Abmyyfa英语六级范文.docx

1、Abmyyfa英语六级范文生命是永恒不断的创造，因为在它内部蕴含着过剩的精力，它不断流溢，越出时间和空间的界限，它不停地追求，以形形色色的自我表现的形式表现出来。泰戈尔英语六级真题作文新东方范文及点评09年12月：这种八股可以按照提纲写三段：支持的理由、反对的理由、我的观点。但最好在前面加上一个引言段。引言可以是简单的对全文观点的总结，也可以是相关争议的背景介绍。支持送孩子学艺术的理由不外乎成就艺术天才和培养兴趣爱好；反对的理由不外乎孩子压力过大和顺其自然等。到结尾段其实已经没什么好说：该说的在主体两段都说过了。所以只能总结加建议题目：Should parents send their kid

2、s to art class?1. 现在有不少家长送孩子参加各种艺术班；2. 对这种做法有人表示支持，也有人并不赞成；3. 我认为 -范文一Should parents send their kids to art classes?A childs world is supposed to be fresh and new and beautiful, full of wonder and excitement. Unfortunately, this is not the case for some kids, especially for those born and bred in ci

3、ties - their joys are dimmed and even lost because a majority of them are forced to attend various art classes. Some claim that it is beneficial for childrens development. They might have their reasons because most parents are convinced that their kids are gifted gifts from the god. They presume tha

4、t the earlier their children are exposed to arts, the more likely it is to find out the artistic potential hidden in them. Even if their children fail to become another child prodigy like Lang Lang or Li Yundi, the interests in arts, say, in music, cultivated in childhood will be of great value in t

5、heir whole life. In spite of the possible benefits mentioned, I, like others, am strongly against it. The major harm is that it might deprive children of their pleasure to play after school. Faced with competition and contest for better universities, most children are buried in piles of homework. Fo

6、rcing them to art classes will leave them less time to enjoy the beauty of the nature or to find their talent in things they are really interested in. To sum up, childhood is a time for children to play as they wish. Rather than cramming knowledge, it is more important to pave the way for their desi

7、re to know than to put them on a diet of facts they are not ready to assimilate. 范文二Recently there has been much discussion as to the desirablity of parents sending their kids to various art classes. Generally, there are two camps of views on this phenomenon.Some parents believe that childhood is th

8、e golden time for developing artistic talents in their children. A friend of mine told me that he wants his son to become a pianist like Langlang. “But if my son does not start from an early age, its only an unachievable dream,” he exclaimed. So he sends his five-year-old kid to piano classes every

9、Saturday, rain or shine. Others, however voiced a different opinion. Their main argument is that attending art classes will impair the health of these children, who have toiled for five days at school. To materialize their parents dream, many kids have to burn the candle at both ends.Personally, I a

10、m not in favor of sending all kids to art classes. As a proverb goes, “Love is the best teacher.” Parents should first of all find out whether their kids love the art or not. You can lead a horse to a river, but can you make him drink? （188 words）评析：本文与2009年6月的六级作文一样，属于对立观点型文章，这种文章难点在于要求学生具有一定的思辨能力。

11、建议同学们把本文写成三个段落，题目中的第一点宜拓展成引言段，引出本文所讨论的话题。第二点宜拓展成主题段，这部分是文章的重心所在，一定要浓墨重彩，写得丰满翔实。在这一部分，同学们可以紧扣题纲，先写赞成送孩子参加艺术班的观点，然后再写反对者的观点，在分量上两部分要基本保持平衡。题目的第三点宜写成结尾段，表明自己的观点。持何种观点并不重要，所以同学们可以在这一段里根据自己的知识储备来决定自己赞成主体段中的哪种观点，当然也可以提出一种更加新颖独到的观点，如本文的结尾段指出，家长首先要弄明白自己的孩子是否喜欢某一门艺术，否则，你可以把马牵到河边，但你能强迫它喝水吗？2009年6月作文作为四六级考试中最大

12、的一块主观题，对考生来说是重要的。和以前一样，现在作文沿袭固有的出题风格，四级偏重于校园生活，六级掺入初步的分析方式。另外，考生应该注意以下一些方面。由于作文采用先扫描，然后在电脑前阅卷，所以在阅卷教师主观判卷过程中，作文的框架和书写的整洁程度对分值段的评定起着较重要的作用。黑色水笔作答，这样可以显影更加清晰。涂改液，对答题纸的折叠，和使用其他颜色的水笔都有可能对扫描效果造成负面影响。格式上，这里推荐用齐头式，这样会让卷面看上去更整洁。另外，字写得大且端正，可显得文章清楚，也可以弥补字写得不好的缺点。齐头式，要求所有段落的首行，都在左边顶格，段落中间空行。构思简单，少犯错误。外语考试的作文，考

13、查的目标不是考生的思维水平或逻辑分析能力，而是考核语言表达能力。所以建议采取的措施是，简化自己的思维和分析。也就是，如何降低自己的思维水平，来迎合自己有限的语言状况。语言上，关键在于变化，变化不分难易，只要有变化就行。变化分为词的变化、句的变化。在用词上，同一文章中，相同意义的词要争取不断的用近义词替换。广大考生可以灵活运用写作套路，比如上课时候学的一些经典句型或结构。现在的作文大多还是提纲式的文章，可以把提纲变为中心句放在每段的开头，后面加上由逻辑词链接的分支观点。这就是所谓的老路新走，不变应万变。题目：On the Importance of a Name有人认为名字(名称)不重要；有人认

14、为非常重要；你认为呢？审题概述 这次的六级作作文还是一篇议论文，讨论名字的重要性。但是在审题是要注意，这里的名字不仅仅局限于人的名字，而是“a neme”，不确定。因此，在写作文的时候还要考虑各种事物的名字。写作步骤第一段，主要先写一下人们对于名字重要性的不同看法，然后表达自己的观点。第二段，第二段开始就要详细地阐述原因，来支持自己的观点。我们可以从先从人的名字出发，写出名字对于一个人的重要性，也可以举些例子来进一步为自己的观点提供有力的论据。然后再从别的事物的名字着手，探讨名字对事物的重要性(因为题中的“name”一词既包含人的名字也包含事物的名字)，然后举例，增加议论的力度。按照这样的思路

15、写的话，文章就具有很大的说服力。第三段，最后一段重申自己的立场，利用总结性的语句对自己的前文做个概述，结束全文。难易程度这次的六级作文题目比较新颖，对于广大的学生来说有一定的难度。范文一： On the Importance of a NameAccording to the Bible, it is the almighty God who gave names to everything he created: he named the light Day and the darkness Night. In fact, a name is a word or phrase that ma

16、n uses to denote and identify a specific person, place or thing. There is no inexorable correlation between the sign and the signified. For this reason, some claim that names are not so vital as they are supposed to be. However, I am fully convinced that they are of great importance. Take the name o

17、f a person as an example. It is known to all that a persons name is divided into two parts: given name and surname. The given name is the name our parents assign us. We ourselves might change it later in our life. Usually, when a name is given, it contains a lot of information. Say, li in the name o

18、f some Chinese females shows that we wish them to beautiful while wei in the names of some males reveals that we expect them to be great in their future life. As to the surname or family name, it is even more important, so important that some people may sacrifice their life for it. Originally, man h

19、ad no such a name. But ever since a certain name was given, each member of the family carries it wherever he goes. Rather than merely a sign, it is the root from which we can trace back to our ancestor, the tie that helps bind us to other members of the same clan, the dignity most people hope to liv

20、e for. Apart from the name of a person, that of a place or thing is also significant in that it embodies history and culture. All in all, though names are assigned artificially, man is not free when giving names. But God is. 范文二：On the Importance of a NameIn recent years, many people become more and

21、 more concerned about the importance of a name. They choose very carefully the names for their children and sometimes even for the shop, restaurant or the company they run. They consider that a name can influence a persons whole life. Whats more, some people believe that sometimes a good name would

22、bring good luck.However, peoples view varies from person to person. Not everyone thinks a deliberately chosen name really . They argue that a name is just a name, to which people shouldnt attach too much superstitious ideas. Success depends much more on hardworking and down-to-earth attitude than ho

23、w you name a shop or a person.As far as I am concerned, I favor the latter opinion. Although a carefully chosen name can tell the best wishes the young generation, we still ought not to rely on the fortune a name can bring, nor can we blame our occasional bad luck on it. （160词）2008年12月这次的六级考试写作题和以前主

24、题是基本一致的。大多是校园生活，其次是和人们日常生活相关的题目。其实考什么不重要。 重要的是从不同的题目中找到写作共同的规律。分析以往试题，大多文章的结构一般是简要描述现象，主体部分是分析原因或者列举影响，最后大多是总结和建议。有时会有一些变动，基本结构是类同。作文的主题也不是考生担心的问题，因为考试的中心是语言，内容不偏题就行。在我们课堂讲解中，对于这种文章大家都会有一些成熟的句型或模式，关键是灵活应用这些句型，另外英语重变化，课堂中教的加法句、减法句、插入句等等都是可以用的。最后要提醒的是减少语言错误。题目：How to improve students mental health1、 大

25、学生的心理健康十分重要2、 因此，学校可以.3、 我们自己应当.范文一：Students mental health has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life. Indeed, it is widely accepted that it has gained growing popularity among persons in all walks of life. There is a general discussion today about the issue of disorder i

26、n brains. Obviously, it is necessary that effective actions should be taken to prevent problems. Authorities in universities play a critical role in the situation. To begin with, schools, such as colleges or universities, can provide chances for the young men to ease their attention. Whats more, som

27、e are physically strong, but psychological problems are able to bring potential threats. Teaches may have a chance to find them in advance. Besides, specialists in this field are to be required to make full preparation for cases in time. Facing the crisis, experts can deal with it in a professional

28、way, which means they have more or better opportunities to save us than others. From the factors mentioned above, we may safely draw the conclusion that we can free ourselves from mental illness by taking certain precautions. For example, if you have pains or puzzles in mind, finding a friend to exp

29、ress these is a good way to release pressure. Certainly, there is little doubt that further attention will be paid to the issue.范文二：How to improve psychological health?As is known to all, psychological health is as important as, if not more important than, physical health for a student during his/he

30、r growth. However, its quite worrying that nowadays some students are not quite psychologically healthy.Undoubtedly, schools and universities should take great account in the responsibilities of students psychological health. Relevant courses and activities should be introduced to students so that t

31、hey would be more aware of the significance of psychological health and find appropriate ways to maintain and improve it. For example, there should be a psychological counseling hotline or office for students to turn to when they need some psychological aid.Of course no psychological health can be o

32、btained without the efforts from the students themselves. From my perspective, what they can do is trying to stay positive, optimistic and follow the right guidelines from their schools. To be more specific, they can participate in some activities such as voluntary work to cultivate an opening and caring mind. Meanwhile, harmful impacts from the cyber space should definitely be avoided.翻译及有用短语2009年六月1、 With the oil price ever rising, she tried to talk him out of buying a car (说服他不买车)说服某人做某事可以用“talk sb. into doing