雅思大作文审题方法三步法.docx

1、雅思大作文审题方法三步法适用文档系列 文档编号： YL-SY-81112雅思大作文审题方法 - 三步法第一步是通读。往常考生的习惯是， 拿到作文先看一下小作文考什么图， 再看一下大作文考什么题，而后开始着手写小作文。其实就这么看一下，你知道了今日考的是什么类型，什么主题，就已经把通读的工作做好了。在一边写小作文的时候，你的大脑无心中其实已经开始酝酿大作文了。有关阅读： Essay 写作中静态表述的运用方法第二步是细读。当小作文达成， 考生正式开始进入大作文的时候， 你需要再仔认真细把题目读一次，并且要去找一下题目中的重点词， 有没有限制词 / 句，有没有绝对 词。所谓限制词，就是把题目的主题限

2、制在必定范围内的词。比方：The incidence of violence/crimes for young people is increasing. Give possible reasons and recommendations ofpunishment and measures to the situation., 这个题目中 youth就是一个重点词，全文一定环绕青少年来剖析其犯法原由和处罚方案，有的学生写到了失业率高，找不到工作，没有钱负担生活，因此去犯罪。这个原由用于成年人的犯法是很好， 但大部分的青少年还在学习阶段，还没工作，自然谈不上失业的压力。因此写这个话题，假如我们从

3、家庭和学校的环 境，以及媒体的影响这几个方面去着手会更贴题。所谓绝对词，就是 all, best, only, the most 等词汇，题目中出现这样第1页共14页适用文档系列 文档编号： YL-SY-81112词汇，考 生是 很简单提出 辩驳 的 。 比方 Some people thinkeconomic development is the only way to measure the successof a government. To what extend do you agree or disagree. 经济的发展的确是权衡一个政府能否成功的重要标记， 我们能够写一到两个段

4、落来说明经济的重要性， 而后再写一个退步段， 来辩驳 ONLY 这个词，能够提出教育 的普及，社会福利等方面也不行忽略，这样文章就更全面。第三步列纲要。这是全部写作老师都频频重申， 而学生却总不肯意去做的一件事。 不肯意列纲要的原由是大家总感觉 40 分钟时间可贵，恨不得从第一秒就开始拼死写。可是，没有整理好思路，一边想一边写的结果是更为浪费时间，并且段落的发展越到后边越杂乱。在列纲要之初，必定是先要 brainstorming ，问题是好多考生 brainstorming 完了就认为自己审完了题目。其实 brainstorming出来的好多点是有重复或许有因果关系的， 假如以这些重复或有因果

5、关系的点作为段落的主题句， 那么写到后边必定会有问题。 因此， 我们应当花一点时间整理一下逻辑。比方议论出国留学的利处和缺点， 大部分学生很能想到以下的几个点1.获得更好的教育 ;2.获得更好的工作 ;3.宽阔眼界 4.文化沟通 5. 学习语言。其实这 5 个点，整理一下的话，能够发现 1 和 5 是并列的， 2 是其结果。 3 和 4 也相同是因果关系。 这样 5 个点变为 2 个点，每个点的论证也有了着 落，写起来就会很顺。而有些学生想到了 1 和 2第2页共14页适用文档系列 文档编号： YL-SY-81112就感觉自己有来两个段落了，马上开始动笔，写完主体第一段，再开始第二段的时候，忽

6、然发现其实获得更好的工作 是更好教育的一个结果，假如要把这个段落写清楚就得把第一段再重复一遍。战胜雅思写作软肋的方法介绍我们能够从雅思写作的评分标准 (大作文 )下手，给同学们提出备考雅思写作的四方面建议：1.Task Response( 任务的达成状况 )：在这个方面最重要的是字数和审题。因此练习速度至关重要，考前必定要有限时写作的体验。审题方面，必定要看清题目的问题 (包含究竟有几个问题，问题是争辩式的仍是论说式的，争辩焦点是什么 )，能够把历年考题取出来做特意的审题训练。2.Coherence and Cohesion( 文章的连结性 )：段落区分和连结词训练。在段落方面，必定要用切合英

7、美写作习惯的 topic sentence +supporting sentences ， reason + example 的方式来写作，连结词方面，特别是转折、因果、举例有关的连结词，要做专项的练习。3.Lexical Resource( 词汇的多样性 )和 4. Grammatical Range and Accuracy( 语法句式的正确性和多样性 )这两点都与考生的英语基本功有关，短期内很难有本质性打破。 好多考生采纳背单词和看语法书的方法，但由于特别乏味也坚持不了多久且没有什么收效。 这里给大家的建议是第一， 经过作文习作并让有经验的老师批阅， 找出属于自己的在语法和词汇方面的问题

8、， 发现一个问题解决一个问题， 并在老师的指导下配合有关的有针对性的语法和词汇学习。 第二，必定要摈第3页共14页适用文档系列 文档编号： YL-SY-81112弃用“大词”、“难句”的逼迫心态。记着：Although you should aimfor varied sentences and vocabulary, clear, simple structuresare better than more complex but inaccurate sentences. Donot think that phrases you have learned can freely apply t

9、o any situation.雅思写作改错练习 (附答案 )1Futurism,an early twentieth-centurymovementinart,rejectedalltraditionsandattemptstoglorifycontemporarylife by emphasizing the machine and motion.2But,fora smallgroupofstudents,professionaltrainingmight be the way to go since well-developing skills, all otherfactors be

10、ing equal, can be the difference between having ajob or not.3Fora groupofremaininginexistence,aprofit-makingorganizationmust,inthelongrun,produces somethingconsumers consider useful or desirable.4Foraresultoftwoorthreecenturiesofscientificinvestigationwe havecometobelievethatNatureisunderstandable i

11、n the sense that when we ask her questionsby way of appropriate observations and experiments，she willanswer truly and reward us with discoveries that endure.5At the sametime,youngpeopleshouldbeencourageto第4页共14页适用文档系列 文档编号： YL-SY-81112communicate with their peers and develop their interpersonal skil

12、ls, which may help them greatly to reduce dependence in their parents.6 When a new movement in art attains a certain fashion, it isadvisable to find out what their advocates are aiming at, for,however farfetched and unreasonable their principles mayseem today, it is possible that in years to come th

13、ey may beregarded as normal.7 Numerous other commercial enterprises, from theaters to magazine publishers, from gas and electric utilities to milk processors, bring better and more efficiently services to consumers through the use of computers.8 The American economic system is, organizing around a b

14、asically private-enterprise, market-oriented economy in that consumers largely determine what shall be produced by spending their money in the marketplace for those goods and services that they want most.9 Thus, in the American economic system it is the demand of individual consumers, coupled with t

15、he desire of businessmen to maximize profits and the desire of individuals to maximizetheir incomes, which together determine what shall be produced and how resources are used to produce it.第5页共14页适用文档系列 文档编号： YL-SY-8111210 The individual now has more information available than any generation, and t

16、he task of finding that one information relevant to his or her specific problem is complicated, time-consuming, and sometimes even overwhelming.参照答案1Futurism, an early twentieth-century movement in art,rejected all traditions and attempts to glorify contemporarylife by emphasizing the machine and mo

17、tion.错误 : and 并列连结两个谓语，应当是平行构造。因此 attempts 应该改为 attempted.2 But, for a small group of students, professional training might be the way to go since well-developing skills, all otherfactors being equal, can be the difference between having a job or not.错误 : 培育优秀的技术不是 well-developing而是 well-developed.3

18、 For a group ofremaininginexistence,a profit-makingorganizationmust,in thelongrun,producessomethingconsumers consider useful or desirable.错误 : For a group of remaining in existence应当是 For a groupto remain in existence.只有后者才能够做一个目的状语。 produces应当是 produce ，由于在插入语 in the long run的前边有 must.4 For aresult

19、 oftwo or threecenturiesof scientific第6页共14页适用文档系列 文档编号： YL-SY-81112investigation ， we have come to believe that Nature is understandable in the sense that when we ask her questionsby way of appropriate observations and experiments，she willanswer truly and reward us with discoveries that endure.错误 :

20、 For a result of应当是 As a result of. 介词搭配不妥 .5 At the same time, youngpeople should beencourage tocommunicate with their peers and develop their interpersonalskills, which may help them greatly to reduce dependence intheir parents.错误 : should be encourage应当是 should be encouraged,神态动词的被动语态 . dependenc

21、e in应当是 dependence on,介词搭配不妥 .6 When a new movement in art attains a certain fashion, it isadvisable to find out what their advocates are aiming at, for,however farfetched and unreasonable their principles mayseem today, it is possible that in years to come they may beregarded as normal.错误 : their a

22、dvocates应当是 its advocates. Its在这里指代的是 anew movement in art.因此不可以是 their.7 Numerousothercommercialenterprises,fromtheaterstomagazine publishers, fromgasandelectricutilities tomilkprocessors,bringbetterandmoreefficientlyservicesto第7页共14页适用文档系列 文档编号： YL-SY-81112consumers through the use of computers.错误

23、 : efficiently services 应当是 efficient services. 这也是很多学生常常犯的一个错误。副词不可以修饰名词，一定得改为形容词。8 The American economic system is, organizing around a basically private-enterprise, market-oriented economy in that consumers largely determine what shall be produced by spending their money in the marketplace for th

24、ose goods and services that they want most.错误 : organizing around a basically private-enterprise 应当是organized around a basically private-enterprise. 这里应当是过去分词来做一个陪伴状语， 而不该当是此刻分词， 由于它是主语的蒙受者。 in that 应当是 in which. 由于只有 in which 才能指引一个定语从句。 in which=where, 在指引一个定语从句时，后边需要加上一个完好句。而 in that 只好指引一个状语从句 =

25、because.9 Thus, in the American economic system it is the demand of individual consumers, coupled with the desire of businessmen to maximize profits and the desire of individuals to maximizetheir incomes, which together determine what shall be produced and how resources are used to produce it.错误 : w

26、hich 应当是 that. 与前面的 it is 组成一个重申句型。 重申原句中的主语。10 The individual now has more information available than any第8页共14页适用文档系列 文档编号： YL-SY-81112generation, and the task of finding that one information relevant to his or her specific problem is complicated, time-consuming, and sometimes even overwhelming.错误

27、 : one information 应当是 one piece of information. 由于information 是不行数名词，前面一定加量词修饰。 CKQ11 While talking to you, your could-be employers is decidingwhether your education, your experience, and otherqualifications will pay him to employ you and your wares andabilities must be displayed in an orderly and

28、reasonablyconnected manner.12 Witheconomic growthhascomecentralization: fully76percentof Japan s119millioncitizenslivesincitieswhichcommunity and the extended family have been abandoned infavor of isolated, tow-generation households.13 Aftersix monthsofarguingandfinal 16hoursofhotparliamentary debat

29、es, Australias Northern Territory becamethe first legal authority in the world to allow doctors to takethe lives of incurably ill patients whom wish to die.14 The great interest in exceptional children shown in publiceducationoverthepastthreedecadesindicatethestrongfeelinginoursociety thatallcitizens,whateverhisspecialconditions,deservetheopportunitytofullydeveloptheir第9页共14页适用文档系列 文档编号： YL-SY-81112capabilities.15 Your humor must be relevant wi