高考英语真题分类汇编专题22 文字提纲式.docx

1、高考英语真题分类汇编专题22 文字提纲式专题二十二 书面表达之文字提纲式1.【2015新课标全国II】书面表达（满分25分）86.假如你是李华，计划和同学去敬老院（nursing home）陪老人们国重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival）。请给外教Lucy写封邮件，邀她一同前往，内容包括：1. 出发及返回时间；2. 活动：包饺子、表演节目等。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 结语已为你写好。_Looking forward to your reply.Yours Li Hua【参考答案】 Dear Lucy, Id like to i

2、nvite you to join us for a visit to the nearby nursing home next Saturday for the Double Ninth Festival. It is the day for the elderly in our culture. Well go and make dumplings and cakes with the elderly people there. Well also spend some fun time together singing, dancing and playing games, which

3、we hope will make them happy. We should be back around 4 oclock in the afternoon. If you are able to come with us, please let us know and well wait for you at the gate at 9 in the morning.Looking forward to your reply.Yours Li Hua【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明。Well also spend some fun time together singing, danc

4、ing and playing games, which we hope will make them happy.中用了which引导的定语从句和句式spend time doing。此外，还有if从句以及一些短语如invite you to join us，for a visit to，make dumplings等。【考点定位】考查提纲作文。【名师点睛】本作文从实际生活出发，以英语的交际性和实用性为目标，兼顾尊老敬老和做志愿者的教育意义。体现了课程标准要求的以知识运用为教学目标的要求。在高三备考时，应该多从把语言作为交流的工具的角度去准备书面表达。2.【2015新课标全国I】第2节 书面

5、表达（满分25分）假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下：1. 栏目介绍；2. 稿件内容；3. 稿件长度：约400词；4. 交稿日期：6月28日前。注意：1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的；3. 开头语已为你写好。【答案】Dear Peter,Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.The “Foreign Cultures” section in our newspaper is ve

6、ry popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festiva

7、ls, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative. 400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28?Im looking forward to hearing from you.Yours, Li Hua【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达属于英文书信，根据提示信息要求写一封给美国朋友彼得写信的约稿，为学校校英文报“

8、外国文化”栏目刊登介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活的文章。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确三个要点：首先，简单介绍校英文报栏目的情况。2、建议Peter介绍美国节日风俗和中学生生活。3、稿件的要求及时间。写作时根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4、注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countri

9、es.运用了过去分词作后置定语， And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students.运用了宾语从句。此外，文章还使用了大量习语和短语，如be popular among, so long as, look forward to , hear from等。【考点定位】考查提纲作文。【名师点睛】书面表达考查大家所熟悉的提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达

10、出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。文中巧妙地使用了一些固定句式和过渡词语，不仅增强了表达效果，而且实现了形式与内容的统一。3.【2015北京】假如你是红星中学高三李华，请给你的美国朋友Jim写一封信，告诉他你打算参加龙舟训练营，希望他一起参加，邮件的内容包括： 1. 介绍训练营的相关内容（例如；时间，地点，参加者等）； 2. 说明你打算参加的原因； 3. 询问对方的意向

11、。 注意： 1. 词数不少于50； 2. 开头和结尾已给出， 不计入总词数。 提示词：龙舟训练营 Dragon Boat Training CampDear Jim,Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim,Im writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday. I want to join a Dragon Boat Training Camp. I wonder if youd like to go with me.This camp will open on July 20th, It offers teen

12、agers like you and me a chance to enjoy sports and learn about Chinese culture. If you are interested in it, let me know and Ill send you more information.Hope to meet you at the training camp this summer. 【解析】试题分析：本篇文章重点是李华邀请英国朋友Jim参加龙舟训练营，属于典型的邀请信，只需按照邀请信的写作流程就可轻松写出。即发出邀请 介绍活动(时间，地点，内容，参加原因)期待和感谢。

13、【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，运用了一些邀请信里常用的句型。如：Im writing to tell you my exciting plan for the summer holiday；I wonder if youd like to go with me.文中注意使用了一般将来时、一般现在时等不同的时态来叙述不同的事情，对时态有较好的把握。【考点定位】应用文类书面表达【名师点睛】本题是一篇考的是邀请信，龙舟的一个艺术节，仍然是传统文化的主题。采分点主要是三个板块，第一个板块是相关细节的处理。因为在第一个要点当中写到，学生要自己设计时间、地点以及参赛人员，这使学生需要自行发挥得，编纂

14、的时候要合理一些。第二个板块提到你的参加原因，原因必然是考官会关注的，为什么要参加龙州艺术界的活动。第三，他提到两个字，就是询问，希望学生在写作的时候尽量避开一些非常生硬的词汇。注意写邀请信常用句型：On behalf of, I am writing to invite you to take part in the；Id like to be involved indue to the fact that；I am looking forward to your reply/ arrival/coming/ attendance等考生在应用文写作中一定要体现出交际功能，重视该文体的写作结构

15、，除称呼与落款必须写齐全外，正文部分一般开头应道明写作目的，中间呈现具体细节，结尾处补充礼貌性话语。另外，应用文的语言结构忌过于复杂，用词忌过难过偏，少用倒装从句嵌套等长难句。语言与用词做到适用应用场合，准确到位即可。只要做到以上几点，应用文部分即可拿到一个不错的分数。4.【2015广东】基础写作（共1小题，满分15分）你接受了一项写作任务，为英语校报写一篇科技报道。写作内容请根据以下信息，介绍国外医疗行业出现的一项新技术。内容包括：技术名称：DNA检测检测方法：唾液样本分析检测费用：125英镑检测时长：4到6周检测用途： 1. 预测重大疾病2. 预知食物偏好3. 提示合适的锻炼方式检测影响：

16、 1. 增强健康意识2. 易引起过度焦虑*唾液样本：saliva sample写作要求只能用5个句子表达全部内容；评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。【答案】第一节DNA DetectionWe can use saliva sample to detect whether people have major illnesses, predict whether people are particular about food and remind people to take proper exercise. People should pay 125 pounds for it.

17、 It takes four to six weeks to finish the report. After detection we can realize we should strengthen our bodies. It may cause too many worries.【解析】试题分析：对于基础写作用5个句子概括医疗新技术，要求必须用上所有的要点，不能遗漏。对于概括短文大意，要抓住要点。叙述自己的班级情况时：1.仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息。2.根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态及一般将来时。 3.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章

18、的亮点。【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如I will explain to them that studying hard is very important运用了宾语从句，以及Sally was a teacher.who taught some students full of problems.定语从句。副词Therefore的使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。【考点定位】考查提纲作文。【名师点睛】本题所给用5个句子概括医疗新技术的材料是学生不太熟悉的内容，所以要尽量使用学生熟悉的句式来写，还必须用5个句子表达所有的信息。此题主要考查阅读概括

19、能力及语言的组织的能力。需要用一些高级句式及词汇来增加文章的亮点。5.【2015陕西】书面表达（满分30分）假定你是李华。在校报英语专栏看到了学校“英语文化节”的一则招募启事，请阅读启事，并根据写作要点和写作要求写一封应征邮件。 Volunteers WantedOur annual English Festival, which will be held on June 15-17, 2015, is now looking for 20 student volunteers to provide service for Talent Show, Speech Contest, and En

20、glish Debate. If you are interested, please send an application email at your earliest convenience to Ms.Chen at chenlaoshi.写作要点：1.表示写信意图；2.陈述应征目的；3.说明应征条件（性格、能力等）。写作要求：1.邮件词数不少于100；2.开头和结尾部分已写好，不计入总词数；3.可根据情况增加细节，使行文连贯4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。Dear MS Chen ,ImLi Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. _Looking

21、forward to your reply. Yours truly,Li Hua【参考答案】Dear MS Chen ,Im Li Hua, a student from Class2, Grade 3. Im writing to apply for the position as a student volunteer. I really want to obtain this precious opportunity because, by offering my service, I will be able to improve my organizational ability,

22、 communication skills as well as my confidence in speaking English in public. As an outgoing girl, I get along well with my classmates. Besides, I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher. Successfully, I have lent a helping hand to her in several Engl

23、ish activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates. I am sure that I can perfectly live up to your expectations. I will be gratefull if you could give me a kind consideration.Looking forward to your reply. Yours truly,Li Hua【解析】试题分析：本篇书面表达属于英文书信，根据提示可知需要结合“英语文化节”

24、的一则招募启事写一封应征邮件。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读招募启事，弄清招募职位所有信息和要求；2、根据写作要点从三个方面写应征邮件。写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如I have such a good command of English that I am elected as assistant to my English teacher.运用了sothat句型，以及定语从句I have lent a

25、 helping hand to her in several English activities of my class, which have been appreciated by both teachers and classmates.。此外，文章还使用了大量短语，如apply for the position, as well as, in public, get along well with,have such a good command of, lent a helping hand to, live up to等。插入语Besides，以及副词Successfully的

26、使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。【考点定位】考查提纲作文【名师点睛】这篇作文类似于读写类作文。首先要读懂招募启事，抓住重要信息。再结合提纲写作。内容贴近学生的生活，学生有话讲。也富有实用性。对学生的交际能力也会有所帮助。6.【2015四川】第3节 书面表达（共35分)71.假如你是李夏。你看到美国留学生Sharon 在网上发贴，.希望有人能帮助她提高普通话（Mandarin）水平，她可以教英语作为回报。请根据以下提示用英语给她写一封电子邮件。1. 表达给她提供帮助的意愿；2. 说明你能胜任辅导的理由；3. 给出讲好普通话的两点建议；4. 提出你学习英语的具体需求。注意：1. 词数

27、120左右，开头语已为你写好；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 文中不得透漏个人姓名和学校名称；Hi Sharon,This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarm_【参考答案】Hi Sharon,This is Li Xia. I learned from your post that you want to improve your Mandarin. I am quite interested in it . I think Im fit for it. As a stu

28、dent, I have been learning Mandarin for many years. In addition ,I am Chinese, which means Mandarin is a must for me to communicate with others in my daily life. So Im quite confident thatI can help you learn Mandarin.Learning Mandarin takes time, so if you want to learn it well ,you should spend much time practicing Mandarin everyday. As the sayin