学年高三英语上学期期末题型分类冲刺06书面表达之应用文解析版.docx

1、学年高三英语上学期期末题型分类冲刺06书面表达之应用文解析版07 书面表达之读后续写Passage1（2021黑龙江哈尔滨市第六中学校高三期末）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友 Jack 听说你大学准备攻读“中医药学”专业，发邮件向你询问原由，请你回复邮件。内容包括：1.中医简介；2.家庭影响；3.个人愿望。注意：1. 词数 100 左右；2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：中医药学 Traditional Chinese Medicine(TCM)Dear Jack,Thanks for your letter! _Best wishes! Yours,Li Hua【答案】One pos

2、sible version:Dear Jack,Thanks for your letter! Im very glad to share with you my idea about furthering my study in Traditional Chinese Medicine at university in reply to your email.With a history of over 2000 years, TCM has formed a unique system to diagnose and cure illness, from which generations

3、 and generations of Chinese people benefit. I feel really proud whenever I see patients of my father and grandfather leave their clinic with satisfaction and hope. So Ive made up my mind to succeed their career and major in TCM to become a doctor. I believe itll turn out an excellent cause for me to

4、 pursue.Best wishes.YoursLi Hua【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求考生写一封信向美国朋友 Jack解释自己大学选择中医药学的原因。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时结构：总分总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1.回信的目的2.选择学习中医药学的原因1）中医简介（中医的历史，中医对国人的或世界的影响）2）家庭影响（祖辈行医，耳濡目染）3）个人愿望（成为出色的中医）第二步：列提纲（重点词组）thanks for; in reply to ；be glad to do ；diagnose ；

5、 cure illness ； with satisfaction ； made up ones mind to do；major in ；turn out第三步：连词成句1.Im very glad to share with you my idea about furthering my study in Traditional Chinese Medicine at university in reply to your email.2.With a history of over 2000 years, TCM has formed a unique system to diagnos

6、e and cure illness, from which generations and generations of Chinese people benefit.3.I feel really proud whenever I see patients of my father and grandfather leave their clinic with satisfaction and hope. 4.So Ive made up my mind to succeed their career and major in TCM to become a doctor.5. I bel

7、ieve itll turn out an excellent cause for me to pursue.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（加入衔接词和从句）(供参考)1. 表并列补充关系：whats more,；besides; in addition; as well as；last but not the least2. 表转折对比关系：however/ on the contrary/ but/ although/ in spite of/ despite/ on the one hand, one the other hand/ as

8、for3. 表文章结构顺序：first of all/ firstly/ second/ and then/ finally/ in the end/ at last4. 表因果关系：because/ so/ as/ thus/ therefore/ as a result连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】高分句型1 With a history of over 2000 years, TCM has formed a unique system to diagnose and cure illness, from which generatio

9、ns and generations of Chinese people benefit.（which引导非限制性定语从句）高分句型2 I feel really proud whenever I see patients of my father and grandfather leave their clinic with satisfaction and hope. （whenever引导时间状语从句）Passage2（2021东营神州天立高级中学有限公司高三月考）假如你是高中生李华，你校上周举行了冬季运动会。现英语周报向你约稿，请根据以下提示写一篇关于本次运动会的报道。内容要点如下：1

10、.时间，地点；2.内容；3.意义。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】 Last week, the Winter Sports Meeting, organized by our school, was held in our schools track and field ground, lasting three days. It enjoyed a huge success.In the grand opening ceremony, every class dressing up paraded through the platform, feat

11、uring its favourite theme. In the next event competition, athletes did what they could to fight for the glory of their own class, while others cheered for players in full cry. Whats worth mentioning was the club performances in the evening, where students showed their brilliant talent and gift, disp

12、laying the charm of contemporary school students.It was through the activity that we strengthen our sense of unity and improved our fitness. In a word, we benefited a lot from it.【分析】本篇书面表达属于 提纲类作文，要求考生写一篇关于本次运动会的报道，介绍学校上周举行的冬季运动会。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式

13、安排所写内容。要求：1.时间，地点；2.内容；3.意义。第二步:列提纲 （重点词组）track and field ground; success; grand opening ceremony; dress up; feature; competition; fight for; in full cry; performances; brilliant talent; contemporary; strengthen; ; in a word第三步：连词成句1. Last week, the Winter Sports Meeting, organized by our school, wa

14、s held in our schools track and field ground, lasting three days. 2. It enjoyed a huge success.3. In the grand opening ceremony, every class dressing up paraded through the platform, featuring its favourite theme.4. In the next event competition, athletes did what they could to fight for the glory o

15、f their own class, while others cheered for players in full cry.5. Whats worth mentioning was the club performances in the evening, where students showed their brilliant talent and gift, displaying the charm of contemporary school students.6. It was through the activity that we strengthen our sense

16、of unity and improved our fitness.7. In a word, we benefited a lot from it.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second（供参考）2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover（供参考）连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】高分句型1 In the next event competition,

17、 athletes did what they could to fight for the glory of their own class, while others cheered for players in full cry. (运用了what引导宾语从句)高分句型2 It was through the activity that we strengthen our sense of unity and improved our fitness. (运用了强调句)Passage3（2021江西宜春市高三月考）成年仪式在即，当你回首过往，一定有那么一些出现在你生活中的人或事，给你带来

18、深远的影响。请以此为主题写一篇讲演稿，准备在学校成年仪式典礼上对全校师生发表讲演。要点： 1 简要介绍这个人或事。2 你从中学到了什么或对你产生了什么影响。注意事项: 文中不能出现真实姓名或学校信息1.词数100左右。2.短文必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。【答案】Looking back at the past three years, I was most influenced by my best friend, Lucy. I believe we will have a good time talking about her.She is a cute girl wi

19、th short black hair and a pair of talkative eyes. She is popular with all my classmates due to her kindness and positive attitude towards life. Generally speaking, she is an excellent student that is worth making friends with.I still remember that day, when I got a terrible grade in a math test. To

20、my surprise, when I told my grade to her, she gave me a warm smile, telling me she believed I could become a top student again one day. Her encouragement brought such great comfort to me. Thanks to her comfort, I got out of the shadow (阴影) of the failure.In my eyes, Lucy is to me what sunshine is to

21、 flowers. Without her warmth, I wouldnt have an opportunity to watch my life bloom so brilliantly. How lucky I am to have such an influential friend!【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生以“给你带来深远的影响的人”为主题，写一篇讲演稿，并在学校成年仪式典礼上对全校师生发表讲演。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般过去时和一般现在时。结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：

22、1.简要介绍这个人或事；2.你从中学到了什么或对你产生了什么影响。第二步:列提纲（重点词组）look back; be influenced by; have a good time (in) doing sth.; a pair of; be popular with; due to; generally speaking; be worth doing; make friends; get a terrible grade in; to ones surprise; give me a warm smile; bring great comfort to; thanks to; get o

23、ut of; in ones eyes; have an opportunity to; an influential friend第三步：连词成句1. Looking back at the past three years, I was most influenced by my best friend, Lucy.2. I believe we will have a good time talking about her.3. She is a cute girl with short black hair and a pair of talkative eyes.4. She is

24、popular with all my classmates due to her kindness and positive attitude towards life.5. Generally speaking, she is an excellent student that is worth making friends with.6. I still remember that day, when I got a terrible grade in a math test.7. To my surprise, when I told my grade to her, she gave

25、 me a warm smile, telling me she believed I could become a top student again one day.8. Her encouragement brought such great comfort to me.9. Thanks to her comfort, I got out of the shadow (阴影) of the failure.10. In my eyes, Lucy is to me what sunshine is to flowers.11. Without her warmth, I wouldnt

26、 have an opportunity to watch my life bloom so brilliantly.12. How lucky I am to have such an influential friend!根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）1.表文章结构顺序：First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/SecondAnd then, Finally, In the end, At last（供参考）2.表并列补充关系：What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furt

27、hermore, In addition As well as, not onlybut (also), including,（供参考）3.表转折对比关系：However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand,On the other handSome,while others,as for, sothat（供参考）4.表因果关系：Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result（供参考）连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔

28、接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，【点睛】高分句型1To my surprise, when I told my grade to her, she gave me a warm smile, telling me she believed I could become a top student again one day.（when引导时间状语从句，telling现在分词作状语） 高分句型2Generally speaking, she is an excellent student that is worth making friends with.（that引导定语从句）Passage4（

29、2021黑龙江哈尔滨市哈尔滨三中高三期末）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter来信向你讲述SAT考试在即，他感到压力很大。 请按着以下要点给他写一封回信，安慰并预祝他取得好成绩。要点如下：1.面对压力的正确态度；2.分享缓解压力的做法。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。_【答案】Dear Peter， Having heard that you are going to take SAT, and suffering stress lately，I am going to share with you something about dealing with the stress and anxiety. When