1、分类突破一 书信及电子邮件专题五写作第一节应用文写作卷别语用目的语用对象文体形式提示类型2020模拟卷介绍中国的春节英国朋友John介绍类书信提纲式半开放2019全国卷申请做中国画展览的志愿者当地美术馆负责人申请信提纲式半开放2019全国卷告知队友Chris球队近期将参加比赛队友Chris告知信提纲式半开放2019全国卷邀请英国朋友Allen参加学校音乐节英国朋友Allen邀请信提纲式半开放2018全国卷Terry向李华询问中国做客习俗新西兰朋友Terry介绍类书信提纲式半开放2018全国卷写一则观影通知校宣传栏“英语天地”书面通知提纲式半开放2018全国卷英国朋友Peter询问学生体育运动情
2、况英国朋友Peter介绍类书信提纲式半开放2017全国卷通知英国朋友Leslie下次上课的计划英国朋友Leslie告知信提纲式半开放2017全国卷邀请外教Henry参观剪纸艺术展外教Henry邀请信提纲式半开放2017全国卷邀请留学生朋友Eric加入校乒乓球队留学生朋友Eric邀请信提纲式半开放1.语用目的讲好中国故事,增强文化自信高考书面表达的情境设置真实,任务要求符合考生能力水平,又自然融入了我国优秀传统文化的内容,能够引导考生在使用外语了解世界的同时,注重传承和发扬中华民族优秀文明成果,运用中国元素讲好中国故事,增强文化自信。2.文体形式以应用文为主,主要考查书信/电子邮件从近几年高考全
3、国卷来看,书面表达主要考查应用文,其中以电子邮件为主,邀请信、告知信、介绍类书信考查较多,只有2018年全国卷考查了书面通知。电子邮件是生活中最常用的应用文体,近几年来,当仁不让的成为了命题专家的最爱,而这也符合了高考“重考查深度更重考查广度”、“贴近生活”的趋势特点。3.提示类型以提纲作文为主,试题的开放性越来越强近几年高考书面表达主要以提纲作文为主,但提示越来越简洁,试题的开放性逐渐增强。(半)开放性体现在试题既为考生提供了恰当的提示,又留有供其自由发挥的空间,既让低水平的考生有话可写,又让高水平考生有展现自己语言表达能力的机会,保证试卷的区分度。A(2020模拟卷)假定你是李华,你的英国
4、朋友John来信询问中国人过春节的风俗习惯。请你结合自己家乡的实际情况给他回信,内容包括:1.春节的简介;2.过节的风俗习惯;3.邀请他来中国过春节。注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.信的开头已为你写好。Dear John,Im glad that youre interested in the Chinese Spring Festival.Yours,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear_John,Im_glad_that_youre_interested_in_the_Chinese_Spring_Festival.Spring Festival is the
5、most ceremonious traditional festival of the Chinese nation.It is a happy and peaceful festival for family and friends to get together and a bond for people to deepen their feelings.In order to celebrate Spring Festival,we will stick couplets,set off firecrackers,have dinner,watch the Spring Festiva
6、l Gala,and so on.There was a jubilant atmosphere everywhere.Id like to invite you to China for the Spring Festival with us.Yours,Li_HuaB(2019年6月浙江高考)假定你是李华,经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括:1表示感谢;2回顾Alex对你的帮助;3临别祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右;2可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【写作指导】1审题立意:本篇书面表达要求考生写一封感谢信,人称使用第一人称和第二人称,时态以现在时和过
7、去时为主。2谋篇布局:书信格式、称呼和落款文中已经给出。首段,告知写信的目的;中间段回顾Alex对你的帮助;最后一段表达祝愿。3关键词和句子:根据写作要点及构思好的提纲我们可以初步确定文章可能使用到的词汇和句子有:be going to return to your country very soon,express my gratitude for,make so great progress,arouse my interest in。通过词汇铺垫,我们就很容易地行文了,文章写完之后要检查文中是否存在拼写或语法错误。【参考范文】Dear Alex,Im sorry to hear that
8、 you are going to return to your country very soon and Im writing this email to express my gratitude for your help.First of all, thank you for helping me learn English.Without your help, I would not have made so great progress in Englishlearning.Besides, what you told me about your country broadened
9、 my horizons and aroused my interest in foreign culture.I wish you all the best in the future and have a good journey.Yours,Li HuaC(2018年11月浙江高考)假定你是李华,乘坐FL753航班抵达伦敦后发现钱包遗失。请给航空公司写一封邮件说明情况并寻求帮助。内容包括:1行程信息;2.钱包特征;3.联系方式。注意:1.词数80左右;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【写作指导】本文是一篇求助类的电子邮件。给航空公司写此邮件的目的是寻求帮助找回遗失的钱包,所以在邮件的开
10、头要进行自我介绍并直接点明原因。主要内容包括:1.行程信息;2.钱包特征;3.联系方式。写作时首先围绕主要内容确定关键词(组),然后进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。时态以一般现在时为主,一般过去时为辅。最后连句成文,注意语法结构和词汇要丰富多彩,同时要有效使用语句间的连接词,以使结构更加紧凑。【参考范文1】Dear Sir or Madam,My name is Li Hua,and I was a passenger on Flight FL753 of your airline to London from Hangzhou yesterday.Unfortunately,I fou
11、nd that my wallet got lost when I arrived at the airport of London.Therefore,I am writing to ask for your help in finding my wallet,which is yellow with my name attached to the back.It contains my ID card and two bank cards.Most importantly,its a birthday present that my father had given me.I would
12、greatly appreciate it if you could help find it.My telephone number is 33088977.Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.Regards, Li Hua【参考范文2】Dear Sir or Madam,Im Li Hua,an exchange student from China.I took FL753 to London on November 2,2018,and the moment I stepped off the plane I found my pur
13、se gone.It must have been left on the flight.It is a blue leather purse with over $1,000,my ID card and my passport in it.If you find any clue,please phone my host family at 123456789 or email me at lihua.I would greatly appreciate your timely help.Yours,Li HuaD(2018年6月浙江高考)假定你是李华,你校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国
14、外中学生。请你写信应聘,内容包括:1口语能力;2.相关经验;3.应聘目的。注意:1.词数80左右;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【写作指导】本文是一篇申请信。写信目的是应聘英语协会志愿者,所以在书信的开头要直接点明写信目的I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association,信中的主要内容包括:1.口语能力;2.相关经验;3.应聘目的。首先,根据写作要求确定关键词、短语和句子:a good command of English,communicate with,get along with
15、等。其次,根据提示和关键词(组)进行遣词造句,本文时态应以现在时为主,人称为第一人称。最后,连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【参考范文1】Dear Sir or Madam,My name is Li Hua.And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice.So I can com
16、municate well with native speakers of English.Whats more,I am kind and friendly to other people.So I can easily get along with foreign students.Im particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills.Hopefully I can
17、 receive your acceptance.Yours faithfully, Li Hua【参考范文2】Dear Sir or Madam,My name is Li Hua and I am writing to apply for the post of volunteer for our school English association.With an experience of two years in Canada,I can communicate well with native speakers of English.Therefore,I can easily g
18、et along with foreign students.I believe that I am a perfect candidate for this position.Im particularly interested in this position partly because my friend Logan is coming and Id love to see him again.I hope for an opportunity to meet with you for an interview.Yours,Li HuaE(2017年11月浙江高考)假定你是李华,得知外
19、教Mr.Hall寒假不回国,想邀请他到你家过春节。请给他写一封信,内容包括:1时间;2.一同过节的家人;3.活动。注意:1.词数80左右;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。【写作指导】本文是一篇邀请信。写信目的是邀请Mr.Hall到你家过春节,所以在书信的开头要直接点明写信目的Im writing to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Spring Festival,信中的主要内容包括:1.时间;2.一同过节的家人;3.活动。写作时考生要根据题目给出的内容提示适当增加细节,如需要扩展过春节可以做的事情等;最后要表明自己期待对方同意。
20、这样一篇结构完整的书信作文就轻松完成了。【参考范文1】Dear Mr.Hall,Im writing to invite you to come to my home to celebrate the Spring Festival on January 19.Its traditionally a time for family reunion,so my parents and my brother will all be there.Well make dumplings together and have a big dinner.Well also play card games a
21、nd watch the Spring Festival Gala on TV.You may even get a gift from my parents.If youre able to come,Ill go and pick you up at your place.We are looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【参考范文2】Dear Mr.Hall,I am writing to invite you sincerely to spend the Spring Festival with my family for Ive hea
22、rd you are not going back to your hometown.The time scheduled is at 6:30 pm.Prior to the Spring Festival,lots of activities will be wellprepared,such as making dumplings and setting off fireworks.It would be a great pleasure if you could come and have fun with us.My parents and grandparents are expe
23、cting your arrival with sincerity.If youd like to participate,please let us know at your earliest convenience.Yours sincerely, Li Hua应用文写作贴近考生的生活实际,易于表达,能充分考查考生的真实写作水平。常见的应用文有书信、电子邮件、通知、演讲稿、倡议书等。而浙江英语新高考把应用文写作作为一个特有题型固定下来,主要是对书信和电子邮件的考查。分类突破一书信及电子邮件第1讲建议信典例示范(2019邹平一中模拟)你的英国朋友Jim所在的学校要组织学生来中国旅行,有两条线
24、路可以选择:“长江之行”或者“泰山之旅”。Jim来信希望你能给些建议。请你给他回信,内容包括:1你建议的线路;2你的理由;3你的祝愿。注意:1.词数80左右;2开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Jim,Yours,Li Hua写作指导建议信的写作目的是提出建议或忠告,一定要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力,并注意要礼貌当先。一般采用“三段式”结构:首段简介自己,说明写信目的或意图主体提出具体建议并说明理由尾段希望建议得到采纳并祝愿,或盼望回复审题谋篇遣词造句精美词汇1prefer v更喜欢2recommend v. 推荐3personally adv. 就个人而言4besid
25、es/moreover adv. 此外5have_a_good_time 过得愉快出彩句式1我很高兴收到你的来信,知道了你要来中国。(不定式;and;宾语从句)Im_happy_to_receive_your_letter_and_know_youre_coming_to_China.2就个人而言,我更喜欢长江之行,长江是中国最长的河流和中华文明的一条母亲河,从中你可以了解到很多关于中国和中国人民的历史。 (同位语;“介词which”引导的非限制性定语从句)Personally,I_prefer_the_tour_along_the_Yangtze,the_longest_river_and_
26、one_of_the_mother_rivers_of_Chinese_civilization,from_which_you_can_learn_a_lot_about_the_history_of_China_and_Chinese_people.3这就是为什么我认为长江之行是更好的选择。(why引导表语从句)Thats_why_I_think_the_trip_along_the_Yangtze_will_be_a_better_choice.衔接成文Dear_Jim,Im happy to receive your letter and know youre coming to Chi
27、na.Of the two trips to the Yangtze River and Mount Tai,both are highly recommended.Personally,I prefer the tour along the Yangtze,the longest river and one of the mother rivers of Chinese civilization,from which you can learn a lot about the history of China and Chinese people.Moreover,the scenery a
28、long the river is amazing,with many wellknown sightseeing spots.Thats why I think the trip along the Yangtze River will be a better choice.Hope youll have a good time in China.Yours,Li_Hua满分佳句夺人眼球开头句1Im sorry to know that you are having trouble with.at the moment.Ill try to make some useful suggesti
29、ons here.得知此刻你遇到麻烦,我深感遗憾。在此,我尽力提出一些有用的建议。2Im very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how.非常高兴收到你的来信,在信中,关于如何你向我征求意见。亮点出彩主题句1In my opinion/Personally/As far as Im concerned,it would be wise to.在我看来,是明智的。2I think it would be more beneficial if you could.我想如果你能可能会更有利。3If I were you,I w
30、ould.如果我是你,我会4You may/might as well do.你不妨做韵味无穷结尾句1I hope you will find these suggestions helpful./I hope my suggestions will be of benefit to you.If you have any questions or requirements,please do not hesitate to tell me.我希望你认为这些建议有帮助。/我希望我的建议对你有益。如果你有任何问题或要求,请毫不犹豫地告诉我。2I believe you will take my advice into account/considerat
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