and better等。而固定结构But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?和I think as

6、 a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，

7、写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。2书面表达在本周班会课上，同学们对“初中生什么时候放学比较合适？”这一问题进行了热烈的讨论。大部分同学认为初中生应该在5点左右放学，下表所列里大家的发言记录。请你写一篇短文介绍大家的想法并阐述你的观点。Time to leave schoolActivities to do after

8、 schoolat 5 oclockat 4:45at 5 oclock.exercise to keep healthy and read booksdo what we want, such as listening to musictake a part-time job.注意：（1）短文必须包括表格中所有要点，并适当发挥；（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；（3）词数：80-100；（4）短文开头仅供参考，不计入总词数。短文开头：“What time should junior high school students leave school?” This week we have

9、held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion._【答案】“What time should junior high school students leave school?”This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.Most students think that students should leave school at about 5

10、o clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.A few think 5 o clock is the best time to finish school. After school,

11、they can do part-time jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.I am in favor of leaving school at five oclock. Besides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如hold a class meeting，talk about，the result of，keep he

12、althy，after school，have more time to do，want to do，such as，listen to music，in favor of，clean the room，play tennis等。而复杂并列结构They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.和Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o clock./ Some think that student

13、s should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化；同时Most students think/ Some think/ A few think使叙述条理，层次分明，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理

14、后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。3 世界卫生组织的一项研究报告显示，我国青少年近视率居世界第一。2019年全国两会当中“小眼镜”成关注重点，防控青少年近视迫在眉睫。以下表格是学校针对本校学生近视问题做的调查表，假如你是校报编辑Jack，请根据所提供的信息，用英语写一篇调查报告，陈述学校调查结果，并表明你自己的观点和理由。我校学生的近视问题调查情况60%的本校学生戴眼镜。原因1. 不良的看书习惯，如在床上或阳光下看书2. 长时间玩手机、看电视、玩电脑3. 学习

15、时间长，作业多建议1. 认真做眼保健操2. 多吃胡萝卜等对眼睛有益的食物3. 参考词汇： 近视 nearsighted 注意： 1. 内容须包括所提示的信息，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称；3. 词数：80-100，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in China._【答案】According to a survey carried out by WHO, the numbe

16、r of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in China. As we all know that the eyes are very important for us. So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight？First, dont keep your eyes work for a long time. Dont spend too much time on mobile

17、phones, TV and computers. Secondly, pay attention to the following: Dont read in the sun; dont read in bed or in a moving bus. And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. And thirdly, do eye-exercises every day. You should eat more carrots and other eye-friendly

18、foods. It will also help you keep good eyesight. I think, you may prevent your eyesight from becoming nearsighted.【解析】【详解】这是一篇材料作文，根据表格中的相关信息介绍一下如何保护视力。所提供的表格中列举了近视的原因和建议。主要从原因和建议两个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时。注意作文中必须包含表格上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中要注意使用祈使句，使上

19、下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一】So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. 所以保持良好的视力对每个人都很重要。本题运用句型：It is +形容词+for sb. to so sth. 【高分句型二】And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. 当你读这本书的时候，你应该把它从你的眼睛里移开一英尺。when you read是由when引导的时间状语从句。4每一次变化都伴随着我们的成长，作

20、为初中生的你，你感觉自已比起小时候有了哪些变化?请写一篇文章描述一下你认为最明显的变化。要点包括: 1. 变化是什么?2. 变化是如何发生的?3. 变化后有什么感受?_【答案】The biggest personal change Ive ever made is falling in love with rending.When I was a child, I didnt enjoy reading books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me a lot of books. Graduall

21、y I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like I am talking with a wise man. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time.Books are my friends. They will continue to benefit me even more.【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我比起小时候有了哪些变化。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结

22、构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：When I was，my mother always read，Gradually I began to，Books are等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我最大的个人变化是喜欢上读书，接下来介绍我小时候不喜欢读书，最后指出现在书籍是我的朋友。此处fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, begin to do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do s

23、th等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。5 书面表达暑假即将来临,对于如何安排孩子初中毕业后的第一个假期,家长们和孩子自己有着各自的想法。根据下表提示,写一篇英语短文,描述他们的不同看法,同时发表你自己对暑假安排的观点。Parents opinionsGet ready for high school. Do some houseworkKids opinionsHave a good rest. Do some sightseeingYour opinion注意（1）表格中的观点仅供参考,允许适当发挥;（2）开头已给出,不计入总词数;（3）文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息;（4）词数:不少于8

24、0。How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions. _【答案】How will you spend the coming summer vacation? Parents and kids have their own opinions.Some parents think kids should get ready for high school in the sum?mer so its important to take summer courses. The

25、y also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think its time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.In my opinion we can have a talk with our parents. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. We need to rela

26、x ourselves after working so hard at school. Its good for us to do some sports.【解析】【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，本文已经给出了主要写作要点，动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知本文主要是第三人称，一般现在时态进行叙述语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系【点睛】这篇短文用到了一些好的句型：They also think kids can help do housework to learn some life skills. But the kids disagree. They think its time to take a good rest. They need to hang out with their friends to go sightseeing.这些给文章增色不少。6