雅思写作评分细则.docx

1、雅思写作评分细则雅思写作评分细则今天小编和大家分享雅思写作评分细则，希望能够帮助到大家，下面小编就和大家分享，来欣赏一下吧。 雅思写作评分细则：雅思写作必备参考 首先考官会给考生答卷根据以下四项分别评等级分：任务完成与回答情况、连贯与衔接、词汇选取、句式多样性和语法准确性。这四方面所占权重相同。 评分标准是我们写作教学和备考唯一可以参考的标准，所以，考生应该把它牢牢地印到脑海里。雅思写作的评分标准不像四六级或托福采用整体式的评分，而是分项式评分(analyticalscoring)，根据具体的评分细则分项给分。 雅思写作评分细则：小作文 完成任务(Task Achievement)：有效地辨别

2、、说明和报道图中的关键信息; 连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion)：信息和观点组织、衔接是否恰当; 词汇量(Le_ical Resource)：词汇多样、准确、恰当; 语法的多样性和准确性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy):语法结构多样、准确、恰当。 雅思写作评分细则：大作文 任务回应(Task Response)：清晰、有效、完整、鲜明地回答所有问题; 连贯与衔接(Coherence and Cohesion)：信息和观点组织、分段、阐述、衔接是否恰当; 词汇量(Le_ical Resource)：词汇多样、准确、恰当; 语法的多样性和准确

3、性(Grammatical Range and Accuracy): 语法结构多样、准确、恰当。 评分标准解析【Essential Points of the Band Deors】 结合雅思官方对写作 6 分、7 分、8 分、9 分的评分细则，我们可以把雅思写作的评分 标准亦即高分作文的要点归结为十字方针：主题(Theme) 、细节(Detail)、结构(Frame) 、 逻辑(Logic)、语言(Language)。具体说，主题即观点，要紧扣题目，明确而有见地;论点要紧扣主题，并能够很好地展开，论据要具体、有说服力;结构要清晰，逻辑要严谨、合理而有层次感;语言要流畅、准确、多样，并有一定的

4、复杂性。其中，行文逻辑是高分的基础，语言是整个评分标准的核心内容，涉及到考生作文词汇的选取(WordChoice)、句式的变化(Syntactic Variety)、语法的准确性(Accuracy ofGrammar)等多个方面，是体现学生英语语言水平的关键因素，所以考生应当把写作思路的训练和语言的修炼作为雅思写作备考的重中之重。 关于教育意义的雅思写作去模版范文 雅思写作题目：The most important thing of people s life is his or her work. Withouta satisfying career, the life is meaning

5、less. To what e_tent do you agree ordisagree? 雅思写作去模版范文解析： 此题目为教育类话题，体裁为议论文下属的利弊分析类，要分别陈述将大部分时间花在学习上对社会和孩子自身的影响。先交代backgroundinformation，如：Education, especially children s, is undoubtedly of vitalimportance to a nation s sustained economic development. 再进一步导入具体内容：对孩子产生的积极影响和小孩子可扎实掌握更多深层次知识。 对孩子产生的负面

6、影响：小孩子花过多时间在学习上可能会对成长不利。可举例说明一下，比如：长时间的sedentarylifestyle令人们担忧他们的健康状况。在整个论述的过程中，考生可采用举例论证和因果论证这两种常见也是最有效的论证方法详细展开。长时间学习对孩子自身和整个社会利弊皆有，可通过鼓励孩子在学习过程中积极参加更多的课外活动。消除弊端，把孩子朝受益的方向引领。 雅思写作去模版范文： With the increasing proportion of employed workers, whether or not onescareer is his or her whole has become a w

7、idely debated topic. While some believethat job is the most crucial element of our life, others maintain that there aremany other essential things which are meaningful to us. Given that life iscolourful and non-inevitable relationship between success of career and themeaning of life, I strongly disa

8、gree that there will be nothing left if wefailed to reach the peak of career. 随着就业人数的增加，一个人的职业生涯是否是他或她的整个已经成为一个广泛争论的话题。有些人认为工作是我们生活中最重要的因素，而另一些人则认为还有许多其他对我们有意义的重要事情。鉴于生活是丰富多彩的，事业的成功与生活的意义之间是不可避免的关系，我强烈不同意如果我们不能达到事业的顶峰，就不会留下任何东西。 For a start, that many other aspects in life can actually bring fond me

9、moriesto us. Having good relationship with family members and friends is a flawlessillustration. It is not uncommon that many elderly couples live in small andcozy flats, who didnt really succeed in terms of their careers. However, justbecause of their pure and long-lasted relationship over the last

10、 few decades,they are satisfied and often feel that they are very lucky to meet each other.Similarly, raising a child can also boost parents sense of satisfaction andthey are more likely to have a meaningful life. It is evident that there arestill many factors to determine ones meaning of life other

11、 than career. 首先，生活中的许多其他方面实际上能给我们带来美好的回忆。与家人和朋友保持良好关系是一个完美的例证。许多老年夫妇生活在小而舒适的公寓里，这并不少见，他们的职业生涯并没有真正成功。然而，仅仅因为他们在过去几十年里纯洁而持久的关系，他们感到满意，并且经常感到他们非常幸运地遇见彼此。同样，抚养孩子也能提高父母的满足感，他们更有可能有一个有意义的生活。显然，除了事业之外，还有很多因素来决定一个人的人生意义。 Secondly and more importantly, it is illogical to link the e_tent of successto the wo

12、rth of life. Imagine a thirty-year old chief e_ecutive officer, whowhole-heartedly spent everything on his business. He strove a lot andunconcerned with his health at present just because he longed for his delightfullife after retirement. However, since his intensive workload and unhealthylifestyle,

13、 he was diagnosed with cancer before entirement. How meaning will yourate of this mans life? In this case, I would contend that his life should havebeen more splendid if he spent more time on different aspects, even though hemight not succeed in his career. No wonder Bible has that, “What does it pr

14、ofita man, if he gains the whole world and forfeits his life?” 其次，更重要的是，把成功的程度与生命的价值联系起来是不合逻辑的。想象一下一个三十岁的首席执行官，他全心全意地把所有的事情都花在自己的事业上。他现在非常关心自己的健康，因为他渴望退休后的快乐生活。然而，由于他繁重的工作量和不健康的生活方式，他被确诊为癌症之前。你对这个人的生活有何意义?在这种情况下，我认为，如果他多花点时间在各个方面，即使他的事业可能不会成功，他的生活也会更加精彩。难怪圣经中有这样一句话：“人若赚得全世界，赔上自己的生命，有什么益处呢? Having di

15、scussed that job is only a part of life and it does not necessarilymake ones life be more meaningful, I firmly disagree that job is everything oflife. If all people were more open-minded about their jobs and paid moreattention on other stuff in their life, I am confident that they would have moreenj

16、oyable e_periences which are likely to make their life more interesting andmeaningful. 在讨论过工作只是生活的一部分，并不一定使人的生活更有意义的时候，我坚决不同意工作是生活的全部。如果所有人都对工作更加开放，对生活中的其他事情更加关注，我相信他们会有更多的愉快的经历，这些经历可能会使他们的生活更有趣和有意义。 科技进步利与弊的雅思写作高分范文及其思路解析 雅思写作题目：Scientific progress has greatly influenced our daily life. Do youthink

17、 this is a positive or negative development? 雅思写作题目讲解： 第一：考生可以根据科技进步对中国人来说是绝对的好事，例如生活水平的提高，交流的便捷，交通发达，娱乐多元等等。 第二，但在英国和其他一些西方国家，人们会质疑科技的积极影响。自从工业革命以后环境日益恶化，能源面临枯竭;科技加快生产，也加速垃圾的产生; 第三，人们的健康水平并没有随着医疗技术的提高而变得更健康，相反，亚健康的状况大范围存在;交流增加并没有增加人们之间关系的密切和融洽，反而疏远了彼此的感情。 雅思写作范文： It is undeniable that technological

18、 advancement has made an unprecedentedchange in our human life in the last century. Nonetheless, its destructiveimpact on our society has also to be recognized. In the _th century, somesignificant inventions including jet planes, TV, cars, computers and telephoneshave shaped our modern life fundamen

19、tally. Long distance transportation becomeseasier and increasing international communication in many aspects such as trade,cultures and technology e_pands our activity sphere and broadens our horizons.Our life e_pectancy is longer than ever before thanks to medical progress andsome fatal diseases su

20、ch as heart disease and breast cancer can be cured.Boosted productivity in industry and agriculture by automation has solved faminein many regions and improved our living standard dramatically. TV and theinternet provide entertainments and information as well. 不可否认的是，技术进步在上个世纪人类生活中发生了前所未有的变化。尽管如此，它对

21、我们社会的破坏性影响也必须得到承认。在_世纪，包括喷气式飞机、电视、汽车、计算机和电话在内的一些重大发明从根本上塑造了我们的现代生活。长距离运输变得更加容易，在贸易、文化和技术等许多方面加强了国际交流，扩大了我们的活动范围，拓宽了我们的视野。由于医学的进步，我们的预期寿命比以往任何时候都长，一些致命的疾病，如心脏病和乳腺癌是可以治愈的。自动化提高了工农业生产率，在很多地区解决了饥荒，极大地提高了我们的生活水平。电视和互联网也提供娱乐和信息。 However, it has been widely realized that the benefits produced by technology

22、do not come at no cost. The environment deterioration makes the earth lesslivable largely due to the overuse of fuel sources for energy production andtraffic e_haust. Another contributor is the high efficiency of production whichmakes consumer goods so cheap that people throw away food or anything o

23、ut ofdate or broken with little hesitation, but unfortunately it is this throw-awaylifestyle that is responsible for the large amount of waste and meanwhileescalates the commodity production in turn. 然而，人们普遍意识到，技术所带来的好处并不是没有代价的。由于能源生产和交通尾气的过量使用，环境恶化使得地球不太适于居住。另一个原因是生产效率高，使得消费品如此便宜，以至于人们丢弃食物或任何过时的东西或

24、稍纵即逝，但不幸的是，这种浪费的生活方式是造成大量浪费的原因，同时也是升级。依次进行商品生产。 Overpopulation, as one consequence of the improved medical condition andbetter material life, has savagely deprived animals and plants of theirhabitats, damaging the balance of the nature and Eco-sustainability. In spite ofthe medical progress, the pub

25、lic health ironically is not getting enhanced andthe reason for this is modern sedentary lifestyle which features the addictionto TV, the computer and the internet. In conclusion, I personally assume thatscience and technology has changed our life in both positive and negative ways.While we enjoy mo

26、re material affluence and convenience, we have to tolerate thecontaminated environment and poor health. Maybe we should not be too optimisticabout science and technology development. 人口过剩是改善医疗条件和改善物质生活的一个结果，它们严重地剥夺了动植物的栖息地，破坏了自然界的平衡和生态的可持续性。尽管医学取得了进步，但公共卫生的讽刺性并没有得到增强，其原因是现代久坐的生活方式，其特征是对电视、电脑和互联网的成瘾。总之，我个人认为科学和技术已经改变了我们的生活正反两方面。当我们享受更多的物质财富和便利时，我们必须容忍污染的环境和健康状况不佳。也许我们不应该对科技发展过于乐观。 雅思写作评分细则