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1、全国各地高考真题写作精品范文集合2016年普通高等学校招生全国统一考试新课标I卷第二节 书面表达（满分25分） 假定你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（resume）。给外教Mr Jenkins 写信，请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式（format）注意： 1. 词数100左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。写作范文1 DearMs.Jenkins,ImLiHuafromyourEnglishwritingclasslastterm.Imwritingtoaskforyourhelp.Imapplyingforaparttimejobataforeigncom

2、panyinmycityduringthesummervacation,andIhavejustcompletedmyapplicationletterandresume.however,IamnotquitesureofthelanguageandtheformatIveused.Iknowyouhaveaverybusyschedule,butIdbeverygratefulifyoucouldtakesometimetogothroughthemandmakenecessarychanges.pleasefindmyapplicationletterandresumeintheattac

3、hment. Thankyouforyourkindness! Yours, LiHua写作范文2Dear Ms. Jenkins,Im Li Hua from your English writing class last term. Im writing to ask for your help. Im applying for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation, and I have just completed my application letter and resu

4、me. however, I am not quite sure of the language and the format Ive used. I know you have a very busy schedule, but Id be very grateful if you could take some time to go through them and make necessary changes. please find my application letter and resume in the attachment.Thank you for your kindnes

5、s!Yours,Li Hua2016年高考全国丙卷（全国）英语第二节书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，你校摄影俱乐部（photography club）将举办国际中学摄影展。请给你的英国朋友Peter写封信。请他提供作品。信的内容包括： 1主题：环境保护； 2展览时间； 3投稿邮箱：intlphotoshow.注意： 1词数100左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】Dear Peter,Our school photography club is going to hold an International High School student Photography Sho

6、w. The theme of the show is environmental protection. It will start from June15th and last three weeks. Any students who is interested in welcome to participate. I know youtake good pictures and youve always wanted to do something for environmental protection. I remember you showed me some photos on

7、 that themethe last time you visitedour school. This is surely a good chance for more people to see them. If you want to join, youcan send your photos to intlphotoshow.Hope to hear from you soon. Yours Lihua【名师点睛】本篇范文很好地完成了要求的所有任务，要点扩充合情合理，符合生活实际。建议对方参加本次展览的理由符合逻辑：对方恰好有这一主题的作品。全文句式多样化，并没有一直使用陈述句，穿插使

8、用祈使句，符合邀请函的特点。文章中使用了较多的复合句，如定语从句Any students who is interested in welcome to participate.时间状语从句. themethe last time you visitedour school.条件状语从句If you want to join.；等。全文没有中国式英语句式，体现出很高的驾驭英语的能力。考点：考查半开放作文3.2016年高考全国丙卷（全国）英语第二节书面表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，与留学生朋友Bob约好一起去书店，因故不能赴约。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.表示歉意；2.说明原因；3.另约时间

9、。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】Dear Bob, Im sorry to say that I cannot go to the bookstore with you on Friday afternoon. I have just found that I have to attend an important class meeting that afternoon. I hope the change will not cause you too much trouble. Shall we go on Saturday morning? We

10、can set out early so that well have more time to read and select books. If its convenient for you, lets meet at 8:30 outside the school gate. If not, let me know what time suits you best. I should be available any time after school next week. Yours, Li Hua【解析】考点：书信类作文【名师点睛】题目是常规的书信作文，要求写一封道歉信，是应用文的一

11、种。写作的内容已经给出，表达歉意的同时，还要与对方另约时间。因此，不仅仅是一封道歉信。写作时注意涵盖所有要点，还要兼顾上下文的连贯性。4.2016普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（北京卷）第四部分：书面表达（共两节，35 分）第一节（15分）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1. 该人物是谁；2. 该人物的主要贡献；3. 该人物对你的影响。注意：1. 词数不少于50；2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim, _ _Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim,

12、 Its great to hear from you. I feel proud knowing your interest in Chinese history.As for my favourite figure in Chinese history, it must be Wei Yuan, a great thinker in the late Qing Dynasty. He, in his book, Haiguo Tuzhi (Mps and Records of the World), introduced modern technologies and ideas to C

13、hina. That opened our eyes to the world. In fact, he inspires me to major in English in college to be a bridge between China and the world. Interested in knowing more? I can find you some books! Just let me know. Cheers! Yours, Li Hua考点：应用文写作【名师点睛】题材偏向于信息介绍类的开放式写作，对于应用文格式的要求并不高，但对于语言组织和词汇积累的要求极高。本次应

14、用文并没有限定考生必须写某一位历史人物，但是谈及人物的贡献和对自己的影响时，考生有可能会遇到大量的词汇障碍，故难度较去年明显提升。第二节（ 20 分）假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华。你班同学参加了学校的“地球日”系列活动。请按照以下四幅图的先后顺序，以“Actions for a Greener Earth”为题，给校刊“英语角”写一篇英文稿件，介绍活动的全过程。注意：词数不少于60。提示词：地球日Earth Day【答案】Actions for a Greener Earth A week before Earth Day, posters were put up around our

15、school, calling upon us to join in the actions for a greener earth. Our class came up with the idea to make better use of used materials. We brought to our classroom worn-out clothes, pieces of cardboard and empty plastic bottles and turned those into dolls, handbags, tissue boxes and small vases. T

16、hat weekend, we went to a nearby neighborhood and gave them away to the people there. All were very happy with those unexpected gifts, especially little kids and elderly people. We did so well that we were invited to share our idea and experience with all the students of our school. We are very prou

17、d of ourselves and believe we can do more for a better world.亮点说明：范文使用了非谓语动词calling upon us to join in the actions和so.that句型与宾语从句we can do more for a better world等，句式多样；还使用了固定词组call sb to do sth, join in, come up with. Make use of, turn.into, give away, be proud of等，使作文内容变得丰富。考点：情景作文【名师点睛】话题比较常规，整体难

18、度适中。“地球日”系列活动属于保护环境的体裁内容，考生并不陌生。内容主要包括：公告栏了解活动、分工制作、变废为宝的宣传活动、主题讲座等。一定要按照四幅图的顺序来写，不可打乱顺序；注意行文的连贯性，多使用一些连接词。2016普通高等学校招生全国统一考试（江苏卷）第五部分：书面表达（满分25分）81.请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。In recent years, internet voting has become increasingly popular in China. People not only cast on-line votes themselves,

19、but also urge others to vote for competitions like the “Most Beautiful Teacher” and the “ Cutest Baby”.Li Jiang, a high school student, is invited to vote in the “ Best Police Officer 冶 competition, organized by the local government to let the public have a better understanding of police officers da

20、ily work. Li Jiang visits the website and reads all the stories. He is deeply moved by their glorious deeds. He is already thinking of becoming a policeman himself in the future.Su Hua is invited by his uncle to vote for his cousin in the “ Future Singer冶 competition. He has already received three s

21、imilar invitations this week. His uncle tells him that if his cousin wins the competition, the family will win an overseas tour for free. Su Hua likes his cousin very much, but he finds other singers perform even better. To vote, or not to vote? This is a question that troubles him very much.【写作内容】1

22、. 用约30个单词写出上文概要；2. 用约120个单词阐述你对网络投票的看法，并用2 3个理由或论据支撑你的看法。【写作要求】1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3. 不必写标题。【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。【答案】Possible version one:On-line voting becomes increasingly popular, and many competitions get people involved in it. It is beneficial to some people, while it pu

23、ts others into a dilemma over whether to vote or not. In my opinion, on-line voting is an inseparable part of modern life and should be welcomed, since it is no more than a way to participate in public life. It makes no difference from ordinary voting events, in which candidates go around to seek su

24、pports. In addition, the Internet makes surveying and voting easy and convenient, regardless of time and space. Furthermore, voting on the Internet makes instant feedback possible. To be honest, voters sometimes feel annoyed, not because they hate voting, but because they are divided between emotion

25、 and fairness. Things will turn for the better if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey. Therefore, I hold a positive attitude towards on- line voting. (150 words)Possible version two:Internet voting is quite popular nowadays. Many people are somewhat puzzled at the negative si

26、de of the voting, although some are quite happy with it, zxxk and active in doing it. In my opinion, internet voting has begun to show its negative impacts on people and society. Firstly, people may feel forced when asked to do things that they dont want to. Secondly, voting of this kind does not de

27、pend on the strong points of the competitors, but rather on how many social-networking resources they have. Thirdly, the voters or even the competitors in many cases are possibly taken advantage of by the organizers for commercial purposes.In short, internet voting, to some extent, is unfair, if not

28、 immoral, and cannot be trusted. Therefore, rules should be worked out and strictly observed. Everyone in our society should help those in need, but it is more important to be sincere and earnest.(150 words)【名师点睛】本篇范文很好地完成了所有任务。文章结构合理，层次分明。第一段总结归纳短文内容提出网络投票很流行，给人们带来好处同时也有不利之处。第二段提出个人观点并给出理由，两篇范文中正反观

29、点明确，论据有力；第三段中提出合理化建议；时态和人称运用准确无误无误，全文无中国式英语思维，体现出很高的运用语言的能力。从写作技巧来看，文章中使用了较多的复合句，如定语从句. in which candidates go around to seek supports.状语从句.if we can work out some participation rules for people to obey.同时文章中串联词运用较为合理，如in my opinion、in addition、furthermore、to be honest等等。考点：考查任务型读写2016普通高等学校招生全国统一考试

30、（天津卷）第三部分： 写作第二节：书面表达（满分25分）61.假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在，他们即将回国，你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。（1） 回顾双方的交流活动（如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面）；（2） 谈谈收获或感情；（3） 表达祝愿语期望。注意：（1） 词数不少于100；（2） 可适当加入细节，是内容充实、行文连贯；（3） 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear friends,How time flies! Thank you.【答案】略【解析】这是一篇发言稿，要点都已经给出，关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。但是要点只是提纲，考生还要在此基础上增加细节，不要逐字逐句翻译，同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采。审题时注意本文时态主要是一般过去时和一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。还要用适当的连接词把句子连接起来，这样文章显得更连贯。【考点定位】考查提纲作文【名师点睛】这篇作文属于典型的提纲类作文。根据要求确定要点，适当对要点进行发挥。关键在于词汇和句式的选用，尽量使用简洁的语言。 2016普通高等学校招生