美国大学英语写作第六版.docx

1、美国大学英语写作第六版美国大学英语写作(第六版)ANSWER KEYPart One: Essay Writing1 An Introduction to WritingActivity (Point and Support in a Paragraph), pages 56Point: There are drawbacks to moviegoing.Support: 1. Inconvenience b. Long time to find parking spot and long walk to theater d. Sticky floor 3. Other moviegoers

2、a. Running kids b. Laughing, shouting teenagersActivity (Introductory Paragraph), 8 1. c 2. b 3. a 4. a. Inconvenience of going out b. Temptations of the theater c. Behavior of some patronsActivity (Body: Supporting Paragraphs), 910 1. To begin with, I just dont enjoy the general hassle of the eveni

3、ng. 2. b. Parking lot is always jammed d. Tickets may sell out, and theater is crowded e. Tickets cost up to $8 each 3. Second, the theater offers tempting snacks that I really dont need. 4. b. 2) chocolate bars 3) Milk Duds 5. Many of the other patrons are even more of a problem than the concession

4、 stand. 6. a. Little kids race up and down the aisles b. Teenagers talk back to the screen, whistle, make funny noisesActivity (Concluding Paragraph), 101. a2. cReview Activities, 1820Answers will vary. 2 The Writing ProcessActivities (Freewriting, Questioning, Making a List, Clustering, Scratch Out

5、line), 2531Answers will vary. (1) Ten-hour shifts (2) Hours changed every week c. Pay (1) Minimum wage (2) No bonus for overtime3. Thesis: Joining an aerobics class has many benefits. a. Social benefits (1) Make new friends (2) Meet interesting instructors b. Mental benefits (1) Reduces mental stres

6、s (2) Improves self-image c. Physical benefits (1) Strengthens heart (2) Tones muscles 4. Thesis: My favorite times in school were the days before holiday vacations. a. Lighter workload (1) Less work in class (2) Less homework b. Friendlier atmosphere (1) Teachers more relaxed (2) Students happy abo

7、ut vacation c. Special events (1) Pep rallies (2) Holiday concertsActivity 2 (Outlining), 4547Thesis:More and more, the inventions of modern technology seem to be cutting us off from contact with our fellow human beings.First topic sentence:The world of business is one area in which technology is is

8、olating us.Support: 2. Workers salaries are automatically credited to their bank accounts. 3. Personal banking is becoming a detached process. a. Customers interact with machines rather than people. b. Some loans are accepted or rejected by computers, not loan officers.Second topic sentence: Another

9、 area that technology is changing is entertainment.Support: 1. For many people now, music is a solitary experience. 2. Fewer people go out to watch movies.Third topic sentence: Education is a third important area in which technology is separating us from others.Support: 1. Students sit alone in fron

10、t of computers. 2. Students use software at home instead of interacting with others. 3. Videotapes are replacing class instruction.Activity (Revising), 47482, 1, 4, 3 3 The First and Second Steps in Essay WritingActivity (Writing a Good Thesis), 5051 List 1 List 2 2 Teachers 3 Bicyclesl Education 4

11、Dangers of bike riding3 Math teacher l Recreation5 My high school math 2 Recreational vehicles teacher was incompetent. 5 Bike riding in the city is a4 High school math teacher dangerous experience.List 3 List 41 Retail companies 3 Camping2 Supermarkets 4 First camping trip4 Dealing with customers 2

12、 Summer vacation3 Working in a supermarket 5 My first camping trip was a5 Ive learned how to handle disastrous experience. unpleasant supermarket customers. l VacationsActivity (Common Errors in Writing a Thesis), 53A. 1. TB B. 6. 2 2. TN 7. A 3. TB 8. 2 4. TN 9. A 5. TB 10. 2Activity (Support the T

13、hesis with Specific Evidence), 5455Answers for this activity will vary; a possible third point for each outline is listed below.1. c. Learning new rules and procedures 4. c. Save money2. c. Sense of humor 5. c. Long hours3. c. Too cold in the winter 6. c. Worry about financesActivity (The Importance

14、 of Specific Details), 57S 1. The paragraph lists specific precautions: getting a permit and buying pressure-treated lumber.X 2. What kinds of things did the writer do wrong? What specific rules were enforced? How did this parent punish the writer?S 3 The paragraph lists specific examples of items t

15、hat should not be improved: cheesecake and jeans.X 4. What kinds of problems does the dog have? How does the dog misbehave when the owners are away? How did the owners try to train the dog?Activity 1 (The Importance of Adequate Details), 58Answers are given in the text after the activity.Activity (I

16、dentifying the Parts of an Essay), 61Thesis statement: 4Topic sentence of first supporting paragraph: 5Topic sentence of second supporting paragraph: 15Topic sentence of third supporting paragraph: 22First sentence of the conclusion: 34Activity 1 (Evaluating Thesis Statements), 6162 Activity 2 (Eval

17、uating Thesis Statements), 621. A a. 1. TN a. OK b. OK b.2. OK a. 2. TN a. A b. OK b.3. OK a. 3. TN a. A b. OK b.4. A a. 4. OK a. OK b. TN b.5. A a. 5. OK a. OK b. TN b.Activity 3 (Evaluating Thesis Statements), 6263 Activity 4 (Evaluating Thesis Statements), 631. TB a. 1. OK a. OK b. 2 b.2. TB a. 2

18、. 2 a. OK b. OK b.3. OK a. 3. OK a. TB b. 2 b.4. TB a. 4. 2 a. OK b. OK b.5. TB a. 5. 2 a. OK b. OK b.Activity (Completing Thesis Statements), 64Answers for this activity will vary; a possible third point of development for each thesis statement is listed below.1. science. 6. coach2. to be enthusias

19、tic. 7. we were emotionally immature.3. my boyfriend. 8. manners4. money. 9. my relationships with others.5. breaks down regularly. 10. the time I dented my friends car.Activity (Writing a Thesis Statement), 65 Answers may vary slightly. 1. The cars Ive owned have reflected the changes in my persona

20、lity. 2. Attending a two-year college has several advantages. 3. I have tried several ways to give up snacks. 4. Halloween is not all fun. 5. Three factors contributed to my heart attack.Activity 1 (Limiting a Topic and Writing a Thesis), 66Answers will vary; a possible thesis for each limited subje

21、ct is listed below. 1. Sharing an apartment with a roommate helped me adjust to a new city. 2. Deciding to be less critical of your spouse can help a marriage. 3. My mothers tidiness drives us crazy. 4. Fast-food restaurants are cheaper, cleaner, and friendlier than other restaurants. 5. My cousin M

22、yra has several bad driving habits. 6. Regular exercise can help ease emotional problems. 7. Do-it-yourself repairs always end up costing me more money than theyre supposed to. 8. The free-agent system has made baseball a big business, not a sport. 9. Being a single parent can be exhausting, frustra

23、ting, and intimidating.10. Noise pollution is a growing problem in our city.Activity 2 (Limiting a Topic and Writing a Thesis), 67Answers will vary; some possible limited subjects and thesis statements are listed below. 1. Exotic animals as pets People should not be allowed to keep exotic animals as

24、 pets. 2. Teens and birth control Parents should be notified if their daughters visit a birth control clinic. 3. The new seasons TV programming The new television programs are carbon copies of last years successful shows. 4. Computerized offices Computers in offices are creating new health problems

25、for employees. 5. Major fields of study Choosing a major does not have to be done blindly. 6. House calls Doctors should be compelled to make house calls. 7. Summer vacations Summer is the worst time of year to take a vacation. 8. Barbecuing There are three kinds of people who will be found behind a

26、 barbecue grill. 9. Childrens allowances Getting an allowance teaches a child to be responsible, mature, and thrifty.10. Christmas shopping One year I made the mistake of doing my Christmas shopping months in advance.Activity (Providing Specific Evidence), 6869Answers will vary; some possibilities a

27、re listed below. 1. Guests arrived two hours late; roast was burned; host and hostess got into a huge fight 2. Collects dead frogs, birds, and worms; loves to dunk pizza in his chocolate milk; combs his hair with his toothbrush 3. Too tired; too hungry; too disorganized 4. Chose my friends for me; c

28、hose my clothes for me; chose my college for me 5. Baby-sitting, gardening, baking cookies 6. New ignition, new brakes, new heater 7. Cat got sick; kids got sick; roof started to leak 8. Slept at his desk; gave six hours of homework per night; had a nasty temperActivity (Identifying Adequate Support

29、ing Evidence), 6970AD 1.U 2. What are specific examples of how people are thoughtless to pets? What are the particular needs of pets that may be ignored? Examples might include bathing animals regularly, treating them for fleas, helping them stay cool in summer, exercising them, and providing a nutr

30、itious diet.U 3. What are specific examples of shows that are of little interest to people? Exactly how would commercials be changed? How would network news be made more interesting? Examples might include the names of shows (situation comedies, game shows, and so on) that arent popular. Commercials

31、 might be changed by eliminating repetitious jingles or celebrity endorsements (using examples of current commercials). AD 4.U 5. What are examples of how the woman was set in her ways? What did she say about the kind of hairdo she wanted? For example, the woman might have rejected any suggestions other than the style she was used to. What did the writer do that was unsuccessful? And how did the woman seem to indicate that the writer was not doing what she wanted? For instance, she might have shook her head or sighed every time the writer a