学年上海市16区高三英语二模汇编写作优质范文汇编分专题.docx

1、学年上海市16区高三英语二模汇编写作优质范文汇编分专题2020-2021学年高三英语二模写作题目及范文汇编专题一：应用文One【虹口区】Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.76. 假定你是明启中学的高中生李华。某电视台线上学习节目打算增设两个栏目。初步拟定从 “Reading for Fun”、 “Textbook Learning”、 “Homework Guidance”、 “Online Listenin

2、g”以及”Questions and Answers”五个栏目中选取两个，特此向所有在线学习者征求意见。请你给电视台写封邮件，推荐两个栏目。邮件内容须包括：1.你推荐的两个栏目；2.你推荐这两个栏目的理由。【例题分析】一、写前阶段：题目要求李华作为高中学生，对于电视台学习节目增设栏目的事情，进行推荐。其实，把握推荐信格式，列出基本提纲：第一部分：推荐的两个栏目分别是什么；第二部分：为什么推荐这两个节目；第三部分：总结全文。提纲明确了写作的三部分, 信件的开头，主要内容和总结部分，这样的提纲可以帮助学生紧扣题目要求，明确写作内容，抓住重点，不偏题，有序组织篇章。列提纲的过程，就是考生理解作文题意

3、，理清思路, 筛选内容，做出选择的过程。列提纲不仅有助于写作是组织内容，还可以用作完成后写作自我修正的对照标准。二、写中阶段：从作文内容，语言和结构评分标准看来，在写前阶段审题，辨文体和列提纲后，能够拿到内容和结构的基本分数.但是，想要拿到高分，谋篇布局之外，语言和内容也很关键，优美贴切语言能够准确表达作者的意图，而立意深刻角度新颖的内容，更是彰显语言的重要性。Dear Tv ProducerHearing that your programmes wants to add two concepts and is asking for every online learners advice,

4、 from my point of view, online listening and questions and answers will be good choices. （分析：首段，以信件固定格式开头，直接给出推荐的2个节目名字）For one thing, online listening is very suitable for the online studying programme. Not only can it improve listeners listening skills, but also can help listeners maintain a long

5、term practice. As we all know, everyone is busy in his or her daily life and long term study is hard for them to keep. If the online listening programme is added, out of question listeners can lay a solid foundation for their English listening.For another thing, question and answers concept can evol

6、ve a more lively and interesting study air. In this concept, learners can ask others about their problems and then can be solved. Whats more, this programme can motivate learners to communicate with others and broaden their horizons.（分析：主体部分，直接分段落，过渡自然，如for one thing, for another thing等等，自然展开对文章论述，分

7、别阐述了这两个节目的理由。同时，使用了not.only,but also倒装句型if条件句等。）In short, as a fan of your programme, I wholeheartedly hope that these two concepts can be added in the coming programme.Yours Sincerely Zhang Hua （分析：末段，以信件的固定格式结尾，表达希望对方采纳及祝愿）三、写后阶段：复读检查，格式标点 语法词汇拼写错误，规避明显中式英语。要提高写作水平，必须重视平时写作练习的过程，而且要在作文写完后，要有意识的、多次

8、反复修改作文。学生可以通过自行修改，也可以在提交老师之前修改，还要在老师批改后进行自我修改，在这些不断的自我修正过程中去发现问题，并加以改进。修改过程，首先关注演讲稿的写作格式和写作对象，在内容上能够打动听众，在语言的选择和使用上，注意选取能够调动读者感受的句子。同时还是否运用恰当和有变化的句子结构，是否运用了恰当的过渡词使句子之间连贯流畅。 Two【黄浦区】Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.学校图书馆正在改

9、造，拟添置打印机、扫描仪和咖啡机这三项设备中的一项，并打算购买一些装饰物品来美化环境，目前学生会在广泛征求意见。假设你是该校学生王佳，请给学生会发封邮件，给出你的建议，内容须包括: 你建议图书馆添置的设备及理由 (三选一); 你建议图书馆购买的装饰物品及理由 (两件) 。【例题分析】一、写前阶段：题目要求王佳作为高中学生，对于学校图书馆添置设备进行建议。其次，把握建议信格式，列出基本提纲：第一部分：简要自我介绍（避免透漏详细的个人信息），简述背景（学校图书馆改造，学生会对于添置设备和装饰品向大家征求建议），表明写邮件的目的（基于这个背景，给学生会提出自己的建议）；第二部分：针对添置设备三选一和

10、装饰品选二这两个方面，提出自己观点，然后分述2-3点理由；第三部分：对自己的建议观点进行总结，希望对方采纳或者考虑建议，表达对学校图书馆建设的祝愿，以及致谢。提纲明确了写作的三部分, 信件的开头，主要内容和总结部分，这样的提纲可以帮助学生紧扣题目要求，明确写作内容，抓住重点，不偏题，有序组织篇章。列提纲的过程，就是考生理解作文题意，理清思路, 筛选内容，做出选择的过程。列提纲不仅有助于写作是组织内容，还可以用作完成后写作自我修正的对照标准。二、写中阶段：从作文内容，语言和结构评分标准看来，在写前阶段审题，辨文体和列提纲后，能够拿到内容和结构的基本分数.但是，想要拿到高分，谋篇布局之外，语言和内

11、容也很关键，优美贴切语言能够准确表达作者的意图，而立意深刻角度新颖的内容，更是彰显语言的重要性。Dear Student Union，Im Wang Jia, learning that our school is intended to make some improvement in the school library, and coincidentally, you are now gathering publics suggestions on its upgrading, I am desperate to share some of my humble opinions out

12、of my concern for our school.（分析：首段，以信件的固定格式开头，简要自我介绍（避免透漏详细的个人信息），简述背景（学校图书馆改造，学生会对于添置设备和装饰品向大家征求建议），表明写邮件的目的（基于这个背景，给学生会提出自己的建议）When it comes to choosing a typing machine, a scanner or a coffee machine to add to the library, I will definitely recommend a coffee machine. Compared with adding the ty

13、ping machine and the scanner, a coffee machine has evident advantages over them. On the one hand, there is a lack of coffee machine, to provide alternative drinks except pure water. For coffee can help us to be our sharpest and most creative when we are reading, we will be more productive due to thi

14、s little machine. On the other, a typing machine and a scanner can be easily accessible to us in our teachers office and printing room, it is totally a waste to add the same facilities.In terms of the inner decorations, without any doubt, green plants and paintings from our students and teachers can

15、 beautify our reading rooms. For one thing, green plants can provide fresh air during the day and create a comfortable corner to relax ourselves for a while. After a long time reading, we can also protect our eyes by taking a look at those lovely plants. For another, paintings from our students and

16、teachers showing our positive spiritual features, will enhance our artistic appreciation.（分析：主体部分，直接分段落，过渡自然，如in terms of ,for the one hand, for the other,for one thing, for the other等等，自然展开对文章论述，针对添置设备三选一和装饰品选二这两个方面，提出自己观点，然后分述2-3点理由。同时，使用了when it comes to, compared with, 动名词作主语等亮点词组语法。）By all acco

17、unts above, adding a coffee machine, some plants and paintings is a better choice for our library. I hope you can consider my advice seriously and I firmly believe our school library will be a more comfortable and appealing place for us to study. Thank you for sparing your time for reading my letter

18、.（分析：末段，以信件的固定格式结尾。对自己的建议观点进行总结，希望对方采纳或者考虑建议，表达对学校图书馆建设的祝愿，以及致谢。）三、写后阶段：复读检查，格式标点 语法词汇拼写错误，规避明显中式英语。要提高写作水平，必须重视平时写作练习的过程，而且要在作文写完后，要有意识的、多次反复修改作文。学生可以通过自行修改，也可以在提交老师之前修改，还要在老师批改后进行自我修改，在这些不断的自我修正过程中去发现问题，并加以改进。修改过程，首先关注演讲稿的写作格式和写作对象，在内容上能够打动听众，在语言的选择和使用上，注意选取能够调动读者感受的句子。同时还是否运用恰当和有变化的句子结构，是否运用了恰当的过

19、渡词使句子之间连贯流畅。Three【闵行区】Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.76.假设你是李华，你们学校将为学生开设一系列微课程，每人可以选择其中的一项参加课程包括“文学欣赏”(Literature Appreciation)、“厨艺” (Cooking Skills)和“野外生存” (Wilderness Survival Skills)。你在英国留学的表哥Wilson很关心你这次课程的选择。清你写E-m

20、ail给他，说说你选择的结果，并简要谈谈这你样选择的理由。【例题分析】一、写前阶段：题目要求李华针对本次课程选择，给英语留学的表哥写一封邮件。其次，把握邮件格式，列出基本提纲：第一部分：简单问好，简述背景，表明写邮件的目的；第二部分：针对自己的选择，分别阐述2-3点理由；第三部分：表达希望对方能够理解自己的选择，且希望对方回复及对表哥的祝愿。提纲明确了写作的三部分, 邮件的开头，主要内容和总结部分，这样的提纲可以帮助学生紧扣题目要求，明确写作内容，抓住重点，不偏题，有序组织篇章。列提纲的过程，就是考生理解作文题意，理清思路, 筛选内容，做出选择的过程。列提纲不仅有助于写作是组织内容，还可以用作

21、完成后写作自我修正的对照标准。二、写中阶段：从作文内容，语言和结构评分标准看来，在写前阶段审题，辨文体和列提纲后，能够拿到内容和结构的基本分数.但是，想要拿到高分，谋篇布局之外，语言和内容也很关键，优美贴切语言能够准确表达作者的意图，而立意深刻角度新颖的内容，更是彰显语言的重要性。Dear wilson A series of supplementary curricula, including Literature Appreciation, Cooking Skills and wilderness Survival Skills will be launched in my school

22、 to enrich students extracurricular life and each student is allowed to sign up for one of them. Considering your concern, I want to share my final decision and reasons with you.（分析：首段，以邮件固定格式开头，简单问好，简述背景，表明写邮件的目的）Of all the course, I have signed up for Wilderness Survival skills for several reasons

23、. To begin with, the prospect of interacting with nature and learning more about it has never failed to appeal to me. The exploration involved can be extraordinarily refreshing and constantly fuels my intellectual curiosity. Apart from the uplift it is likely to bring, the course interests me in tha

24、t it affords high school students a desirable opportunity to combine the theoretical knowledge in different subjects and put them into practice. The application of theories serves as the key internalizing stage in the acquisition of knowledge, narrowing the gap between the primary learning of concep

25、ts and the consequent reflection. Most importantly, I intend to improve my overall quality, which reflects the essential goal of education, through taking the course-the training of survival skills can be highly beneficial to the cultivation of my problem-solving skills, adaptability to various urge

26、nt situations and sense of responsibility as well as cooperation.（分析：主体部分，过渡自然，如to begin with,most importantly等等，自然展开对文章论述，针对自己的选择，分别阐述2-3点理由） I hope that my explanation has driven my point home. I am looking forward to your reply. Take care and stay safesincerely Yours ,Li Hua（分析：末段，以邮件固定格式收尾，表达自己希

27、望对方能够理解自己的选择，且希望收到对方回复及对表哥的祝愿）三、写后阶段：复读检查，格式标点 语法词汇拼写错误，规避明显中式英语。要提高写作水平，必须重视平时写作练习的过程，而且要在作文写完后，要有意识的、多次反复修改作文。学生可以通过自行修改，也可以在提交老师之前修改，还要在老师批改后进行自我修改，在这些不断的自我修正过程中去发现问题，并加以改进。修改过程，首先关注演讲稿的写作格式和写作对象，在内容上能够打动听众，在语言的选择和使用上，注意选取能够调动读者感受的句子。同时还是否运用恰当和有变化的句子结构，是否运用了恰当的过渡词使句子之间连贯流畅。Four【奉贤区】Directions: Wr

28、ite an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假设你是明启中学的李华，你的好友王磊为了考入理想的大学，每天挑灯夜战，分秒必争，不仅 忽视了体育锻炼，甚至连三餐也随意敷衍。请你给他写一封电子邮件，表达你的担忧，提出合理建议并说明理由。【例题分析】一、写前阶段：题目要求李华针对好友王磊熬夜学习、忽视体育锻炼、三餐忽视的情况，写一封邮件表达担忧及给出建议。其次，把握邮件格式，列出基本提纲：第一部分：简单问好，表达自己的担忧；第二部分：表明王磊现在状况的危

29、害及自己的建议；第三部分：表达平衡生活和学习的重要性及希望建议被采纳。提纲明确了写作的三部分, 邮件的开头，主要内容和总结部分，这样的提纲可以帮助学生紧扣题目要求，明确写作内容，抓住重点，不偏题，有序组织篇章。列提纲的过程，就是考生理解作文题意，理清思路, 筛选内容，做出选择的过程。列提纲不仅有助于写作是组织内容，还可以用作完成后写作自我修正的对照标准。二、写中阶段：从作文内容，语言和结构评分标准看来，在写前阶段审题，辨文体和列提纲后，能够拿到内容和结构的基本分数.但是，想要拿到高分，谋篇布局之外，语言和内容也很关键，优美贴切语言能够准确表达作者的意图，而立意深刻角度新颖的内容，更是彰显语言的

30、重要性。Dear Wang Lei,Considering we are all preparing for our ideal university, its understandable that you spare no efforts to study for high scores. Your recent behavior，however，including staying up till midnight，and ignoring exercise as well as daily meals have caused my great concern. Hence，Im writ

31、ing to you to give you some suggestions.（分析：首段，以邮件固有的格式开头，表达问候及自己对好友的担忧）In our modern society, competition has been increasingly intense, especially in large cities. Rest seems a kind of luxury to students who are fighting for their future. However, I strongly disapprove of the behavior that spendin

32、g most of time in studying and having no rest. I think its the high intensity of work that makes rest important and necessary. Too much focus on study not only cause mental pressure but also physical damage. Without a good rest, no people can pay all his attention to anything and do a good job. Therefore, we should learn to combine study and play which helps us go further.（分析：主体部分，过渡自然，如however,therefore等等，自然展开对文章论述，表明王磊现在的状态的危害及自己的建议.同时，使用了strongly disapprove of,not only but also,