一轮复习高考英语应用文写作.docx

1、一轮复习高考英语应用文写作 第一讲应用文写作应用文属于实用文体，有严格的语境限制，比如确定的时间、地点，确定的对象、范围，确定的行文目的等。新高考应用文写作的命题形式主要是提纲式。主要表达形式包括日记、电子邮件或书信、书面或口头通知、发言稿、网络发帖等。从提供的命题场景看，很多是“涉外”或应用英语的环境，如申请参加国际夏令营、邀请外教参加活动、帮助迷路的外宾、请美国朋友看中国的戏曲节目等(感知中国传统文化)、课外学习英语的经验等。试题所涉及的话题贴近社会生活，富有时代气息，能唤起考生强烈的主人翁意识和责任感。【评分标准早知道】一、各档次的给分范围和要求档次描述第六档(13-15分)覆盖所有的内

2、容要点，表达清楚、合理使用了多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，可能有个别小错，但完全不影响理解有效使用语句衔接手段，全文结构清晰，意义连贯，完全达到预期的写作目的第五档(10-12分)覆盖全部或大部分内容要点，表达清楚、合理使用了比较多样的、恰当的词语和语法结构比较有效的使用语句衔接手段，全文比较清晰，较连贯，达到了预期的写作目的第四档(7-9分)覆盖了部分写作要点，有个别的表达不够清楚合理使用简单的词汇和语法结构，有一些错误或不恰当之处，但基本不影响理解基本有效的使用语句衔接手段二、评分原则1.本题总分为15分，按6个档次给分。2.评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要

3、求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。3.词数少于60和多于100的，从总分中减去2分。4.评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上下文的连贯性。5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。6.如书写较差，以致影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。【高分技巧要记牢】根据考生书面表达常见错误及评卷要求，我们不难总结出行之有效的“一式、两头、三写、四关”等高分技巧，即写对格式、写好两头、规范书写等。一式写对格式要求记住英语应用文常用文体的基本写作格式和特点。两头写好两头要求灵活运用熟悉的句式结构和表达手法

4、，使文章开头和结尾的表达生动准确，引人入胜，耐人寻味。三写规范书写(1)行文时书写规范化，力求卷面整洁美观。(2)单词的拼写、字母的大小写符合英语书写要求。四关破关夺隘突破内容要点关、行文逻辑关、语法规则关以及习惯表达关。总之，在应用文写作中，考生应该注意“有话好好说”：体现出词语的魅力，展示精彩的语句；“有话慢慢说”：要点齐全，叙述从容，运用一定的过渡词语。平时，注意积累并背诵各种写作素材的“万能模板”并学会灵活运用，这样才能在有限的时间内提升写作能力。在考场上，书面表达才能得高分。报道新闻、活动报道是典型的应用文体裁，其特点是以事实为依据，对人的经历、举办的活动或发生的事件给予明确的、实事

5、求是的报道。【篇首句】In order to encourage the students to get close to nature，our school organized a mountain-climbing activity.为了鼓励学生们走近大自然，我们学校组织了一次登山活动。At 4：00 a.m.on the morning of April 2nd，a big fire broke out in Zhongshan Supermarket.4月2日凌晨4点，中山超市发生了大火。【篇中句】The purpose of this race was to inspire us s

6、tudents to pay more attention to physical exercise.这次比赛的目的是激励我们学生更加重视体育锻炼。On the way，although some students fell behind，they kept running until the finishing line.途中，虽然有些学生落后了，但他们一直坚持跑到终点线。Apart from knowledge，we also learned to cooperate with each other and came to realize the importance of teamwor

7、k.除了知识，我们也学会了互相合作，也逐渐意识到团队合作的重要性。【篇尾句】The activity benefited us a lot./The activity was of great benefit to us./The activity was very beneficial to us.该活动对我们很有好处。What they did has brought joy to others and enriched their own lives.他们所做的给别人带来了快乐，而且丰富了他们自己的生活。They said it was such a beautiful day that

8、 they would remember it forever.他们说这是多么美好的一天，他们会永远铭记。(2020新高考卷)假定你是李华，上周日你校举办了5公里越野赛跑活动。请你为校英文报写一篇报道，内容包括：1.参加人员；2.跑步路线：从校门口到南山脚下；3.活动反响。注意：词数80左右。A Cross-Country Running Race【佳作展台】A Cross-Country Running RaceLast Sunday，our school held a five-kilometer cross-country running race，which all the stude

9、nts in Senior 3 took part in.The purpose of this race was to inspire us students to pay more attention to physical exercise.At 7 a.m.we started at the school gate.And then we ran all the way to the foot of South Hill.On the way，although some students fell behind，they kept running until the finishing

10、 line.From this activity，we have realized that building up our body is of great importance，and we have also learned more about “persistence leads to success”.【亮点借鉴】1.结构美：采用三段式结构，结构清晰明了。2.词汇美：文章运用了很多高级词汇，如take part in，purpose，inspire，pay more attention to，fall behind，build up our body，be of great imp

11、ortance，persistence等。3.句式美：句which引导非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词race。句不定式短语to inspire us.作表语，对主语purpose进行详细说明。句although引导让步状语从句。句and连接表示顺承关系的并列句，第一个分句中that引导的是宾语从句，第二个分句中谚语persistence leads to success的恰当运用提高了文章的档次。(2020山东烟台模拟)新华中学近期组织了校园劳动周(Campus Labor Week)活动。假定你是学校英语报记者，请写一篇简短的英文报道。内容包括：1.活动的时间与地点；2.活动的过程；3.你的评

12、论。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【参考范文】In order to encourage the students to love laboring and protect our environment，an activity called Campus Labor Week was organized by our school during the week from June 8th to June 12th.All the students in the senior grades took an active part in it.Our school

13、 organized our class to carry on the activity in the park.The whole class was divided into three groups，each of which had different tasks.We all felt much tired，but we were very happy because we had done a good deed.The activity is really meaningful and instructive.日记日记是用来记录一天中所发生的有意义的、值得记录的事件。日记的种类

14、有很多种，从体裁角度，可以分为记事型日记和议论型日记。记事型日记是以某种顺序描述某一件事情发生发展的过程。而议论型日记是针对当天的某一事件或某一现象表明自己的看法或态度。【篇首句】This afternoon，we held a class meeting to say goodbye to Zhang Qiang，who was going to study abroad.今天下午，我们开班会向即将出国留学的张强告别。Last week，we took the foreign students in our school to experience the authentic tea cul

15、ture，which turned out to be extremely rewarding.上周，我们带着来我校的外国学生去体验了地道的茶文化，收获颇多。I was so pleased that one of my pen pals in China invited me to stay with her during the past Spring Festival.去年，我的一个中国笔友邀请我和她一起过春节，我很高兴。【篇中句】The moment we arrived at the Chinese Academy of Sciences，we were warmly greeted

16、 by a friendly expert standing at the entrance.我们一到中科院，一位友好的专家就站在门口，热情地迎接我们。We first went to the library with a large collection of books，where we saw students reading attentively.我们首先去了藏书丰富的图书馆，在那里我们看到学生们在认真地阅读。【篇尾句】From my point of view，its indeed worthwhile to explore a foreign culture.在我看来，探索外国文

17、化的确值得。Well surely miss him and wish him good luck in the future.我们一定会想念他，并祝他未来好运。Through the meaningful activity，we all agree that science plays an important role in our life and we will study hard to take advantage of it to make our world a better place.通过这个有意义的活动，我们都赞同科学在我们的生活中扮演着重要的角色，我们将努力学习，利用科

18、学使我们的世界成为一个更美好的地方。假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华。你班同学张强即将去国外读书，下面四幅图描述了同学们为他送行的过程，请根据图片的先后顺序用英语写一篇日记。注意：1.日记的开头已为你写好。2.词数80左右。Monday，March 10 Fine【佳作展台】Monday，March_10 FineThis afternoon，we held a class meeting to say goodbye to Zhang Qiang，who was going to study abroad.In the beginning，he made a brief speech

19、to express his true love for the class and his wish for an everlasting friendship with us.We were all moved to tears.Then came the moment to present him with the special gift，a heart-shaped board with some photos recording the unforgettable days we had spent together.Afterwards，we signed on his T-sh

20、irt expressing our best wishes and encouragement as a reminder.At last，we had a photo taken to memorize this precious moment.Well surely miss him and wish him good luck in the future.【亮点借鉴】1.结构美：采用二段式结构，结构清晰明了。2.词汇美：文章运用了很多高级词汇，如：say goodbye to，everlasting friendship，moved to tears，present.with.，unf

21、orgettable days，reminder，have a photo taken，this precious moment等。3.句式美：句who引导非限制性定语从句，修饰先行词Zhang Qiang。句为倒装句，其中a heart-shaped board with some photos为同位语，现在分词短语recording the unforgettable days作名词photos的后置定语，we had spent together为省略关系代词的定语从句，修饰先行词days。句had a photo taken为have复合结构，不定式短语to memorize this

22、 precious moment为目的状语。句and连接并列谓语。假如你是May，在刚刚过去的春节里，你应邀前往中国与笔友一起欢度中国年。请你用英语写一封日记记录这一段难得的异国经历和感受。内容：1.春节期间你们参加了什么活动；2.谈谈你的感受。注意：1.日记的格式已为你写好；2.词数80 左右；3.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Saturday，February 13th，2021 Sunny【参考范文】Saturday，February_13th，2021 SunnyI was so pleased that one of my pen pals in China invited me

23、to stay with her during the past Spring Festival.That was really an enjoyable and unforgettable experience for me.The Spring Festival in China is a special occasion for Chinese families to get together so we visited some of her families and relatives together.Besides，we tried some traditional foods，

24、watched Dragon and Lion Dance and participated in some other celebration activities such as a temple fair.Afterwards，we paid a visit to Mount Hengshan，a famous tourist attraction and a religious spot.Greatly impressed by Chinese unique culture and attractive scenery，I have known further about China.

25、From my point of view，its indeed worthwhile to explore a foreign culture.邀请信邀请信是邀请亲朋好友等参加某项活动时所发的邀约性书信。邀请信一般包括此次活动的性质、活动内容、发出邀请以及请求同意等。一般邀请信具有简洁、热情的特点。【篇首句】Its my pleasure/a great honour to invite you to join us.非常荣幸地邀请你加入我们。Id like to invite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home nex

26、t Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival.我想邀请您下周六重阳节一起去探访附近的养老院。【篇中句】Here are some details about the activity.下面有一些关于这个活动的细节。The activity is scheduled at 8：00 a.m.on January 20th in the lecture hall and its theme is “Differences Between Eastern and Western Customs”.活动定于1月20日上午8点在报告厅举行，主题为“东西方习俗的差异”。

27、Our music festival will cover a wide range of activities，including short musical performances，playing musical instruments，as well as a，singing contest.我们的音乐节将包括各种各样的活动，包括音乐短剧表演，演奏乐器以及一场歌唱比赛。【篇尾句】I do hope you will accept our/my invitation if it is convenient to you.你方便的话我真心希望你能接受我们/我的邀请。We would app

28、reciate it if you could confirm your participation at your earliest convenience.如果你能尽早在你方便时确认参加，我们将不胜感激。(2020浙江1月卷)假定你是李华，你校将举办外国学生中文演讲比赛，请给你的英国朋友George写封邮件邀请他参加。内容包括：1.比赛时间；2.演讲话题；3.报名方式。注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【佳作展台】Dear George，Learning that youre very interested in the Chinese language，Im wr

29、iting to invite you to participate in the Chinese Speech Contest for foreign students.The contest，which is scheduled to be held in our school hall on January 18th，will focus on the traditional Chinese culture.There is no doubt that you are qualified enough and experienced in presenting your ideas，be

30、cause of your abundant skills.If you are available and have the eagerness，please sign up for it by email.I am looking forward to your involvement and do wish you a success!Yours，Li Hua【亮点借鉴】1.结构美：采用三段式结构，结构清晰明了。2.词汇美：文章运用了很多高级词汇，如participate in，be scheduled to do，focus on，qualified，be experienced in，present，abundant，available，sign up for等。3.句式美：为现在分词短语作原因状语；为非限制性定语从句修饰先行词contest；高级句式：There is no doubt that.毫无疑问.；为if引导的条件状语从句。(2021青岛模拟)作为学校戏剧节系列活动之一，英语社将邀请外教David为学生们做一场讲座，假定你是英语社社长李华，请根据提示写一封邀请信。主要内容如下：1.时间和地点； 2.