四级作文积累.docx

1、四级作文积累一）段首句1. 关于人们有不同的观点。一些人认为 There are different opinions among people as to _ .Some people suggest that _. 2. 俗话说（常言道），它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多场合仍然适用。 There is an old saying_. Its the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today. 3. 现在，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，；其次，。更为糟糕

2、的是。 Today, _, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, _ Second,_. What makes things worse is that_. 4. 现在，很普遍，许多人喜欢，因为，另外（而且）。 Nowadays，it is common to _. Many people like _ because _. Besides，_. 5. 任何事物都是有两面性，也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不利的一面。 Everything has two sides and _ is not an except

3、ion，it has both advantages and disadvantages. 6. 关于人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说），在他们看来， Peoples opinions about _ vary from person to person. Some people say that _.To them,_. 7. 人类正面临着一个严重的问题，这个问题变得越来越严重。 Man is now facing a big problem _ which is becoming more and more serious. 8. 已成为人的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈

4、的辩论。 _ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way. 9. 在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。 _ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.it has brought us a lot of benefits but has created some serious

5、 problems as well. 10. 根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出。很显然，但是为什么呢？ According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that_ while. Obviously，_，but why? （2）中间段落句1. 相反，有一些人赞成，他们相信，而且，他们认为。 On the contrary，there are some people in favor of _.At t

6、he same time，they say_.（3） 2. 但是，我认为这不是解决的好方法，比如。最糟糕的是。 But I dont think it is a very good way to solve _.For example，_.Worst of all，_.（4） 3. 对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的，（也是）非常重要的。首先，。而且，最重要的是 _is necessary and important to our countrys development and construction. First，_.Whats more, _.Most important of all

7、,_. （5）4. 有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先，我们可以。 There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can_ （6）5. 面临，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来。一方面，另一方面， Confronted with_，we should take a series of effective measures to_. For one thing，_For another，_ （7）6. 早就应该拿出行动了。比如说，另外。所有这些方法肯定会。 It is high time that something was done a

8、bout it. For example. _.In addition. _.All these measures will certainly_.（8）7. 为什么？第一个原因是；第二个原因是；第三个原因是。总的来说，的主要原因是由于 Why_? The first reason is that _.The second reason is _.The third is _.For all this, the main cause of _due to _.（9） 8. 然而，正如任何事物都有好坏两个方面一样，也有它的不利的一面，象。 However, just like everythin

9、g has both its good and bad sides, _also has its own disadvantages, such as _. （10）9. 尽管如此，我相信更有利。 Nonetheless, I believe that _is more advantageous. （11）10. 完全同意这种观点（陈述），主要理由如下： I fully agree with the statement that _ because_. （12）三）结尾句1. 至于我，在某种程度上我同意后面的观点，我认为 As far as I am concerned, I agree wi

10、th the latter opinion to some extent. I think that _.（13） 2. 总而言之，整个社会应该密切关注这个问题。只有这样，我们才能在将来。 In a word, the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of _.Only in this way can _in the future.（14） 3. 但是，和都有它们各自的优势（好处）。例如，而。然而，把这两者相比较，我更倾向于（喜欢） But _and _have their own advantages. For

11、example, _, while_. Comparing this with that, however, I prefer to_. （15）4. 就我个人而言，我相信，因此，我坚信美好的未来正等着我们。因为 Personally, I believe that_. Consequently, Im confident that a bright future is awaiting us because_（16）. 5. 随着社会的发展，。因此，迫切需要。如果每个人都愿为社会贡献自已的一份力量，这个社会将要变得越来越好。 With the development of society,

12、_.So its urgent and necessary to _.If every member is willing to contribute himself to the society, it will be better and better. （17）6. 至于我（对我来说，就我而言），我认为更合理。只有这样，我们才能 For my part, I think it reasonable to_. Only in this way can you _. （18）7. 对我来说，我认为有必要。原因如下：第一，； 第二，；最后但同样重要的是 In my opinion, I thi

13、nk it necessary to_. The reasons are as follows. First _.Second _. Last but not least,_. （19）8. 在总体上很难说是好还是坏，因为它在很大程度上取决于的形势。然而，就我个人而言，我发现。 It is difficult to say whether _is good or not in general as it depends very much on the situation of_. However, from a personal point of view find_. （20）9. 综上所

14、述，我们可以清楚地得出结论 From what has been discussed above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that_. （21）10. 如果我们不采取有效的方法，就可能控制不了这种趋势，就会出现一些意想不到的不良后果，所以，我们应该做的是 If we can not take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable result may come out unexpectedly, so what we should do

15、is_.The World Expo in 2010(2010年世博会) The World Expo in 2010 Shanghai will host the 2010 World Expo. The World Expo has a long history but it has never been held in Asia. So the 2010 World Expo is an honor for all of the Asians. ()ur governmenthas promised that it will be the best one. And Shanghai,

16、as a host city, will have more chances to develop quickly. As a student in Shanghai, I should learn English well so that I can be a volunteer in the Expo to help foreigners know more about Shanghai. How To Be A Lovely Citizen(如何成为一个可爱的上海人) Great changes have taken place in Shanghai and more and more

17、 people throughout the world are focusing their attention on Shanghai now. As a citizen of Shanghai, I feel I must spare no efforts to do my bit. First, I decide to help plant more trees to make our city more beautiful. Second, I should obey seven nos and be good at learning from others. Third, I sh

18、ould study hard so that I can do something better for my city in the future. Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Certificate Craze On Campus. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

19、1)近几年大学校园内出现“考证热” 2)产生这一现象的原因 3)你的看法 Certificate Craze On Campus 行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述近几年大学校园内的“考证热”;分析越来越多的大学生热衷考取各种证书的主要原因;阐述“我”对大学生“考证热”的看法。 高分范文 Certificate Craze On Campus In recent years, getting a certificate

20、has become a new craze among college students. 1Just randomly ask a student on campus what he or she is busy doing, 2quite possibly, you may get the answer 3that he or she is preparing for a certificate 2of some kind. 4Why does this craze appear? 4There are mainly two reasons behind this phenomenon.

21、 First, 5it is the employment pressure that forces college students to get more certificates. With the admission expansion of colleges, a lot more graduates have to face the fierce competition in the job market. How can one make himself more competitive? More certificates at hand, maybe. Second, dip

22、loma and certificates are still important standards 6by which many employers measure a persons ability. In order to increase the qualifications for a job, the students compel themselves to run from one exam to another. 7From my point of view, we should be more rational 8when it comes to certificates

23、, 9since certificates 2do not necessarily prove ones ability. Being crazy in getting certifications blindly is 10nothing but wasting time. To conclude, we should focus on improving our ability 10but not getting a certificate of no practical value. 【亮点点评】 1祈使句使用恰当。randomly意为“随意地，随机地”。 2限定词使用恰当，使文章表达更

24、严谨，增强了说服力。 3that引导同位语从句，修饰the idea。 4设问句引出原因，容易引起注意。 5强调句型，此处是强调主语。 6which引导非限制性定语从句，充当介词宾语。 7用于引出“我”的观点。 8“当谈到或提及时”。 9since引导原因状语从句，表示既定的原因，常译为“既然”。 10“只是，仅仅”。“而不是”。 佳句临摩 1.佳句：You may get the answer that he or she is preparing for a certificate of some kind. 临摩：离婚率上升尽管令人难过，但却是不争的事实。 2.佳句：Diploma an

25、d certificates are still important standards by which many employers measure a persons ability. 临摩： 在过去的三十年，发展中国家在许多方面都取得了很大的进步，其中包括健康水平的提高。3.佳句：From my point of view, we should be more rational when it comes to certificates. 临摩：我认为，对于我们来说，更重要的是尽可能提高自己的能力而不是获得更多的证书。 Directions: For this part, you ar

26、e allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Students Pursuit for Famous Brands. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)现在很多大学生都喜欢追求名牌 2)产生这种现象的原因是什么 3)你如何看待这一现象 Students Pursuit for Famous Brands 行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出

27、一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生这种现象的原因，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”对该现象的看法，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述目前热衷于大学生追求名牌的现象;分析大学生热衷名牌的原因;阐述“我”对大学生追求名牌的看法并提出建议。 高分范文 Students Pursuit for Famous Brands Nowadays many college students like to pursue famous brands. From clothes to mobile phones, even study articles like electronic

28、 dictionaries and pens, they 1are inclined to buy famous brands. 2Moreover, many students from poor families begin to 3follow this consumption trend as well. This phenomenon has aroused wide attention. 4The following reasons can account for college students preference for famous brands. 2Above all,

29、in many college students eyes, a famous brand is a symbol of sophistication and taste. They expect others to admire their high class and good taste. 2Whats more, in modern society, famous brands to some extent are equal to fashion, 5which has a great attraction to young college students. 2Besides, p

30、arents spoiling their children helps form their bad consumption habit. 2As far as I am concerned, 6it is irrational for college students to pursue famous brands. 3After all, most of famous brands are 7far beyond their consumption ability. 3Besides, 8it is not famous brands but a persons noble character that really makes him high class. 3Therefore, college students should attach more importance to cultivating a good character 9rather than pursuing famous brands. 【亮点点评