书面表达中考复习指导.docx

1、书面表达中考复习指导书面表达中考复习指导 周玉敏书面表达是学生语言能力的综合体现。它包括学生的词汇、语法、惯用法等语言知识，还包括学生对文章的构思、组织、表达以及传递信息和解决实际问题的语言交际能力.。一、书面表达的类型1.应用文。应用文主要包括信函、电邮、日记、通知、广告、电话、便条等形式。它要求考生不仅能表达题中的主要内容，还能够正确地运用各种文本格式进行规范的书写。2.看图作文。看图作文要求根据图片的内容与所给的汉语或英语提示相结合进行写作，要求文章有较好的连贯性。3.提示作文。提示作文也称之为提供材料作文，是近几年常考到的一种题型。它要求根据汉语意思和英语提示词，写出意思连贯的英语文段

2、。这种题型已将所要叙述的事情列出，只是要求学生根据所给的提示，利用合理的想象，运用一定的语言逻辑，使用正确的语法和句法，将整篇的文字用英语表达出来。二、应试里需注意1.仔细审题。在动笔之前，细读题目中的每一项要求，做到明确文章的主旨，确定写作体裁，掌握所要表达的要点。只有透彻地理解了题意，弄清了试题的要求，才能写出完整、通顺的文章。 2. 列出要点。我们所说的要点就是指所给材料之中包含的主要内容。所罗列出的要点一定要全、细、准，然后根据要点及内在联系标出先后顺序，分出层次。其实这也是在进行文章的构思，因此一定要做到中心突出、条理清晰。3. 正确书写，检查修改。在此过程中，一定要保证写出的每一个

3、句子准确无误。要尽量套用一些学过的句型，切忌写出没有把握的句子。不会表达时，另辟蹊径。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达，可采用变通的办法，化难为易、化繁为简,长句变短句。注定简单句五大基本句型。注意使用复合句。此外还应注意时态、语态、人称、动词形式、名词单复数、冠词、形容词副词连词等的使用，一定要做到表达顺畅，无语法错误。除此之外，还需检查修改已书写好的文章。在检查修改的过程中，一定要从以下几个方面入手：（1）检查要点是否完整。（2）检查文章的格式是否规范。（3）检查单词是否拼写正确。（4）检查句子有无语法错误。（5）检查行文是否连贯。是否使用了恰当的关联词或者复合句使文章内容完整、逻辑合理

4、、连接自然。表示并列关系的：and, as well as, or表示转折关系的：but, yet, however表示时间关系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that表示先后顺序的：First, Second, Third, Next, Then, Finally表示因果关系的：so, therefore, as a result表示目的关系的：in order to，in order that，so as to, so that表示列举说明的：for example , such as表示总结陈词的：in general, in all,

5、 in a word, generally speaking（ 6）检查标点是否有遗漏。优秀的作文应符合以下要求：包含了所有要点、应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇、句子通顺、行文连贯、真的不掉线吗？、？结构合理，层次清晰表达清楚、几乎没有语法错误。由以上可以看出，精彩的写作不是在高级的词汇及从句的堆积下取得的，而是在熟练掌握英文词汇、语法的基础上，合理运用写作技巧得到的。读和写是相辅相成的。因此，在复习中还要扩大阅读量，这必定也会提高书面表达能力。练习与范文一上周初三年级同学进行了一次体检，结果发现同学们的视力下降。请你用英语向全班同学报告原因（如图所示）。并提出倡议：爱护我们的眼睛 养成好的读书

6、习惯 要求： 1. 写出所给要点，不必逐字翻译。 2. 要用所给提示词语，做到语句连贯。 3. 全文字数60-70左右，开头和结尾不计入总数。提示词语：poorer and poorerbecome shortsightedreading habitBoys and girls:Most of us paid little attention to protecting our eyesight. So the examination report is not very good. _I really hope all of us are well. Many thanks!范文：Most

7、of us paid little attention to protecting our eyesight. So the examination report is not very good. Two thirds of the students spend too much time on TV, playing computer games or their eyes are too tired. A quarter of us are reading while lying in bed or walking. And a few read books both in strong

8、 sunlight and in the dark light.With the time passing on, the eyesight becomes poorer and poorer. Well regret if we are shortsighted. It is important for us to form a good reading habit. Lets take care of our eyes!I really hope all of us are well. Many thanks.二写一篇有关你和你就读的学校开展体育活动的短文。要求：所写短文必须包括以下提示要

9、点；意思表达清楚，文句通顺、连贯，单词拼写正确， 标点无误；至少写出7个句子，字数70左右。(不包括已经给出的句子)。 要点：1学校每年秋季举办运动会。去年运动会上你获跳远第一名。 2同学们通常有早锻炼、做眼保健操、课后有时打篮球或踢足球。 3介绍你最喜欢(favourite)参加和观看的运动项目。 4运动有益于身体健康(health)，你准备进行更多锻炼。My School SportI study at No. 2 Middle School. 真的不掉线吗？、？范文：My School SportI study at No. 2 Middle School. There is a spo

10、rts meeting in our school every autumn/Our school holds a sports meeting every autumn/A sports meeting is held in our school every autumn. I took the first place/was first in the long jump/won the long jump last year. We usually take exercise in the early morning. We do eye exercises in the afternoo

11、n. After school/class we play basketball or football. My favourite sport is football/I like football best. I often watch a football match on TV on Sundays. I think(doing)sport is good for our health/(doing) sport makes us heathier and stronger. I am going to take/do more exercise/do more sport.三. 假设

12、你叫李华，你的英国笔友Linda为了来中国参观奥运会而报名参加了汉语培训班学习汉语。她最近写信向你询问学习外语的建议。请根据下列提示和你学习英语的体会给Linda写一封回信。注意：1回信需要包括全部要点；2开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3字数60左右。Dear Linda,Im very glad that youll come to China to watch the Olympic Games. I know it isnt easy tolearn a foreign language, but I have some ideas that may help. _Best wishe

13、s and looking forward to meeting you in China.Yours,Li HuaPossible version:范文：Dear Linda，Im very glad that youll come to China to watch the Olympic Games. I know it isnt easy to learn a foreign language, but I have some ideas that may help. Firstly, its very important to listen to the teacher carefu

14、lly in class and make some notes so that you can go over your lessons later. Secondly, try to catch every chance to practice speaking, both in and out of class. Dont be afraid of making mistakes. Then try to listen and read more in Chinese. Whats more, youd better plan your time well and study it re

15、gularly every day. Above all, you should be confident in yourself and dont give up whenever you meet with difficulty. Im sure you will succeed through your hard work.Best wishes and looking forward to meeting you in China.Yours,Li Hua真的不掉线吗？、？四在今年的“地球一小时(Earth Hour)”活动中，中国很多城市的人们都自熄灯一小时，体现了低碳生活的新理念。

16、假定你是CCTV9的记者，请你根据以下采访信息用英语写一篇80个词左右的新闻稿。注意：部分内容已为你写好，不计入总词数。Thank you for joining CCTVs Around China show! Now its 8:45 p.m. during the famous Earth Hour. People in many cities have turned off their lights and are having a very special time. In Shanghai,_Many people share with us their plans. _【范文】T

17、hank you for joining CCTVs Around China show! Now its 8:45 p.m. during the famous Earth Hour. People in many cities have turned off their lights and are having a very special time. In Shanghai, some people are taking a walk with their family. They feel very relaxed. In Beijing, some people are havin

18、g a nice talk with their friends. And in Ninbo, some young people are holding a party in the park, singing and dancing. Without lights, people can also enjoy themselves.Many people share with us their plans. Some say they will spend more time with their family and friends. Others say they will try t

19、heir best to protect the environment, like planting more trees, saving water and so on. Whats more, some people tell me that they will use paper both sides(drive less, ride bikes, use plastic bags less)in their daily life五在你的成长过程中，家人（父母、祖父母等）倾注了大量的心血。他们对你的生活和学习除了给予关心、帮助外，也会提出一些建议。A）请根据你的情况，列举五点家人给予你

20、的关心、帮助或建议，用简短的文字分别填入96100空白圆框内。（共5小题；每小题1分，总分5分）B）请根据上面圆框中的内容，选择一点或几点写一篇短文，向你的好友谈谈你的家人给予你的关心、帮助或建议以及你的想法。要求： 1. 词数80左右（不包括文中第一句所给出的词）。 2. 条理清楚，语意连贯，句式规范，字迹工整。 3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。参考词汇：be strict with sb. 对某人严格要求；allow sb. to do sth.允许某人干某事_is / are very kind and helpful. _参考范例：My parents are very

21、kind and helpful. They cook meals and wash clothes for me every day. At the weekend, they often prepare some of my favorite food. Sometimes they also help me with my lessons. They are very strict with me, but when I make a mistake, they first listen to me and then have a talk with me instead of just

22、 complaining about it. They always try to understand me. I think that is a good way for a child to grow up. With their care, I am living and studying happily.真的不掉线吗？、？六暑假就要到了，你的外籍教师Mr. Green 打算用10天左右的时间出去旅游。他从网上查到了一些相关信息，但是自己无法确定哪条线路最佳，他希望你能帮助他分析并做出选择。他的要求是： 1. 大约10天。 2. 价格适中。 3. 能够看到不同风格类型的风景。下面是他所

23、查到的一些信息，请你选择其中一条线路并把你做出此选择的理由写下来，字数80100。 1. 10 Days of Selected（精选的）China Tour Beijing, Xian, Guilin, Shanghai Price: $ 1265 a person. 2. 11 Days of China Grand Tour Beijing, Suzhou, Shanghai, HainanPrice: $ 1270 a person 参考范例：I think youd better take the “11 Days of China Grand Tour.” First, thats

24、 the days you want, about 10 days. Second, it is cheaper. Third, you can see different kinds of scenery during this trip. Youll visit two important cities of China-Beijing and Shanghai. In these two cities, youll visit the Forbidden City, the Great Wall, the Temple of Heaven, the Shanghai Museum and

25、 the Oriental Pearl TV Tower. So you can experience old and new China. Suzhou is famous for silk and beautiful gardens. Hainan has different kinds of weather and scenery. There are many things to see, such as Wanquan River, Hairui Tomb and Tianya Haijiao. There is also scuba diving, fishing and boat

26、ing I think youll have a wonderful time.七最近，晨晖英语报以“你心目中的好老师是什么样子的？” “一名受欢迎的老师应该有什么样的特点？”为题展开调查和讨论，结果如下（黑影部分）： 请根据上图提示，给合你自己的观点，围绕“What is my favorite teacher like? Why?”这个主题，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。 参考答案（one possible version）Firstly a teacher should be able to play different roles in school.He can care about

27、 us like a mother.He can give us knowledge like a tutor.And he can play games and discuss problems with us like a friend.Secondly,a teacher should be patient and helpful.When we are in trouble,he can always help us patiently.Thirdly,a teacher should be fair.He should have the same rule for everybody

28、.No one can break them.Fourthly,a teacher should be fun.He can make his class interesting and make us laugh.八中学生学习时间长、压力大，专家建议学生每天课后应采取适当的方式放松自己。某英文报“学生习作”专栏正在就“学生适当的放松方式”这一话题进行征文。假设你是二十二中初三（3）班的班长，最近你对班上同学课后放松方式进行了调查。请根据提供的调查信息和要求写一篇短文向该报投稿。 对 象 二十二中初三（3）班 人 数 60人（男：31人；女：29人） 常用放松方式 1.看电视（30人） 2.玩电脑游戏（12人） 3.听音乐（8人） 4.进行体育锻炼（5人） 5.没有时间放松（5人） 你的观点 哪一种（些）放松方式是适当的？ 为什么？ 注意： 1.短文包括对调查相关信息的介绍和你自己的观点； 2.词数：80-100。题目和