英语四级作文范文.docx

1、英语四级作文范文英语四级作文范文 写作的重要性 6分最低限，只要结构不出错，得分应该为9分。评判作文四级考试作文主要看内容、结构、语言三个方面。内容不跑题即可，注意：1.不要妄图以情动人；2.不要妄图在构思上出奇制胜。结构上牢记总分总：先写主题句(Topic Sentence)，再写分论点，最后写总结句(Conclusion)。语言最重要，往往使评分产生重大差异，语言要模仿和包装。基本表达人们认为：it is generally/ widely believed/ held/ agreed that越来越：be increasingly + adj., be on the rise, the

2、growing number of万能理由（Omnipotence）1. 方便：convenient/ convenience2. 效率：efficient/ efficiently/ efficiency3. 节省和浪费：save time/ money/ space; economical, thrift waste time/ money/ space; costly, lavish4. 人的心理健康：independent, cooperative, competitive, considerate, confident, creative, sociable, perseveranc

3、e; selfish, isolated, conserative5. 人的身体健康：health, disease, strong, strength, energetic6. 娱乐：colorful, pleasure,joy, recreation, entertainmentm, relax tired, boring, lonely7. 环境：environment, pollute, poisonous, dirty8. 安全和危险：safe, danger, risk9. 经验：experience, social experience, enter the society10.

4、 人际：humane, fair, unfair, help, assist, freedom, freely写完之后修改注意：（内容方面尽量不要修改）1、字母大小写 2、怪符号 3、单词拼写 4、主谓一致 5、动词时态 6、名词单复数实例一题目：BicyclesAn Important Means of Transport in China提纲：（1）为什么自行车在中国这样普及（2）和汽车的比较（3）自行车在中国的前途Score: 8 Bicycle is an important means of transport in China. The important reason of it

5、 is the economy of Chinese. The use of bicycle in China is widely because people in China have not high wage. They can only afford a bicycle, and they have no money to buy a car which is too expensive. So Chinese usually buy a bicycle, and use it to go to work, or go to travel and so on. The other r

6、eason is the large population of China. All these made the bicycle become the important means of transport. The bicycle, compared to the car, is not too expensive and it is easy to learn and to use and it can save the surface of putting it. It doesnt ask to build the garage like car. This point is v

7、ery important to China, because of the lack of land. It isnt too expensive, so Chinese can afford it. It doesnt need any oil, and it cant cause the polusion. All of these are the good needs compared to the car. In the future, bicycle will be widely used. And it will be in good demand. People will pr

8、oduce much more modern bicycles.Score: 14Bicycles are very popular in China. Almost every family in the city has two or three bicycles. During the rush hour, you can see that thousands of people - man and woman, old and young - ride their bicycles to work and study. That is why China is called “the

9、kingdom of bicycles”.注：1. 第一句总写，第二句和第三句分写，最后总写。 2. During the rush hour 分词结构开头。 3. 破折号内容为同位语,句式多变化。Compared with cars, bicycles are superior in many ways. First, they are cheap, convenient and easy to ride. Second, riding bicycle is good for health. Third, they bring no noise nor air pollution. Thou

10、gh cars are faster and more comfortable, they are too expensive. They consume plenty of oil and they pollute the air. Sometimes, it is difficult for a driver to park his car. Moreover they often cause traffic jams and accidents.注：1. Compared with cars 分词结构开头。 2. be superior to/ be inferior to 优于/ 低于

11、 3. thirst, second, third 英语语言有层次感，信号词 4. cheap 便宜，最好用inexpensive 5. be good for health 对健康有好处（万能理由） 6. Moreover 表示递进In my opinion, the future of bicycle is very promising. Since China is a developing country and has a large population, I think, riding bicycle is appropriate to Chinese present condi

12、tions. It will be an important means of transportation for quite a long time.注：promising 有前途的 a promising young manScore: 11 There millions of bicycles in todays China. Bicycles are very important means of transport in peoples daily lives. Because to ride a bicycle is very simple, to buy a bicycle w

13、ill not cost so much money, to park a bicycle needs just a small room and to ride a bicycle does not need oil but the riders strength, bicycles are popular all over the world, especially in China.注：第一句应该用there be结构Compared with a car, a bicycle is much cheaper. It is more suitable for China as a dev

14、eloping country. And a bicycle has almost caused no pollution but a car has. On the contrary, a bicycle is too slow, it costs more times than a car.I think the population of Chinas bicycle will be kept for the long run. Because it will be replaced by a car, a bus and so on in some developed areas in

15、 China, and it will be made a wide use in the developing areas in China, the number of bicycles in China will be the same as today but I believe that its quality will be improved.I、对比观点选择题：1.有人认为； 2.另外一些人认为； 3.谈谈你的观点和看法。（最好写成4段）实例二 99年6月真题Reading Selectively Or Extensively?Outline: 1. 有人认为读书要有选择2. 有

16、人认为应当博览群书 3. 我的想法How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the bo

17、oks. Whats more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldnt read them. Since we cant read all the books and we shouldnt read bad books, we must read selectively.But others may not agree, they emphasize that todays society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of

18、 knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fields, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.Whos right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively

19、first. We should read books in many fields, and read selectively in one field.典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构：（启）Paragraph I：（1）引出将要评论的事物或者是观点； （2）简明扼要的提出人们在这个问题上的两种不同看法。Score: 14分How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.（启）注：第一句提出问题，第二句提出两种见解典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构：（承）Pa

20、ragraph II：（1）提出一种观点或优点；（2）本段的支持性分论点；（3）本段总结（可以省略）。Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. Whats more, there are many bad books that are pois

21、onous to our mind, and we shouldnt read them. Since we cant read all the books and we shouldnt read bad books, we must read selectively.（承）注：1. 本段总分总结构 2. they argue that = they think that 3. with the development of. 随着的发展 4. whats more 递进关系，moreover 5. bad = pornographic 色情的 & violent 暴力的典型的对比观点选择题

22、的文章逻辑结构：（转）Paragraph III：（1）承上启下的过渡句； （2）提出另一种观点或缺点；（3）本段的支持性分论点（4）本段总（可以省略）。But others may not agree, they emphasize that todays society is not what it was. If one man has many kinds of knowledge, he will have more chances to succeed. If a man knows much in one field but knows nothing in other fiel

23、ds, he may be useless. Since we must have many kinds of knowledge, we must read extensively.（转）注：1. But 转折词（信号词） 2. they emphasize that = they think that 3. todays society is not what it was 现代社会今昔非比 4. 许多知识 a wide range of knowledge/ a large scope of knowledge/ much knowledge； 获取知识 acquire/ get kno

24、wledge 5. knows nothinglittle；he may be uselesshe may not be of great use to the society 后者比前者更委婉典型的对比观点选择题的文章逻辑结构：（合）Paragraph IV：（1）平衡两种看法；（2）给出自己的观点。Whos right? I think both of them have something right. But I think we should read extensively first. We should read books in many fields, and read s

25、electively in one field.（合）Score: 11分When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better.注：结构非常好，可以套用。Those people, who think that reading selectively is better, believe that g

26、ood books are as many as bad books. Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge, while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way. So, they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books.注：1.“people, who.,”应去掉逗号，改为限制性定语从句。 2. as many as bad boo

27、ks 改为 as many as bad ones 3. lead us to the wrong way 改为 lead sb. astray 4. they suggest that = they think that 5. touch 碰（闪光点词汇：如教材P7：shouldering the responsibility of doing sth. 肩负起责任）But, the other people, who hold that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us

28、one aspect of knowledge. Even the best book only contains one field of information. So, they can easily come to the conclusion that “to know more, to read more”. So they believe that reading extensively is better.注：1. hold 认为 同样表示“think”的词还有argue, emphasize, believe, suggest, claim, insist, maintain

29、, agree, hold 2. the best book 在西方国家是“圣经”的意思 3. to know more, to read more 错误，中式英语To my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible. By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading. 范文22. Is Television a Blessing or a Curse?Now, it is generally

30、 accepted that television plays an important part in peoples lives. But, there is an ongoing heated discussion as to whether television is a blessing or a curse. 注：it is generally accepted that 人们通常认为As is often pointed out by some people, television keeps one better informed about current events, a

31、llows one to follow the latest developments in politics and science, and offers an endless series of programs which are both instructive and stimulating. The most distant countries, the strangest customs and the most attractive scenes of nature are brought right into ones room.注：1. As is often pointed out by some people = Some people think that 2. “使”不用make，而用keep, allow, offerHowever, other people insist that television is a curse rather than a bl