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1、中考英语书面表达中考英语书面表达一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1“扬帆起航新学期，学姐学长提建议”。你马上就要毕业了，在初中的学习和生活中你一定有很多收获，请给学弟学妹们提几点建议吧！要求：1. 内容完整，语言流畅，书写规范清晰。2. 短文中不能出现正式姓名，校名。100 词左右。【答案】Im going to graduate from junior high school. As your senior, I have some suggestions to the young.As old saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack

2、a dull boy. To begin with, you should arrange both your study and life properly.Moreover, you should get along well with others. To have more friends, not enemies.Last but not least, you could be active in school team work. Ability is as important as your study, you can also enjoy your colorful scho

3、ol life as wellI hope these suggestions could make your junior school-life more wonderful.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be going to，graduate from，to begin with，bothand，get along well with others，be active in，as important as，as well等。而To begin with,/ Moreover,/ Last but not least,等短语的运用，既丰富了短文内容

4、，使表达多样化，更使短文很有条理，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。2每一次变化都伴随着我们的成长，作为初中生的你，你感觉自已比起小时候有了哪些变化?请写一篇文章描述一下你认为最明显的变化。要点包括: 1. 变化是什么?2. 变化是如何发生的?3. 变化后有什么感受

5、?_【答案】The biggest personal change Ive ever made is falling in love with rending.When I was a child, I didnt enjoy reading books at all. Later, my mother always read stories for me and bought me a lot of books. Gradually I began to love reading. While reading, I feel like I am talking with a wise man

6、. Reading is also a fantastic way to pass my free time.Books are my friends. They will continue to benefit me even more.【解析】【分析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍我比起小时候有了哪些变化。【详解】结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般过去时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：When I was，my mother always read，Gradually I began to，Books are等句

7、式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我最大的个人变化是喜欢上读书，接下来介绍我小时候不喜欢读书，最后指出现在书籍是我的朋友。此处fall in love in, at all, buy sb sth, begin to do sth, love doing sth, feel like, talk with, continue to do sth等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。3书面表达随着电子时代的到来，西方文化如潮水般涌来，中国传统文化的传承面临着巨大的挑战。有人认为学校应当开设传统文化课（set

8、 up traditional culture classes），但也有人认为没有必要。假如你是Mike,请你用英语写一封邮件，给你校英文报投稿写一篇短文，词数80左右，谈谈你对开设传统文化课的看法。Your opinionnecessary or unnecessaryYour reasonsthe root （根） of Chinese culture, know more about,spread, developYour suggestionDear editor,As we all know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great

9、 challenge because of the rapid development if international technology nowadays. _ Yours,Mike【答案】Dear editor, As we know, Chinese traditional culture is facing a great challenge because of the rapid development of international technology nowadays. In my opinion, its necessary for schools to set up

10、 traditional culture classes. First, traditional culture is the root of Chinese. As Chinese, we shouldnt give up our traditional culture and run after Western culture. Second, traditional culture classes can give students chances to know more about our nation. They can raise their sense of national

11、pride. Last but not least, setting up traditional culture classes can spread and develop our Chinese culture.All in all, it is of great importance to set up traditional culture classes in schools. Lets call on more schools to set up traditional culture classes!Yours,Mike【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，谈谈我对开设传统文化课的看法。

12、结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Chinese traditional culture is facing，its necessary for schools to，we shouldnt，They can raise，it is of great importance to等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了中国传统文化面对的问题，接下来介绍我认为开设传统文化课的必要性的原因，最后号召更

13、多的学校开设传统文化课。此处because of， in ones opinion, give up, know about, last but not least, set up, all in all, call on等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。4书面表达同学们，中考后就会迎来漫长的暑假了，班会课上老师组织大家讨论假期学习和生活计划。假如你是李华，请根据以下内容提示用英语向同学们汇报一下你的计划。内容提示：暑假计划学习博览群书；学习技能 （或自拟一点）生活健康饮食；坚持锻炼 （或自拟一点）其它热爱公益；亲近自然 （或自拟一点）注意：1. 表达中必须包括所给要点，可以适当发挥，不要简单

14、翻译。2. 词数90左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。Dear classmates,Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it._ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. Thats all. Thank you.【答案】Dear classmates,Summer holiday is coming, and here is my plan for it.First, Id like to cho

15、ose several good books and read them carefully. This can help me open my mind and learn more about the world. I also think its necessary for me to learn at least one skill. Im interested in cooking, so I will learn to cook some delicious dishes during the holiday.Second, health is the most important

16、. So I will eat healthily and exercise more. I plan to eat more fruit and vegetables and keep running every day.Third, its a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need. I will pay more attention to protecting our environment so that we can make our Eart

17、h a better world. Also, travelling out is a good choice. While travelling, we can be close to nature and learn about different cultures. We have more chances to search the Internet. I know unhealthy websites are harmful to us. I will say no to them.I hope all of you can enjoy the coming holiday. Tha

18、ts all. Thank you.【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如Id like to do，help me open my mind，at least，be interested in，during the holiday，plan to do，join in，be kind to someone in need，pay more attention to，be close to nature，search the Internet等。而First, Id like to choose several good books and re

19、ad them carefully./ Second, health is the most important./Third, its a good idea to join in some charity activities because we should be kind to someone in need.等表顺序词和综合句式的运用，既使短文层次清晰，又丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单

20、词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。5假设你是来自中国的中学生李华,打算参加当地组织的国外冬令营,看完了这个网页后,你打算给Liz Payne留言,表达你在冬令营期间想去London Canal Museum参观的愿望。内容包括：1.简单介绍自己；2.留言目的（包含冬令营的时间,听Liz Payne的讲座）；3.预期收获。作文要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现学校真实的名称和学生的真实姓名；2.语句连贯,词数80个左右。作文的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数,也不必抄写在答题卡上。Dear Liz Payne,Im Li Hua,_Yours,Li H

21、ua【答案】Dear Liz Payne,Im Li Hua, a middle school student learning in Grade 3 in China. Im writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation. I hope to have a chance to visit London Canal Museum. From www.canalmuseum.org.uk, I know you will have a report “An Update

22、on the Cotswold Canals”February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp. And I also hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal. Whats more, I hope to learn more about London Canal Museum and even more about th

23、e UK.Im looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Hua【解析】这篇作文要求我们以中学生李华的身份，给Liz Payne写一个留言。文章内容主要包括三个部分：首先是介绍自己的身份；然后写留言的目的，包括冬令营的时间、想要去参观London Canal Museum以及听Liz Payne的讲座；最后简单介绍一下你的预期的收获。写作时，应根据题目的这些要求，组织语言，串联成一篇短文。通过分析可知，这篇短文应使用第一人称I来叙述，时态应以一般将来时态和一般现在时为主。注意英语句子的表达和汉语习惯是不同的，不能逐词翻译，而应从句子的整体考虑，使用正确的句式

24、结构以及适当的词汇、短语和句型，保证句子的准确性和语言的地道。另外还应注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。穿插一些高级词汇和复杂句式，提升文章档次和水平，使表达更加流畅。点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，包含了题目要求的所有信息，没有遗漏要点。作者主要从三个方面叙述：首先介绍了自己的身份和写留言的目的；接下来详细介绍了自己参加这次冬令营的愿望；最后是一个简单的结尾。如果分段叙述效果则会更好，那样会使文章的层次更加清晰。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以第一人称、一般将来时和一般现在时为主，谓语动词形式准发，语法规范，符合英语句子的表达习惯。短文以简单句结构为主，也使用了

25、一些复合句和较高级的句型，如Im writing to tell you that our city will have a Winter Camp during this winter vacation.中使用了宾语从句；From www.canalmuseum.org.uk, I know you will have a report “An Update on the Cotswold Canals” February 6th, which will happen during the same period of our Winter Camp.中有一个非限制性定语从句；And I a

26、lso hope to listen to your talk so that I can know more about the Stroudwater Canal, the Thames and Severn Canal.中有一个结果状语从句等。整篇文章语句通顺、意思连贯、表达流畅。6 假如你是李华，你的英国笔友 Jack 给你写邮件表达了想参加你校暑期为外国学生举办的汉语夏令营的愿望，希望你告知活动举办的具体时间地点，活动安排以及你的建议。提示词语： Chinese classes, learn, attend, culture, prepare提示问题： When and where

27、will the Chinese Summer Camp be held? What activities will be held at the Chinese Summer Camp? What is your advice for Jack?Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp in ourschool this summer holiday . .Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack,I am very glad to know that you are interested in the Chinese Summer Camp i