高中英语作文专题训练.docx

1、高中英语作文专题训练写作专题训练一、英文写作“四步走”由于时间限制，高考时一般在15分钟左右必须完成英语作文。高考的英语作文步骤如下：1）作文动笔之前一般都要先打腹稿。在确立中心上，运用材料上，篇章结构上，充分酝酿。2）考虑好想写多少句子，该用哪些动词和词组等。3）边写边思考内容的连贯性，语言和句子的准确性。4）写完后一定要再细看一遍。二、作文句式的多变性恰当使用复杂句型（一）改变时态例: The bell is ringing now.(一般) There goes the bell! (高级)（二）改变语态例: People suggest that the conference be p

2、ut off.(一般) It is suggested that the conference be put off. (高级)（三）使用不定式例: He is so kind that he can help me.(一般) He is so kind as to help me.(高级)（四）使用过去分词例: She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(一般)Followed by many students, she walked out of the lab.(高级)Once it is seen, it can

3、never be forgotten.(一般)Once seen, it can never be forgotten.(高级)（五）使用V-ing形式例: When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.(一般) On arriving/his arrival, please give me an e-mail.(高级) If the weather permits, Ill come tomorrow.(一般) Ill come tomorrow, weather permitting.(高级) You work hard. You will succe

4、ed.（一般） Working hard, you will succeed.（高级）（六）使用名词性从句例: It disappointed everybody that he didnt turn up.(一般)The fact that he didnt turn up disappointed everybody.(高级)I happened to have met him.(一般)It happened that I had met him.(高级)To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.(一般)What surpr

5、ises him is that the little girl knows so many things.(高级)（七）使用定语从句例:The girl is spoken highly of. Her composition was well written. (一般)The girl whose composition was well written is spoken highly of. (高级)（八）使用状语从句 例: I wont believe what he says.(一般)No matter what he says, I wont believe. (高级)If yo

6、u come back before six oclock, you can go out.(一般)You can go out on condition that (provided that) you come back beforeSix oclock. (高级)If she doesnt agree, what shall we do?(一般) Supposing that she doesnt agree, what shall we do?(高级)（九）使用虚拟语气（1）虚拟语气中if如果我是你，我昨天就不会开这么快的车（十）倒装句（1）only+状语置于句首只有通过这种方法，你才

7、能学好英语（2）否定词置于句首 我从来没有看过这么精彩的电影（3）地点副词置于句首（十一）强调句型 It is that (who)是杨梅所做的事情给了我莫大的鼓励三、巧妙的改写（1）Only 改成no one but Only Tom passed the exam last week. No one but Tom passed the exam.（2）have sb/sth do/done The girl was knocked off her bicycle and had her leg broken The girl was knocked off her bicycle and

8、 her leg was broken.（3）变换插入语的位置 However, they suggest fees should be charged low. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low. I think this is a good chance for you to show your singing talent, and how well youve learned Chinese. This is a good chance for you, I think, to show your singing tal

9、ent, and how well youve learned Chinese. (4). 用同位语代替非限制性定语从句 Meimei, who is seven years old, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several days.Meimei, a girl of thirteen, has been learning to ride a bicycle for several days. 四、英语作文中常见的典型语法错误语言是评判作文的一个极其重要的因素。在实际的阅卷过程中，语法错误，尤其是较为严重的错误，是阅卷人员的主要“照顾点

10、”，有时甚至是惟一的点;当然那样处理是有道理的，大家可以设想一下，一篇语法上漏洞百出、严重影响表达的作文又会有什么样的好内容呢?语言是评判作文的一个极其重要的因素。在实际的阅卷过程中，语法错误，尤其是较为严重的错误，是阅卷人员的主要“照顾点”，有时甚至是惟一的点;当然那样处理是有道理的，大家可以设想一下，一篇语法上漏洞百出、严重影响表达的作文又会有什么样的好内容呢?如果因为语言上的错误而导致失分，那将得不偿失。因此，认清各种各样的语法错误，尽可能地避免少犯，对于提高作文分是有极大的帮助的。现将我们在阅卷过程中所发现的大量语言错误逐一归类，抽出其中的典型错误，以警示大家，供参考。 1.句子成分残

11、缺不全We always working till late at night before taking exams。(误)We are always working /We always work till late at night before taking exams(正)We should read books may be useful to us. (误)We should read books which may be useful to us. (正)2.句子成分多余This test is end, but there is another test is waiting

12、 for you. (误)One test ends, but another is waiting for you. (正)The driver of the red car was died on the spot. (误)The driver of the red car died on the spot. (正)3.主谓不一致My sister go to the cinema at least once a week. (误)My sister goes to the cinema at least once a week. (正)4.动词时态、语态的误用I was walking

13、along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. (误)I was walking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street. (正)We have little time to read some books which we interest. (误)We have little time to read some books in which we are interested. (正)I am a student who ha

14、s studying in the college for two years. (误)I have been studying in the college for two years(正)5.词类混淆It is my point that reading must be selectively. (误)In my opinion, reading must be selective. (正)Honest is so important for everyperson. (误)Honesty is so important for everyone. (正)The old man was h

15、it by a car when he across the street. (误)The old man was hit by a car when he was crossing the street. (正)误：It hit the old man down but the driver, a woman, didnt stop her car. Finding she had caused an accident, the woman sped her car to flee away. The old man and I saw the cars number. Its AC864.

16、 The old man couldnt move ,I decided to help him.正：It hit the old man down but the driver, who was a woman, didnt stop her car. Finding she had caused an accident, the woman sped her car to flee away. Fortunately, I saw the cars number. Its AC864. Noticing the old mancouldnt move, I decided to help

17、him.6.画蛇添足 、过多的长句使句子复杂化（语言不简洁）修改前：A famous sportsman was giving a speech which was rather interesting.修改后：A famous sportsman was giving an interesting speech.修改前: Nowadays, some people are still cutting down trees without permission. The air pollution is becoming more and more serious which is cause

18、d by buses and cars. Whats more, so many rivers are polluted by dirty water which is from factory. In addition, sandstorm struck us now and then, from which we suffered a lot.修改后: Nowadays, some people are still cutting down trees without permission. As a result, people have to suffer sandstorms now

19、 and then. Whats more, as buses and cars give off a lot of poisonous gases, the air is getting dirtier and dirtier. Moreover, there are many rivers polluted by dirty water from factories. The situation is becoming more and more serious.修改前： As soon as came in, we heard some voice made by instruments

20、. There were some students playing piano violin and so on .修改后： As soon as we came in, we heard a piece of beautiful music played by the students by different instruments, such as, piano, violin and so on.7.过于简单的句子使文章缺少逻辑性、可读性。修改前： Yesterday, there was a policeman in the street. He stopped a car. Th

21、e car was at the corner. It looked like a Honda. There was a boy on the sidewalk. He was riding his bicycle. The bicycle was a two-wheeler. The car nearly knocked down the boy.修改后： Yesterday, a policeman stopped a carHonda at the corner of the street, because it nearly knocked down a boy who was rid

22、ing a two-wheel bicycle on the sidewalk.修改前： Suddenly, a car run quickly from the third street and turned to the west. The car didnt stop and hit the old man. The driver didnt stop and have a look. The car ran away quickly. The car was yellow and the driver was a woman.修改后： Suddenly, a car turned we

23、st from the 3rd Street to the Park Road. It hit the old man, but it didnt stop and ran away quickly. I noticed the car was yellow and the driver was a woman.五、作文常用句式（一）段首句 1关于人们有不同的观点。一些人认为There are different opinions among people as to _ .Some people suggest that _.2俗话说（常言道），它是我们前辈的经历，但是，即使在今天，它在许多

24、场合仍然适用。 There is an old saying_. Its the experience of our forefathers，however，it is correct in many cases even today. 3现在，它们给我们的日常生活带来了许多危害。首先，；其次，。更为糟糕的是。Today, _, which have brought a lot of harms in our daily life. First, _Second, _. What makes things worse is that_.4任何事物都是有两面性，也不例外。它既有有利的一面，也有不

25、利的一面。Everything has two sides and _ is not an exception，it has both advantages and disadvantages. 5关于人们的观点各不相同，一些人认为（说），在他们看来， Peoples opinions about _ vary from person to person. Some people say that _.To them, _. 6人类正面临着一个严重的问题，这个问题变得越来越严重。Man is now facing a big problem _ which is becoming more a

26、nd more serious. 7已成为人们的关注的热门话题，特别是在年青人当中，将引发激烈的辩论。_ has become a hot topic among people，especially among the young and heated debates are right on their way. 8在我们的日常生活中起着越来越重要的作用，它给我们带来了许多好处，但同时也引发一些严重的问题。 _ has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. It has brought us a

27、 lot of benefits but has created some serious problems as well.9根据图表/数字/统计数字/表格中的百分比/图表/条形图/成形图可以看出。很显然，但是为什么呢？ According to the figure/number/statistics/percentages in the /chart/bar graph/line/graph，it can be seen that_ while. Obviously，_，but why? 10. As far as .is concerned11. It goes without say

28、ing that.12. It can be said with certainty that.13. As the proverb says， 14. Its generally recognized that. 15. Its likely that .16. What calls for special attention is that.需要特别注意的是 17. Theres no denying the fact that.毫无疑问，无可否认 18. Nothing is more important than the fact that. 19. whats far more im

29、portant is that.（二）中间段落句 1. 相反，有一些人赞成，他们相信，而且，他们认为。 On the contrary，there are some people in favor of _.At the same time，they say_.2. 但是，我认为这不是解决的好方法，比如。最糟糕的是。But I dont think it is a very good way to solve _.For example，_.Worst of all，_.3.对我们国家的发展和建设是必不可少的，（也是）非常重要的。首先，。而且，最重要的是 _is necessary and i

30、mportant to our countrys development and construction. First，_.Whats more, _.Most important of all,_.4. 有几个可供我们采纳的方法。首先，我们可以。 There are several measures for us to adopt. First, we can_5. 面临，我们应该采取一系列行之有效的方法来。一方面，另一方面，Confronted with_，we should take a series of effective measures to_. For one thing，_For another，_6. 早就应该拿出行动了。比如说，另外。所有这些方法肯定会。 It is high time that something was done about it. For example, _.In addition, _. All these measures will certainly_.7. 为什么？第一个原因是；第二个原因是；第三个原因是。总的来说，的主要原因是由于 Why_? The first reason is that _.The second reason is _.The third is _.For a