山作文之山东卷高考英语作文和范文.docx

1、山作文之山东卷高考英语作文和范文山作文之2013山东卷高考英语作文和范文2013山东卷高考英语作文和范文【篇一：新东方在线2013山东高考英语作文题目解析及高分范文】 2013山东高考英语作文题目解析及高分范文 新东方在线 李辉 2013年高考最后英语科目已拉下帷幕，新东方在线优能中学网络课堂、北京新东方优能中学高考英语名师李辉第一时间对高考英语真题进行解析和点评。以下是李辉老师对山东卷高考英语作文的点评，并附高分范文，供广大考生参考。 【考题再现】 第二节：写作（满分30分） 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回

2、复。请根据以下要点给他回邮件： 1. 未及时回复的原因； 2. 你假期的打算（如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等）。 注意： 1. 次数：120150； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 【试题点评】 今年的书面表达题目延续山东省一贯的提纲作文命题习惯，时隔一年之后重新回到“书信题”的大框架中，考了一篇“以道歉信为外衣，以活动安排为主体段”的提纲作文，相当于10年山东卷（道歉信）和07年四川卷（假期安排）和合体。这种作文是我们平时经常练习的，因此套路很完善、套话很丰富。此外，本文中需要同学们翻译的难句不多，因此，只要在备考过程中有意识地了解过高考英语作文的提分方法，掌握了常用的亮点词汇、加分句型

3、和过渡词，并加以针对性训练，这道题目应该不难写。 【经典套路】 第一段：问候+写信背景+写信目的 第二段：“道歉”部分（相当于“写信背景”） 第三段：“假期安排”部分 第四段：补充说明+客套话 【高分范文】 dear tom, how are you doing? (问候) you asked me in your last letter about my plan for the coming summer vacation.（写信背景） i am sorry that i didnt reply without delay.（写信目的） how i wish i would read an

4、d reply your email as soon as i received it. however, i was busy preparing for my final exam at that time, which is vital for me. as a result, i had no choice but to completely focus on my study. i believe that if you were me, you would make the same choice.（第二段为道歉信常见套路） by the way, i have a busy sc

5、hedule for my summer vacation.（主题句） first and foremost, i would do a part time job, so that my interpersonal skills would be improved.（拓展句1） additionally, i will take a short trip to beijing to take a summer course in the new oriental school.（拓展句2） last but not least, maybe i will work as a voluntee

6、r for the school as a teaching assistant.（拓展句3） these are my plan for the summer vacation. whats yours? i am looking forward to your earliest reply.（以合理的客套话结尾）最后，新东方在线优能中学网络课堂高考辅导团队预祝广大考生金榜题名。【篇二：2013年和2014年山东高考英语作文解析及范文】 2014年山东高考英语作文解析及范文 写作(满分30分) 作文题目：我喜欢的英语谚语 材料：某英文报社组织题为“我喜欢的英语谚语”征文活动，你有意参加。请从

7、下面两句谚语中任选一句作为标题写一篇英语作文，内容须 包括：1.该谚语的含义；2.体现该谚语含义的个人经历。 2014年山东卷英语作文题目出炉后，许多考生和老师为之一惊。“李华去哪儿了”是很多考生发出的感慨和疑问。 2014年的作文题目中，大家没有看到熟悉的李华在写信，也没有看到对社会热点问题的讨论，反而看到了“文艺腔”浓厚的题目要求。“某报社举办 ?我最喜欢的谚语?征文活动，你有意参加”，初读似乎为书信体，但继续往下看，细心的同学会注意到，征文内容要求考生详细阐述对给出的两句谚语中其中一句的看法和理解。因此，该题目实则考查大家用英语表达个人见解，抒发生活感悟的能力。 那么，这篇作文该如何构思

8、呢?不要因为从来没有见过该题型就慌了手脚。在考场上，大家一定要具备将不会的内容转变成自己熟悉的内容的能力，这是得分的关键。根据“要点全面，内容简单”的原则，大家首先在两则谚语中选择自己读懂的，相对较熟悉，有话可说的一句来入手。文章可以分为三段来写，第一段阐述谚语的含义，可以写成提纲作文常见的“td”结构，即“主题句拓展句”结构，再灵活运用恰当的过渡词，使你的观点层次分明，掷地有声。第二段结合个人经历来谈对该谚语的看法，可以借鉴看图记叙文的一些表达技巧，巧妙利用时间状语衔接上下文。此外，记叙过程中一定要保证动词时态的一致，避免因时态混乱而丢分。第三段对自己的观点进行简短总结，再次扣题。 下面，笔

9、者将分别分析题目中的两句谚语如何着笔。第一句 “a friend in need is a friend indeed” 强调挚友的重要性。在理解其含义时，要抓住句中最有感触的词“in need” 和“indeed”，而在阐述时，可以联想真正的朋友应该具备的优秀品质，如“忠诚(loyalty)” “信任(trust)”等，然后一一作解释。第二句 “where there is a will, there is a way” 就是我们再熟悉不过的“有志者事竟成”。具体阐述时，可以从志向对一个人在哪些方面非常重要来着笔。 事实上，这种谚语题在湖南等省已经多次考过，如果考生平时复习时不拘泥于本省题型

10、，而是广泛研究全国各地考题写法，则对这次的题目必能有备无患。事实上，高考英语作文各省“互换题型来考”的现象常常出现，如2014年北京卷就舍弃了开放作文，而考察了全国卷、山东卷爱考的书信作文;福建卷也考察了湖北卷常考的作文类型。可以看到，未来的高考英语作文将更加注重对于真正的“书面表达”能力的考察，而非对于某一特定类型作文写法的考察。总之，对不熟悉的作文题目，大家要想尽一切办法转化为自己熟悉的内容来表达。还是那句话，不是题目太难，是大家想的太复杂，或是思维太固化。 2014山东高考英语作文范文 among all the instructive proverbs that give people

11、 advice, the one i like most is “where there is a will, there is a way”. this short, beautiful sentence tells us an incontrovertible truth: if you have a dream and stick to it, you will realize it sooner or later. for me, the saying has a special meaning. when i was in junior middle school, i was so

12、 poor in my studies that i nearly gave up. but my head-teacher was always there and gave me confidence every time i lose heart. he used to say, “a little more effort and you will make it.” thanks to my dearest teacher, all my efforts paid off and finally i became a top student. “nothing is impossibl

13、e to a willing heart”, as long as you have a dream, keep trying and you?ll make it, too. 2013年山东高考英语作文解析及范文 写作(满分30分) 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，你的美国朋友tom一周前给你发电子邮件，询问你暑假里的打算，但你因准备期末考试未能及时回复。请根据以下要点给他回封邮件： 1.未及时回信的原因;2.你假期的打算(如做兼职、旅行、做志愿者等)。 注意：1. 词数120-150;2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 整体来看，今年山东卷作文难度不大，沿袭了山东卷提纲类书信体作文的传统，题

14、干依然保持“字数虽少，但信息量不小”的特点，写作试题的考察上体现了命题人稳中求变和创新的原则。 今年山东卷考察的书信类型，而为了考察考生审题能力，命题人并没有把如“感谢”、“道歉”、“建议”、“申请”等明显的字眼放在题中，而是通过考察学生对题干的审题能力暗示学生此书信体作文应大体包含道歉和告知两个方面。因此文章的主干部分要先表示歉意、解释原因，后写假期的打算。 从写作要点和得分点来看，考生应在宏观上把握书信体写作的要求，如格式、文体等，写作段落以三段式为宜，首段体现问候、写信背景等，尾段再次致歉、也可询问tom暑假里的打算，体现书信体的交际性;而中间段具体交待未及时回信的原因、假期的打算。考生

15、在微观层面上应具体把握写作的内容和语言，做到句子之间有效的连接，长短句结合，多用doing及物做主语，句子加半句原因、结果、目的等具体细节的解释、利用简单而有效的中文思路扩展英文细节。考生若能在写作部分做到内容充实符合要求、语言精彩与众不同、结构清晰一目了然，相信这样的文章能让考生获得一个相对满意的成绩。2014考生备考建议： 高考写作题目重在考查学生对英语语言的运用，建议新高三的考生能够树立学习写作的意识，加强课上课后的练习，总结常见的写作方法，在考试当中体现应有的实力。 参考范文： dear tom, how is everything going? i feel terribly sor

16、ry for missing the chance of answering your letter in time. you know, i?ve been preparing for the final exams these days, so i forgot to write back. in your letter, you asked me for my plans on summer vacation. now, i am writing to tell you some specific details. overall, three things will make my s

17、ummer vacation meaningful. to start with, doing a part-time job is my dream and i intend to work as a salesman because not only can i earn money by myself, but also it will broaden my horizons. in addition, it is a fabulous choice to visit some famous scenic spots such as mount tai during the vacati

18、on, in order to enjoy appealing scenery and make more friends. what is more, doing voluntary work, i think, will make a great contribution to the society, which is able to eich my life.【篇三：山东省历年高考英语作文及范文】 山东省历年高考英语作文及范文 2005年山东高考英语作文及范文 假设你是新华中学的学生李华，得知某英文报招聘兼职记者，你有意应聘，请按下列要点给报社写一封自荐信。 * 表示感兴趣 * 说明优

19、势：知识面、英语水平、合作精神、相关经历 * 希望得到回复 注意： 1. 词数：100左右 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 范文： dear sir or madam, im a student from xinhua middle school. im glad to learn that you want a few part-time english reporters. im quite interested in it. i think im fit for the job. as a student, ive read a lot and have much knowledge

20、 in many fields. im fond of english and do well in both speaking and writing. besides, im easy to get along with and enjoy working together with others. above all, i once worked as a reporter for my school broadcasting station. so im sure i can do the job well if i get the position. im looking forwa

21、rd to your reply. yours faithfully, li hua 2006年山东高考英语作文范文 请用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，简要描述漫画内容，并结合生活实际，就漫画主题发表感想，题目自拟。参考词汇：公民道德civic virtue 任老师补充：吐痰：spit，扔垃圾：litter 任老师建议：漫画开头一般会用from the picture we can see,- 范文： who lose civic virtue? one day, a child went home after class. on his way home, he saw some adult

22、s spit on the ground. on the other side of the road, a man threw the garbage on the ground after eating a banana. the child found a book civic virtue, lying on the ground. so he picked up the book and shouted, “who lose civic virtue?” the childs words should make people think more. now, many people

23、are scared of civic virtue, and dont protect public environment at all. i wish this cartoon can wake their virtue and make our life better. 2007年山东高考英语作文范文 今年，教育部直属示范大学将招收一批免费示范生，学生毕业后须回生源所在省份的中小学任教10年以上，你愿意成为一名免费示范生吗？请陈述理由。 范文： recently i learned from the newspaper that normal universities师范大学（belo

24、nging to the education department） would recruit some students free. as a return, the students must serve as充当 a primary school teacher for at least 10years in his hometown. i feel that is good news for me and i will contact联系 the universities to get eolled被录取. first of all, as a farmers child, my f

25、amilys living conditions is not so good, i can hardly afford the high tuition of regular universities正规大学. i am so happy to get this chance to become a college student and continue my study. secondly, serving as a teacher is my dream since i was a child. i was brought up in a mountain village. many

26、of my little friends got poor education and they had to get to work as a teenager. if i become a teacher, i will devote myself to giving them better education. lastly, our country is in great need of teachers, especially in rural areas. after i graduate, i will return to my hometown and serve as a g

27、ood teacher. 2008年山东卷高考英语作文及范文 假设你是新华中学的学生张华，班里从外地转来一名同学李明，他一时无法融入到新的班集体中，感到很苦恼。请根据下列要点用英语给他写封信： 1、帮他分析原因； 2、给他提出建议； 3、陈述你帮助他的具体打算。 注意：词数120 150 dear li ming, best regards, zhang hua 范文： dear liming, i know you are now having trouble communicating with others, and you may often feel lonely. thats be

28、cause you are new here and people dont know about you. but i think you can make it搞定 if only you can follow the advice below. first, you should take an active part in the discussions and show your own opinions about the matters, and at the same time, learn to listen to other peoples views. second, y

29、ou should learn about your classmates likes and dislikes. then you can have much in common with有共同点 them. this way, you can get to逐渐的 know more different people and show them that you are just as friendly. last but not least, im always here ready to help. we can take part in some activities together

30、 and i can introduce you to others. with time going on随着时间的推移, people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can do as按照 the above以上. best regards, zhang hua2009年高考英语作文及范文 假设你是李华，曾在美国学校，现现已回国。你想联系你的美国老师mr.smith.但没有其联系方式，请根据以下几点给你的美国同学tom写一封信： 1 感谢tom对你英语学习的帮助； 2 询问mr. smi

31、th的近况并索要其联系方式；3 邀请tom在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。 注意：1.词数120-150； 2可适当增加细节。 范文： dear tom, i am now back china and sound. in this letter i would like to convey my heartfelt appreciation to you for your kind assistance in my english learning when i was in new york. additionally, your generous help and tender care

32、made me feel warmly welcomed and transformed my first american trip into a unforgettable memory.（过长，建议不采用） i have been missing our english professor, mr.smith whose unusual cast of mind,wide and varied knowledge,together with a singular personal charm,combined to exert a strong influence on me.（建议该做who was kind to me）what about him recently? i desire to contact him for some suggestions on improving my listeningability.however,his email address is not