最新中考英语真题分类汇编题型十书面表达之考点2观点看法解析版.docx

1、最新中考英语真题分类汇编题型十书面表达之考点2观点看法解析版2018最新中考英语真题分类汇编题型十：书面表达之考点2观点看法（解析版）一、（2018山东威海）“照镜子”是生活中的平常事，以生活为镜，可以照出现实中真实的自己。请以“Me in the mirror”为题，写一篇80词以上的英语短文。围绕自己最突出的一至两个优点和缺点，重点谈谈在未来的生活和学习中如何扬长避短、完善自我，成长为更好的自己。要求：1.题目已给出，不计入总词数；2.观点正确、条理清晰、表达流畅；3.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称。_【答案】Me in the mirrorLooking at myself in

2、the mirror, I know I am an outgoing girl. I like to make friends and Im always ready to help them. So Im very popular in my school. But I have a big problem, Im less interested in my lessons and I can t concentrate in class. In my spare time I spend too much time on computer games, so I don t get go

3、od grades which make my parents disappointed.When I go to senior high school I hope to get along well with my classmates and try to make more friends. I hope we can help each other and learn from each other. I will make a good study resolution and try my best to go for it. I decide to have a healthi

4、er lifestyle. Ill spend more time on my schoolwork and develop good learning habits. I will concentrate more in class and finish my study tasks carefully. Whats more, I will read more books and master good leaning methods. I hope to make great progress and make my parents proud of me.【解析】这是一篇话题作文，根据

5、所给的材料介绍一下镜子里的我。所提供的材料中涉及到介绍自己的最突出的一至两个优点和缺点，重点谈谈在未来的生活和学习中如何扬长避短、完善自我，成长为更好的自己。时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称。注意作文中必须包含所给的材料的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一】Im less interested in my lessons and I can t concentrate in class. 我对功

6、课不太感兴趣，上课也不能集中精力。be interested in短语的使用，使文章增色不少。【高分句型二】In my spare time I spend too much time on computer games, so I don t get good grades which make my parents disappointed. 业余时间，我花太多的时间在电脑游戏上，所以我没有取得好成绩，这使我的父母很失望。which make my parents disappointed. 是由which引导的定语从句。【高分句型三】I will concentrate more in

7、class and finish my study tasks carefully. 我将集中精力在课堂上，认真完成我的学习任务。说明作者在后来认识到了错误，而努力学习。二、(2018青海西宁)学校英语报社正在开展题为“The Greatest Help”的征文活动。什么人或物给了你最大的帮助?你取得了哪些进步?有什么感想或受到了哪些教育?请写一篇80词左右的英语短文进行投稿,文中不得出现真实校名和姓名。The Greatest Help_【答案】The Greatest HelpI have got lots of help, but my father gives me the great

8、est help of all.Though my father is a very kind man, he is very strict with me. He always pushes me to study hard and tries to find mistakes in everything I do. Sometimes, I doubt if he is my father. He leads me to read plenty of books. He says, The more books you read, the better person you will be

9、. He also says that health is the most important thing for everybody. So I am made to do lots of exercise. Anyway, we have left our happiness and laughter everywhere, on the playground, in the swimming pool, on the mountains and so on. When I meet any difficulties, he encourages me and helps me out.

10、 He is always there for me.As I grow older, my thoughts change from misunderstanding to understanding. He is not only my father and a sincere friend but also my guide and helper. I will never forget the greatest help and deepest love from his strictness and exceptions because they make some big diff

11、erence in my life.【解析】这篇作文要求我们以The Greatest Help为题，介绍一下在你的生活里，什么人或什么事给了你最大的帮助，并说一说你的感受。审题可知，这是一篇话题作文，题目中只给出了题目，具体的内容需要学生们自己发挥想象力，来组织语言，串联成文，因此写作前，要仔细思考，确定具体的写作内容。然后再确定文章的时态和人称，这篇短文应以一般现在时态或者一般过去时态为主，第三人称来叙述，要注意谓语动词形式的变化。写作时，应注意英语句式表达和汉语习惯的不同，不要逐词翻译，而应使用恰当的词汇、短语和句式结构，以简单句结构为基础，穿插使用并列句或者复合句。为提升文章水平，应选

12、用一些较高级的词汇和复杂结构，成为文章的亮点。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使整篇文章意思连贯。三、（2018湖北黄冈）美丽中国,美丽长江。黄冈是长江边一座美丽的城市。假如你是黄冈某中学的一名中学生李明,请你以“美丽的黄冈”为话題,向你的英国笔友Tom介绍一下你美丽的家乡黄冈。要点提示：1.黄冈位于长江之边,大别山之南；2.黄冈历史悠久,名人辈出；3.黄冈风景迷人,乡村秀美;4.人人参与,从小事做起,黄冈人正在努力地保护黄冈的自然环境;5.邀请Tom来中国,欣赏黄冈更美好的绿水青山、蓝天白云。写作要求：1.词数90左右(短文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数);2.根据要点提示,可以适当发挥;3.短文

13、中不得出现真实的姓名及校名。参考词汇:lie(位于); Dabie mountains; plant; clean up; clear river and green mountains Dear Tom,Thanks for your last letter. You asked me about my hometown, now let me tell you. _Best wishes!Yours, Li Ming【答案】Dear Tom,Thanks for your last letter. You asked me about my hometown. now let me tel

14、l you.My hometown is Huanggang. It lies by the Yangtze River and at the southern foot of Dabie Mountains.Its a beautiful city with a long history. A number of famous people come from our city, such as Li siguang, Li shizhen, Wen Yiduo and so on. There are lots of beautiful mountains, rivers and lake

15、s. They are so fascinating that thousands of tourists come to visit Huanggang every year. You can also see beautiful villages everywhere. We are proud of our hometown.Now the people in Huanggang are trying to protect the natural environment. We plant trees as many as possible every year. We stop fac

16、tories from throwing rubbish into the rivers. Volunteers go to the mountains, forests, parks and streets to clean them up on the weekends. Everyone is playing a role in making our city more and more beautiful. We are taking action!Tom, would you like to come to Huanggang? You can see clear rivers an

17、d green mountains as well as blue skies and white cloud. I believe you will fall in love with our city and have a wonderful time. Looking forward to your visit!Best wishes!Yours,Li Ming【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，以“美丽的黄冈”为话題,向我的英国笔友Tom介绍一下我美丽的家乡黄冈。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，二，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句

18、式的应用，比如：My hometown is，It lies，There are，We are proud of，Would you like to？You can，I believe等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。四、（2018湖北黄石）假设你是李华，你的朋友刘明在学习、生活等方面遇到了一些问题和困难，所以他经常感到焦虑和郁闷。请你根据以下内容给他发一封电子邮件，帮助他克服焦虑情绪，轻松、快乐地学习和生活。内容包括：1. 每个人都会有苦恼、焦虑的时候； 2. 一定要告诉别人你的烦恼； 3. 遇到任何困难时，与同学交流和老师、家长及时沟

19、通； 4. 可就如何轻松、快乐地学习和生活等适当发挥。作文要求：1. 不得照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名； 2. 语句连贯，计数80个左右。作文开头已经给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：焦虑的 anxious 与沟通 communicate with 变得轻松 get relaxed 解决问题 solve problems Dear Liu Ming, Everyone may feel worried or sad sometimes._ Yours Li Hua【答案】Dear Liu Ming,Everyone may feel worried or sad som

20、etimes. Its all right to tell others when you are anxious. Its good to communicate with your classmates, teachers or parents when you are in trouble. Thus, you can solve the problems from study or life easily. Listening to music or taking part in outdoor activities is another way to help you get rel

21、axed.Try to smile at yourself and never keep silent about your problems.Please do remember: youre not alone. No matter how many difficulties we have, I believe all of them can be overcome in the end. Yours Li Hua 【解析】 亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如feel worried or sad，all right，Its good to d

22、o，communicate with，in trouble，solve the problems，listen to，take part in，outdoor activities，try to do，no matter，in the end等。而Its good to communicate with your classmates, teachers or parents when you are in trouble./ No matter how many difficulties we have, I believe all of them can be overcome in the end.等多种复杂从句结构和Listening to music or taking part in outdoor activities is another way to help you get relaxed./Try to smile at yourself and never keep silent about your problems.等非谓语动词结构的综合运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。五、（2018江苏南京） 请根据你校校刊KIDS MAG中HAVE YOUR SAY栏目的征稿内容，用英语写一