大学英语六级作文实例分析.docx

1、大学英语六级作文实例分析前 言：教习过好几门课程，深感写作这一课是最难教的，“危乎高哉！写作之难难于上青天。一夫当关，万夫莫开。”学生学习英语写作多时，大多不能迥脱蹊径之外，工而入逸者更是寥寥。于是我悲观起来，认定“文不能够教而能”。虽说文字和技法能够也应当教一些，俾学生邯郸学步，渐次入门，但就本质特点而论，写作远不只是一个章法和技术的问题，而是“气之所行”，是皮相之下许多深层主观因素的综合，是一个厚积薄发的养成进程。这些主观因素，在我眼里，体此刻国内的英语写作考试当中只局限于素心烂读的积存。Reading makes a full man.这是英国学者的传世之言，咱们的先人说“念书破万卷，下

2、笔如有神”。咱们赞扬一篇文章，往往是因为咱们被文章中的语言所吸引、所征服：语汇丰硕、句式整齐、语言或精练或富丽，句式安排熟练自如，自然流畅；而者只能来自于 reading。可是咱们已没有那么多的时刻去“读”了，于是乎，语言的总结就变得极为必要！要归纳记叙文中漂亮、地道的语言是困难的，可是要归纳论说文那个各类英语考试的作文类型中的语言不是不可能的。论说文是由开头、结尾、启转、分析、举例、比较等部份所组成的，其中都有些固定而漂亮的句型来表达。由于这些句型都是地道的英语，是通过千锤百炼，且能表达论说文写作中的不同意思，假设能把以论说文为主的今世英语essays中的这些句型摘录归纳成类，供读者参考，无

3、疑是能有助于提高英语写作的语言水平。仿照和学用漂亮和地道的英语表达法或句型并非是可耻的事。地道的英语不该是你用学过的辞汇和语法规那么按某个意思苦苦思索造出来的，地道的英语应是你把英美人对那个意思的适应说法用到你自己的文章上来的。该讲义搜集了论说文经常使用的一些句型，与六级考试的一些文章结构模式；希望同窗们能以此为依据，Practice makes perfect，达到熟能生巧的境遇，从而在六级考试作文部份取得理想的分数！写作原那么内容简单化结构模式化（主题句-分论点-总结）语言要包装错误要回避全能理由 (Omnipotence)：1、方便：convenient/convenience2、效率：

4、efficient/efficiently/efficiency3、节省和浪费：save time/money/space; economical, thrift waste time/money/space; costly, lavish4：人的心理健康：independent, cooperative, competitive, considerate, confident, creative, sociable, perseverance; selfish, isolated, conservative5、人的躯体健康：health, disease, strong, strength,

5、 energetic6、娱乐：colorful, pleasure, joy, recreation, entertainment, relax tired, boring, lonely7、环境：environment, pollute, poisonous, dirty8、平安和危险：safe, danger, risk9：体会：experience, social experience, enter the society10、人际：humane, fair, unfair, help, assist, freedom, freely大体表达(Basic Elements of Engl

6、ish Writing)：愈来愈：be increasingly + adj., be on the rise, the growing number of人们以为：it is generally/widely believed/held/agreed that许多问题：a host of/a number of problems引发人们注意：claim call/attract general/public/world attention to sth.意识到：there is a growing awareness/realization of/that, awaken sb. to th

7、e fact/danger适应新的形势/转变：adapt/adjust/accommodate oneself to new environment/change接触各类思想/经历：be exposed to new ideas/experiences/problems接触社会：come into frequent/close contact with the world/society取得成功：achieve/accomplish success提出观点/建议：advance / put forward / come up with the arguments/ideas/suggestio

8、ns作出尽力：make tremendous/persistent/sustained effort to do sth., take great pains to do(with work/study)阻碍学习/工作：interfere with studies/work产生阻碍：have/exert a profound influence on life/personality, have a dramatic/undesirable effect on较好地驾驭生活：be a better pilot of ones life剥夺机遇/权利：deprive oneself of the

9、 chance/right/opportunity取代就的方式：substitute for/take the place of the old way采取方法：take effective steps/measures to操纵咱们的环境：take/gain increasing control over our own environment躲避危险/挑战：shy/run away from the dangers/challenge知足要求：meet/satisfy/accommodate the demand of补偿损失：compensate for/make up for the

10、loss/damage说明某现象：account for/explain the phenomenon对专门好的了解：have a better understanding/appreciation of, have a new perspective on. provide/gain an insight into把某因素考虑进去：take sth. Into account(consideration), give much thought to品位人一辈子/自由/青春：savor the life/freedom/youth培育对的信心：develop/foster ones inter

11、est/confidence in经历转变/困难/艰险：undergo/experience great changes/hardships/experience表现出自信心等：project ones confidence/feeling/image生活充满不公正的地址：life is full of minor irritation/injustice追求学习/职业：pursue ones academic interest/professional career学习知识/技术：pursue/acquire knowledge/technology/skill被看做学习的表率：be hel

12、d up as a good example交流体会/知识：share experience/ideas/problems/knowledge发挥/起到重要作用：play an (important/active/great) role/part逃学/缺课：skip school/a class/a meeting/a lecture知识/体会丰硕：rich in knowledge/experience确立/追求目标：set/pursue a goal/higher standard抵达目标：achieve/accomplish/stain the goal/aim/objective克服困

13、难：overcome obstacles/difficulty面临危险/困难：be confronted/faced with/in the face of danger/difficulty阻碍了成功：stand in the way of success, be an obstacle/barrier to success/growth阻碍了进展：hamper/impede/stunt the development of持传统的观点：hold conventional wisdom发表观点：voice/express ones opinion持相反/合理的观点：take the oppo

14、site/fresh view揭穿某种一贯的说法：shatter the myth of求得帮忙：enlist ones support/help缩小不同：bridge/narrow/fill the gap/gulf (between city and country)把成功/错误归咎于：attribute/own the success/failure to对重要：be indispensable/important/vital to施加压力：put/exert a academic pressure on重视：assign/attach much importance/significa

15、nce to强调：place/put much emphasis/stress/value on把注意力集中在：focus/concentrate ones attention/efforts/thoughts upon提供机遇/信息：provide/offer/furnish an opportunity/information for sb.抓住机遇：grab/seize/take the opportunity取得机遇：enjoy/gain access to a opportunity/information有可能：there is (little/much) possibility/

16、likelihood that, chances/the odds are that展开竞争：compete against/with sb. for the prize/position/control/the mastery of开展运动：conduct(carryon/undertake/initiate/launch/wage) a (vigorous/nation-wide/publicity/advertising) campaign (for/against)对我很有/没有什么意义：make much/little sense to me带来无穷的幸福/知足：be a sourc

17、e of happiness satisfaction/contentment/pride/complaint献身于：devote/dedicate/commit oneself to a cause/career大不（没什么）两样：make much(little/no) difference真正重要的是：what really matters/accounts is 改变生活旅程：change/alter the course of life成立在大量的学习/实践上：built on tremendous amount of study/practice进行调查/执行任务：conduct/

18、carry out an study/task/experiment辞去工作/学习：leave/quit ones job/work/school参加考试/竞赛等：enter (for) the examination/contest, race参加活动/讨论：take part/participate/be engaged in sports/activities/discussion阻碍思想/态度/事件的形成：shape ones thinking/attitude进入大学/社会/家庭/劳力市场/职业：enter a school/college/society/the work forc

19、e/professionals实现自己的理想/愿望：realize/fulfill/achieve ones dream(hops/wish/desire)减轻压力/紧张：reduce/alleviate/relieve the stress/pressure/tension提高社会地位：enhance/improve/upgrade social status/position/standing rise to the position of leadership提高技术/能力：sharpen (increase/improve/enhance/boost) ones skill/abili

20、ty加速/增进进展：accelerate/facilitate/advance/enhance/boost the development of随着生活节拍的加速：with the quickening pace/rhythm/tempo of modern life/society开阔眼界/爱好：broaden ones interest/outlook, expand(broaden/enlarge) ones mental horizons有助于了解/进展/宣传/解决：contribute much/little/greatly/to a better understanding of/

21、the popularity of/the growth of/the solution of有助于解决问题：go a long way to(towards) solving the problem迷恋名利/分数：be obsessed/preoccupied with grades/fame/fortune把时刻花/浪费在：spend/waste time doing sth., put in hours doing sth.利用机遇/技术：make (full/better) use of/take advantage of opportunity/time, tap/harness t

22、echnology potential/skills/talent把知识/体会运用到：apply/put the theory/knowledge/experience to practice/daily life/good use取得进步：make much progress/strides/gains in充分发挥潜力/能力：develop ones ability/potential to the full, give full play to ones ability充满激情/期望：have a burning desire/a great passion for实例二 99年6月真题

23、Reading Selectively Or Extensively?Outline: 1.有人以为念书要有选择 2.有人以为应当博学多才 3.我的方式11分When it comes to reading, some people think that reading selectively is a good way, but some other people do not agree with them, they think that reading extensively is better.Those people, who think that reading selectiv

24、ely is better, believe that good books are as many as bad books. Those good books can give us pleasure and knowledge, while those bad books can only lead us to the wrong way. So, they suggest that we should only choose the good books to read and never touch the bad books.But, the other people, who h

25、old that reading extensively is better, think that one kind of books can only give us one aspect of knowledge. Even the best book only contains one field of information. So, they can easily come to the conclusion that “to know more, to read more”. So they believe that reading extensively is better.T

26、o my point, we should choose good books to read and read good books as many as possible. By this way, we can increase the quality and quantity of reading. 5分I think reading not only selectively but also extensively. Because the two sides are not contradict. Our time is limited. So we can not read ev

27、ery book in the world. However, we will not be interested in every book. We should read those books may be useful to ours, read those books which we like. But those books which we choose must be extensively so it can give ours all kinds of knowledge, news and so on, it also make ours become a wise m

28、an. On the one hand reading selectively let ours not waste our time which it is limited. Moreover it can emphasis among all books that we can read. On the other hand reading extensively can deal with all kinds of need in our life. They are all useful to ours.失分缘故：分段太少，语法错误太多2分Most people thought tha

29、t read books should have been selective. But others believed reading extensively was correction.Selective books or reading extensively?Sure, you can choice one from previous ideas, on one hand, There are too book to read for us. We should choose those which we interested, and it would be helpful for

30、 us. On another hand. Someones interesting was wide. Each book could bring you specific contain we couldnt reading at only one level.I confirmed all of these ideas were good but werent wise.As a reader, the main task is to discover more and more books the second task is to held some which wonderful

31、and helpful for us. Dont treat these books with reckless abandon.The best technology of reading is connect.失分缘故：分段太多，语法错误太多14分How should we read? Should we read selectively or extensively? Everyone has his own view.Some people think we should read selectively. They argue that with the development of

32、 modern science and technology, more and more books are published. It is impossible for us to read all the books. Whats more, there are many bad books that are poisonous to our mind, and we shouldnt read them. Since we cant read all the books and we shouldnt read bad books, we must read selectively.But others may not agree, they emphasize that todays society is not wha