高考英语读后续写公开课件.pptx

1、县长在全县审计工作会议上的发言_1县长在全县审计工作会议上的讲话同志们:县委、县政府决定召开审计工作会议,主要目的是进一步提高对审计工作的认识,把我们各部门、各单位、各街镇的思想统一到县委、县政府的要求上来,高度重视审计工作,主动配合审计工作,确保我们有限的财政资金能够用好,用出成效。这次会议的主要任务是总结近年来全县审计工作,安排部署今年审计工作任务。这次会议非常重要,在央要求转变工作作风,尽量压缩会议的大背景下,我们其他方面的业务会议都进行了认真整合、压缩、合并,就审计工作专门召开一次会议,这可见县委、县政府对审计工作的高度重视。刚才云生同志代表县委、县政府对审计工作作了认真的回顾总结,同

2、时也安排了今年的审计工作任务,应该说云生同志的讲话不仅总结了我们这些年的审计工作,肯定了审计工作取得的成效、发挥的作用,同时实事求是地对我们这些年来审计部门在审计工作发现的问题进行了认真的梳理总结,对大家作了一些通报,希望全县各部门、各单位、各镇街以及学校、医院等单位,一定要认真贯彻好本次会议精神,回去以后要结合本单位工作实际,认真进行总结,认真进行整改。下面,我再讲四点意见:一、充分肯定,目录,如何构思续写的内容,读后续写的高分攻略,2,1,读后续写的具体要求,提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材

3、料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。,1,如何构思续写的内容,Step 1 Read for elements,Step 2 Read for plots,Step 3 Gather ideas,Step 4 Make predictions,阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Steve was the most amazing person in all of Minneapolis,and he was my cousin.By the age of 19,Steve was a star baseball player at the University of

4、Minnesota.I wanted to be exactly like him.So when Steve asked me to go with him on a spring fishing trip in northern Minnesota,I was excited!After planning the trip,we gathered clothes and supplies,and began our great adventure.We reached the Superior National Forest in northern Minnesota by early e

5、vening.On our way to the campsite,Steve pointed to a small house faraway in one of the mountains,saying that it was the ranger station(护林站)where the forester worked.,Finally,after a long walk,we reached the campsite and set up the camp as the sun was setting.Steve knew all the tricks of an experienc

6、ed wilderness camper.After we gathered enough wood from the forest,he started the campfire using only stone and steel no matches.For supper we feasted on freeze-dried beef,wild rice and pea soup.I ate greedily after all that work.Tired enough,we climbed into our sleeping bags early and talked about

7、our plans for fishing the next day.We were still talking quietly when a sudden north wind picked up;the temperature dropped and it began to snow.Steve found a way to increase the temperature inside the tent.He dragged a log from the forest to the opposite side of the campfire.Then he wrapped aluminu

8、m foil(铝箔)around the log.The heat from the fire reflected off the foil and into the tent.Soon images of lake fish were filling my dreams.,The snow had stopped,but sometime later a powerful wind must have kicked up the flames of our dying fire.I was suddenly awakened by Steve.Our tent was on fire.Fri

9、ghtened,I ran out of the tent immediately.The tent collapsed(倒塌)with Steve inside.Without any thought of endangering myself,I reached into the burning tent and pulled him to the icy lake.Fortunately,we were not seriously hurt.注意:1.所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右；2.至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写

10、完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。,Paragraph 1:Later,as we stood by the burning tent to keep warm,we considered our difficult situation._Paragraph 2:Suddenly,we heard a noise in the forest._,Step 1 Read for elements,What,Where,When,Who,I,Steve,forester,In spring,In a forest,An adventurous fishing trip,Elements,S

11、tep 2 Read for plots,Beginning(character and setting),Process,Climax(the main problem or conflict),Ending(a time to solve the problem/how things end up),?,Story Mountain,Beginning,Process,Climax,Ending,1,2,3,?,1.Steve asked me to go on a spring fishing trip.2.We reached the campsite and set up the c

12、amp.3.Our tent was on fire and we escaped to the icy lake.4.?,Step 3 Gather ideas,?,信息整理：,体裁：记叙文时态：一般过去时原文核心信息解读：“我”和表哥去森林里露营，夜里下起了雪，天很冷，表哥生起了篝火，“我们”在温暖中入睡了。睡着后，帐篷起火了，“我们”匆忙逃了出来，但帐篷烧毁了,Step 4 Make predictions,可用于续写的已知信息：,写作思路：,“我们”在荒芜人烟的森林深处，孤立无援，随身物品也都随着帐篷一起烧毁了，正当不知道该怎么办的时候，林中传来了声响，发现是护林人开着车过来了。原来护

13、林人看到了火光，过来一探究竟，结果“我们”得救了。,构思的理由：,文章中出现过forester(护林人)，这是极其有用的信息，另外根据常识可知，护林人最重要的工作之一就是侦查火情，所以森林中有火情的话，护林人一定会一探究竟。,One possible version:,Paragraph 1:Later,as we stood by the burning tent to keep warm,we considered our difficult situation.Our campsite was in the deep of the forest,really far away from

14、the highway.We were in the middle of nowhere,wearing only underwear,with our supplies burnt into ashes,including our cellphones.Even Steve was unsure what to do next.The only thing we could do was just sit in the cold air and wonder how to get out of the forest.,Paragraph 2:,Suddenly,we heard a nois

15、e in the forest.Anxiously we listened and stared into the darkness.A jeep appeared.A forester had spotted the light from the fire and had come to have a check.We jumped into the warm vehicle and the forester drove us to the ranger station,where we were given clothes and were able to call our parents

16、.Steve and I had many more camping adventures from then on,but it was on this trip that Steve began to treat me more like a friend rather than a younger cousin.Our friendship continues to this day.,2,读后续写的高分攻略,评分标准,第五档：21分-25分第四档：16分-20分第三档：11分-15分第二档：6分-10分第一档：1分-5分,第五档：21分-25分,与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接合理。内容丰富，应用了5个以上短文中标出的关键词语。所使用语法结构和词汇丰富，准确，可能有些许错误，但完全不影响意义表达。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写短文结构紧凑。,与所给短文融洽度较高，与所提供各段落开头语衔接较为合理。内容比较丰富，应用了5个以上短文所标出的关键词语。所使用的语法结构和词汇较为丰富、准确，可能有些许错误，但不影响意义表达。比较有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续写