高三英语二轮复习第1部分专题5短文改错考法3行文逻辑错误.docx

1、高三英语二轮复习第1部分专题5短文改错考法3行文逻辑错误考法3| 行文逻辑错误错误1主谓不一致1. (2014全国卷)My dream school look like a big garden.looklooks主语My dream school是单数，谓语应用第三人称单数。2(2014辽宁高考)The early morning barking have been disturbing us as we are often up all night with the baby.havehas主语The early morning barking为单数，故把have改为has。3(2016日

2、照市二模)More and more Guoxue courses is given in schools of different levels all over China.isare主语More and more Guoxue courses为复数，故把is改为are。4(2016哈尔滨市第六中学模拟)Eating snacks are a bad habit and is also a waste of money.areis动名词短语作主语为单数，故把are改为is。5(2016长春外国语学校质检)You are the most considerate person who kno

3、w exactly what I need in our class.knowknows定语从句的先行词the most considerate person为单数，故who后的谓语动词应为单数。6(2016银川一中模拟)Therefore, too much exposure to phones are bad for people in terms of health.areis主语为too much exposure为单数，故把are改为is。不要受phones的影响而认为主语是复数。 【导学号：90892033】7(2016湖北省七市联合考试)There are green grass

4、 and colorful flowers everywhere.areis当there be结构后有两个并列的主语时，遵循就近原则，green grass为单数，故把are改为is。8(2016银川一中二模)What you have gained are the result of your hard work.areis主语从句为单数，故are改为is。9(2016济南市模拟)Talking to friends or family members first are always a good idea.areis动名词作主语为单数，故把are改为is。10(2016沈阳二中模拟)La

5、st month, I, together with my parents, were invited to my uncles in the USA.werewas本句的主语是I，不受together with后面主语的影响，故把were改为was。感悟与反思主谓不一致错误主要有三种情况：由于对基本概念忽视而失分：应注意单复数的一致，例如当不定式、动名词或从句作主语时应为单数。由于受其他词的影响而失分：例如第六题too much exposure to phones中易受phones的影响而认为主语是复数。注意就近原则。错误2时态不一致1(2016全国乙卷)It is always crow

6、ded with customers at meal times.Some people even had to wait outside.hadhave由前面的句子可知，这里吃饭时总是涌满了顾客，用的是一般现在时，根据时态的一致性，后面的句子也应用现在时。2(2016全国甲卷)I thought that it is a good idea.It does not cost much, yet we can still learn a lot.thoughtthink由is，does和can可判断句子的主体时态为一般现在时，根据时态的一致性，应把thought改为think。3(2015全国

7、卷)When I was a child, I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.thinkthought这两句话是回忆童年的事情，由was，hoped和would也可知时态应为过去时，根据时态的一致性，把think改为thought。4(2014全国卷)We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening to music.satsitor连接两个并列谓语，第一个是can lie，第二个应是can sit，前面已有can，后面的can应省

8、去。5(2014浙江高考)I was taking a train to Londons Victoria Station.I had noticed that the carriage was noisy and filled with people.去掉had此处只是对过去事实的描述，而且没有明显的时间提示，故用一般过去时。6(2016陕西师大附中模拟)Last night, I went to my friends birthday party, where I make some new friends.makemade既然是昨晚发生的事情，时态是一般过去时，根据时态的一致性，wher

9、e引导的定语从句也应指过去。7(2016邯郸市第一中学模拟)Yesterday morning I went fishing, but the only thing I catch was a tree branch.catchcaught句子的整体用过去时，有went和was，故把catch改为caught。8(2016西工大附中适应性训练)One day, our teacher told us that we would have an exam and asked us to go over our lessons carefully.However, my friend Lisa s

10、pends too much time playing computer games.spendsspent第一句指的是过去，时态用的是过去时，根据时态的一致性，第二句应用过去时。9(2016海南省“七校联盟”联考)I decided that I would enter for elections again in my final year at school and that I will win the election.willwould句子的整体时态为过去时，故will与前面的would并列，也应用would。10(2016青岛市一模)One of the reasons is t

11、hat they show great interest in Chinese and English.Besides, they thought a number of physics and maths problems are too difficult for them to work out.thoughtthink句子的整体时态为现在时，故把thought改为think。 【导学号：90892034】感悟与反思时态不一致错误主要有三种情况：并列句中的时态不一致。主从句的时态不一致。前后句中的时态不一致。错误3指代不一致1(2016全国甲卷)If we go on a trip ab

12、road, we can broaden your view and gain knowledge we cannot get from books.yourour由前面的we go on a trip和we can broaden可知，应把your改为our。2(2016四川高考)When he came back, I found a bunch of flowers in her hand.herhis由前面的When he came back可知，这束花是在“他的(his)”手里。3(2015全国卷)We must find ways to protect your environme

13、nt.yourour/the本句的主语为we，因此把物主代词your改为our，此处也可以用the。4(2014四川高考)If its a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom.usyou由前面的your teacher可判定后面的us改为you。5(2016绵阳市诊断性考试)When I was in high school, most of my friends had bicycles.I hoped I could also have it.itone我的大部分

14、朋友有自行车，我希望也能有一辆。此处应用one表示“一辆自行车”，不能用it表特指。6(2016大庆实验中学训练)To make the journey fruitful, our teachers devoted his time and energy to us.histheir由our teachers可判定后面的his改为their。7(2016哈尔滨市第六中学一模)In fact, the weather here is quite different from it in your city.itthat此处from后的代词应用that代替前面出现过的the weather，不能用

15、it，因为it特指前面提到过的同一个人或者物。8(2016哈师大附中模拟)The Palace Museum plans to extend their opening hours to make it more convenient for tourists.theirits由The Palace Museum可知应把their改为its。9(2014陕西高考)My uncles immediately jumped up and shot their arrows at the bird.Neither of the arrows hit the target.NeitherNone代替第

16、一句的their arrows，应用none，因为没有说是两支箭，故不能用neither。10. (2016德州市模拟)It is not only bad for smokers himself, but also a threat to the public health.himselfthemselves由smokers可知应用themselves。感悟与反思指代不一致错误主要有四种情况：人称不一致。单复数不一致。性别不一致。替代词和不定代词考查错误，特别是it和that的错用，不定代词表示两者和两者以上代词的错用等。错误4逻辑不一致1(2016全国卷)Nearly five years

17、 before, and with the help of our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果)in our back garden.beforeago这里讲的是过去发生的事情，着眼点是现在，故应把before改为ago。2(2016银川一中模拟)Doctors can also help people to live a better life without their professional knowledge.withoutwith句意：医生也可以用他们的专业知识帮助人们更好地生活。without应

18、改为with。3(2016平顶山调研考试)I keep a diary in English every day because my written English is becoming better and better.becauseso/and句意：我每天用英语写日记，因此我的英语写作越来越好。前后为因果关系或并列关系，故把Because改为so或And。4(2016沈阳二中模拟)For me, this is one of the most rewarding trips I have never made in my life.neverever肯定否定错误，既然这次旅行进行过，

19、就不能用never。5(2016南昌市十所省重点中学模拟)Before I finished it, I sent it to a newspaper, which published it.BeforeAfter按常理应该是完成之后送给报社出版，故把Before改为After。6(2016天水一中模拟)I love playing basketball and often play with my friends on weekends.Therefore, it is difficult to rent a basketball field and impossible to find a

20、 free one.ThereforeHowever前后为转折关系，故应把Therefore改为However。7(2016山东省实验中学模拟)Overcome it, or we will be able to achieve our goals.orand或willwont句子自我矛盾，把or改为and或者把will改为wont。8(2016哈尔滨市第六中学模拟)Anxiety and pressure did discourage me at times.Besides, with the encouragement of my teachers and classmates, I th

21、ink Ill make it.BesidesHowever前后为转折关系，故应把Besides改为However。9(2016遵义市模拟)How is everything going recently? Im writing to tell you something more about my birthday.去掉moremore意为“另外的，其他的”，应去掉。10(2016石嘴山市模拟)But, the actual entrance to the tomb has ever been found, nor has the tomb been opened.evernever根据后面

22、的nor可知前面应为否定，故ever改为never。 【导学号：90892035】感悟与反思逻辑不一致错误主要有两种情况：肯定否定错用。连接词错用：应根据先后顺序，或逻辑关系，选择适当的连词或副词。A(2016石家庄市调研检测)People used to communicate with each other through letters and public phones.So nowadays they use mobile phones and the Internet instead of.This change in communication have good effects

23、 on our works and life.Comparing with letters and public phones, mobile phones and the Internet are fast and much more convenient.If you missed your grandmother, you just take out your phone and say “hello” to him.And she will be happy to hear your voice.If you want to place order with a foreign com

24、pany, you can email the message.Itll be minutes after you get their reply.【答案与解析】People used to communicate with each other through letters and public phones. nowadays they use mobile phones and the Internet instead .This change in communication good effects on our and life. with letters and public

25、phones, mobile phones and the Internet are and much more convenient.If you your grandmother, you just take out your phone and say “hello” to .And she will be happy to hear your voice.If you want to place order with a foreign company, you can email the message.Itll be minutes you get their reply.So改为

26、But考查连词。根据语境可知，上下句表示逻辑上的转折关系，故用连词But。删除of考查介词。instead of意为“代替”，后跟名词、代词或动名词作宾语，但是此处of后无宾语，故删除of。instead是副词，在句中作状语。have改为has考查动词时态和主谓一致。由语境可知，应用一般现在时；由句子主语This change可知，谓语应用单数形式，即has。works改为work考查名词。此处名词work表示“工作”，而不是作品，是不可数名词，没有复数形式。Comparing改为Compared考查非谓语动词。compare和句子谓语are之间没有连词，故用非谓语动词，且和句子主语mobil

27、e phones and the Internet构成逻辑上的动宾关系，故用过去分词形式。fast改为faster考查形容词比较级。由and后的“much more convenient”可知，此处表示对比的概念，故用形容词比较级faster作表语。missed改为miss考查动词时态。由“you just take out your phone and say”可知，从句谓语应用一般现在时，即miss。him改为her考查代词。与上文的“grandmother”呼应可知此处应用her。place后加an考查冠词。order是可数名词，意为“订单”，在语境中第一次出现，故用不定冠词修饰。ord

28、er的读音以元音音素开头，故用an。after改为before考查连词。此处为固定句型“itbe时间段before.”，意为“多久以后”，故用连词before引导时间状语从句。B(2016河南省八市重点高中质检)I am grateful to my English teacher Susan, at whose help I couldnt have won first prize in the English Talent Competition for high school student last week.I used to be poorly in spoken English.

29、I was too shy to speak in class.Since she teaches us last term, she has been encouraging him to overcome fear and speak out in class.Thanks to her, I have made great progresses.Besides, I practiced several times in the front of her.It was her advice which made me a better speaker and full of confide

30、nce.And I owe my success to her.Susan set me a good example.I am determined to become an English teacher when I grow up.【答案与解析】I am grateful to my English teacher Susan, whose help I couldnt have won first prize in the English Talent Competition for high school last week.I used to be in spoken Engli

31、sh.I was too shy to speak in class.Since she us last term, she has been encouraging to overcome fear and speak out in class.Thanks to her，I have made great .Besides, I practiced several times in front of her.It was her advice made me a better speaker and full of confidence. I owe my success to her.Susan set me a good example.I am determined to become an English teacher when I grow up.at改为without