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1、写科研论文导师不传授的细节当审稿人拿起文章的时候，总体印象起了很大的作用。审稿人的心理定势就是判断“过”还是“不过”，没有第三种选择。如果他的印象是“不过”，就反复找理由挑毛病。所以要想通过，首先要写得好，让审稿人挑不出毛病。而如何写得好？很多细节导师是不会传授的。悟性非常重要！以前的硕士生导师的科技英语写作水平非常好，有时候她修改别人的文章后，会把修改文章的思路和文章的写法传授给我。后来读博士的时候，导师的写作水平就更棒了，他虽然没有条条框框地指导，但是从反复修改文章的红笔文字中，我也悟到了很多。现在我来分享一些我体会出来的别人很少传授的写作细节。1）写作的时候一般不要描述发现科学事实的曲折

2、故事。可以写我们受别人某个工作的启发发现了我们的东西，然是不要说：“我们首先叫某个学生去做，没有做出来。后来我们亲自改进了方法，终于做出来了。”不要说：“为了确定这个物质，我们查阅了大量书籍，从来没有报道过。于是我们到图书馆找了其它文献，发现了归属。”不要暗示“没有功劳也有苦劳”，而要直奔主题。这个要点也许显而易见，但是其实不然。在读文章的时候经常可以看到这样的不妥当的说法。我以前读博士第一次做报告的时候，最后一张薄膜是一堆杂志的封面。我对听众说，为了做这个年度考核报告，为了做我的科研，我看了这些杂志三百篇文献。会后，导师对我说：“不要让别人看到你的汗水，要用科学结果来吸引别人。即使你绕了很大

3、弯子得到最后的结果，你也要轻松地讲，让别人感到你很聪明。”根据How to Write a Successful Science Thesis (Wiley-VCH)一书p. 98, Experimental work is by definition a journey into the unknown, fraught with detours and dead ends, but all such obstacles are basically irrelevant from a scientific standpoint. Look upon your dissertation-as

4、you would any other research report-not as a memoir documenting and explaining your every activity, but instead as a proclamation of a set of new insights. How you achieved your results may perhaps play some role in your mentors appraisal of your efforts, but otherwise it will be of interest only to

5、 the extent that certain intimate details may be critical from a methodological standpoint.2）少用陈词滥调。很多很多所谓写作秘诀的网上资料都提供一些句法，但是其实很多都是陈词滥调，不提供任何信息，可以高度精简。以下是我给一篇文章审稿的片断意见：7 Another reason on why this paper is long and somewhat distracting is that you frequently use words such as It was found that (p. 2

6、), It is worth noting that (p. 7), It was observed that (p. 8), It was observed that (p. 9), It was noted that (p. 12), We observed that (of course, its you who make the observation!), It was noticed that (p. 13), It was interesting to see that, It was observed that, It was concluded that (p. 15), I

7、t was found that (p. 17).”有时候用了陈词滥调反而帮了倒忙。以下是我给另外一篇文章的审稿意见片断：10 Throughout the text, for two or three times (e.g., line 11 of p. 12), the authors always wrote it is not surprising that. The intention of the authors was to justify their data, to say that their data are normal. However, if the authors

8、 always say it is not surprising, why should the reader care unsurprising results? Isnt it better to use it is justified that. or it is reasonable that.?”为了证明我说的这些是有道理的，我举How to Write a Successful Science Thesis (Wiley-VCH)一书p. 39,Avoid sentences that are unnecessarily complex and entangled, or run

9、on interminably. Problems of the latter sort often have their origin in that constructions:Example 4-8: It is well established that. (of course!)One can assume that. (presumably!)From this result it follows that. (= thus, hence, therefore)We must not take it for granted that . (= unlikely)Note that

10、the examples above are followed in parentheses by a word or words with the potential to head the offending sentence off in a more promising direction. Sometimes a single well-chosen word is able to replace an entire phrase, simultaneously eliminating the need for at least one punctuation mark. Equal

11、ly important, a remodeling in this sense often permits the true message of the sentence to migrate from an awkward subordinate clause to the main clause, where it belongs.3) 写文章不能用讨审稿人打的时髦语，不能任意吹嘘夸大影响。比如有的人说自己的实验设计是beautiful，实验结果是amazing, remarkable，自己的催化剂是“超级稳定”，自己的薄膜是“超级薄”，在引言部分说自己的课题是“公众都注意的北极星”，

12、这样必然招打。很简单，什么是“超级稳定”的定义？最稳定就是转化率一直100%不变，那么“超级稳定”究竟超级到什么程度？什么叫“超级薄”？最薄就一个原子的大小，“超级薄”能比一个原子还小吗？有的人写文章引言夸大能源危机，搞得读者人人自危，帽子虽然大，最后还是缩小到自己一个没有意义的课题。那么，审稿人就要问：就凭你这点结果，你的催化剂能解决能源危机吗？你的催化剂能工业化吗？Communicating Science: A Practical Guide一书p. 50, Hype tends to creep in naturally under the pen. A good characteri

13、zation of hype is overindulgence in adjectives. Just like overindulging in sweets leads to obesity, accumulating adjectives bloats a text, makes it bottom-heavy and turns it into failure. p. 26, I am not telling you to shy from waving your flag. Advertising is definitely involved in the writing of a

14、n introduction, but the softest of touches is needed. One-upmanship can be very distructive.The Elements of Styles（插图版）一书p. 106, Do not overstate. When you overstate, readers will be instantly on guard, and everything that has preceded your overstatement as well as everything that follows it will be

15、 suspect in their minds because they have lost confidence in your judgment or your poise. Overstatement is one of the common faults. A single overstatement, wherever or however it occurs, diminishes the whole, and a single carefree superlative has the power to destroy, for readers, the objective of

16、your enthusiasm.4) 鼓励恰当地用主动语气。以前很多老师都说写科研论文要用被动语气。其实，大家去读Chemical Communications杂志，每一篇文章都读，发现大多数的三页文章里面至少有几个主动句，有的有十几个主动句。什么情况用被动句，什么情况用主动句？答案是大多数情况用被动句，特别是描述实验方法。但是有的情况下用主动句有画龙点睛的效果。仔细读Chemical Communications杂志，发现的常见主动句是Herein, we report., We propose that., To further check/demonstrate this hypothe

17、sis, we designed further experiment by., We believe that., To see whether . is due to., we did further experiments.可见主动句有几种，第一种是在引言中说我们发现了什么；第二中是说我们认为什么，是提建议的；第三种是说为了证明什么，我们做了进一步的实验。有了这些主动句，文章就更加神采飞扬了。为了说明我的话是合理的，我举How to Write a Successful Science Thesis (Wiley-VCH)一书p. 37,We urge you in general, a

18、s often as you can, to incorporate lively verbs into your writing. Trt to take as much advantages as you can of sentence structures rooted in the active voice, which is the most welcoming environment for words of action. Few world dispute the assertion, however, that passive constructions rarely con

19、tribute in a positive way to descriptive prose.p. 84, It has become increasingly common in published scientific works to encounter examples of first-person verb forms, which unquestionably add life to their surroundings. Note that this development carries an important inplication, however: the autho

20、rs responsible are suggesting in a subtle way that the parties involved in conducting a scholarly investigation may themselves play a more than passive role:Examples 10-7 . This being the case, we elected to. We therefore separated (introduced, heated). In the hope of conferring antimalarial activit

21、y on pharmaceutical precursors, we prepared.5) 注意段落的长度和结构，注意起承转合、行云流水、收发自如！读间行打印的原始稿件，如果一段话占据一页，就太长了。一般6-15行是正常范围。How to Write a Successful Science Thesis (Wiley-VCH)一书p. 39,In general, paragraphs should probably not exceed about a third of a page, equivalent to perhaps four to eight sentences. Para

22、graphs make an important contribution to the intellectual structure of a document, quite apart from the fact that they break up an otherwise endless stream of text, which is unsightly and inflicts too much organizational burden on the reader.Structuring a document as a series of coherent paragraphs

23、forces the author to sort out and present his or her thoughts in a logical fashion. That is to say, a proper paragraph is dedicated to exploring a single subject or thought, which in principle could easily be articulated in a brief descriptive title.The first sentence in every paragraph warrants spe

24、cial attention. One of its principle functions is to let the reader know what the ensuing discussion is about, for which reason it is often referred to as the topic sentence. The corresponding topic is then pursued in sentences that immediately follow, with the final sentence in the paragraph so cra

25、fted that if supplies a bridge to the next paragraph.一篇好文章的总体结构见The Longman Practical Stylist一书：龙头，凤尾，猪肚。写引言的时候从一个吸引广大读者的宽泛的概念聚焦到本文要描述的实验，由大到小，倒金字塔结构。最后收尾的时候，从本文具体的结论展望到未来，由小到大，金字塔结构。6) 文章要写得花妙，还得注意结尾部分。就是说，文章写到最后，不能嘎然而止，而要说清楚本文的意义、对这个领域的贡献、本文的局限性和下一步可以怎么做。这样，读起来有意犹未尽的感觉。How to Write a Successful Sc

26、ience Thesis (Wiley-VCH)一书p. 102，Near the end of your discussion you may want to be bold and suggest interesting avenues for future exploration: promising approaches to resolving remaining uncertainties, ideas for broadening the scope of a methodology you have developed, or ways of possibly refining

27、 your results. If so, be sure the suggestions you make are concrete.写了那么多“秘诀”，觉得科研写作的确是奥妙无穷的。说到这里，举一个例子：最近读到一篇奇文。这篇文章讲的是超高真空表面化学，只有一张图，一个示意图，居然能中德国应用化学会志。Hydrocarbon Chain Growth on V(100) Single-Crystal Surfaces via Vinyl Intermediates(p 6583-6585)Min Shen, Francisco ZaeraPublished Online: Jul 23 2

28、008 2:14AMhttp:/dx.doi.org/10.1002/anie.200802338读罢这篇文章，不禁拍案叫绝。且不说具体的学术内容和新发现吧。这篇文章的写作手法非常巧妙，使出了“杀手锏”。一般人写这类文章，都在报数据，这个峰在这个位置，那个峰在那个位置。而这篇文章，通篇血脉通畅，一气呵成，如行云流水。它逻辑性非常强。在科学哲学当中，有种科学发现方法叫做：提出假说=做实验证明=得到证据=产生新的疑问=针对疑问做新的对照实验、诊断实验来消除疑问=优化假说。这篇文章里面能够看到这种思辨的过程。里面的新实验都是围绕着疑问进行，然后说是证明了一个假说还是排除了一个假说。而描述这些新的实验

29、的时候，几句话就说明了问题。这篇文章又粗浅易懂。开头就把这个工作和工业上经久不衰的F-T合成联系起来。在当中，很少叙述图的峰位置、峰形，而是定性地说发现了什么产物，由此推测 硕士、博士论文写作几大自动编号功能（一） 首次分享者：流沙 已被分享230次 评论(0) 复制链接 分享 转载 删除 也许你已经硕士、博士毕业了，也许你正在参与科研报告编写，也许你正在撰写论文，是不是遇到很多word里面的图表，公式自动编号的问题呢？本文提到的论文写作几大自动编号功能，定能让你事半功倍（亲身体验(o)哦），因为专业所以专长。如果你还在用office2003，那么你确实out了。本文所述方法是基于office

30、2007。 1、图的自动编号也许有人觉得没有必要自动编号，但是想想如果一个报告里面有几十张图，几百张图的时候，改动一个图，所有的图的编号都要改变，工作量非常之大。第一步，选中图片，右键，选插入题注，弹出如下对话框；第二步，在该对话框中，选择新建标签，然后输入图1.或是图2.或是图3.等，或是图1-，图2-，图3-，具体如何看各个学校的规定和自己的爱好，我们学校建议采用图1.这种格式。第三步，输入好后，就可以看到自动编号的样子了，一般图的自动编号选择在图片的下面，表的自动编号，选择在表的上面。第四步，点击确定，对插入的图进行命名，排版（一般采用黑体，五号，居中），自动编号的图片前面有个黑点，这个黑点就是以后图表索引位置。2、表格的自动编号表格的自动编号同图的自动编号，只是表格选择在上面。这里如果你word里面没有相应标签，就要新建适合自己的标签，新建标签的方法前面图的自动编号中有。3、公式的自动编号第一步，安装mathtype6.0或是6.5以上的编辑器，设置公式自动编号的显示格式；第二步，点击上面后，弹出如下公式格式设置对话框，按着对话框来设置就差不多了；第三步，点击插入公式；第四步，所有公式插入完了以后，全选，点击update，就可以自动更新公式的编号了。后续中如果要添加新的公式，或是删除公式按着相同的方法就可以实现公式的自动编号和更新。