题型训练9看图作文范例及写作技巧.docx

1、题型训练9看图作文范例及写作技巧题型训练9看图作文范例及写作技巧题型训练9 济南市20_看图作文范例及写作技巧一、写作导航1. 认真读图，把握中心。一般说来，所给的几幅图都是围绕一个中心展开的。它们讲述的通常是一个小故事或小事件，这个小故事或小事件就是这组图画所要表达的中心。2. 初步构思，考虑用词、短语、句型和时态。在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容。尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容。这是体现自身能力的重要一环。3. 连词成句，然后再连句成文。运用适当的单词或短语正确表达各图的意思。然后再将各图的单个句子

2、串连起来。串连时，要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句，不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象，更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。4. 反复审核，修改错误。一篇文章写好后，应进行检查，看短文中是否有错，如拼写、用词、时态、语态及表达方面的错误。5. 宜详则详，该略则略。对于一些细节方面的内容，如果是文章必不可少的，在写作过程中是不可将其忽略的。如果是可有可无的细节，则可视具体情况进行增删。据此，我们在读图时一定要注意阅读各图中的一些细节内容，看其是否影响文章的内容。6. 注意所给的汉语提示。一般说来，看图写话中的汉语提示往往给定了有关的时间、地点、人物等相关的信息，有的还规定了文章所采用的体裁，如使用书信

3、、留言、日记等。因此，在审题时我们一定要注意所给的汉语提示。7. 文章中少用复句，多用单句；少用直接引语，代之间接引语。8 、检查，修改，定稿，誊写检查修改是进一步减少疏漏提高质量的最后程序，这时要对照题目要求，认真检查以下几点：（1）内容有无遗漏或误词，最好一一对应检查。（2）体裁格式对不对。（3）句子是否有语法结构错误，特别要检查句子中的冠词、代词、名词复数、动词的时态、语态、主谓一致等方面是否有错误。（4）句子是否合乎英语表达习惯，是否达意。（5）书写字迹和标点符号是否规范清晰，词数是否基本上符合要求。经过认真修改润色的短文，即可认真工整地誊写在指定的卷面上。抄好后再速读一遍，力求完美。

4、二、了解高分作文的特点 要想作文获得高分，必须了解高分作文具有的特点，才有助于我们朝之而努力。高分作文一般具有以下特点： 书写工整，书面整洁，很少有涂改痕迹。分段合理。全文分段一般不止一个自然段，让阅卷老师很容易就能找到作文所要求写的要点和重要句子。要点齐全，不缺要点。首尾呼应，自然成一体。使用了大量的高级词汇和句型。阅卷老师一看就知道这个同学的功底非不一般，自然就给打高分了。开头言简意赅，不啰嗦，不偏题，迅速引入主题。段与段之间，自然过渡。有合适的连接词。句与句之间，有恰当的连接词，使之自然成一体。全文中同一个意思，基本没有重复使用某一个词、短语或者句型等，说明这个同学的词汇量不同寻常。老师

5、自然就对该作文有好感了。能够恰当使用谚语、格言等给文章添彩。二、范文20_ 济南市中一模 XI. 书面表达。（10分）根据所给图画，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容。 例文 Yesterday when school was over, I went home on foot as usual. On my way home, suddenly I saw a boy fall off his bike and hurt himself. He lay on the road. I ran up to him quickly and took him to the neare

6、st hospital at once. The doctor looked over the boy carefully and said there was nothing serious. The boy told us he must be careful next time. We both thanked the doctor and left. I was tired but happy though I got home late.经典例句1.Yesterday when school was over, I went home on foot as usual. 2.I wa

7、s tired but happy though I got home late.词汇积累suddenly，as usual,fall off,carefully,at once,nothing serious20_ 济南历下一模 XI书面表达 （10分）。根据所给图画，用英语写一篇约80字的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容。 “ 例文John is a foreign student. He is studying Chinese in Shenzhen Middle School. He is very kind and helpful. He is always ready to help o

8、thers. Last Sunday, the weather was very fine. He came to the beach for relaxing as usual. He was lying on the beach and listening to the radio when suddenly he heard someone shouting for help. He jumped up quickly, looked out toward the sea and saw a little boy waving his hands in the air. He took

9、off his clothes and jumped into the water. He swam to the little boy and carried him back to the beach.What a good student John is! We should learn from him.经典例句1.He is always ready to help others. 2.He was lying on the beach and listening to the radio when suddenly he heard someone shouting for hel

10、p.3.What a good student John is!词汇积累sudddenly,quickly,ready to do,see sb doing,jump into20_ 济南天桥一模 .书面表达（10分）根据所给图画，用英语写一篇约80词的短文。要求完整叙述故事内容，并谈谈个人的看法。 “ Last Sunday was Tree Planting Day. Some students decided to plant some trees in the mountains. In the morning they met at the school gate. Then the

11、y went there by bus. When they got there, they began to plant trees. Some dug holes, some planted trees, and others watered the trees. They worked very hard until they came back home in the very late afternoon. They were very tired but they felt very happy.1. Some students decided to plant some tree

12、s in the mountains.2. When they got there, they began to plant trees.3.They were very tired but they felt very happy.“tree planting day, mountain,come back,work hard,dug holes,until20_ 济南槐荫二模 “XI书面表达（10分）根据所给图画，用英语写一篇约80词的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容。Last Sunday was a sunny day. I went to the park to play basketba

13、ll with my friends. We were playing happily when suddenly Peter fell over and hurt his leg. We carried him to the hospital at once. The doctor looked over his leg carefully, and said his leg was broken. He needed to stay in bed for some time. We felt very sorry for him. Next time we should be more c

14、areful when we play basketball. Now we take turns to go to help him with his lessons in the hospital. He feels very happy and gets much better now.1.We were playing happily when suddenly Peter fell over and hurt his leg.2.Next time we should be more careful when we play basketball. 3.Now we take tur

15、ns to go to help him with his lessons in the hospital. happily,turn to, suddenly,careful,look over20_ 济南槐荫三模 XI书面表达（10分）根据所给图画，用英语写一篇约80词的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容。 Last month Peter failed in the math exam. He was very sad and cried. The teacher encouraged him to work hard at his lessons. After that, he made up

16、 his mind to study hard. He listened carefully in class and the teacher helped him with his math. Last week he had another test in math and he got 90 marks. He felt happy and his teacher said “Congratulations” to him. “ 1.The teacher encouraged him to work hard at his lessons.2.After that, he made u

17、p his mind to study hard.encourage,make up his mind,congratulations20_ 济南天桥二模.书面表达（10分）根据所给图画，用英语写一篇约80词的短文。要求完整叙述故事内容. Tom is a good student. He studies very hard and he is never late for school. He did his homework too late last night, so he didnt get up until 9:00 oclock this morning. “Oh!My God!

18、 Its too late”. He shouted as soon as he woke up. There was no time for him to have breakfast. He said “good-bye” to his mother and left for school in a hurry. He rode a bike to school as fast as he could. But when he got to school, he found nobody was there and the school gate was still locked. The

19、n he realized it was Sunday today. 1.He studies very hard and he is never late for school.2.He did his homework too late last night, so he didnt get up until 9:00 oclock this morning. 3.He shouted as soon as he woke up. 4.There was no time for him to have breakfast. study hard, as soon as, in a hurr

20、y, as fast as, school gate, realizeXI.书面表达(10分)根据所给图画，用英语写一篇约80词的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容。根据图画内容可知图画所表达的内容是两个男孩外出徒 步旅行或野餐的经过。第一幅画的内容是两人外出旅行或野 餐；第二幅画的内容是他们俩爬上山顶;第三幅画的内容是他 们俩把背包放在木板上，游过了小河；第四幅画的内容是他们 俩好好地吃了一顿饭。Possible version 1Deng Yang and Ma Liang both like outdoor activities. Last Sunday it was sunny and the

21、y went hiking. Deng Yang packed something to eat and drink. They climbed the mountains and finally reached the top. After getting down the mountains, they saw a wide river. They put their bags on a piece of wood and swam across the river. They really enjoyed the beautiful scene. At noon they were ti

22、red and hungry, so they stopped and had a good meal. How happy they were!Possible version 2Last Sunday, Liming and I decided to go to the south mountain to have picnic. We set out early in the morning. On the way, we talked about our picnic again and again. First, we climbed a hill. Then, we swam across a small river with our bags on a piece of wood. At last, we arrived at the camp. We played, danced, laughed and talked. When we were tired, we had a great picnic. What a day it was!得分评卷人. 书面表达。（10分）根据下列图画，写一篇80词左右的短文。要求完整叙述故事内容。参考词汇：cage 笼子_