书面表达综合测试含答案.docx

1、书面表达综合测试含答案书面表达综合测试（含答案）一、中考英语书面表达汇编1（江苏中考模拟）书面表达假定你是李华，最近你们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论，你的英国朋友Peppa向你来信询问讨论情况。请你用英语写封回信，简单介绍以下讨论结果：1节水节电 2垃圾分类 3少用纸巾，重拾手帕4步行、骑自行车或公交出行、参考词汇：low carbon低碳；tissue纸巾词数：100词左右。开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Peppa,Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle

2、. Here is something about it_Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Peppa,Thank you for your last letter asking about our discussion on low-carbon lifestyle. Here is something about itWe can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of low carbon life. First, wed better turn off lights if possible an

3、d spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more tre

4、es from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.Best wishes,Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，向我的英国朋友Peppa写信，介绍我们班就低碳生活方式进行的讨论情况。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构，注意一些常

5、见句式的应用，比如：We can do，wed better，we suggest，which contributes to等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头我要介绍我们班就低碳生活方式进行了讨论，接下来介绍我们为低碳生活可以做的事。此处ask about, turn off, sort out, in addition, instead of, contribute to等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。2（山西农业大学附属学校中考模拟）书面表达社会需要爱，时代呼唤爱。对善行、对爱心的感动，存在于每个

6、人的心中。但很多人缺乏的不是感动，而是一种显示感动的勇气。请为你身边的人或事点赞，让“点赞”成为传递正能量的一种行动吧！是什么行为让你点赞？讲述一件你点赞的事情。你从他/她身上可以学到什么？让我们一起分享吧！请根据以下提示要点，写一篇文章。注意：1词数：80左右；2不要出现真实的人名及校名。Make a list of the persons that you should give a “like” buttonTell us one of the experiences that you clicked a “like” buttonWhat could you learn from hi

7、m/her? 【答案】I should give my uncle a “like” button. He is very tall and very strong. He punishes the bad people and protect the good people. He always helps others. He is my hero. He works hard.When I grow up, I want to be a policeman like my uncle. I want to help people and protect them, so they can

8、 live a safe life.【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，讲述一件我点赞的事情，我从他/她身上可以学到什么。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I should，He is，He always helps，I want to，so they can等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我要点赞的人，接下来介绍他的情况，最后指出我从他身上学到的东西。此处give sb sth, work

9、 hard, grow up, want to do sth, live a life等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。3（天津中考模拟）你马上就要初中毕业了，恩师难忘，请你根据下面的提示，向大家介绍你的一位老师（Ms Wang）。（1） Ms Wang的基本情况：学科、年龄、外貌；（以上内容自拟）（2） 老师的特点：严格，与学生相处融洽，和善，耐心，有创造性；（3） 你对老师的评价。参考词汇：对某人严格的 be strict with sb. 创造性的 be creative要求：（1） 词数：80100个。（2） 开头已给出，不计入总词数。（3） 要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。Ill g

10、raduate from my middle school. Ive met many good teachers since I came to this school. Here Im going to share my _ teacher, Ms Wang with you.【答案】Ill graduate from my middle school. Ive met many good teachers since I came to this school. Here Im going to share my favorite and unforgettable teacher Ms

11、. Wang with you. She is our English teacher about 30 years old. She is of medium height with long straight hair. She is strict with us in our study, but she can get on well with us after class. She often tells jokes in her classs.She often helps poor students with their homework in her free time and

12、 she is always patient and creative. In my opinion, Ms Wang is the best teacher who I have met. And I will want to be a teacher like her in the future.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达要求考生介绍自己最喜欢的老师。【详解】这篇写作考查考生对人物的描写。对人物的描写主要从基本信息、外貌、性格特征以及对其评价四个方面入手。考生结合着四个方面及所给信息，要做到信息全面，行文连贯。写作时应注意英语句式结构和汉语是不同的，不能按照汉语思维逐词翻译，应从句子的整

13、体结构考虑，写完整的句子，并注意使用适当的句型去表达，变化单词的正确形式。为提升文章档次，在文章中应穿插几个并列句或复合句的结构。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯4（天津中考模拟）近日中央电视台报道了一个十四岁小男孩何思汗的事迹，介绍了他卖画筹款医治姑姑的感人故事。请你根据以下内容提示，写一篇短文。（1）何思汗从小和姑姑生活在一起，他自幼对绘画有很大兴趣。（2）年姑姑患上重病，何思汗的家境日渐贫寒。（3）他作画筹款给姑姑治病。（4）思汗勇于面对困难、主动承担家务且刻苦学习。（5）你的想法参考词汇：严重的serious 疾病disease要求：（1）词数：80100个。（2）短文的

14、题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。The Moving Story of He SihanRecently, the moving story of He Sihan has been reported on CCTV. The 14-year-old boy is a student in Grade 9. He_【答案】Recently, the moving story of He Sihan has been reported on CCTV. The 14-year-old boy is a student in Grade 9. He has l

15、ived with his aunt since he was only one year old. When he was a little boy, he showed great interest in painting. At that time, they led a happy life. Unfortunately, his aunt got a serious disease in . Their family became poorer and poorer after that. So he decided to do something for his aunt. By

16、selling the pictures he painted, he raised money for his aunt to treat her disease. You cant imagine what difficulties he faces, he never gives up. In addition, he offers to do all the housework. Whats more, though he is busy, he studies hard and gets good grades.I feel proud of him. Because he neve

17、r gives up and tries his best to pay back his aunt, no matter how hard the life is.【解析】【详解】本文属于材料作文，介绍何思汗的感人事迹。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如show great interest in, at that time, unfortunately, 比较级and比较级, raise money, give up,

18、in addition, offer to do, whats more, get good grades, feel proud of, pay back以及try ones best等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在

19、写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。5（河南中考模拟）书面表达。同学们，从小到大，会有很多不同的人物伴随着你成长，他们可能是你的家人、老师、朋友、同学甚至是路人。他们或许对你产生了重要影响，进而给你留下深刻印象。请以 “A person who impressed me a lot” 为题写一篇英语作文，描述一位给你留

20、下深刻印象的人物。要求：1. 结构清晰，内容完整，语言流利。2. 文中不得出现真实的学校，姓名等个人信息。3. 80词左右。A person who impressed me a lot 【答案】There were so many people in our memory. Some went lost while some impressed us deeply. Now, I want to introduce the one who impressed me a lot.Five years ago, I was a primary school student. My family

21、had to move to another city because of my fathers work. I was sent to a new and strange school. I was not an outgoing girl, so it was not easy for me to make new friends. When I felt lonely and sad, a little girl in a red dress came to me. She asked me if I needed any help in a soft and beautiful vo

22、ice. I was surprised but happy. We became good friends and our friendship has lasted till now. The time I spent with her was the best hours in my life. I believe she will be my friend throughout my life.【解析】【详解】本文属于话题作文，描述一位给你留下深刻印象的人物。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定

23、的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如because of，be sent to, it is adj for sb to do sth, make friends, in a red dress, last, till now以及spend with等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。【点睛】写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生

24、自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文中心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。6（北京中考模拟） 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Jack 给你写邮件表达了想参加你校暑期为外国学生举办的汉语夏令营的愿望，希望你告知活动举办的具体时间地点，活动安排以及你的建议。

25、提示词语： Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示问题： When and where will the Chinese Summer Camp be held? What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp? What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in ourschool this

26、 summer holiday . .Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in our school this summer holiday.The Chinese Summer Camp will be held in our school from July 10th to July 30th this summer. The activities of this Chinese Summer Camp are as follo

27、ws:First, you will attend Chinese classes, learning the meaning of Chinese characters. Second, you will take part in different parties, knowing the history of China and Chinese culture, especially Chinese holidays, which will impress you deeply.Whats more, you will have chances to visit some museums

28、 and the Great Wall. What you should prepare is a pair of shoes for the visit. If you have any questions, please tell me. I am looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇提纲类书面表达，只给了一些要点提示，但都不很明确。学生除了要把所给要点提示都表达出来外，还要进行适当拓展，使文章内容充实。2.例文点评：该题要求写作体裁为书信格式，所以例文用第一人称I进行写作，在文章结尾也按

29、照标准书信格式进行了收尾。文章时态用一般现在时和一般将来时。文章条理分明，三个要点提示都已表达清楚，并进行了适当拓展，所给单词也都全部用上。3.高分亮点：短语：as follows，take part in，Whats more，look forward to。句型：被动句型，现在分词作状语，主语从句。7（无锡市江南中学中考模拟）书面表达亲子关系是目前广受关注的话题。假设你是张华，你正在以“如何与父母更好地相处” 为题进行英语自主课程研究。通过搜集资料，你查找到中国青少年研究中心（CYCRC）近日就中美两国亲子关系进行了问卷调查，结果如下表。请你根据下表选取并整合你认为有用的信息，结合你的实际

30、经历以How to get along well with parents为题写一篇感想。ChinaUSKids often talk to their parents48.1%89%Kids think their parents understand them61%81.4%Kids have different ideas from their parents82.1%76%Kids have different ideas from their parents mostly because ofSchoolwork （65.4%）Pocket money （20%）注意事项：1.内容须

31、根据表格数据和实际经历合理展开；2.要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情境；3.词数在90个左右，首尾已经在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；4. 内容必须写在答题卡指定的位置。【答案】How to get along well with parentsMore and more people begin to focus on the parent-child relationship. Heres my understanding of how to get along well with our parents.CYCRC did a survey in the United States and China. The results showed that 48.1% of Chinese