中考英语书面表达专题剖析与专题同步训练含答案.docx

1、中考英语书面表达专题剖析与专题同步训练含答案2020-2021年 中考英语书面表达专题剖析与专题同步训练（含答案）一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）1假如你即将在学校英语兴趣小组的活动中发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿。要点提示如下:（1）几个月前，奶奶晚饭后去跳广场舞（do square dancing）。（2）从那时起，奶奶喜欢上了广场舞。（3）现在，奶奶比以前健康了，有了很多朋友。（4）有些邻居有意见，认为音乐很吵，无法入睡。（5）你认为人们可以跳广场舞，但要求：（1）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。（2）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。 Boys and girls,Im very h

2、appy to speak here and Id like to talk about my grandma._Thats all. Thank you!【答案】Boys and girls,Im very happy to speak here and Id like to talk about my grandma.A few months ago, my grandma went to do square dancing after supper. Since then, she has been in love with square dancing. Now, she is muc

3、h healthier than before. Whatsmore, she has a lot of friends. However, some neighbors have a complaint against the people who do square dancing. They think that the music is so loud that they cant fall asleep at night.In my opinion, people can do square dancing because it is a good way to keep healt

4、hy. But they should think about the feelings of others and they shouldnt make a lot of noise.Thats all. Thank you!【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，根据要点提示写一篇学校英语兴趣小组的活动中的发言稿。要注意随着文章推进时态的变化，一开始应该选择一般过去时，而后面应该选用一般现在时，最后表达自己观点的时候也应该使用一般现在时。人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致关系，构思文章框架，列举出可能会用到的好词好句，记住千万不能漏写信息要点。参考词汇就是必用词汇，一定要运用到文章当中。在写作中注意运用

5、恰当的连词，使文章更加顺畅，自然。2书面表达在本周班会课上，同学们对“初中生什么时候放学比较合适？”这一问题进行了热烈的讨论。大部分同学认为初中生应该在5点左右放学，下表所列里大家的发言记录。请你写一篇短文介绍大家的想法并阐述你的观点。Time to leave schoolActivities to do after schoolat 5 oclockat 4:45at 5 oclock.exercise to keep healthy and read booksdo what we want, such as listening to musictake a part-time job.

6、注意：（1）短文必须包括表格中所有要点，并适当发挥；（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；（3）词数：80-100；（4）短文开头仅供参考，不计入总词数。短文开头：“What time should junior high school students leave school?” This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion._【答案】“What time should junior high school students leave school?

7、”This week we have held a class meeting to talk about it. Here is the result of the discussion.Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o clock. They can exercise to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.Some think that students should leave school at 4:45

8、, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.A few think 5 o clock is the best time to finish school. After school, they can do part-time jobs, such as collecting discarded plastic bottles to sell for money.I am in favor of leaving school at five oclock. B

9、esides having time to play tennis, I can also draw some pictures I like.【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如hold a class meeting，talk about，the result of，keep healthy，after school，have more time to do，want to do，such as，listen to music，in favor of，clean the room，play tennis等。而复杂并列结构They can exercise

10、to keep healthy and read more interesting books after school.和Most students think that students should leave school at about 5 o clock./ Some think that students should leave school at 4:45, because they can have more time to do what they want to do, such as listening to music.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达

11、多样化；同时Most students think/ Some think/ A few think使叙述条理，层次分明，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。3书面表达假设你是某英文报纸“Teenagers”栏目的编辑Betty，日前收到了Lucy的来信。她在信中诉说

12、了她的烦恼，请你根据Lucy的来信，用英语写一封90词左右的回信。要求内容合理,信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Lucy,Im sorry to know that you arent allowed to read eBooks._All the best!Betty【答案】Dear Lucy,Im sorry to know that you arent allowed to read eBooks.In recent years, electronic books, as a product of information technology, have gained mo

13、re and more popularity. It is no doubt electronic books bring many benefits. For one thing, they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. For another, their appearance will make paper-waste less.However, as every coin has two sides, electronic books also have some disadvantages.

14、 For example, long time of reading e-books does harm to our eyes. And there are more radiation which is harmful to peoples body.In my opinion, E-book cannot take the place of traditional book, but its an useful product. I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of

15、 reading over.All the best!Betty【解析】【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如in recent years，as a product of，live in，more and more，sothat，for example，do harm to，be harmful to，in my opinion，take the place of，instead of等。同时For one thing, / For another,/ However,等使短文的叙述很有条理，而It is no doubt electronic books bring

16、 many benefits./ they are so convenient that we can read them anywhere and anytime. / And there are more radiation which is harmful to peoples body./ I think that e-books are beneficial if we read correctly and properly instead of reading over.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写

17、作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。4书面表达“小手拉大手,同做文明人。”自创建文明城市文明乡村以来,淄博人民万众一心,众 志成城,让人点赞的行为随处可见。作为中学生,我们也做出了自己的努力。请根据以下所 给要点,写一篇 100 词左右的英语短文。1.种植花草树木；2.遵守交通规则；3.公共场合不大声喧哗；4.公交车上主动

18、给有需要的人让座；（自主发挥,至少两点）参考词汇: civilized 文明的 make joint efforts 共同努力 obey 遵守【答案】Since creating the civilized city and countryside, all the people in Zibo have made joint efforts（共同努力）. Their good behavior can be seen everywhere.As junior students, we have also made some contributions to the civilized Zib

19、o. Forexample, to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees. Also, for our own and others safety, we obey the traffic rules and never run red light. In addition（此外）, we no longer talk or laugh loudly in public.Whats more, when on a bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need.Besi

20、des, we have formed a good habit of throwing rubbish into a dustbin, never littering anywhere. Furthermore（而且）, we are accustomed to （习惯于）queuing up （排队） for a ticket or something else. All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized【解析】亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清

21、晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如make joint efforts，as junior students，for example，obey the traffic rules，run red light，in addition，no longer，in public，and so on，whats more，on a bus，in need，be accustomed to，queue up，all in all等。而to protect our environment, we plant flowers and trees./ Whats more, when on a

22、 bus, we actively give our seats to the people in need./ All in all, we will try our best to do what we can to make ourselves and Zibo city more civilized.等插入语的运用，丰富了短文内容，使语言表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。点睛：书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复

23、杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。5书面表达你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校的选择。请你以“A boarding school or a day school”为题。写一篇短文，内容须包括：读寄宿学校的利和弊；读走读学校的利和弊；你的选择和理由（不得与上述两点内容重复）。注意：1. 词数;100词左右（文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息；3. 文章必须包含提示中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。A hoarding school or a day schoolWe are going to

24、 graduate from our middle school, _【答案】We are going to graduate from our middle schools, and we will make a choice to enter a boarding school or a day school. Both kinds of school have their advantages and disadvantages.If we choose a boarding school, we will save time to study. However, we may have

25、 less time to stay with our family. If we choose a day school, parents can know more about our studies. At the same time computer games and TV plays may make a bad influence on us. As for me, I prefer a boarding school. We should pay attention to our studies to get good grades in the high school.【解析

26、】【分析】整体分析：这是一篇给材料作文。可以分三段写。第一段要写总体交代你即将升入高中，面临寄宿（a boarding school）和走读（a day school）两类学校的选择。第二段要写详细叙述读寄宿学校的利弊；读走读学校的利弊。第三段要表述作者自己的选择和理由。【详解】写作之前要1.审清题目，看看有哪些要求？哪些时态？人称？2.确定文章类型，记叙文？说明文？议论文？看图？还是应用文？3.确定时态，单一还是混合。4.写下关键词、短语、句型。5.列出提纲和段落，并运用适当的句型和过渡词衔接。6.根据提纲和段落结构句型及关键词句完成文章。写完后反复阅读修改推敲润色，人称、时态、单复数一致等

27、。运用自然过渡法和自然衔接法来是文章更为地道、通顺、纯正。用的短语、句型：both kinds of、If we choose a boarding school、At the same time、As for me, I prefer a boarding school、pay attention to、来增加了文章的亮点。【点睛】这类作文的写作方法要注意认真审题，注意过渡性语言的使用。做到：要点要全，表达要清晰明确，使用短语，句型要准确，注意避免拼写和语法错误。6临近毕业，学校在学习小组内开展了初中阶段自评和组评活动，假设你是 Moonlight 小组 的组长，请根据下面表格中的信息和提示

28、，为你的组员 Tommy 进行综合素质的评价，写一 份素质报告NameTommyCharacteristics聪明、大方（各举一例）Hobbies喜欢看书，认为看书有很多好处（请列举2个好处）Honour他在家帮助做家务。在学校和同学相处融洽。上学途中遵守交通规则（举一例）。今年，学校授予了他优秀学生奖（Award for Best Student）Problems面临考试，遭受压力痛苦，他没有充足的睡眠Your suggestions（根据实际情况提2点建议）要求：1、表达清楚、语法正确、上下文连贯；2、要点必须包括所有相关信息，并作适当发挥；3、词数：100 词左右；4、不得使用真实姓名、

29、校名和地名等Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight.【答案】Tommy is a member of my team called Moonlight. He is clever and he is good at all his lessons. He is so generous that he shares everything with his friends.He likes reading because he thinks he can get much knowledge and learn more about the world by reading. And reading has a good effect on childrens growth. At home, he can help his parents do some housework. At school, he gets