英语初三英语书面表达解析版汇编.docx

1、英语初三英语书面表达解析版汇编（英语）初三英语书面表达解析版汇编一、英语书面表达1书面表达地球是我们的家园，我们作为地球的主人，就应该好好保护地球。现在正在倡导“低碳”生活，只要我们不污染地球的环境，不浪费地球的能源，就能够让我们的周围变得更绿，生活变得更美好。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？谈谈你的想法。内容应该包括以下几点：1. 节约用水、用电；2. 节约纸张，循环使用旧课本，保护森林；3. 节约粮食，在更多的土地上种树；4. 不乱丢杂物，保护环境；要求：短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；80词左右提示词：the greenhouse gases lifestyle 低碳生活方式How doe

2、s our earth turn better?The earth is our home. _If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we are living will be better and better.【答案】How does our earth turn better?The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?I t

3、hink as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text books should be recycled.

4、Thus, less trees wont be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Dont throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment.If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，

5、为文章增色不少，如how to do，live in，around us， such as，as a middle school student，and so on，close down the water，turn off the lights，cut down，make a contribution to our earth，pollute our environment，better and better等。而固定结构But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?和I think as a middle school student,

6、 we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富

7、有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。2 世界卫生组织的一项研究报告显示，我国青少年近视率居世界第一。2019年全国两会当中“小眼镜”成关注重点，防控青少年近视迫在眉睫。以下表格是学校针对本校学生近视问题做的调查表，假如你是校报编辑Jack，请根据所提供的信息，用英语写一篇调查报告，陈述学校调查结果，并表明你自己的观点和理由。我校学生的近视问题调查情况60%的本校学生戴眼

8、镜。原因1. 不良的看书习惯，如在床上或阳光下看书2. 长时间玩手机、看电视、玩电脑3. 学习时间长，作业多建议1. 认真做眼保健操2. 多吃胡萝卜等对眼睛有益的食物3. 参考词汇： 近视 nearsighted 注意： 1. 内容须包括所提示的信息，可适当发挥；2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称；3. 词数：80-100，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in China._【答案】Acco

9、rding to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in China. As we all know that the eyes are very important for us. So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight？First, dont keep your eyes work for a

10、 long time. Dont spend too much time on mobile phones, TV and computers. Secondly, pay attention to the following: Dont read in the sun; dont read in bed or in a moving bus. And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. And thirdly, do eye-exercises every day. You

11、should eat more carrots and other eye-friendly foods. It will also help you keep good eyesight. I think, you may prevent your eyesight from becoming nearsighted.【解析】【详解】这是一篇材料作文，根据表格中的相关信息介绍一下如何保护视力。所提供的表格中列举了近视的原因和建议。主要从原因和建议两个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时。注意作文中必须包含表格上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要

12、正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中要注意使用祈使句，使上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。【高分句型一】So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. 所以保持良好的视力对每个人都很重要。本题运用句型：It is +形容词+for sb. to so sth. 【高分句型二】And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. 当你读这本书的时候，你应该把它从你的眼睛里移开一英尺

13、。when you read是由when引导的时间状语从句。3书面表达根据以下提示，写一篇介绍我的朋友张阳的短文。基本情况张阳，阳光中学九年级二班学生兴趣爱好1. 喜欢阅读。每周花七个多小时阅读各种类型的书，因为2.喜欢观鸟。每年统计两次鸟儿的数量，以研究鸟儿在数量方面的变化。优秀事迹上个月把零花钱捐给了希望工程未来梦想1. 希望成为连接家乡到上海路段的高铁总工程师2. 每个人为保护环境都可以做一些改变。如：.（举1例）要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯； 2）必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥； 3）词数：100词左右（短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；4）不得使用真实姓名、校名

14、和地名等。Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School._【答案】Zhang Yang is a student in Sunshine Middle School. He is in Class 2,Grade 9. He likes reading. He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful. He enjoys watching birds. He counts the n

15、umber of birds twice a year to study changes in the number of birds. He donated his pocket money to the Hope Project last month. His dream is to be the chief engineer of high-speed railway connecting my hometown to Shanghai. He hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment. We must

16、nt throw rubbish everywhere.【解析】【详解】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如like reading，more than，all kinds of，spend time doing，enjoy doing，the number of，twice a year，be the chief engineer of等。而He spends more than seven hours a week reading all kinds of books because he thinks reading is helpful./ H

17、e hopes everyone can make some changes to protect the environment.等多种复杂从句结构的综合运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。4书面表达每年的4月23日是世界读书日，这个纪念日的意义在于推动更多人去阅读。假如你校将开展“读好书，促成长”活动，请你根据这项活动的

18、主题，向全校同学发出倡议。读书的意义 1. 获取知识，开阔视野 2. 使人愉悦，益于学习 3. （自由发挥）现状 1. 作业多，无良好读书习惯 2. 不知道读什么书，不会选择倡议 （至少两点）注意：1. 词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2. 短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；3. 短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Dear classmates,Reading is very important in our daily life. _Lets start reading now!【答案】Reading is very important

19、 in our daily life First of all，reading will/can help us get knowledge from all kinds of booksIt can also help to open up a whole new world to usSecond，reading will/can make us clever and happyIt is good for our study and it can help us grow upThird，reading can help us think more and further and mak

20、e our life more colourful However，there is usually so much homework for us to do that we dont have enough time for readingMoreover，some of us dont have a good habit of reading but often spend too much time watching TV and searching the Internet In my opinion，our school can have aReading Weekonce a t

21、ermTeachers should encourage students to borrow books from the libraryWe must spend more time reading some useful booksAs a result，we can have a better future Lets start reading now!【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如first of all，all kinds of books，help to do，be good for，more and further，so

22、much，spend too much time doing，search the Internet，in my opinion，as a result等。同时First of all，/ Second，/ Third等时间副词和However/ Moreover / As a result等结构副词的运用，既使文章的思路清晰、层次分明，还丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级

23、词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。5今天手机在我们日常生活中已广泛使用。但中学生在学校是否应该持有手机，一些学生和老师有不同的观点。你们学校的校刊英文版正在就此举行征文活动，请根据下列表格提示的内容，用英语写一篇征文。 观点理由一些学生赞成拥有方便与家长联系；一些老师反对拥有有学生用手机玩游戏；有学生用手机作弊；你的观点1. 2.要求：1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2. 必须包含表格所给的提示信息，并作适当发挥；3. 词数：80-100词左右（征文的开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily l

24、ife today._【答案】Mobile phones have been used widely in our daily life today. With the development of economy, mobile phones are more and more widely used in our daily life. However, some parents and teachers have different ideas about whether the students should use mobile phones at school. Some students are for it. They think that it is convenient to contact with parents. Mobile phones will make them more interested in learning so that they can learn more quickly and easily. Some teachers are agai