初三英语书面表达训练单元测试及解析.docx

1、初三英语书面表达训练单元测试及解析初三英语书面表达训练单元测试及解析一、中考英语书面表达训练14月23日是“世界读书日”，你校英语俱乐部正在开展主题为“多读书，读好书”的活动。假如你是李华，请你写一封倡议书，向全体同学发出号召。内容包括：应该读什么样的书，以及读书的意义。提示词语：story, novel, knowledge, improve, important提示问题： What kind of books should we read? Why do we read?Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming. So Im here a

2、gain to call on all of us to read more books and read good books. Li Hua【答案】例文Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a

3、good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing. So Im here again to call on all of us to read more books and read go

4、od books. Li Hua【解析】【详解】题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，写出对学生的倡议。例文点评：例文采用的是一段式，写的是阅读的好处，时态采用的是一般现在时，描述倡议时，描写细致，条理清晰。高分亮点：短语：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and horizon。句型：reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills；reading can broaden our

5、knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。2书面表达“Life is like a box of of chocolate.You never know what you are going to get next.”-Forrest Gump 中文译名：阿甘正传“Hope is a good thing. Maybe the best of things and no good thing ever dies.”-The Shawshank Kedemption 中文译名：肖申克的救赎“We

6、are all running very hard. We are all dream chasers（追梦人）.”-President Xi Jingping以上材料告诉我们：生活是丰富多彩的，有快乐幸福也有伤心失落。但既然选择了远方，便只顾风雨兼程。所以在学习和生活中，我们要满怀希望、努力奔跑、追逐梦想。请以Dream Chaser为题，谈谈你自己的观点。要点提示：1.有自己的目标，并努力让它成为现实；2.勤奋学习，使自己不断强大；3.正确面对困难，积极参加社会活动；4.补充自己的观点。写作要求：1.文中必须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥使行文连贯； 2.条理清晰，字迹工整，词数不少于80；

7、3.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；4.文中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息。Dream ChaserAs we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset._【答案】As we know, life is not always smooth. Sometimes we may feel satisfied and sometimes we may feel upset. In order to make our dream come true,

8、firstly we should set a practical goal. But just having a goal is not enough. More importantly, we need to study hard to make ourselves stronger. Besides, as teenagers, it is necessary for us to take part in more social activities. We can learn a lot from each other by joining in those social activi

9、ties. However, there will be many difficulties in both our daily life and study, so please keep patient and be brave to face these challenges. Finally, all our efforts are meaningful and one day our dream will be achieved.【解析】【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。主要说明要有自己的目标，努力实现目标应做到勤奋学习，使自己不断强大；正确面对困难，积极参加社会活动。2.例文

10、点评：例文用第一人称来叙述主要内容；时态采用一般现在时为主，主要讲述如何实现自己的目标（Firstly,More importantly,Besides,Finally,）。承接文章开头，句意完整，避免汉语式英语，叙述条理清晰。3.高分亮点：高分短语：feel satisfied；feel upset；come true；set a practical goal；bothand；keep patient。高分句型：It is +adj. + for sb. +to do sth.；there be句型；祈使句；need to do sth.。3假如你叫李华，最近你班里的美国交换生Lucy想要感

11、受中国的传统文化。周末你和父母商议后，打算邀请她去老舍茶馆。你通过微信告知她：要去哪，在那要做什么以及何时何地见面。提示词语：Laoshe Teahouse, drink tea, Peking Opera, magic shows, gate提示问题：Where are you going?What will you do there?When and where will you meet?【答案】Hi, Lucy! I know you like Chinese traditional culture. I want to invite you to Laoshe Teahouse th

12、is Saturday morning. We are going to drink tea, watch magic shows, enjoy Peking Opera, and eat Chinese traditional food in Laoshe Teahouse. We can experience Chinese traditional culture there. Lets meet at the gate of Laoshe Teahouse at 8:30, OK? See you.【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，我通过微信告诉Lucy要去哪，在那里要做什么以及何时何地见面。

13、结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为第一人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：I want to，We are going to，We can，Lets meet at等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了我想要邀请你去老舍茶馆，接下来介绍我们去那里做什么，最后指出我们要在何时何地见面。此处want to do sth, invite sb to, let sb do sth, at the gate of等这些词组的运用也让文章

14、增色不少。4共享单车自从2016年在江阴投入使用以来，给人们带来了诸多便利，受到人们的追捧，改变了人们的出行方式，但同时也遇到了一些挑战，是国民素质的“照妖镜”，请你根据表格中信息的提示，给21世纪英文报写一篇关于共享单车看法的稿件。社会现状自从出现，饱受赞誉。诸多优势随处可见，出行方便有益健康，减少污染费用不高，负担得起存在问题未及时归还占道挡路你的观点我认为-参考词汇：公共自行车public bicycles注意事项：1.短文须包括表格中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。2.表格中“你的观点”一栏用2-3句话展开合理想象，做适当发挥。3.词数在90个左右，文章的开头部分已给出，不计入总

15、词数。Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. 【答案】Public bicycles are becoming more and more popular in our daily life. They have won high praise since they appeared. Public bicycles have brought us many advantages. They can be seen everywhere so that its easy for us to ge

16、t around on public bicycles. Also, Riding bicycles not only is good for our health but also can help reduce pollution. Whats more, using public bicycles costs so little that we can afford it. But there are some problems too. Some people cant return public bicycles in time. Sometimes because public b

17、icycles take up too much of the road, they are in our way. I think we should encourage more people to use public bicycles. After all, its a way of living a green life.【解析】这是一篇材料作文，要求给英文报社写一篇投稿，介绍对共享单车看法。作文应包括4个主要内容，一个是社会现状，第二个优点，第三是存在的问题，最后发表个人的观点。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。要注意上下文的连贯，将这些内容有机的连接起

18、来，不要逐句翻译。使用一些好的句型和短语，注意正确的时态和语态以及谓语动词的形式，还需要注意英语表达和汉语习惯的不同，让整篇短文表达流畅。5书面表达假设你将代表你校2009届毕业生在学校毕业典礼上发言，请你用英语写一篇发言稿，发言稿的内容要点如下：回顾美丽的校园、生动有趣的教学、三年来的收获；感谢老师的培养、父母的支持、同学的帮助；祝愿（考生自拟，至少两点）。注意：1. 90词左右。发言稿的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数；2. 发言稿须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；发言稿不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Good afternoon, ladies and g

19、entlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of the graduating class of 2009. Thank you for listening!【答案】Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen, my dear teachers and fellow graduates. It is a great honour for me to make a speech on behalf of

20、the graduating class of 2009.It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful school. Our teachers always try to make their lessons lively and interesting. We have learned a lot over these years, but we could hardly succeed without our teachers efforts, our parents support and our cla

21、ssmates help. At this moment, I would like to thank all of you for what you have done for us.I wish our school more beautiful and all of us a wonderful future!Goodbye, our beautiful school, our dear teachers and our friends.Thank you for listening!【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，根据所给提示用英语写一篇发言稿，内容包括回顾美丽的校园、生动有趣的教学、三年

22、来的收获；感谢老师的培养、父母的支持、同学的帮助；祝愿，在写作中适当发挥，语句通顺，符合逻辑，符合发言稿的格式，没有出现自己的真实姓名。6书面表达以下图画呈现了林涛和梅梅在公园里发生的事情。请用英语写一篇约100词的短文。要求：1.完整叙述图画内容。2.简要陈述你从中学到了什么。【答案】One day Lin Tao and Meimei were playing in the garden. They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die. So they decided to do something

23、 for the young tree. First, Meimei kept the tree straight and pushed the earth hard down with her foot. Then Lin Tao knocked a board into the earth. It said, “Please take care of trees.” After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were working hard. Their teacher, Miss

24、Li, spoke highly of them.Trees are good for the environment. We should protect them.【解析】这是一篇看图作文，要求我们仔细观察图片，弄清楚里面发生的事情，用英语将这些内容完整地叙述出来，并简单陈述自己从中学到的东西。因此写作前，要仔细看图片，了解图片中所发生的事情，并提炼出要点，列出所要用到的词汇、短语等，或者列出大概的写作提纲。通过分析可知，这篇短文讲述的是过去发生的事情，应用一般过去时态，注意谓语动词形式的变化，尤其是不规则动词的过去式形式。写作时要注意按照事情发展的先后顺序，这样可以使文章条理清楚。还需注

25、意的是英语表达和汉语的习惯不同，不能逐词去翻译，应从句子整体考虑，使用简单句的基本句型，如主谓宾结构或主系表结构。在文章中点缀几个并列句、复合句或复杂句式，调整文章节奏，提升文章档次。语句之间注意使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。点睛：这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整，符合图片所传达的信息，表述准确。作者在短文中叙述了林涛和梅梅两人在公园里给小树浇水、并挂牌子告诉人们注意保护树木。整篇文章按照事情发生的先后顺序叙述，条理清晰。文章最后的两句话也点明了文章的主题。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以一般过去时态为主，谓语动词用了过去式，尤其是注意了不规则动词过去式的形式，如found, k

26、ept, got, were, spoke等。语法规范、准确。短文中还使用了较丰富的句型和短语，如They found that a young tree needed watering and it was going to die.这句话中使用了并列句和宾语从句；再如So they decided to do something for the young tree这句话中使用了句型decided to do sth.决定做某事；After that, they quickly got water and watered it carefully. Both of them were wo

27、rking hard. Their teacher, Miss Li, spoke highly of them.这两句话中用了短语after that, speak highly of等等。7书面表达为了配合“足球进校园”活动，你们班开展了一次主题班会。请你以足球迷的身份，根据下列表格中的要点提示，用英语向同学们介绍足球这项运动并谈谈自己的梦想。常 识历史悠久，深受喜爱世界杯4年举行一次好 处男生女生皆可参加利于培养团队精神考生自拟（至少1点）偶 像梅西，有足球天赋梦 想考生自拟（至少1点）注意：1. 词数90左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；1.短文须包括所有要点，不要逐词翻译，可

28、适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；2.短文中不得真实的人名、校名等相关信息。参考词汇：梅西 MessiDear classmates,Im very excited to hear that China will build 20,000 football-themed schools by 2020. Thank you for your attention.【答案】Dear classmates，Im very excited to hear that China will build 20，000 football-themed schools by 2020Football has a ve

29、ry long historyIt is liked by people all over the worldThe World Cup takes place every four yearsPlaying football has lots of advantagesFirst，both boys and girls can take part in itSecond，it helps develop team spiritWhats more，playing football is good for our healthIm a football fanMessi is my heroH

30、e has a gift for playing footballMy dream is to become a famous football player like MessiI hope China will hold the World Cup some dayThank you for your attention【解析】【详解】试题分析：本题要求按提纲的提示，介绍足球运动并谈谈自己的梦想。要求仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确本文主要从三个方面来写：介绍足球运动及其好处；说说自己的偶像；谈谈自己的梦想。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。根据要表达的内容确定句子

31、的时态、语态；语言表达要符合英语习惯。写作亮点：本文语言精炼，像第二自然段的Football has a very long history. It is liked by people all over the world. The World Cup takes place every four years. it helps develop team spirit. Whats more, playing football is good for our health. 等等句子，简洁，但是句意表达清楚；同时，本文用了被动语态、动名词作主语、不定式作表语等等语法形式，使表达生动；用了first, second等使得短文层次清楚。8环境保护人人有责， 如果我们每一个人都能珍爱美丽地球 保护自然资源，相信我们的家园会越来越美好。某英文网站正在开展以“Going Green”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈我们面临的主要环境问题是什么，为改善环境我们能做什么，以及你的期望。提示词语