1、初中英语作文写作技巧说课讲解中考指导:五个步骤写好中考英语作文书面表达是对学生在初中阶段英语学习的综合考查, 涉及篇章结构、 句子构成、 短语使 用和单词拼写等多方面内容,以下就中考书面表达的写作方法和注意事项进行指导:一、认真审题,确定时态人称,同时关注题材格式 时态:故事性文章一般用过去时,其中表达感受时可用现在时。 说明性或议论性文章一般用现在时,举例时可用过去时。 根据题目要求也会出现时态的交错使用,如过去和现在的对比等。 如果句中出现了时间状语,时态则要遵循时间状语。如 ago, last过去时 next, in将来时等 人称:注意在句子中人称的统一。 例如: Thanks to t
2、he teachers, we have improved our English 。 其中 we 和 our 就是人称的统一。 格式:注意书信格式的开头和结尾。二、找全信息点,紧扣主题,突出重点切忌只看表格中或所列 1、2、3 中的信息点。一定把题读全,找齐信息点,建议用铅笔 标出,写完后再涂掉。 根据题目,可适当增加合理内容。别注意文章要有开头和结尾。三、成文时表述正确,文字流畅 切忌与汉语提示的一一对应,使用所学表达方法将语义表达出来即可。 首先考虑句子结构 (如主谓宾,主系表等 )。同时注意短语的正确使用和单词的拼写,最好使 用课本上学过的短语和句式。四、文章结构清晰,重点句型出彩,可
3、使文章在得分上提高一个档次 考虑文章的篇章结构,使用适当的连接短语,使文章结构紧凑。常用连接词:1.表文章结构顺序:First of all , Firstly/First , Secondly/Second And then , Finally , In the end2.表并列补充关系的:What ismore , Besides, Moreover , Furthermore, In addition3.表转折对比关系的:However , On the contrary , butAlthough+clause(从句 ), In spite of+n/doing ,On the one
4、 hand, On the other handSome, while others 4.表因果关系的: Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore , As a result5.表换一种方式表达: In other words6.表进行举例说明: For example,句子; For instance,句子; such as+n/doing7.表陈述事实: In fact8.表达自己观点: As far as I know , In my opinion9.表总结: In short, In a word , In conclusion , In summary文中正
5、确使用两三个好的句型,如:宾语从句、状语从句、动名词做主语等。宾语从句举例: I believe Tianjin will be more beautifulandprosperous 。状语从句举例: If everyone does something for the environment , ourhometown will become clean and beautiful 。动名词做主语举例: Reading books in the sun is bad for our eyes 。 It s bad for our eyes to read books in the sun。
6、常用状语从句句型:1)时间 when, not until , as soon as2)目的 so that+clause; to do( 为了 )3)结果 so that+clause,too to do(太以至于 )4)条件 if , unless(除非), as long as(只要)5)让步 though, although, even though,even if no matter what/when/where/who/which/how6)比较 as as, not so as, than五、认真检查,检查信息点是否全面,时态、人称是否一致,句子结构是否清晰,短语 使用、单词拼
7、写是否准确等。检查后,将草稿誊写在纸上,请注意按结构分段,书写清晰。 下面列举一些在检查中可发现的错误:1.We live more and more comfortable 。 改正: comfortably( 副词修饰动词 )2.we can get many informations by reading newspapers 。 改正: much information(不可数名词由 much 修饰 )3.There has many programs in TV 。 改正: There are many programs on TV 。(There be 句型和介词短语 )4.I t
8、hink ride a bike can keep our health 。改正: I think riding a bike can keep us healthy 。 (动名词作主语 ) 建议大家练习或模仿不同题材的文章, 特别注意改错总结和吸取范文中好的结构与表达 方法,适当运用于自己的文章中。初中英语作文高分秘诀1.动笔之前,认真审题中考考试说明指出,书面表达要切中题意。怎样才能切中题意?就是要认真审 题,看到考题后,先不要急于动笔,要仔细看清题目要求的内容。在自己的头脑中构思 出一个框架或画面,确定短文的中心思想,不要匆匆下笔,看懂题意,根据图画、图表、 提纲或短文提供的资料和信息来
9、审题。审题要审格式、体裁、人物关系、故事情节、主 体时态、活动时间、地点等。2.围绕中心,拟定提纲书面表达评分原则有四条:(1)内容要点;(2)运用词汇和结构的数量;(3)运用语法结构和词汇的准确性;( 4)上下文的连贯性。 由此可见,要点是给分的一个重要因素。为了防止写作过程中遗漏要点,同学们要 充分发挥自己的观察力, 把情景中给出的各个要点逐条列出。根据短文的中心思想考虑 如何开头、展开和结尾,设想几个承上启下的连词,将主要句型、关键词语草草记下, 形成提纲,写时切忌结构分散,废话连篇,严重跑题。书面表达,内容广泛,题材多样, 要弄清考题的要求是写人、叙事、介绍、评论、图表、书信、日记、通
10、知、便条还是看 图作文或改写缩写。如果是日记,要写清年、月、日和天气情况;如果是书信,则要注 意书信的格式,注意短文字数不要低于或超过规定的字数太多。3.语言通顺,表达准确(1)避免使用汉语式英语,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用,以避 免重复和呆板。(2)多用简单句型,记事、写人一般都不需要复杂的句型。可适当多使用陈述句、 般疑问句、祈使句和感叹句。不用或少用非谓语或情态动词等较复杂的句型。(3)注意语法、句法知识的灵活运用。1)语态、时态要准确无误。2)主谓语要一致,主语的人称和数要和谓语一致。3)注意人称代词的宾格形式。4)注意冠词用法,例如: He is an honest
11、student.中的 an 不能写成 a。1)外表特征: tall, short, fat, thin, strong, weak, ordinary-looking 等。2)服饰颜色: red, yellow, blue, white, green, brown, black 等。3)内心境界: glad, happy, sad, excited, anxious, interested 等。4)感情描写: love, like, hate, feel, laugh, cry, smile, shout 等。5)动作描写: come, go, get, have, take, bring,
12、fetch 等。(5)上下文要连贯。上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条原则,因此同学们应把写好的 句子,根据故事情节,事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间) ,使用一些表示并列、递进 等过渡词进行加工整理,使文章连贯、自然、流畅。同学们应注意下面过渡的用法:1)表示并列关系的过渡词: and, as well as, or2)表示转折关系的过渡词: but, yet, however 3)表示时间关系的过渡词: first, second, third, and then, finally, after, before, after a few days, at last, at that time, l
13、ater, in the past, immediately, in the meanwhile, when, while, then, after that 4)表示空间关系的过渡词: near (to), far (from), in the front of, beside, behind, beyond, above, below, to the right, to the left, on one side, on the other side of, outside5)表示比较关系的过渡词: in the same way, just like, just as 6)表示对照关系的
14、过渡词: but, still, yet, however, on the other hand, in spite of, even though 7)表示递进关系的过渡词: also, and, then, too, in addition, moreover, again 8)表示因果关系的过渡词: because, since, then, thus, otherwise, so, therefore ,as a result 9)表示解释说明的过渡词: for example, in fact, in this case, for, actually10)表示强调的过渡词: in f
15、act, indeed, necessarily, certainly, without any doubt, truly, most important 11)表示目的的过渡词: for this reason, for this purpose, so that, in order that, so as to, in order to, 12)表示列举的过渡词: for example , such as 13)表示总结性的过渡词: finally, at last, in a word, in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking
16、 4.不会表达,另辟蹊径 中考作文给分是以要点和语言准确度而定,不以文采打分。造句越简单准确越好, 造复合句容易出错,容易被扣分,阅卷场上有句话: “错误面前人人平等,文采好不加 分”。如遇到个别要点表达不出来或难以表达,可采用变通的办法,化难为易,化繁为 简。总之,所造句子要正确、得体、符合英语表达习惯。(1)迂回而行当汉语词义不会用英语表达时, 可以想一个与这个汉语词义相似的几种词义。扩展 思路,然后从英语中找出一个与其词义相近的代替。这样可有异曲同工之妙。(2)小词大用 汉语中有些语意看来很复杂很文雅,但在英语中可用一些常用词表达。 下面这些词 可能在你的书面表达中很有用: take,
17、have, get, make, come, go, do, see, show, happy, nice, kind, help 等。(3)借花献佛 有时书面表达中需要的单词或词组或许在试卷中的其他地方出现。因为刚刚做过 题,记忆犹新,那么就可信手拈来,为我所用。5.锦上添花,量力而行 如果你还有时间和精力,想把书面表达写得更好,那么,请注意以下几点:(1)句型多样化,不要 I(We) 到底,使人觉得乏味。(2)适当使用一些并列句或主从复合句。(3)进一步描绘人或事物时,适当使用定语从句。(4)适当使用分词或分词短语,烘托谓语动词。(5)偶尔使用一下倒装句,增加新鲜感。(6)适当调换一下状语
18、在句子中的位置,使句子不雷同。(7)上下句子紧接时,其中完全相同的成分可以省略,以节省篇幅。6.书写工整,卷面整洁 字迹要清晰,让阅卷人看得清楚,不可字迹潦草,难以辨认,要保持卷面的整洁。7.写完之后,勿忘检查 中考作文时,由于时间紧、内容多,同学们出错在所难免。因此,改错这一环节必 不可少。中考作文评卷是根据要点、语言准确性、上下文的连贯性来给分,根据错误多 少来扣分。因此,中考时花几分钟时间用来检查错误显得尤为重要。检查错误应从以下 几个方面入手:(1) 格式是否有错。(2) 拼写有无错误。(3) 语言是否用错。(4) 时态、语态错误。(5) 标点错误。(6) 人称是否用错。 【注意】此时
19、不宜在卷面上作较大的改动,以免顾此失彼,影响全局。总之,只要平时同学们多练习写作并有意运用上述方法和技巧,合理分配时间,在中考 时一定能写出高质量的作文,得到令人满意的考分。中考复习题(词汇)数字 :first (第一) second(第二)third(第三)ninth(第九)twelfth(第十二)twenty(二十) twentieth (第二十) 依次类推thirtieth(第三十)fortieth(第四十)。月份:January(一月) February (二月)April (四月) August(八月)September(九月)October (十月) November (十一月)
20、December (十二月) 星期 : Sunday, Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday, Friday, Saturday 成功 : success(名)-successful(形)-successfully(副 )-succeed(动)The launch of Shenzhou is a great success. He succeeded in solving the problem.The film is very successful. 死: die(动)-dead(形)-death( 名)He died 10 years ago. The
21、 man was found dead in his home yesterday.The death of my dog made me sad. 幸运 :luck(名)lucky(形)-luckily( 副)Good luck with you! You are lucky to pass the exam. Luckily, he wasn t badly hurt.危险 : danger(名)dangerous(形) The girl is in danger. Its dangerous to play with fire.反义词 : Possibleimpossible( 不可能
22、); polite impolite (不礼貌) ; correct-incorrect (不正 确) ; activeinactive (消极) ; fair unfair (不公平) ; carecareless(粗心) ; kindunkind最新中考英语写作技巧汇总(一)掌握技巧:(1)注意篇章结构,合理布局 一般为三段式开始部分( openingparagraph )说出文中的要点、核心问题。 正文部分( Bodyparagraphs )围绕主题开展叙述、讨论。 结尾部分( concludingparagraphs )对全文的总结和概括。要做到全文中心突出、段落之间必须是有机地联系,
23、内容完整、连贯。前后呼应,祛除 与主题无关的内容。(2)确定主题句 主题句是对全文的概括,是文章的主旨。它能在文章中起到“画龙点睛”的作用。通常 主题句出现在一篇文章的开头,而后,全文对主题句所提出的内容进行解释,扩展。写主题句应注意以下几点:归纳出你要写的文章的几个要点 提炼出一句具有概括性的话 主题句应具有可读性,抓住、吸引读者。(二)巧用连接词 要想使文章有整体性、连贯性,就要学会正确使用连接词(三)掌握常用句型: 下面只列举比较常用的。1.in order to 为了实现他的梦想,他学习非常努力。He worked very hard in order tor ealize his d
24、ream.3.so that 他们太累了,除了伸懒腰什么都做不了。They were all so tired that they could do nothing but yawn.5.would rather than 他宁愿听他人讲而不愿自己说。He would rather listen to others than talk himself.8.not onlybut also 在短短的三年的时间里她不但完成了所有课程,而且还获得了博士学位。In just three years, she had not only finished all the lessons , but als
25、o received her doctors degree.9.either or 如果考试过关,你可以买一个 MP3 或去云南玩一趟。You could either buy an MP3 or go to Yunnan for a visit if you pass the exam.10.Neither no他r 是一个无聊的人,既不爱娱乐,也不爱读书。He is a boring man. He likes neither enter tainment nor reading.11.as well as 他善良又乐于助人。He was kind as well as helpful.1
26、2. as well 这个小孩活泼又可爱。The child is active and funny as well.13.One the other 你看见桌子上有两只笔吗?一支是红色的,另一支是黑色的。Have you seen two pens on the desk? One is red, the other is black. 14.Some others 每个人都很忙,有些在读书,有些在写作。 Every one is busy in classroom. Some are reading, others are writing. 16.not until 直到他告诉我发生的事,
27、我才了解真相。 I didn t know the truth until she told me what happened. 19.find it adj to do 我觉得作听力时有必要作笔记。I find it necessary to taked own notes while listening.写作技巧专题复习如何开篇: 技巧一:主旨设问更给力I think it s very important for us to do sports. Why? Because it s good for our health and study.I think it s vpeoryrt a
28、imnt for us to protect environment. Why? Because it s good for living.I think it s very important for us to learn English. Why? Because it s the most-widely used language in the world.技巧二:头文字 D 从D 开始,从我们到我Different people have different , but/and I have/prefer 如何写正文: 一 句型变化 扩张 扩张原则 1:表达观点要“自我”In my
29、opinion, we should pay much more attention on the weak subjects!扩张原则 2:两句之间要过渡I left my pen at home. What was worse, the drugstore was closed that day.变形原则 3:凡是问题阐述用形容词句型! ! 普通级句型 The environment is bad.比较级句型 The environment is getting much worse than before.The environment is getting worse and wors
30、e 最高级句型 I have never seen the worse environment .变形原则 5:表达作用多用 it 句式 is a way to 阅读能帮助我放松自己。 Reading is a good way to relax myself. 看电影能帮助我们学习英语。 Watching movies is a wonderful way to learn English.变形原则 6:增强情感转感叹 阅读对我们很有益 . How beneficial it is for us to read ! 作运动对学生很重要 . How important it is for st
31、udents to do sports.变形原则 7:事情到感情句型It makes sb. feel that I was very happy that I got an A in English last term.It makes me feel happy that I got an A in English last term.变形原则 8:形容词句型升级: it is one of the most It was an unusual experience in my life. It was one of the most unusual experience in my life.变形原则 12:活用 there be 结合定从 : Many reasons made me like reading.There are many reasons why I enjoy reading列举式结构 :first of all, secondly, besides, whats
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