浙江高考英语读后续写练习以及参考范文.docx

1、浙江高考英语读后续写练习以及参考范文23读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 Zigfried, a little mouse, once lived happily in afarmhousewith hisparents. They got a lot of food from the kitchen easily, because the owner of the farmhouse was very rich. ForZigfriedand his parents,Christmaswas their favorite. On that day, the

2、y could get lots of delicious food than ever like chicken,chocolateand cheese. Every time his father would bring a big chicken leg back for Zigfried. To Zigfried, wonderful food was his Christmasmiracle. Unfortunately, Zigfrieds father was caught by a cat when he was hanging around. Years later, his

3、 mother died because of illness and the owner of the farmhouse moved to thecity. Happy days were away from Zigfried from then on. All the things had already been changed there were no food anymore in the farmhouse and nofamily, all the rooms were empty. New year was coming again, Zigfried blew his b

4、reath on the frosty window of the farmhouse and rubbed it to see the outside. Still nobody came. Maybe today, he thought hopefully. It was only a few days before Christmas and he was waiting for a miracle. A miracle liked the old times, which he has been waiting for a long time. This farmhouse had b

5、een empty too long. It needed a family Zigfrieds stomach made a noise. He realized that he hadnt eaten anything since yesterday. He jumped from the windowsill (窗沿), grabbed a bag from his home, and went next door to Farmer Mikes. Farmer Mikes house had been a great place for the little mouse until t

6、he farmer married a wife who had a cat. Zigfried trembled when he thought of it. He looked around cautiously as he stole into the room where grain was stored and was quite nervous as he filled his bag withwheat. He was turning to leave when suddenly he felt a hot breath about his ear. His heart beat

7、 wildly, and without thinking he started to run and luckily escaped the cats paws (爪子).注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:The next afternoon Zigfried heard some good newsParagraph 2:The house came alive the next few days.【解答】【语篇分析】

8、本文的时态主要是一般过去时。本文主要以一个小老鼠的身份，讲述了圣诞奇迹的故事。他在圣诞节寻找食物，被猫发现。生动形象的描绘了小老鼠对猫的害怕以及对食物的渴望。续写的内容可以是：小老鼠听到了一个好消息，终于奇迹来了，但是却没想到奇迹是“自己的家里要住进来一只猫”。可以用到的短语有：move into 移入，迁入新居；come up 走近，发生。【参考答案】The next afternoon Zigfried heard some good news:a newfamilywould be moving into thefarmhousesoon. Zigfrieds granny would

9、arrive on Christmas Eve to celebrate with him. He hoped that the family would come before his granny came. Before long, a car came up the road leading to the house, with butter sandwiches, cheese andchocolate. Zigfrieds Christmasmiracledid arrive!The house came alive the next few days.Zigfried enjoy

10、ed every single hour of them. However, the day before Christmas when he was drinking hot chocolate with a satisfied smile at the door of his home, he heard the discussion of the children of the family about what they might get forChristmas. What? Acat? The smile froze on his face；his mouth fell wide

11、 open. After a long while, he at last found his voice: “Hey! Whose Christmas miracle is this?”19Inthecoldandplainlivingroom，MattissittinginhischairHiseyesdontshineanymoreHelooksextremelyoldandweakTodayishisbirthday，andheisbyhimselfTheonlythingthathehasbeendoingalldayisthinkingabouthowsadandlonelyhis

12、lifeisAshewaslookingatsomeoldpictures，hefoundonespecialwithhimandhisfriendsfromcollegeThispicturebroughtbackthedayswhenhehadfriendsandhislifewasfullofhappinessAlso，itbroughthimasadmemoryThismemoryhappenedfortyyearsago，duringhislastyearofcollegeThroughoutcollege，MatthadafriendnamedMarkMarkwastallands

13、kinnyHeworethickglassesHewasshy，smartandresponsibleAlso，MarkdidnthaveasmanyfriendsasMatthadHeconsideredMattashisbestfriendAsgoodfriends，theykneweverythingabouteachother，andtheyhungoutAlso，theyovercamemanyproblemstogetherTheywerereallygoodfriendsOnhistwenty-fourthbirthdaytheirlifechangedOnthenightbef

14、orehisbirthday，MarkcalledMatt，Hi!Matt，hisvoicesoundedstrangeHecontinued，IhaveanimportantprojecttoworkonImhavingsomeproblemwiththisMaybe，youcouldcomeoverandhelpmewithitgivingmesomenewideasCouldyou？Mattasked，Whattime？Markkeptinsilenceforaminute，andthenhesaid，At8pmIsitgoodforyou？ThenMattanswered，OK!See

15、youlaterAtthatnight，itwasMattsbirthdaySo，hedidntwanttospendhisbirthdayhelpingMarkwithhisprojectMattwenttoaclubwithsomeotherguysThenextmorning，MattnoticedthatMarkwasactingdifferentlyWhenhewenttotalktoMark，MarkignoredhimcompletelyHelefttheclassroomwithoutsayingonewordAsMarkwaswalkingaway，Mattsaidinana

16、ngryvoice，YouareselfishYouarejustthinkingaboutyourselfIwashavingfunonmybirthdayWhycantyouunderstandit？注意：1所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语Paragraph1：Whilehewassayingit，Mallory，oneofhisclassmatesandfriend，stoodupandstartedtosay，_Paragraph2：Tearsfellf

17、romhiseyes_【解析】这是一个故事，所以人称用第一人称，时态以一般过去时态为主内容包括两部分，一解释昨晚的真正原因；二Matt的感受高分句型：1He took his car and drove all night looking for you句子里looking for you做表示状语，和主语He之间是主动关系他开了车，整夜都在找你2 Matt didnt know what to say or what to do句子里what to say or what to do是动词不定式和疑问词连用的形式，做句子的宾语Matt不知道该说什么或者做什么【解答】While he was

18、saying it，Mallory，one of his classmates and friend，stood up and started to say，How can you say such thing toMark？You dont know what happened!Last night，hecalledyou many times，but he didnt get any answer from youHe worried about what was going wrong with youHe took his car and drove all night looking

19、 for you【高分句型】He looked at the hospital，the jail，and barsMatt started to apologize to Mallory and to himself，saying，Why did he do it？He could work on theprojectby himself，andAt that time Mallory spoke angrily，Shut up!He had prepared a surprisebirthdayparty for you，and we waited for you or for a call

20、 all night long（解释昨晚的真正原因）Tears fell from his eyesMatt didnt know what to say or what to do【高分句型二】Before he said anything，Mallory had left the classroomHe sat down and stayed there for a long timeHe looked around the classroomIt wascold and plainwithout hisfriendsIt was empty，just like hisliving roo

21、mnow（Matt的感受）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 It was shortly after one oclock in the morning and Mr. Fairfax was reallytired. He had been driving for over five hours, heading for a small townfar away fromhome. The weather was clear but it was dark and Mr. Fairfax could not find a moted to spend the ni

22、ght. Completely exhausted, he decided to stopby the roadsidefor a few hours sleep at the wheel of his car. He fell asleep almost the moment he closed his eyes. But soon he was awakened by a man tapping on the car window. “I say, you dont happen to know the time, do you?” the stranger asked. Mr. Fair

23、fax wound down the window andthrusthis head out. “Its around one oclock,” he answered. Then he wound up his window and soon fell back into a deep slumber. Half an hour later, another guy came up and knocked on his window who also inquired about the time. Once again, Mr. Fairfaxgathered his thoughtsa

24、nd told him that it was just after one thirty. When the same thing happened yet again, Mr. Fairfax became increasingly irritated. Sleep-deprived, he began to raise his voice at the passer-by: “Its two oclock, God damn it! And why cant you get yourself a watch like the rest of us?” This time when he

25、waswinding upthe window, Mr. Fairfaxfigured outhow to make sure no one elsedisturbedhim. He found some paper and a pencil and wrote a note that he placed on the windscreen of his car. It said: “I dont know what time it is!” Amused by his good idea, he happily drifted off back to sleep again. Not lon

26、g afterwards, the note was spotted by apolicemanon his night patrol. Intent on fulfilling hisdutyto assist motorists, he tapped on Mr. Fairfaxs car window. “Well, sir,” the policeman said. “Now it is five past three!”注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你

27、所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1: “For the sake of God!” With a loud noise of fist hitting the wheel, the car window was wound down.Paragraph 2: “Im sorry Mister, but I think sleeping in the car by the roadside is not a good choice,” said the police.【解析】【题干分析】本篇读后续是一篇记叙文。主要叙述了Mr. Fairfax夜间将车停在路边休息时屡遭打扰后的情绪变化，随着

28、情绪从刚开始的平静到不耐烦，再到想到好主意之后的高兴，最后变得愤怒，因此在续写时，要关注人物的情绪变化，并根据其变化采用不同的表达方式。同时，在描述人物的话语时，要注意口语化，更贴近实际生活。文章的第一段可以续写Mr. Fairfax的人物外貌，他被警察叫醒，眼睛还是通红的（his eyes red from lack of sleep），和警察一直在对峙，不要再来打扰我（disturb sb.），最后再一次Mr. Fairfax把窗户关了继续睡觉。文章第二段的开头是警察喋喋不休的依旧在对Mr. Fairfax说话，警告Mr. Fairfax在车里睡觉不是一个好的选择，或许可以去警察办公室睡上

29、一觉（spend the rest of the night），想象出警察会发怒，让Mr. Fairfax交路边的停车费（pay a fine for parking by the roadside）【解答】范文: “For the sake of God!” With a loud noise of fist hitting the wheel, the car window was wound down.Mr. Fairfaxthrusthis head out again, starting at the man breaking his sweet dream, his eyes re

30、d from lack of sleep. “How dare you!” Mr. Fairfax shouted, “I may kill you if you do this again!” “Uh Excuse me,” thepolicemanreplied tentatively. “I was just doing myduty. You know” “Oh, please! Go ahead, sir. Just dontdisturb me!”Windingup the window, Mr. Fairfax were eager to go back to sleep.“Im sorry Mister, but I think sleeping in the car by the roadside is not a good choice,” said the police.“You think?” Mr. Fairfax was still angry. “Yeah, so I was thinking you may spend the rest of the night in my o