雅思写作语料库政府应否限制极限运动.docx

1、雅思写作语料库政府应否限制极限运动雅思写作语料库:政府应否限制极限运动Somepeoplethinkthegovernmentshouldbandangeroussportsandsomeothersthinkitisafreedomtochoosetheactivitieswewantto.Discussbothviewandgiveyouropinion.有人认为政府应该限制危险性的运动,有人认为人人有权利选择自己喜爱的运动。讨论两种观点,给出你的意见。(20xx年7月30日=20xx年8月9日)【头脑风暴导言】通常,令我们敬重和欣赏之人皆有共性:第一,他们做了我们渴望做,但是,却未敢尝试

2、的事情。第二,他们成功地做成了我们尝试未果的事情。深海潜水,让人探究神秘的海底世界;勇攀高峰,让人体味一览众山小的豪情;海上帆板,让人感受劈风斩浪的激情。探索未知是人之本性,挑战自我是人之追求。完善自我保护,加强专业训练,若如此,人人都应尝试一些极限运动。【立场】人生没有冒险就不能称其为人生(支持极限运动)。【文章布局】:首段:背景介绍+作家立场二段:正方观点的展开(我的口吻谈及极限运动的利好)三段:反方观点的展开(我的口吻谈及极限运动的弊端)尾段:再次亮明观点+提出建议【语料库】极限运动危险运动的类型:1.bungeejumpingn蹦极2.paraglidingn跳伞3.surfingn海

3、上冲浪4.scuba-diving=deepseadivingn深海潜水5.rockclimbingn攀岩极限运动之多元表达:1.runtheriskofdoingsthv冒险做2.dangeroussportsactivitiesn危险性体育运动3.challengingsportseventsn充满挑战性的竞技体育4.extremeadventuresn极限运动5.extremesportsn极限运动支持极限运动:1.forgeonesfortitudev铸造人的坚韧性2.chastenonestenacityv磨练人的顽强 3.fosteronesfrustrationtoleratio

4、nv培养人的挫折忍受能力4.Iftheyarebanned,thenmanysportswouldgounderground.如果被限制,很多体育项目会消失。5.surpassoneselfv超越自我反对极限运动:1.sufferfrominjuriesorevendeathsv遭遇伤害甚至死亡2.becomeanexcuseforviolencev成为暴力的借口作家立场:1.greaterattemptsshouldbemadetopreventaccidentsorinjuriesv我们应该做出努力预防以外事故和伤害2.ensuresportsarechallenging,exciting

5、andamusingv确保运动是充满挑战,令人兴奋,使人愉快的。【原创范文】:首段:背景介绍+作家立场Suchishumannaturetoexploretheunknown.Atrendisthatnumerouspeoplearekeenonembarkingonchallengingsportseventssuchasmountainbiking,rockclimbingorscubadiving,especiallyamongthosedynamicyoungadults.mystandisthatweshouldpursueexcitementandsenseofrefreshmen

6、tinthedullroutinedailylife.Afterall,lifewithoutriskisnolifeatall.【解析】:Lifewithoutriskisnolifeatall人生没有冒险就不能称其为人生。二段:正方观点的展开:granted,manyvirtuescouldbegainedviaundertakingthoseriskysportsactivities.primarily,theextremeadventurescanbetakenasaneffectivewaytohelpplayersrelievetheirpressureandventtheirne

7、gativeemotions,fortheoccupiedmodernlifeoftendeprivesonesrightofseekingrelaxation.thepopularityofbungeejumpingaccountsforriskysportssignificantfunctionintermsofreducingstress.Imaginably,onesworkingefficiencycouldbehighlyenhancedafterdoinghisorherfavoritesportsevents.moreover,notonlycantheextremeadven

8、turesexertwholesomeimpacts,butitalsocouldfosteronesskills,chastenonestenacityandforgeonesfrustrationtoleration.Someextremeadventures,suchasrockclimbingandsurfing,requireshightechniquesormuchstamina.Ultimately,theextremeadventurescouldbedevelopedintotemptingtourismitems,whichcouldgenerateimmenseecono

9、micvalue.【解析】:1.theextremeadventurescanbetakenasaneffectivewaytohelpplayersrelievetheirpressureandventtheirnegativeemotions.极限运动是一种很好的方式去帮助运动者缓解压力,释放不良情绪。2.Italsocouldfosteronesskills,chastenonestenacityandforgeonesfrustrationtoleration.极限运动同意可以培养人的技能,磨练人的坚韧,铸造人的挫折忍受能力。三段:反方观点的展开:Nonetheless,problem

10、sinvariablyensue.onepossibledownsideisthatsomeperiloussportsactivitiesmightbecometherootsofinjuriesandagonies.thereexisthighlevelsofinjuries,whichsometimesdisablesplayersandevenruinstheirlives.Anotheradverseaspectisthatsomeintenseextremesportsaremerelyanexcuseforviolence.toillustrate,boxinginvolvese

11、xcessiveviolenceandbloodycontentssothatitadverselyinfluencesadolescenttelevisionviewers,namely,itmightarousetheirsadisticimpulses.【解析】:1.Someintenseextremesportsaremerelyanexcuseforviolence.一些极限运动也许会成为暴力的借口。2.Itmightarousetheirsadisticimpulses.极限运动也许会诱发一个人施虐的冲动。尾段:再次亮明观点+提出建议personally,Iencouragethe

12、extremeadventures,foritsymbolizesfreedom,soitiscitizenselementaryrighttooptforhisorherfavoritesportsactivities.Attemptsshouldbemadetoensureriskysportseventsarethrilling,amusingandprofit-making,however,topreventaccidentsandinjuriesishighlyrecommended(328) 【解析】:Attemptsshouldbemadetoensureriskysportseventsarethrilling,amusingandprofit-making.我们应该做出努力去保证极限运动是刺激的、有趣的、盈利的。