届高考英语书面表达专题集结应用文写作 回复信.docx

1、届高考英语书面表达专题集结应用文写作 回复信回复信1、假如你是李华,收到笔友Mary的如下来信。请你针对信中Mary遇到的问题进行回复,给她提出建议。Dear Li Hua, How are you? I am having trouble with my deskmate Jenny at the moment. Last week, we had a maths test. The test was important and everyone had prepared for it except Jenny. During the test, she asked me to help h

2、er. I refused and didnt let her copy from my paper. As a result, she failed the test. She is angry with me and hasnt talked to me since then. Now I dont know how to deal with this problem. Can you give me some advice? Im looking forward to your reply.Yours,Mary1.写作要点: 给Jenny写信,告诉她诚实的重要性及作弊的坏处; 帮助她学习

3、数学,使她对学习数学充满信心; 如果她的英语比你好,可以让她帮你学英语,因为互帮互助可以加深(deepen)友谊。2.词数100左右(开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。DearMary, Imsorryyouarehavingtroublewithyourfriend._ Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua答案：Dear Mary, Im sorry you are having trouble with your friend. Here are some tips that may help you. First, if she doesnt talk to you, why

4、 not write to her? You can explain the importance of honesty and the harm of cheating in the exam. Im sure she will understand you. Also, you can try to help her with her maths. Only in this way can she make progress and believe in herself. If she is better than you in English, you can ask her to he

5、lp you with your English. Im sure your friendship will be deepened by helping each other. Best wishes.Yours,Li Hua2、假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫Tiger Mom的学生家长的博客上,你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求,给这位家长回复。 Im the mother of a fourteen-year-old girl. I have a rule for my daughter : be among the top 5 students or get punish

6、ed in one way or another.She has been doing very well in school,but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong?写作要点:1. 表明自己的看法;2. 陈述自己的理由(可举例说明);3. 提出至少两条建议。要求:1. 短文词数不少于100(不含已写好的部分);2. 内容充实,结构完整,语意连贯;3. 书写必须清晰、工整。Hi, Tiger Mom, What puzzles you is actually

7、 a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is _Yours sincerely,Li Hua答案： Hi ,TigerMom. What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so. Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future u

8、niversity admission, development in wisdom, emotion, health, and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us.Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents a

9、llows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore, punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically. So I suggest that you take your friends advice. More importantly, let her live like a lovely girl; let her have more friends and social activities; and l

10、et her make mistakes of her own as we teenagers often do.解析：亮点句式:What puzzles you is.My idea is that it is .The reason is that.So I suggest that.名师点评:本文从论点、论据和论证三个方面,较好地表达了自己的观点。全文时态正确,句型丰富,过渡自然,实为一篇佳作。3、假设你是李津,与你以前的外籍教师 Mrs. Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况,请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。(1)简要介绍自己的学习和生活;(2)告知你已成为八月底在津举办的

11、第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍为此所做的准备(如深入了解天津等);(3)希望她有机会重访天津。注意:(1)词数不少于100;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;(3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:第十三届全运会 the 13th National GamesDear Mrs. Green,Im glad to hear from you._Yours,Li Jin答案：Dear Mrs. Green,Im so glad to hear from you. Im writing to tell you something about my life and study in re

12、cent days. Im very busy with my lessons now, for the Entrance Examination, which is very important to me, is near,. Every day, I have to spend most of my time in studying. As a result, I dont have enough time to take exercise, whats worse, I dont communicate a lot with my parents and my friends.By t

13、he way, I am now a volunteer for the the 13th National Games, which will be held at the end of August in Tianjin. In order to be a qualified volunteer, I have to improve myself by reading some books about Tianjin so as to know more about it. Will you please pay a visit to Tianjin again so that we ma

14、y meet again, for I miss you very much !Looking forward to seeing you a second time.Yours,Li Jin4、假定你是李华,你的新西兰朋友Terry将去中国朋友家做客,发邮件向你询问有关习俗。请你回复邮件。内容包括:1.到达时间;2.合适的礼物;3.餐桌礼仪;注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。_答案：Dear Terry, How are you doing? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to a Ch

15、inese friends home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details. To begin with, according to our tradition, you are supposed to arrive early, so that you can help the family prepare the dinner, which is meaningful and interesting. Besides, youd better bring some gifts, like a book or a

16、Chinese knot. Whats more, when you are enjoying the meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing food. Hopefully, these suggestions would be helpful for you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time. Best wishes!Yours,LiHua解析：本文是一篇书信类应用文写作。餐桌礼仪也是考生比较熟悉的话题。成文时注意以下几点:一、内容要点要齐全1.到达时

17、间;2.合适的礼物;3.餐桌礼仪。二、时态:主要用一般现在时和将来时;三、人称:二、三人称。四、注意使用恰当的高级词汇、短语或句型,以提高作文的水平;五、适当使用一些连接词和插入语,使文章表达自然、流畅。点睛:本文虽然看起来比较容易,但学生真正动起笔来,还是比较困惑的。原因为:1.看起来中国餐桌礼仪很熟悉,但内容很多,一时间不知道该写什么;2.100单词左右,写出到达时间;合适的礼物;餐桌礼仪三个内容,信息量大,选择有困难;应对方法:近年来高考写作的命题常用的思想就是高起点低落点。高起点题目很高,中国文化,中国故事,中国礼仪等等,但最终都把它们落在应用文的框架里,这就是低落点。写这样的作文,一

18、定要注意不能写过于具体的内容,要找最重要的,最熟悉的写,不要面面俱到,中国餐桌礼仪内容太多,100单词无法写。找重点,以点带面。但选择重要内容本身就是一种能力。5、假设你是李华,你的朋友,英国留学生Tom想参加本校举行的中国厨艺挑战赛,向你征求意见。请你回复邮件,内容包括:1.赞成他参与挑战;2.建议他提高厨艺(例如加入市厨艺协会、结交厨友、下载手机APP等);3.表达祝福。注意:词数100左右;可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:中国厨艺Chinese Cooking;协会association;下载download.Dear Tom, I am mor

19、e than happy to know that you want to take part in the School Chinese Cooking Challenge._YoursLi Hua答案：Dear Tom, I am more than happy to know that you want to take part in the School Chinese Cooking Challenge. Since you are fond of Chinese food, please sign up soon. I consider it a good chance for y

20、ou to know more as well as a challenge. As your Chinese friend, Id like to give you some practical suggestions to help you prepare better. For example, you can join the Chinese Cooking Association in our city, where you can make friends with a lot of food lovers and exchange ideas with them. In addi

21、tion, its a good idea for you to download some APPs on your mobile phone, so that you can watch videos online and learn more about various Chinese food, which can be of great help. Im greatly convinced that what I have mentioned above can help you improve your cooking skills. I sincerely hope that y

22、ou can win this competition at last.Yours.Li Hua6、假如你是一名英国学生Harry,有一位中国笔友Li Hua想了解一下你的家乡爱丁堡,请你根据提示回复一封电子邮件。注意:开头部分已给出,不计入总词数。爱丁堡:苏格兰的首府,政治和文化中心。人口:133万。面积:260平方公里 (square kilometers)。地理位置:苏格兰 (Scotland) 的东南部。交通:机场位于市中心,公共交通十分便利。天气:气候温和 (mild climate)。旅游:最受欢迎的旅游城市;古老建筑众多;每年吸引200多万名游客,是理想的度假胜地。词数:110左右。Dear Li Hua, How are things with you? Today Im writing to tell you something about Edinburgh which you asked about in the last e-mail._