看图写作专项训练拓展初英语语法.docx

1、看图写作专项训练拓展初英语语法1英语看图写作专项训练拓展（初）知识定位看图作文是中考作文的一种形式，说的直白点就是根据给出的一幅或几幅图画所供的信息写短文。此类题的体裁较广泛，可以是记叙文、说明文，也可以是议论文。主要考察的是学生图片述的能力。知识梳理图画作文的注意事项：1. 认真读图，把握中心。一般说来，所给的几幅图都是围绕一个中心展开的。它们讲述的通常是一个小故事或小事件，这个小故事或小事件就是这组图画所要表达的中心。2. 初步构思，考虑用词、短语、句型和时态。在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容。尽可能地充分利用所学的

2、短语或句型来表述具体的内容。这是体现自身能力的重要一环。3. 连词成句，然后再连句成文。运用适当的单词或短语正确表达各图的意思。然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来。串连时，要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句，不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象，更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。4. 反复审核，修改错误。一篇文章写好后，应进行检查，看短文中是否有错，如拼写、用词、时态、语态及表达方面的错误。5. 宜详则详，该略则略。对于一些细节方面的内容，如果是文章必不可少的，在写作过程中是不可将其忽略的。如果是可有可无的细节，则可视具体情况进行增删。据此，我们在读图时一定要注意阅读各图中的一些细节内容，看其是否影响文章

3、的内容。26. 注意所给的汉语示。一般说来，看图写话中的汉语示往往给定了有关的时间、地点、人物等相关的信息，有的还规定了文章所采用的体裁，如使用书信、留言、日记等。因此，在审题时我们一定要注意所给的汉语示。7. 文章中少用复句，多用单句；少用直接引语，代之间接引语。例题精讲【试题来源】【题目】根据所给图画，用英语写一篇约 80 词的短文。要求完整叙述故事内容。【答案】One day, it was sunny. Jim and Tom went to the No.1 park. While they were having fun playing in the park, they hear

4、d loud music around them. Some people were dancing with the music. The music was so loud that they couldnt stand it. So the boys went to stop them. They told the dancers that the loud music made others uncomfortable. After hearing this, the dancer said sorry to the boys and turned down the music at

5、once. All the other people spoke highly of the boys and the dancers. Jim and Tom went away happily.What good boys they are. We should learn from them.【解析】本题是一篇看图作文。我们应首先做的就是仔细观察画面，了解图画内容，然后用正确的语句将这些内容表达出来。根据要求完整叙述故事内容可知，本文主要使用一般过去时态，主要是用第三人称。在书写时要注意时态与时间状语相一致、主语和谓语要一致。亮点说明:亮点一：The music was so loud

6、that they couldnt stand it. 音乐的声音太大了以致他们不能忍受。亮点二：All the other people spoke highly of the boys and the dancers. 所有其他的人都高度赞扬那些男孩和跳舞的人。【知识点】看图写作专项训练拓展（初）【适用场合】当堂例题【难度系数】33【试题来源】【题目】“世界上最遥远的距离莫过于我们坐在一起，你却在玩手机”，这是网上流传很广的一句话，当这句话成为现实时，多少会有一些悲凉。近日，青岛市民张先生去爷爷家吃晚饭，饭桌上老人多次想和孙子孙女说说话，但孩子们却个个抱着手机玩，气得老人扔下一句“你们就和

7、手机过吧”，摔盘子离席而去。这与其说是一种不经意的习惯，不如说是对亲情的冷漠,。如今越来越多的人成为了手机控，请你仔细观察以下图片，述一下图中展现的现象，并且表达自己的观点，如何解决这样的问题。注意：100 词左右。可能用到的生词 a Phone Freak（手机控） mini blog(微博) WeChat(微信) Qzone（QQ 空间）From the cartoon given above, we can see_【答案】From the cartoon given above, we can see young people all play with mobile phones.

8、Thegrand parents have no chance to talk to them, which makes grandparents very angry.Nowadays，we can see people surfing the mini blog, talking on WeChat with mobile phones everywhere. Especially young people, we call these people “Phone Freak”.We are busy playing with mobile phones, but have no time

9、 to talk with our parents. This makes our family emotion become cold.Mobile phones bring us convenience, however, we shouldnt treat them as the entertainment tools. We should stay with our parents and grandparents as soon as we are free. Besides, mobile phones are bad for our health. The radiation c

10、omes from the mobile phones is quite harmful.【解析】这是一篇图画作文，我们需要将图画内容表述出来并阐述自己对这一现象的看法。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。亮点说明:这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如:busy doing sth；treatas；as soon as 等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.【知识点】看图写作专项训练拓展（初）【适用场合】当堂例题【难度系数】44习题演练【试题来源】【题目】根据所给图画，用英语写一篇 80 词左右

11、的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容。【答案】One day, Linda was on her way home. She saw a man ride a bike in front of him. Suddenly, a car ran against him at a high speed. The man fell to the ground and was hurt badly. But the driver didnt stop to save the man. Instead, he drove his car away quickly. Linda ran fast to catch

12、 up with the car. And she called the police. Soon the policeman came. He scolded the driver. At last, the driver apologized to the man.【解析】这是一篇看图作文，这样的作文我们必须要仔细观察图片，看清图片想要表达的意思，要对每一张图片所 表达的内容有正确的理解。这是写好作文的前。通过观察可知，这四张图片讲述了一次交通事故，是一个骑自行车的人和一辆汽车。从图上可以看出，是这辆汽车的速度太快了。而且，这名司机在撞人后还逃跑了。所以这些细节的内容我们要表达清楚，将这个

13、事故发生的时间、地点、人物、原因、结果等交代明白，完整的表达出来。通过分析可知，这篇短文我们应该主要使用一般过去时，所以要注意每句话中的动词，都要用过去式的形式。亮点说明:这篇作文写得还是比较优秀的。它以 Linda 为角度，把看到的一场交通事故叙述了下来。首先，作者交代了事故发生的时间和地点，One day, Linda was on her way home；接下来是这次事故中的双方以及事故的过程，She saw a man ride a bike in front of him. Suddenly, a car ran against him at a high speed. The m

14、an fell to the ground and was hurt badly.；然后是司机逃跑，Instead, he drove his car away quickly，这个句子中作者使用了一个单词instead，运用非常准确。最后是这次交通事故的处理，And she called the police. Soon the policeman came. He scolded the driver. At last, the driver apologized to the man。这篇作文对这次事件的叙述比较完整，表达比较准确。【知识点】看图写作专项训练拓展（初）【适用场合】当堂例题

15、【难度系数】3【试题来源】【题目】请仔细阅读以下关于初三学生睡眠时间调查结果的数据图表，以图表为依据简单分析初三学生的日常作息情况，谈谈你的感想，并就如何安排好复习迎考些建议， 写一篇不少于 60个词的短文。（标点符号不占格）Write a passage based on the given graphic with at least 60 words5（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。）【答案】Most students need about 8 to more than 9 hours of sleep every night. Unfortunately

16、, many students dont get enough sleep. recent studies show that 30 percent of the students sleep 6 hours every night ; 55 percent of the students sleep 6 to 7 hours every night ; 12 percent of the students sleep 8 hours every night and only 4 percent of the students sleep more than 10 hours every ni

17、ght.Your entrance examination at once, and I expect you to be very busy preparing for it and a little nervous. But I believe that you will do well. I am going to give you a few practical hints. It is no good to go on studying until the last minute of examination. What you need in the exam is a clear

18、 mind. If you tire yourself out before the examination, you will not be mentally and physically ready for it. So a day or two before the examination just relax-leave your books shut and try some other things: get out into the open air; do some physical exercises; see a film; have fun.I hope all thes

19、e suggestions will be helpful to you. Best wishes for your success. 【解析】考生首先要认真阅读前面的示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要应用一般现在时，所以在写作时，要尤其一般现在时的表达方式。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。亮点说明:这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如: preparing for ；at once；I am going to give you

20、 a few practical hints. do some physical exercises; see a film; have fun; I hope all these suggestions will be helpful to you. Best wishes for your success.学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。【知识点】看图写作专项训练拓展（初）【适用场合】当堂练习题【难度系数】3【试题来源】【题目】根据表中的信息，以“My friend”为题写一篇 60 词左右的短文。【答案】My friend

21、I have a good friend. His name is Li Ming. Hes 13 years old. Hes in Class Three, Grade One at No.1 Middle School. He likes reading, doing sports and listening to music. Hes tall. He wears 6glasses. He has short and black hair. He has some good friends. His teachers and classmates all like him.【解析】这是

22、篇给材料作文。材料中已经明确了所要写的内容。写作时不要遗漏这些要点。可以根据表格内容将各个信息一样样表达清楚。文章可使用第三人称，注意主谓一致，单词拼写的大小写和标点符号的正确使用。亮点说明:这篇作文紧扣材料，要点完整，表达准确清晰。Hes in Class Three, Grade One at No.1 Middle School 他在第一中学一年级三班。句中专有名词都大写了，并且名词按照从小范围到大范围的规律排列。He likes reading, doing sports and listening to music 他喜欢看书，做运动和听音乐。Like doing sth 喜欢做某事

23、。【知识点】看图写作专项训练拓展（初）【适用场合】随堂课后练习【难度系数】4【试题来源】【题目】假设你是江华，下周一你所在班级将举行英语课外阅读交流会。请根据以下示，用英语写一篇短文，向同学们介绍 The Famous Rabbit-Tortoise Race 这一故事。Rabbit win the second racebe good at runningTortoise win the third raceswim across the rivertake turns to put on the backreach togetherWhat I have learned:要求：文章必须包含

24、所供的主要信息，并适当发挥；文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；词数：90 词左右（开头已写好，不计入总词数）。We all know that the rabbit lost the first race against the tortoise.【答案】We all know that the rabbit lost the first race against the tortoise. After that the rabbit decidedto have a second race. This time he didnt sleep and won because he was good

25、 at running.However, the tortoise didnt give up. He had a third race with the rabbit. There was a river on theway. The tortoise swam across it quickly and won. The story does not end here. In the last racethey took turns to put each on the back and reached the finishing point together. From the stor

26、y Ihave learned that with teamwork all of us can achieve success.【解析】本题要求介绍我们所熟悉的龟兔赛跑的故事，这是一个我们都很熟悉的故事，写作中注意将故事的内容介绍清楚，并介绍我们从中得到的教训。写作中注意叙述顺序，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。结合所给材料，可知本文主要记述的是过去发生的事情，故时态主要是一般过去时态。人称为第三人称。句子结构主要为系表结构，主谓宾结构。文中适当使用代词，注意避免句式的单调重复，避免单词及语法错误。【知识点】看图写作专项训练拓展（初）【适用场合】课后两周练习【难度系数】3【试题来源】7【题

27、目】假如 Cindy 是你的好朋友，请根据以下信息，以 My Friend 为题写一篇短文。注意：（1）短文要包括表格内的所有信息。（2）可适当增加内容，要求意思、语句连贯。（3）词数 50 左右。姓名 Cindy Green年龄 14电话号码 8328-5388家庭成员 爸爸（Alan）、妈妈(Mary)、弟弟(Bob)现居住地 绍兴拥有的物品 蓝色书包示：has(有)【答案】I have a good friend. Her name is Cindy Green. She is 14 years old. Her telephone number is 8328-5388.There a

28、re four people in her family, her father Alan, her mother Mary, her brother Bob and herself. They live in Shaoxing city now. She has a beautiful bag. Its blue. She likes it very much.【解析】这是一篇表格作文。本文要求按照题目结合表格完成这篇作文，我们要用简单准确的句子把表格中的内容准确地表达出来。写作中要包含姓名、年龄、电话号码、家庭成员和现居住地，进一步介绍自己最喜欢的书包等内容；要注意表达清楚，可适当发挥述一

29、下她对书包的喜好。根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态，主语是第三人称。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。亮点说明:这篇短文内容简明、扼要地阐明了自己的好友 Cindy 的基本信息，并包含了文中所要求的全部信息。其中使用的句式和短语都很准确恰当，.如:There are four people in her family, her father Alan, her mother Mary, her brother Bob and herself.文中还恰当地使用了反身代词，学习中再注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

30、【知识点】看图写作专项训练拓展（初）【适用场合】课后一个月练习【难度系数】4【试题来源】【题目】近来由于极端天气，我国云南地区发生了特大旱情，致使小河断流，湖泊干涸，鱼类死亡，湖底成了牧场。请结合下面的示词，以“Lets Do Something to Save Our Environment”为题写一篇 80 字左右的短文。内容应包括从干旱引出的环境现状、环保意识到节水，节能，控制污染等环保措施方面的述。首句已给出，不计入字数。示词： bad weather, bottom（底部）, river, lake, grass land, save water, drop, tap（水龙头）, e

31、nergy, turn on / off, recycle, control pollution, tears(眼泪).要求：1. 条理清楚，有表明自己观点的句子。2. 书写工整，句式规范，标点符号使用正确。3. 短文中应尽量包括示内容，可适当发挥，但不能出现真实的人名、地名。8Lets Do Something to Save Our EnvironmentIt is recently reported that some rivers and lakes have dried up in South China.【答案】Lets Do Something to Save Our EnvironmentIt is recently reported that some rivers and lakes have dried up in South China. A lot of fishes died. The