1、中考英语书面表达专题中考英语书面表达专题宝典一 中考书面表达综述1. 中考书面表达答题秘籍步骤1: 认真审题。内容包括:a) 文字信息b) 表格、图标信息步骤2: 巧妙构思。利用列提纲确定人称、时态、每一个要点。步骤3: 信息转换a) 以词及点:用一两个单词或短语写出每句话的细节要点。b) 连词成句:用联词成句的方法将上述要点的词语扩展成句子。c) 连句成文:正确使用表逻辑关系的连接词,使文章前后连贯,结构紧凑,过度自然。步骤4: 检查修改。重点检查单词拼写、大小写、标点符号等。步骤5: 规范抄写。保持卷面整洁。如书写较差,以致影响阅读,分数将降低一个档次。2. 作文分析例题:你班进行了一次综
2、合实践活动。通过活动,同学们收获很大,尤其是李华同学进步最快。请你根据表格内容写一篇关于李华的短文。词数80个左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。过去的表现现在的表现经常与别人吵架与别人相处融洽乱扔垃圾爱护环境沉溺于电脑游戏积极参加各种活动 参考作文对比,注意划线部分。三类一般作文一类优秀作文We are very glad that Li hua has made great progress. Before the activity, he often quarreled with other students, and never said sorry to others. He alw
3、ays threw trash in the classroom. Sometimes, he played computer games for a very long time. But now, he can make good friends with others. Also, he is very active in taking part in a lot of activities, such as playing basketball, visiting the museums, go swimming. We all like him very much.We are ve
4、ry glad that Li Hua has made great progress. But he used to be impolite and even often quarreled with others. He threw litter about and made our classroom dirty. After class, he usually lost himself in playing computer games. After this activity, Li Hua has changed a lot. He gets on well with others
5、 and is ready to help them. He also takes good care of the environment. He takes an active part in all kinds of activities, too. We are all glad of his progress.河南中考英语作文的评分标准:第一档:符合题目要求,内容完整,层次结构清晰,表达清楚,语言无误。13-15分。第二档:基本符合题目要求,内容较完整,层次结构较清晰,表达较清楚,语言有少量错误。9-12分。第三档:部分内容符合题目要求,内容不够完整,层次结构不够清晰,表达不够清楚,
6、语言有较多的错误。4-8分。第四档:不符合题目要求,整篇表达不清楚,或照抄、拼凑几个词语。0-3分。满分作文 根据中文大意,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的短文。所给英语提示词语供选用。 目前洋快餐在中国非常流行,许多中学生都很喜欢。洋快餐餐厅不仅拥有较好的环境,而且能够提供方便快捷的服务。但是请结合你自己的经历,谈谈你对洋快餐的看法。 提示词语:foreign fast food, popular, like, clean, service, fast and convenient (方便的), too much 答案 Foreign fast food is so popular i
7、n China that many students like eating it. They like eating in fast food restaurants because most of them are clean and the service is fast and convenient. But fast food has too much salt, sugar and fat, and eating it too much is bad for peoples health. Although the fast food is not very healthy to
8、us, I like it because it is quite different from Chinese food and it tastes good. When we hold a party, we usually choose eating there. But I dont think its all right to eat foreign fast food very often. If we eat it only once a month, we neednt worry about anything.满分作文快餐在中国很流行,但快餐对人体却没什么好处。请根据下面中文
9、提示,以“Fast Food”为题,写一篇80词左右得英语短文。提示:(1)快餐十分流行,尤其是儿童很喜欢;(2)快餐受欢迎的原因:方便(convenient)、省时;既可在快餐店吃可以带家吃;(3)从营养角度讲快餐食品不利于健康;(4)建议:如时间来不及可吃快餐,但儿童应尽量少吃。要求:句子通顺,语言表达正确,可适当增加细节使内容连贯。Fast FoodFast food is becoming more and more popular in China, especially among children.There are several reasons for the fast fo
10、od. First, it is very convenient and save time. Second, you can either eat it in the restaurant or take it home. Third, the service is quite good.However, eating fast food too much will do harm to our health. I think fast food is only a good choice when you are in a hurry. Its good for people, espec
11、ially children, to eat fast food as little as possible. 必备(背)词句a) both and 和都b) either or 不是就是/或c) not until 直到才d) make progress 取得进步e) not only but also 不但而且f) too to 太以至于不满分作文Saturday February 8th Fine There was a special football game today. It attracted many people. The game was between the Aged
12、 Team and the Teenagers Team. The oldest player was 91 years old while the youngest was only 9. The game started at 8:30 in the morning. The Aged Team won the first half. The score was 3 to 2. But in the second half, they felt a bit tired. The teens were still fully of energy. The audience cheered f
13、or both teams. In the end, the Teenagers Team won, and the score was 5 to 4. How wonderful the game was!. 必备(背)词句a) as soon as 一 就 b) as + adj. + as possible / as many(much)+可数(不可数)名词+as possible尽可能.的c) be famous for 以而闻名、著名d) had better (not) do sth. 最好(不)做e) It takes sb. some time to do sth. 某人做某事
14、花了多长时间。f) Its time for sth. / Its time for sb. to do sth. 是做的时间了、该做.了g) prefer to do sth. 宁可、更愿意做 / prefer doing to sth. 更喜欢做不喜欢做h) used to do sth. 过去曾经、常做(现在不做了)宝典二:文章的结构-开头、主体和结尾中考英语书面表达篇幅要求不长,但是,要求有明确的开头部分,文章主体部分及结尾部分,不能是一篇由十几个句子简单拼凑起来的短文。因此,在写作过程中,要注意以下要点:. 写作指导1. “开门见山”式的开头:一般来说,文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山
15、”,即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题,使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。2. “条理清楚”的主体:理顺要点的先后表达顺序,并将各个单句按照其逻辑关系进行适当调整。3. “点明主题”的自然结尾:文章的结尾没有固定的模式,可以根据表达主题的需要灵活创造。一种较为常见的结尾方法,是对一篇文章的中心思想、主要内容进行清晰明朗的总结,甚至是画龙点睛。恰当的总结和归纳往往会使文章增色。. 满分作文After three years of staying together, you will say goodbye to your teachers soon. You must have much to
16、 say to your teachers.We want to know: What you want to say to your English teacher most. Why you want to say so What you want to tell her about your future plan要求:1词数:60-802. 不要出现真实的人名和校名敬爱的老师,我想对你说:Dear Mrs. Guo,I want to say Thank you most at the moment when I have to say goodbye to you.I really
17、appreciate what you have done for me. I used to be too shy to speak English in front of the class. You found my problem and helped me out. I can still remember your smile on the day when I won the first prize in the English speech contest. It was you who gave me the confidence.I have a dream of goin
18、g to the Beijing University in the future. Though its hard for me, Im sure your love will encourage me to achieve. Yours, Tom. 必备(背)词句a) try ones best to do sth. 努力做某事b) notuntil 直到为止c) in order to do sth. 为了d) practice doing sth. 练习做某事e) get ready for sth. 做准备f) all kinds of 各种各样的g) so that 如此以至于h)
19、 share sth. with sb. 与某人一起分享宝典三:应用文-书信、电子邮件 应用文是人们在生活、学习、工作和社会活动中经常使用到的,是为解决实际问题、处理具体事务而写的,它要求实用、真实、准确,还要求格式规范。人们阅读应用文时,一般不包含欣赏的因素,只要求文通、字顺、事明即可。所以,应用文要写的简洁明了,事实清楚,对内容、格式作周密具体的考虑和安排,以免因疏漏而贻误事情。 应用文在实践中已形成了各种较为固定的形式。中考经常涉及的英语应用文主要有书信、电子邮件、发言稿、通知等。考生有必要熟悉有关应用文的写作知识,了解有关应用文的写作要求,从而掌握有关应用文的写作诀窍。I. 书信1.
20、写作指导 英文书信一般由以下五部分组成:(1) 信头(Heading):即写信人的地址和写信的日期、要写在信纸的右上角;(2) 称呼(Salutation):指对收信人的称呼,写在左上角,顶格写;称呼后面的标点一般用逗号“,”;(3) 正文(Body of the letter): 信件的主体部分。写在称呼的下一行,一般由左边第三或第五个字母处开始写起;【注意】近些年来,中考增加了一种较为灵活的书信写作形式,即:写回信。这类题型中,书信正文的开头除简单的问候(How are you?/ Hows everything going?)外,应该总结一下上封来信中提出的问题、需求等,使读者更清楚地了
21、解这封回信的意图。(4) 结束语(Closing): 指正文下面的结尾客套语。位置应低于正文一、二行。一般从信纸的中间稍右写起,第一个字母大写,末尾用逗号。常用的结束语有Yours sincerely, Yours, Sincerely yours, Yours truly等;(5) 署名(Signature): 写在结束语的下面。作文赏析:圣诞节快到了,你收到了一封来自圣诞老人的信。根据来信内容及提示信息,完成回信正文部分的开头、主体和结尾。Dear Tom (Mary),Not long from now, Ill be leaving the North Pole for my long
22、 trip on Christmas. Although its a long journey, I am still eager to visit you in Beijing soon.My elves (精灵) tell me that you have received a high mark in your final English exam this year, thats excellent! I think you are such a smart boy (girl) for your age. Im so proud of you! I must go now to ch
23、eck on the busy little elves in the workshop where they are making all the toys and gifts for the good boys and girls. Let me know what present you want for the coming Christmas. We will be loading (装) the sleigh(雪橇) soon and heading your way!Im looking forward to your message.Merry Christmas and Wa
24、rmest Wishes!Santa Clause Yours, Tom (Mary)2. 满分作文江苏盐城2005年中考 小明和小华是在“手拉手”活动中结成的一对学习伙伴。前不久,小名来信向小华询问如何学好英语。请你以小华的名义给他写封信。内容包括:(1) 学习英语的基本方法(listen carefully; speak much; read widely; learn by heart; practise writing; );(2) 你的体会和其他建议。词数:80词左右。信的开头与结尾以为你写好,不计入总词数。Dear Xiao Ming,Im very glad to receive
25、 your letter. In your letter you asked me about how to learn English. Now Ill tell you something about it.I think you must listen carefully and be active in class. Speak as much as possible. Dont be afraid of making mistakes. Youd better read widely and learn some important parts by heart. You shoul
26、d practise writing often. Of course there are many other ways. You can also see English movies, learn to sing English songs or make pen-friends with foreigners. They are all very helpful. Nothing is difficult if you put your heart into it. Im sure youll learn English well. Yours, Xiao Hua 3. 必备(背)词句
27、(1) Its very glad(happy) to 很高兴 (2) everything goes well/everything is all right 诸事顺利、诸事安好 (3) tell sb. about sth. 告诉某人某事 (4) Im afraid 恐怕 (5) Im so sorry(happy) to hear that 得知.(听到.消息),我很难过(高兴)。 (6) Im writing to 此信是为了 (7) send best regards to sb. 代我问候某人 (8) Im looking forward to sth. 期盼某事.电子邮件1. 写
28、作指导电子邮件一般由以下五部分组成:(1)收件人地址: 在标题栏的 “收件人(To)”框中输入收信人的E-mail 地址。(2)主题: “主题(Subject)”框的内容应简明地概括新的内容,短的可以是一个单词,如greeting;长得可以是一个名词性短语,也可以使完整句。(3)称呼: E-mail一般使用非正式的文体,因此正文前的称呼通常无需使用诸如Dear Mr. John 之类的表达。在同辈的亲朋好友或同事间可以直呼其名,如:Hi Tom,但对长辈或上级最好使用头衔并使用姓。如:Dear Doctor Li,。(4)正文: 写E-mail和写英文书信相差不多,但要注意以下两点: a: 首
29、先要明确写给谁。不同的收件人,语气不同。写给朋友的可用一些俚语或缩写语言,但正式的邮件就不能用俚语或缩写词语。像中考书面表达就是正规的写作,就不能用俚语或缩写词语。 b: 写电子邮件要直接,并多用短剧使意思清楚。对重点部分要作详细介绍,中考试题要求写电子邮件,就必须根据提示,将要点写全,并注意语言的运用。(5)信尾客套话: 信尾客套话通常也很简明。常常只需一个词,如:Thanks, Best, Cheers 等; 不需要用一般信函中的Sincerely yours, Best regards 等。2. 满分作文根据中文提示和英文书信内容,写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信。假设你叫王
30、明,昨天收到了笔友David 的E-mail,得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封,介绍学习中文的体会和方法,提出你的建议,以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。(信的开头和结尾已给出,其自述不计入所完成的短文内。)提示词语:Chinese, be, useful, many foreigners, learn, now, difficult, different from, it is important, listen, talk, read, writeDear David,Im glad youll come to Beijing to learn Ch
31、inese. Chinese is very useful, and many foreigners are learning it now. Its difficult for you because its quite different from English. You have to remember as many Chinese words as possible. Its also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practice your listening. Do your best to talk with people in Chinese. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. Im sure youll learn Chinese well. Hope to
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