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1、英语四级作文范文 本文由liunian9051贡献 2011英语四级热点范文(1) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion? You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline （given in Chinese） below: 1）有的人喜欢独自旅行，有的人喜欢与别人结伴而

2、行 2）两种旅行方式的好处 3）你更喜欢哪种旅行方式，为什么? Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion? 行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出两种不同的旅行方式，提纲第2点要求分别阐述两种旅行方式的好处，提纲第3点要求表明“我”的倾向，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出人们对旅行方式的不同偏好：有人喜欢独自旅行，有人喜欢结伴旅行;对比阐述独自旅行和结伴旅行各自的好处;表明“我”更喜欢于哪种旅行方式，并说明理由。 高分范文 Travel Alone or Travel with a Companion?

3、1When it comes to traveling way, different people will offer different opinions. 2Some people like to travel alone, 2while others prefer to travel with a companion. 3Of course, everyone has his consideration for his preference. 4Traveling alone, one can enjoy more freedom. The traveler can arrange h

4、is tour as he wishes without the trouble of humoring others. 3Moreover, traveling alone 5tend to bring the traveler 6unexpected surprise, 7such as making a new friend and enjoying a different scenery. 8Compared with traveling alone, traveling with a companion has also its advantages. 3For one thing,

5、 the group members can help and look after each other in the journey. 3For another, 4traveling with others who have same interest with, you can share costs and experiences with them. 9As to me, I prefer to travel with a companion. 3Firstly, we can deal with the possible problems and difficulties in

6、the journey. 3Secondly, I like to share the pleasure of traveling with others. 3In sum, 10both traveling alone and traveling with a companion have their attractions, and you can find the pleasure from either one. 亮点点评 1“当涉及到或谈到时”。 2用于提出两种不同的观点、态度或喜好。 3过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 4现在分词短语作伴随状语。 5“倾向，趋于”。 6“意

7、外的惊喜”。 7表示列举。 8“和相比”。 9用于引出自己的观点或选择。 10“或者，或者”。 佳句临摩 1.佳句：When it comes to traveling way, different people will offer different opinions. 临摩：当谈到是否应该取消“黄金周”假期时，人们的看法各不相同。 . 2.佳句：Compared with traveling alone, traveling with a companion has also its advantages. 临摩：和城市相比，乡村的经济相对落后。 3. 3.佳句：Both traveli

8、ng alone and traveling with a companion have their attractions, and you can find the pleasure from either one. 临摩：网络教学和传统教学都有其各自的优点，因此，我们应该将二者相结合。 . KEY: 1. When it comes to whether we should cancel the “golden week” holiday, different people will offer different opinions. 2. Compared with the citie

9、s, the countryside is relatively backward in economy. 3. Both network teaching and traditional school teaching have their advantages. Therefore, we should combine these two teaching ways. 2011英语四级热点范文(2) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic The Mo

10、onlight Clan. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on the outline （given in Chinese） below: 1）现在很多年轻人每个月都把自己赚的钱花光，他们被称作“月光族” 2）有人认为这是一种时尚的消费观念，但很多人反对这样消费 3）我对此的看法是 The Moonlight Clan 行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点针对该现象提出两种不同的观点，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的看法，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。 根据所给提纲，本

11、文应包含如下内容：描述“月光族”现象，引出对这一现象的不同看法;对比阐述两种看法各自的理由;表明“我”对“月光族”的看法并说明理由。 高分范文 The Moonlight Clan Nowadays, more and more people, 1especially the young are joining in the army of “the moonlight clan”. These people exhaust their earnings every month without any savings. 2Many people think this is a fashiona

12、ble life style, 2while more other people object to this kind of consumption style. 3Those who support “the moonlight clan” think that those people know how to enjoy life and have a higher life quality. 3However, more other people criticize “the moonlight clan”. They say that the consumption habit of

13、 “the moonlight clan” is unhealthy and sometimes wasteful. In addition, no savings will 4place “the moonlight clan” in a difficult position 5in case of unexpected expenses. 6Weighing these two arguments, I prefer to the latter one. In my eyes, 7though “the moonlight clan” may acquire temporary satis

14、faction from their consumption, 8in the long term, it 9is unfavorable to their family and career. 10Just as a proverb says, one should always prepare for a rainy day. 亮点点评 1“尤其，特别”。 2用于提出两种对立观点。 3用于引出两种对立观点各自的理由。 4“使处于艰难的境地”。 5“以防，万一”。 6用于表明“我”的倾向。 7though引导让步状语从句。 8“从长远来看”。 9“对不利”。 10引用谚语结尾，值得借鉴。 佳

15、句临摩 1.佳句：Many people think this is a fashionable life style, while more other people object to this kind of consumption style. 临摩：勇敢的人往往会获得更多的机会，而懦弱的人面对机会也有可能错过。 . 2.佳句：Those who support “the moonlight clan” think that those people know how to enjoy life and have a higher life quality. 临摩：持悲观态度的那些人认

16、为地球上有限的能源很快就会枯竭。 . 3.佳句：Just as a proverb says, o , one should always prepare for a rainy day. 临摩：正如一句谚语所说的，“机会只给那些有准备的人。” . KEY: 1. Brave people tend to get more opportunities while timid ones may miss them when chances come. 2. Those who hold pessimistic attitudes think that limited energy on eart

17、h will be exhausted soon. 3. Just as a proverb says, “Opportunities are only for the prepared minds.” 2011英语四级热点范文(3) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic A Food Poisoning Accident. You should write at least 120 words, and base your composition on

18、 the outline （given in Chinese） below: 你的几个同学因食用了从某超市买回的食品而中毒，幸亏及时治疗而脱险。请描述他（们）中毒与脱险的过程，并呼吁要加强食品安全。 A Food Poisoning Accident 行文思路 本题属于情景式命题。提纲要求描述一件事情的经过，由此可判断本文应为记叙文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：交待食物中毒的背景和原因;叙述中毒的和脱险的经过;谈谈由此引发的感想，呼吁加强食品安全。 高分范文 A Food Poisoning Accident Last month, I 1witnessed a food poison

19、ing accident 2happening to my classmates. At that time the situation was really very dangerous and urgent. Though finally they got out of danger, this accident 3is still vivid in my mind. That day was Julies birthday, one of my classmates. In order to celebrate it, her roommates bought a big birthda

20、y cake for her from a supermarket nearby. They shared the cake happily. 4However, after a while, all of them felt abdominal pain, nausea and dizziness. Two of them even cannot stand up because of great pain. We 5rushed to send them to the hospital. 6It turned out that the cake they ate had expired i

21、ts guarantee period. Futunately, 7due to timely treatment, they all recovered very soon. 4However, this accident 8leaves me a deep ponder. I think it is very urgent to take effective measures to improve food safety. 4Firstly, the government should 9strengthen supervision and administration on food s

22、afety. 4More importantly, to those who immoral businessmen, more strict punishment should be given. 4Besides, we consumers should be more careful in buying food. 10Only in this way can we make sure that no same accident happens. 亮点点评 1“目睹，目击”。 2“发生在某人身上”，现在分词短语作定语。 3“仍然令我记忆犹新”。 4过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。

23、 5“闻讯赶来”。 6“结果是，原来是”。 7“由于及时的治疗”。 8“留给我深深的思考”。 9“加强监管”。 10“only+状语”位于句首，引起句子部分倒装。 佳句临摩 1.佳句：Though finally they got out of danger, this accident is still vivid in my mind. 临摩：尽管这件事情已经过去了很多，但它仍然让我记忆犹新。 . 2.佳句：It turned out that the cake they ate had expired its guarantee period. 临摩：结果他没能在红灯前通过那个路口，而和

24、另外一辆车撞在了一起。 . 3.佳句：It is very urgent to take effective measures to improve food safety. 临摩：现在的当务之急是帮助大学生树立一个正确的就业观。 . KEY: 1. Though this incident happened a long time ago, it is still vivid in my mind. 2. It turned out that his car could not pass through the crossroad before the light turned red an

25、d crashed into another car. 3. It is very urgent to help college students form a right idea on employment 2011英语四级热点范文(4) Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Parental Hopes and Personal Ideals. You should write at least 120 words, and base your c

26、omposition on the outline （given in Chinese） below: 1）父母都会望子成龙，但是父母的期望有时候会与他们孩子的理想发生矛盾 2）分析这种矛盾产生的原因 3）应该如何解决这一矛盾 Parental Hopes and Personal Ideals 行文思路 本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点要求分析这一问题产生的原因，提纲第3点要求说明如何解决该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。 根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述父母的期望和孩子的理想之间的矛盾;分析这种矛盾产生的主要原因;说明解决这一矛盾的办法。 高分范文

27、Parental Hopes and Personal Ideals All parents hope their children will have a bright future. However, parents expectations for their children are not always 1in accordance with their childrens personal ideals, 2and sometimes they are even conflicting with each other. This is often a main cause for

28、quarrels and gaps between parents and children. 3But what lead to the conflict between parental hopes and personal ideals? 3The following three factors contribute to the conflict. 4First of all, in this fast-changing society, parents and children have too many differences in mind. 4Secondly, traditi

29、onal patriarchy is still influencing Chinese parents in modern society. They are used to making decisions for their children. 4Third, nowadays young people have strong independence, 5who want to plan their own future and control their own destiny. 4Thus the conflict between parents and children inev

30、itably appear. 6In order to solve the conflict, both parents and children should pay their efforts. 4For one thing, parents should give their children rights to make their own decisions. They may help their children make choices 7instead of replacing them to make choices. 4For another, children shou

31、ld learn to respect their parents advices 8since parents tend to have more life experience. 4Besides, to communicate with each other actively is necessary to their understanding each other. As long as both parents and children learn to think 9from the other sides point of view, the conflicts between them can be avoided. 亮点点评 1“和一致”。 2表示递进。 3通过转折和设问句引出原因,容易引起注意。 4过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。 5who引导非限制性定语从句。 6“为了”，表示目的，常用于句首。 7“代替，而不是”。 8since引导原因状语从句，表示既定的原因，常译为“既然”。 9“从对方的角度”。 佳句临摩 1.佳句：Parents expecta