近10年短文改错总结1.docx

1、近10年短文改错总结1【2015陕西】 My soccer coach retired in last week. I wanted to do anything special for him at his retirement party. My mum makes the better biscuits in the world, so I decide to ask her for help. Mum taught me some basic step of baking. I insisted on doing most of the baking myself. I thought

2、 the biscuits were really well. My only mistake was that I dropped some on the floor after I was packing them up.At a party, my coach, with a biscuit in his mouth, asked surprisingly who made them and joked, “I might have to retire again next year just get some more of these biscuits.”My favorite pi

3、cture at the party is of my coach and me enjoy the biscuits with happy laughter!【2015浙江】 My old classroom was interesting because three side of the classroom were made from glass. I enjoyed sit close to the windows and looking at the view. On the left-hand side of the class, I could easy see the foo

4、tball field. In the mornings, it was full of students exercising. The view from the back of the classroom is also splendid. Close to the school there was a beautiful park with many trees around them. Farther in the distance, I could not enjoy the view of snowy mountains. On the right side of the cla

5、ss was the road. I was always interested to see the drivers in hurry in the morning. The position of the classroom with its view made me felt like I was dreaming. If I was only a child when I studied in that classroom, I will never forget it.【2015新课标全国I】 When I was a child, I hoped to live in the ci

6、ty. I think I would be happy there. Now I am living in a city, but I miss my home in countryside. There the air is clean or the mountains are green. Unfortunately, on the development of industrialization, the environment has been polluted. Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has alre

7、ady become a very seriously problem. The airs we breathe in is getting dirtier and dirtier. Much rare animals are dying out . We must found ways to protect your environment. If we fail to do so , well live to regret it .2015新课标2短文改错 One day, little Tony went to a shopping center with his parent. It

8、was very crowded. Tony saw a toy on a shop window. He liked it so very much that he quickly walked into the shop. After looks at the toy for some time, he turned around and found where his parents were missing. Tony was scared and begun to cry. A woman saw him crying and telling him to wait outside

9、a shop. Five minutes later, Tony saw parents. Mom said,” How nice to see you again! Dad and I were terrible worried.” Tony promised her that this would never happen again.2015四川 Hi, Janice Its been a month since I came to this new school and I really want share with you some of the problems I have b

10、een experiencing. As I tell you last time , I made three new friend here. We hang out together during lunch and after school. Weve been spending a lot of time sing in karaoke bars. Its been three Saturdays now and it really costs me many. And I started to see this as a time-wasting activity! In fact

11、, I dont like to go anymore, so Im afraid Ill lose their friendship. How do you think I should do? If you are me, would you talk to him? Please help with me and give me some advice. (2014新课标二)My dream school starts at 8:30 a.m and ends at 3:30 p.m. They are three lessons in the morning and two in th

12、e afternoon. We didnt need to do so many homework. Therefore , we have more time with after-school activities. For example, we can do reading for one and a half hour and play sports for one hour every day.My dream school look like a big garden. There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the

13、 classroom, buildings. We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening music. The teachers here are kind and helpfully. They are not only our teachers but also our friends. （2014大纲卷）All of us need friendship. The understanding 76._between two friends mean both of them have similar 7

14、7._ideas and trusting each other. Otherwise, it is 78._impossible for him to help each other and to make 79._their friendship to last long. As an old saying goes, 80._“A friend in need is a friend indeed.” So really friendship 81._should able to stand all sorts of tests. And it is 82._wise to have a

15、s many good friends that we can. 83._The more friends we have, the more we can learn for 84._one another, but the more pleasure we can share together. 85._ （2014辽宁卷）Dear Jeremy and Alice,Although weve been delighted to have you as neighbors, were hoping to settle something that bothers to us. In a w

16、ord, your dogCleo.Weve called several time about Cleos early morning barking. It is difficult to understanding why she barks every minute shes outside. The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby. Beside, Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a da

17、y. This morning she starts barking even before 5 oclock. That is too much for us. Considering how closely the houses are. We appreciate our apologies and goodwill, but we hope that you can figure a good way of settling the matter. （2014陕西卷） My father took me out camping for the first time when I was

18、 seven. He wanted teach me about animals, insects and trees. My uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting. One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue. Just then a bird was flying over us. My uncles immediate jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird. Neither of the a

19、rrows hit the target. Suddenly the arrows was flying down at us from the sky they were looked like rain! We ran to escape but fortunately no one was injured. That day I didnt learn much about animals, insects or trees, but I learnt a impressive lesson about gravity! （2014四川卷）Hello, boys and girls! T

20、oday, I am going to talk with what you should do when a fire alarm go off. If you hear the alarm, stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside. Stay close to your teacher and classmate. Dont panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly. Soon the firefighters

21、 will come and put out a fire. If its a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom. If you notice that when someone is missing and hurt, tell your teacher immediately. （2014新课标I）Nearly five years before ,and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted

22、some cherry tomatoes（圣女果）in our back garden, since then-for all these year-we had been allowing tomatoes to self seed where they please . As result, the plants are growing somewhere. The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbors .Alt

23、hough we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problem. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost! （2014浙江卷 ） I was taking a train to Londons Victoria Station. I had noticed that the carriage was noise and filled with p

24、eople. Before long, a train inspector comes to check out tickets. A passenger realized he couldnt find his ticket but became quite upset. Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket, which was eventually found under a seat several rows from his owner. The person who found a ticket smile

25、d with pleasure at his success. No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticket-owner before. Yet, they had so quickly offered the strangers their help. If we could show concern to others on need, the world would be a better place to live in.2013年 1课标卷1 I hardly remember my

26、grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now.I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice,

27、 which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known.2013年2课标卷II The book Im reading of talks about afternoon tea in B

28、ritain. It is said to have started in the early 1800s. Have tea in the late afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner, that might not be served until 8 oclock at night. This custom soon becomes another meal of day. Interesting, it had a connection by the British porcelain(瓷器) industry. Te

29、a in China was traditionally drank from cups without handles. When tea got popular in Britain, there was a crying need for good cup with handles to suit British habits. This made for the grow in the porcelain industry.2013年3大纲卷 In my family, there are three people. My father ishardworking but goes t

30、o work in the field every day. 76. _He isnt good at talk but he gets on well with other 77. _people. My mother is very much kind and is 78. _friendly to everybody. So when I have the problem 79. _I will turn to her for help. My friends say I am clever. 80. _When the teacher asks us very difficulty q

31、uestions, 81. _Ill think quickly and stand to answer. At home my 82. _father often thinks Im silly. He said if I decide 83. _to do something, it takes him much times to stop me. 84. _This is how I need to improve in the future. 85. _2013年4辽宁卷 Mr. Johnson is a hardworking teacher. Every day, he spend

32、s too much time with his work. With little sleep and hardly any break, so he works from morning till night. Hard work have made him very ill. “He has ruined his healthy. We are worried about him.” That is which other teachers say. Yesterday afternoon. I paid visit to Mr. Johnson. I was eager to see him, but outside her room